Dan toons revisited?

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Re: Dan toons revisited?

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Here, I've re-posted one of my early toons that had previously been seen, only in BLACK and WHITE.


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The reasons I have chosen to colorize the drawing are these:

The original drawing contained a MAJOR FLAW, one that probably kept me from posting the toon earlier. I have corrected the flaw and added color to make it look right again. I hope you will all agree, it looks much better this way.

Hope some of you will feel moved to write your comments here. With all the work I went to, to correct the drawing, I feel I should be entitled to hear what some of you have to say about it. This will be the last time I will bring it up, I promise.

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Dan
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Hi Dan - thanks for posting these latest two. I'll be sure to add a link to them from "This Week's Updates".

The first, with the cop spanking the pretty speeder, must really go back a way as you indicate. This again is a worthy successor to the great Humorama cartoons that had emerged thirty or more years prior to that (there were, off the top of my head, two by Dan DeCarlo and one by Jack O'Brien with a similar theme). Really, your gag with the warning-warming is better than the editor's was for DeCarlo's roadside scene, where the cop runs out of tickets and so dispenses a spanking instead (O'Brien had simply relied on the spanking being a humorous form of punishment).

The second is a colorized version of the one you posted around New Year's Day. The color of course adds a great deal, and it seems to me the main thing you changed was the use (perhaps overuse) of screentone in the original. Removing it was a major improvement (the OTK positioning sure didn't need to be changed!) and combined with the color turns it into practically a brand-new cartoon.
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Hi Dan,

I love the gag that the cop is letting the young lady off with a warming :lol: . From the distressed and embarrassed look on her face, however, I'm not sure if she's decided which she'd rather have :lol: .......especially considering that she's OTK, with her dress up and the seat of her cute, little panties sticking up, right out along the street :lol: . It makes me wonder if there are any onlookers during this event?......I know I'd stop and watch 8-) . From his expression, I don't think there's any doubt in the mind of the cop which he'd rather administer 8-) ............and why would there be? . I know this is the method I'd choose, if I was him. BTW, some of my best fantasies involve a young lady who is wearing a dress with nothing underneath except a bra and panties so that's another reason I love this pic :lol: . Sorry it took me so long to respond to this. Thanks for sharing it :D . Phil
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Ok Dan,

Now for the colorized version of your birthday spanking. I always like your colorized versions better. It seems to me that the process of coloring just causes all the details that you carefully add to your drawings to stand out even more :D . That includes the added emphasis that it gives the expressions of your spanker and spankee. I compared the black and white drawing with the colored one and I didn't see the major flaw that you mentioned. I will look at them again later when I have more time. Thanks for sharing :D . Phil
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Thanks, Web-ed and overbarrel, for commenting on my latest colorized cartoon.

The MAJOR FLAW that I mentioned is that, in the original black & white toon, the girl's two buttocks are not the same size. A MAJOR mistake! Yet, everyone seemed to let it go by, including myself. I only just caught it recently, when I reposted the b&w version around the first of the year. Then, it stuck out like a sore thumb! I am SO SORRY!

But now, with the colorization, I was able to increase the size of the girl's left buttock so that it matches the right one. I feel humiliated that I would ever post a spanking toon with the target looking so lopsided. You, Web-ed, have never done that. Overbarrel Phil has never done that. B00m has never done that... although, with b00m, 99 per cent of OTKatie's spankings are seen in full profile so that we can almost never see the second buttock anyway, but only the one closest to the viewer.

I'm going to have to watch that. Anyway, thanks again for your comments. I'm now looking forward to the vaunted Year of the Comic Strip and more of Susie Q. Web-ed has even promised us a full-length comic strip which is almost entirely devoted to spanking! Can't wait!

Cheers,
Dan
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That reminds me of an old limerick, (off topic):
To his bride said a lynx eyed detective
"Could it be that my eyesight's defective?
Has your east tit the least bit
The best of your west tit
Or is it a trick of perspective?"
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