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Some recent posts have suggested that I am guilty of "dirty pool," for ending my forum right in the middle of a story that, apparently, they wanted to see go on a bit longer. Okay, to let you know that I'm not a beast, here are the remaining panels to my "Captain Woodshed" toon.

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There is still more....
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...And these will wrap up the story. Captain Woodshed deals with a secret agent, though not so "secretly."

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Looks like Olga's "mission" is more like "mission impossible."


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Now that THAT's out of the way, how about a few comments, okay? Drawing and colorizing these stories is a lot a lot a lot of hard work, so I hope you will respond with some nice comments.

Cheers,
Disillusioned Dan
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Re: Capt. Woodshed and the Spies

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One thing even your toughest critics would have to concede, Dan, is that you never cheat when it comes to the all-important OTK positioning :lol: ! Our femme fatale Olga finds herself perfectly positioned over the good Captain's lap to receive an old-fashioned spanking, which we may fairly assume she's been needing for a long while. And that spanking is already well in progress, judging by the color of the target area, which is now blushing like this --> :oops: It's good to see more of this classic tale in full color. :D

Good to see it, and I hope you'll conclude it here, although I wouldn't have said you were guilty of "dirty pool" had you chosen not to present it. It's your cartoon and this is your gallery and you can do with both of them as you please, although it is of course my fervent hope that you'll continue posting your 'toons here or at least allow me to build a gallery for them over on the main site like Dr. Cylon's.
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daneldorado wrote: Now that THAT's out of the way, how about a few comments, okay? Drawing and colorizing these stories is a lot a lot a lot of hard work, so I hope you will respond with some nice comments.
hi Dan,

in panel 450 of course the main focus is the great view of Olga's plump, upturned bottom to which CW is giving the attention it deserves :D i like the way you have depicted her pulled up dress which looks very realistic and i think the red color really makes that pop. i also love her expression and again the blush on her cheeks just adds to the effect so the coloring is well worth doing. in panel 5b there's your trademark look at her legs :D . also, the increased expression of pain and worry on her face on her face is the next step you would expect to see ;) . then there's the nice, high bottom placement which i would say is another of your trademarks :D . and i love the conversations of the onlookers :lol: . what a red bottom in panel 6151...........CW is really blistering her bottom good :D i like the way you have given us a good look both at her naughty bottom and her anguished face with the tears flying :D . in the last part, Olga's partner must not have been paying attention during the spanking since he asks her if she neutralized the stranger .............too bad too since he missed a good show:lol: . i love her wide eyed expression as she asks for a cushion for the chair :lol: . it's exactly what we would have expected. it's nice to see her rubbing her freshly spanked bottom too :D . one of the main reasons i like the colorized version of your drawings is that it seems to make all the details you work so hard to include, stand out even more. as i said, i think the coloring is well worth doing. thanks for sharing. phil
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hi Dan,

I guess i'm about to take a stand that is opposite from everyone else's and so is not going to be popular. I know you work hard on your toons. as do B00m and Phil, and not least of all the web-ed works hard week after week after week to bring us updates. and they don't always get a lot of comments. yet they keep on because if they have at least 1 loyal fan they care about that person. you seem to be going for quantity rather than quality. I did not see the beginning of this Captain Woodshed as I was on vacation and had the nerve to not take my computer. there has been some of your stuff where I didn't see the end because you pulled it. I cannot log in every day to see if you are posting. I have a very demanding job in the medical field where I deal with Alzheimer and special need patients. it is very tiring physically and mentally. and I have a teenage son in high school, very involved in activities, which keep me busy. I think that the web-ed, phil and b00m know I view their hard works and really enjoy them. I can count on every Thursday there is an update from web ed. on Fridays is Phils update. b00m doesn't put his work under time constraints.

what i'm trying to say, with the upmost respect is I had never seen your stuff before. I was becoming a big fan and really enjoying them. but I guess you don't care if I see the beginnings or endings. or even whole toons. it's been my short experience that masses of people are not going to respond. I would have responded after my vacation but you deleted everything. and i'm told that you knew I was on vacation. I wouldn't have know you did post some more stuff if it wasn't for another board member. I did not view it. I missed the whole beginning. i'm like a little kid with you dangling candy in front of me and then snatching it back. so i'm glad your back for the people who know you well and missed you, but I will not be visiting your gallery or commenting on your work. I come here to relax and be entertained. I don't want to be the source of someones distress, which distresses me. so if you won't be looking for me that will relieve some of your anxiety.

and on another note, you never respond to anything that people post on your toons. don't know if you really read them, or even care what we have to say. so I hope this doesn't get me banished from CSR, and know my views aren't going to be popular, but to quote you "I'm outta here". good luck to you Dan.

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Dan,
Love ya!!
Have loved, enjoyed and have tried to collect all of your art for....hmmm about 30 years now. Thank you for the time and effort to satisfy so many of our fantasies.... And double thanks for the art you provided me for my old 'Spanking Central Magazine and website'.

I suspect it is hard for some folks to realize that art (be it pictures, stories, videos.) can be like opening up ones soul...(partiularly when it is a subject many of us have held secret a great deal of our lives.) You expect the passion put into it to have a likewise response.

When I produced 'Taking Care of Business' I absolutely thought I couldn't/wouldn't give a damn what people thought of it....boy was I wrong!!!

Please keep satisfying us!

Ray
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sunflower309 wrote:I guess i'm about to take a stand that is opposite from everyone else's and so is not going to be popular.
Well, actually, I believe you're in the right here.
sunflower309 wrote:I know you work hard on your toons. as do B00m and Phil, and not least of all the web-ed works hard week after week after week to bring us updates. and they don't always get a lot of comments. yet they keep on because if they have at least 1 loyal fan they care about that person. you seem to be going for quantity rather than quality. I did not see the beginning of this Captain Woodshed as I was on vacation and had the nerve to not take my computer. there has been some of your stuff where I didn't see the end because you pulled it. I cannot log in every day to see if you are posting. I have a very demanding job in the medical field where I deal with Alzheimer and special need patients. it is very tiring physically and mentally. and I have a teenage son in high school, very involved in activities, which keep me busy. I think that the web-ed, phil and b00m know I view their hard works and really enjoy them. I can count on every Thursday there is an update from web ed. on Fridays is Phils update. b00m doesn't put his work under time constraints.
I understand. My job is not as demanding as yours, but I do put in a forty-hour week, most of it standing on concrete floors, and have the occasional stress of dissatisfied customers. I don't have the time to log in every day either.
sunflower309 wrote:what i'm trying to say, with the upmost respect is I had never seen your stuff before. I was becoming a big fan and really enjoying them. but I guess you don't care if I see the beginnings or endings. or even whole toons. it's been my short experience that masses of people are not going to respond. I would have responded after my vacation but you deleted everything. and i'm told that you knew I was on vacation. I wouldn't have know you did post some more stuff if it wasn't for another board member. I did not view it. I missed the whole beginning. i'm like a little kid with you dangling candy in front of me and then snatching it back. so i'm glad your back for the people who know you well and missed you, but I will not be visiting your gallery or commenting on your work. I come here to relax and be entertained. I don't want to be the source of someones distress, which distresses me. so if you won't be looking for me that will relieve some of your anxiety.
The same thing happens to me all the time. Most of Dan's cartoons have been deleted before I know they're there... or else, I might take a look at the forum without logging in, and therefore can't comment until I log in... but later, when I do log in, what I thought I saw is no longer there.

This seems to me like a big temper tantrum. IF C.S.R. was oriented toward F/M spankings, this would be the perfect set-up for one!
sunflower309 wrote:and on another note, you never respond to anything that people post on your toons.
I hope I haven't been guilty of the same thing. Whenever I post something and someone comments, I almost always try to respond as soon as possible to their comments. I like having conversations with other members of this forum.
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Hiya Ray! You wrote:

Dan,
Love ya!!
Have loved, enjoyed and have tried to collect all of your art for....hmmm about 30 years now. Thank you for the time and effort to satisfy so many of our fantasies.... And double thanks for the art you provided me for my old 'Spanking Central Magazine and website'.



Your friendly message reminded me that you are the only person in CSR that I have met personally. I suppose it would be impossible to know everyone, and of course not every one of us is as deeply invested in the spanking scene as you and I are. But still I enjoy it when one of our "lurkers" does send comments on my artwork.

I will try to continue posting new cartoons on this website, though at a much reduced pace. You're right, it does take "time and effort" to produce these little pictures... and not everybody appreciates that.

You are quite right when you say that producing worthwhile art can be "like opening up one's soul." Thank you for all the work you put into this little hobby of ours. I wish everyone had the level of passion that you and I have for these little pictures, but of course everyone is different. Chacun à son goût, as they say in France.

Ray, why not use my personal email for messages? You remember it, right?

Cheers,
Dan
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Hi Phil... Thanks so much, for your kind words regarding my recent "Captain Woodshed" cartoon.

I especially like that you go out of your way to comment on specific details in my toons. You said: "i like the way you have depicted her pulled up dress which looks very realistic and i think the red color really makes that pop." Good eye, Phil. Little things like this may not attract a lot of comments, but you are an artist yourself and I'm sure you also are alert to the details in your work. It's the little things that count, as you well know.

Your "Turn of Events" story is one of the best you've ever published. I really like that here, we have two ladies, not one, receiving spankings. Your word balloons give us plenty of detail, and I like the way you have them neatly organized. It's like reading the story in a book, only in THIS book, the dialogue is accompanied by brilliant color illustrations. Shades of "One Good Turn," which as you know is my choice as the best story you've ever posted here.

Keep on keeping the Faith, Phil!

Cheers,
Dan
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I remember Olga getting he come uppance (or come acrossance) in black & white. Nice to see that round red rump of hers in living & burning colour!
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Dan - you must have been in the middle of posting when I last commented, because Olga had just been taken OTK at that time. Now that you've posted the last couple of panels, I'll just join with willjohn in saying it's great to see Olga's behind in full color :) ! I like color a great deal and I feel that it has improved the overall effect of your cartoons.
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Dan,

I'm delighted to see that you appear to be reconsidering your departure! In the discussion that has followed, I discovered something that added to my disappointment over your decision. It appears that I have been missing some of your artwork. I am only able to sign in at most once a week or two, and sometimes it's less than that. I use a dedicated email address for this interest, and don't check it reguarly either, so subscribing wouldn't help. I have collected all your cartoons that I've seen, and enjoy them, so I hate to think I have missing pieces in my collection. (That sort of thing drives a collector crazy!)

Like others, I have always enjoyed the nostalgic feel to your cartoons. They often remind me of scenes in old movies, though with much more attention to the spanking of a well-deserved female bottom than the brief scenes in the movies (in which the bulk of the spanking was often off-screen). Your cartoons not only feature a strong male lead spanking a deserving attractive female (my favorite scenario), they often involve witnesses, usually include a nice back story, and display good old-fashioned otk positioning. I also enjoy the fact that you often portray more than one "camera-angle."

I could copy and paste that into almost any comment I would make on any of your artwork. So if I don't sign in and get a chance to say it, please file away a "ditto" and know that I have enjoyed it (if I, in fact, get to see it!).

I'll add that one of the things I enjoy, when I don't find new artwork to view, is colorizing your black and white pieces myself (though I'm not able to do nearly the job that you do, as all I have to work with is MS Paint). It's just a little way to enjoy the artwork with a little personal engagement. So I'm happy whether you share B&W or color! But alas, I don't have much time to enjoy that either.

Thanks for taking the time to create and share your art.

bob
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daneldorado wrote:Hi Phil... Thanks so much, for your kind words regarding my recent "Captain Woodshed" cartoon.

I especially like that you go out of your way to comment on specific details in my toons. You said: "i like the way you have depicted her pulled up dress which looks very realistic and i think the red color really makes that pop." Good eye, Phil. Little things like this may not attract a lot of comments, but you are an artist yourself and I'm sure you also are alert to the details in your work. It's the little things that count, as you well know.
hi Dan,

personally, i have found "specific" comments most helpful when folks comment on my toons so i try to do the same for other artists when i comment on their toons. it seems to me that those details, even if they are overlooked by most viewers, really make the difference between a pic that is just ordinary and one that really stands out so specific comments are really helpful in achieving that. in my case, it's not just the pic but also the words and i get frequent comments about what viewers like and don't like about the dialog too. while the general comments such as , "i enjoyed this pic" are nice to hear, i think the more specific comments are more useful to me and besides, it's nice to know folks noticed those details that i spend a lot of time adding to the pics ;) .
daneldorado wrote:Your "Turn of Events" story is one of the best you've ever published. I really like that here, we have two ladies, not one, receiving spankings. Your word balloons give us plenty of detail, and I like the way you have them neatly organized. It's like reading the story in a book, only in THIS book, the dialogue is accompanied by brilliant color illustrations. Shades of "One Good Turn," which as you know is my choice as the best story you've ever posted here.
i'm glad you're enjoying the toon :D . i spend a lot of time considering the wording of the dialog and also, what should be spoken aloud and what should be thoughts. sometimes i feel like the pics are a bit crowded with all the dialog but i try to give the information that i think it necessary to get across what he players are thinking and feeling. anyway, it's nice to know that you've been enjoying that part of it too. i didn't know you were enjoying this one almost as much as "One Good turn" :D . thanks, phil
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I think one of the issues here, is how much the spankophile world has changed since Dan and I first met. There was no Internet, no Shadow Lane, No Spank Parties.. There was Nu-West, Kurt Stevens and California Star pumping out an occasional video… $90 and a bit less a pop. Steve Richardsons P.F publications offering quarterly spank stories for $5 and up…. And some glossy (but usually hokey) spanking publications like- Spank Hard, and Corporal… Slim chance you had ever met another spankophile… That has all changed- in a half hour I can download 5 videos, a dozen spank stories, a few dozen pictures- all free… and still have time to chat… Dan’s pictures meant an awful lot back then (as they do now..) and most of his reward was appreciation… We all (including myself) take it all for granted now a days as we can pick and choose at wiil.. Almost to our hearts content.
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Re: Spanking Has Changed in the Internet Age

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Quite true, Ray - it is vastly different now. How I hated running into Chicago porn shops in the '80's trying to find the occasional spanking mag like Slap Shots!, which were indeed hokey because they were published by straight porno guys who understood nothing about the scene. That was even partially true of Spank Hard! which you mentioned, where young Eve Howard became editor, because she had absolutely no control over the photo layouts.

And because there is so much free spanking material on the internet (some of which I'm proud to be responsible for), I suppose younger spankos are a bit spoiled (the females should get a good spanking :lol: !). And that makes it hard for artists like Dan to get the appreciation they deserve.
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