Phil:
As I've already said, I applaud your artistry for the marvelous toon you have just given us. The "Tommy and Tammy" story we have just seen from you is one that, I am sure, will be downloaded by fans everywhere, and it will be justly celebrated throughout Spankoland.
My only misgivings about it are in two panels: No. 15, which we have already discussed, and No. 21, the very last panel.
For No. 15, you drew a picture which deliberately exposed Tammy's vulva. It was not necessary, and in the context of this story, I felt it was offensive because nothing else in your story was pornographic. As I've mentioned, I re-drew that one for my own files. In my computer, No. 15 now looks like this:
You may feel I am a prude for criticizing your version of that particular pose, but I feel no animosity towards you. As I said before, diff'rent strokes for diff'rent folks. You are an artist, and free to do your own thing. I also am an artist, and I'll do my thing.
As for the ending panel, No. 21: It has been eliminated from my own computer, for a couple of reasons. First, it is not necessary; the story essentially ended with panel no. 20. Second, it is smutty. I'm no virgin, but the thought that a spanking could end with the chastised spankee admiring the spanker's "bulge" seems indecent. I have spanked many girls in my lifetime, and only one of them indicated that she wanted sex afterwards. Of course, I then showed her my left hand and the wedding ring on the third finger, so she dropped the subject.
There was one girl, later, who got the hardest and longest spanking I have ever given out. I think we "played" for about 40 minutes, and it was intense. I'm proud to say that I brought her to orgasm. But afterwards, she simply rubbed her bottom, smiled, and said "thank you." THAT's the proper way to end a spanking. Oh, and a warm hug. THAT is the decent response.
Aside from those two cavils, Phil, I think your Tommy and Tammy story is a milestone in our shared hobby. This one will stand head and shoulders alongside the great spank stories of all time. You should be commended for the great nineteen (19) panels you were able to turn out, for the pleasure of all our members.
Cheers,
Dan
. thanks for your nice comments. i'm really happy that you enjoyed this toon 
. i ended the toon with only some indications of tammy's changed attitude toward tommy figuring that each viewer could supply his own scenario as to what exactly happened once they got to her house. i see you had no trouble in that area and that you ideas matched mine nicely 
