Captain Woodshed in traffic

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Re: Captain Woodshed in traffic

Postby daneldorado » Thu Nov 30, 2017 2:18 am

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Finally, the Captain gets the speeding scofflaw under control.


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There are still a few more panels available in this story. If anyone cares to see them, just post a comment here and I'll see what I can do for you. :D


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Re: Captain Woodshed in traffic

Postby willjohn » Thu Nov 30, 2017 4:47 am

Very well drawn as Flossy gets her round little bottom soundly spanked.

Well done Dan, well done Captain and a well done rump.

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Re: Captain Woodshed in traffic

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Dec 01, 2017 8:11 am

HI Dan,

Let me start with the expressions. I love the embarrassed and distressed expression on the face of our speeder :lol: . She's obviously really feeling the sting which is being imparted to her bottom on the seat of her string bikini panties by our hero :D . The position of her hands also confirms this. Meanwhile, it's obvious from his facial expression that the good captain is finding her distress to be quite satisfying 8-) . There's also a hint of enjoyment on his face, probably from the view he has while he's spanking her :lol: . I also like the way you've depicted her flimsy dress hanging down after our spanker has pulled it up :D . You have depicted well that Captain Woodshed has gotten this spanking off to a good start 8-) . Thanks for sharing this. Phil

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Re: Captain Woodshed in traffic

Postby daneldorado » Fri Dec 01, 2017 1:19 pm

Overbarrel49 wrote:

Let me start with the expressions. I love the embarrassed and distressed expression on the face of our speeder :lol: . She's obviously really feeling the sting which is being imparted to her bottom on the seat of her string bikini panties by our hero :D . The position of her hands also confirms this. Meanwhile, it's obvious from his facial expression that the good captain is finding her distress to be quite satisfying 8-) . There's also a hint of enjoyment on his face, probably from the view he has while he's spanking her :lol: . I also like the way you've depicted her flimsy dress hanging down after our spanker has pulled it up :D . You have depicted well that Captain Woodshed has gotten this spanking off to a good start 8-) . Thanks for sharing this. Phil


Thanks a lot, Phil. Thank you for your generous comments about my artwork. I know that I can always depend on you for solid replies to my messages. How I wish we had a forum filled with overbarrel49s!

You have, effectively, "read my mind" on the details of this toon. Yes, I did intend for the speeder lady to show an "embarrassed and distressed expression" on her startled face in response to being spanked by a virtuous stranger. And yes, the "hint of enjoyment" on the Captain's face is there for a reason too. He obviously enjoys his work. :D

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Re: Captain Woodshed in traffic

Postby jimc » Sat Dec 02, 2017 5:38 am

i really enjoy this spanking scene like others have commented about her clothes and i really enjoy the colors you have posted and of course your positioning esp. when he puts her otk. Sometimes i cannot comment as i share a computer and i may only have a few minutes to look at some of the items and not enough time to comment, but i do want you to know that i really do appreciate your artwork and that you have shared it. Thank you and have a great day.
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Re: Captain Woodshed in traffic

Postby web-ed » Tue Dec 05, 2017 10:00 pm

Sorry to be a little late to the party, but better late than never. I very much enjoyed these three most recent panels as our story has advanced to the fanny-warming stage :lol: I relish the great OTK positioning, and note that our Speeding Spankee is perhaps a little more slender than some of your other bad girls. This is a terrific spanking panel, with Speeder's head up and back arched and a look of dismay on her face, while CW's expression is perhaps even better: determination to get the job done and pleasure at doing the job well mixed together.

Our world could use more super-heroes like Captain Woodshed and more spanking cartoonists like Dan :D !
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Re: Captain Woodshed in traffic

Postby daneldorado » Wed Dec 06, 2017 9:35 am

These are the final panels of Captain Woodshed's sensational adventures in traffic. Hope you have learned, ladies, disobeying the law is no fun... especially with C.W. on patrol.


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Re: Captain Woodshed in traffic

Postby willjohn » Thu Dec 07, 2017 4:56 am

That was a spanking and a half! Spankee may be tempted to leave the car where it is and walk.

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Re: Captain Woodshed in traffic

Postby overbarrel49 » Thu Dec 07, 2017 8:46 am

Hi Dan,

I got a big kick from the first panel where our naughty driver is telling our hero to stop it! CW is holding her, face down across his lap with her her dress and her bottom up. The spanking is hurting her naughty bottom and she's starting to cry and even with all this, it apparently hasn't occurred to her that she's really not in a position to be giving him any orders :lol: I love her startled expression in the second part of the panel :D . Her bottom is obviously on fire and she seems really surprised that CW can spank even harder than he has been :lol: . The drawing of her crying in the last panel is just wonderful ;) . It reminds me of an old girl friend who used to have much the same expression toward the end of a good spanking once I had gotten her squalling 8-) . She was always promising to be a good girl by that point in the spanking too ;) . I think CW has taken our snotty speeder and reduced her to a sorry, little girl's state.......just as it should be :D . I think she looks really cute at this point. Of course, she looks cute rubbing her bottom while CW finishes lecturing her too :lol: . Thanks for sharing this with us. Phil

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Re: Captain Woodshed in traffic

Postby web-ed » Thu Dec 07, 2017 6:04 pm

An exciting conclusion to an outstanding adventure! Like Phil O., I was very much impressed by the penultimate panel and the close-up on our speeding spankee's face - how her rear end must be sizzling to produce an expression like that!

Going through the whole thing again, the layout achieves efficient storytelling with no panel wasted. I wish I remembered the black & white version of this cartoon so I could comment more on the coloring, but I don't and believe I never saw it. However, the coloring is consistent, controlled, and certainly effective throughout.

Overall, another satisfying adventure of Captain Woodshed :D .
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