One Good Turn
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Re: One Good Turn
Excellent job on the new panel, Phil. The redness on Sara Ann's bottom is slightly deeper now, and if you keep the paddling going, it will eventually be as bright as her bright red hair!
You say: "It's such a good paddling that everyone in the room seems to be having strong reactions to it." Well, we've already noticed that Sam has left the room, and now Woody is looking for the bathroom himself. The remaining two witnesses -- Ben and the unnamed chap who is wearing the same shirt as Harley's -- seem to be composed and ready to enjoy the rest of Sara Ann's spanking. A few panels back (no. 16?), Ben seemed to be in distress and wondered if "they" had an apron he could borrow. But now, Ben seems more relaxed and has even changed positions, to enjoy a better view of the paddling. Guess he found an apron.
In all, Phil, an excellent, excellent picture story. And I notice you are improving your technique with each new panel. That's the way true artistry is developed. Baby steps....
You say we have two (2) more panels? Well I, for one, can hardly wait! These two spankings -- of Jennifer and now, her Mom -- are as good as it gets!
Cheers,
Can
You say: "It's such a good paddling that everyone in the room seems to be having strong reactions to it." Well, we've already noticed that Sam has left the room, and now Woody is looking for the bathroom himself. The remaining two witnesses -- Ben and the unnamed chap who is wearing the same shirt as Harley's -- seem to be composed and ready to enjoy the rest of Sara Ann's spanking. A few panels back (no. 16?), Ben seemed to be in distress and wondered if "they" had an apron he could borrow. But now, Ben seems more relaxed and has even changed positions, to enjoy a better view of the paddling. Guess he found an apron.
In all, Phil, an excellent, excellent picture story. And I notice you are improving your technique with each new panel. That's the way true artistry is developed. Baby steps....
You say we have two (2) more panels? Well I, for one, can hardly wait! These two spankings -- of Jennifer and now, her Mom -- are as good as it gets!
Cheers,
Can
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Re: One Good Turn
hi Dan,
i'm glad you're enjoying the toon. i'll have another pic next week and then i'll post the last 3 the following week.......................2 of those have no spanking and are just to wrap it all up. thanks for your comments. phil
yeah, i screwed this all up. that's what i get for changing my mind in mid stream. i think there are too many players in this toon for my pea brain to keep track of..............LOL. hopefully it won't ruin the toon for anyone.daneldorado wrote:You say: "It's such a good paddling that everyone in the room seems to be having strong reactions to it." Well, we've already noticed that Sam has left the room, and now Woody is looking for the bathroom himself. The remaining two witnesses -- Ben and the unnamed chap who is wearing the same shirt as Harley's -- seem to be composed and ready to enjoy the rest of Sara Ann's spanking. A few panels back (no. 16?), Ben seemed to be in distress and wondered if "they" had an apron he could borrow. But now, Ben seems more relaxed and has even changed positions, to enjoy a better view of the paddling. Guess he found an apron.
thanks for this comment. i couldn't agree more. as i continue to do these toons i strive to find new and better ways to depict the scenes and i feel like i am constantly improving and hopefully that will continue for as long as i do them. it's interesting that pics i really liked when i completed them often times just don't look that good to me now. as a matter of fact, i have gone so far as to re do some of them either because i wanted to re post it for some reason or just because i discovered a better way to do parts of it. anyway, i appreciate you noticing this and taking time to mention it .daneldorado wrote:
In all, Phil, an excellent, excellent picture story. And I notice you are improving your technique with each new panel. That's the way true artistry is developed. Baby steps....
i'm glad you're enjoying the toon. i'll have another pic next week and then i'll post the last 3 the following week.......................2 of those have no spanking and are just to wrap it all up. thanks for your comments. phil
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Re: One Good Turn
The drawings are really showing some emotion from Sara and Jennifer. Sara's arse looks like it is about ready to burst out in blisters and one of the witnesses looks like he is heading for a heart attack, or maybe a stroke?
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Re: One Good Turn
hi willjohn,
yep, both the girls are having quite strong reactions to Sara Ann's spanking. i think such reactions are part of a good, sound spanking . you need not be too concerned for the old timers watching this spanking. i guarantee none of them will croak during this toon maybe i should have put in a disclaimer; "no old timers were harmed during the making of this toon" thanks for the comments. phil
yep, both the girls are having quite strong reactions to Sara Ann's spanking. i think such reactions are part of a good, sound spanking . you need not be too concerned for the old timers watching this spanking. i guarantee none of them will croak during this toon maybe i should have put in a disclaimer; "no old timers were harmed during the making of this toon" thanks for the comments. phil
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That's nice to know! Those guys are probably having the most excitement they've had in a while, with two lovely ladies getting their bottoms bared and spanked in front of them! Do any of them have someone to go home to? That could be a potential sequel. Heh heh!overbarrel49 wrote:maybe i should have put in a disclaimer; "no old timers were harmed during the making of this toon"
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hi boom,
i would say that it is "indeed' the most excitement any of them have had for a while................and for Jennifer and Sara Ann, more excitement than they wanted . i hadn't thought about whether any of the old timers had wives at home but probably so since the women have a tendency to outlive us. if they do, those ladies are in for some real surprises later in the day.....................after their husbands have a nap of course . thanks, phil
i would say that it is "indeed' the most excitement any of them have had for a while................and for Jennifer and Sara Ann, more excitement than they wanted . i hadn't thought about whether any of the old timers had wives at home but probably so since the women have a tendency to outlive us. if they do, those ladies are in for some real surprises later in the day.....................after their husbands have a nap of course . thanks, phil
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Re: One Good Turn
You know, it could be a sequel. It reminds me of those classroom demonstrations of how a nuclear chain-reaction works, where a hundred mousetraps are loaded with ping-pong balls, and then somebody throws one ping-pong ball into their midst, causing one trap to fire and launch its own ping-pong ball, which triggers another, and another, until they all go off. If each of the guys here held their own public paddling demonstrations with 4 male witnesses of their own, we'd have the beginning of a what is technically a geometric series: 4, 16, 64, 256,... Picture instead of a hundred ping-pong balls 256 ping-pong paddles meeting 256 female fannies!hugob00m wrote: Those guys are probably having the most excitement they've had in a while, with two lovely ladies getting their bottoms bared and spanked in front of them! Do any of them have someone to go home to? That could be a potential sequel. Heh heh!
It would be impossible to draw, though, unless you did a square-shaped piece with maybe four spanking pairs seen from a distance, then copied it over and over - and even then, the perspective probably wouldn't look right. Some really expensive movie studio software could probably do it, though.
Anyway, looking forward to the next installment.
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hi web-ed,
not only would it be impossible to draw but also it would be impossible for me to do with poser too. it's gonna take more skill and more equipment than i have for a scene like that. kind of sounds like the woodstock of spanking to me . glad you're enjoying the toon . just a couple more weeks left on this one and then we'll start something new. thanks. phil
not only would it be impossible to draw but also it would be impossible for me to do with poser too. it's gonna take more skill and more equipment than i have for a scene like that. kind of sounds like the woodstock of spanking to me . glad you're enjoying the toon . just a couple more weeks left on this one and then we'll start something new. thanks. phil
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i think Harley is getting his point across. that paddle of his really has Sara Ann in motion. now that i think of it though, everyone else is pretty much in motion too . i hope you enjoy it. phil
Re: One Good Turn
Hey Sam... If "it" lasts four hours, don't call a doctor... call a press conference!
Aah, Phil, what a wicked, evil mind you have! Imagine... having a guy deliver hard spankings to not one, but TWO beautiful women, in front of a gathering of his friends! Have you no shame? No? Thank God. This is delicious stuff!
Your latest panel, no. 23, is the baddest of the bunch. True to your artistic style, you are allowing Sara Ann's glowing derriere to turn redder by the panel. In no. 21, it was the color of flame. No. 22, it went to vermillion. Now at no. 23, we are at CARDINAL! Can scarlet be far "behind?"
But seriously: In your latest panel, you have Sara Ann positioned exactly as I have positioned Spanky Sal for decades. I love this angle. Her back is arched, her fanny is held high, her right thigh is almost vertical as she kicks back with her left leg. Very, very juicy.
My only regret is that you, Phil, have told us there are only two (2) more panels to come in this "One Good Turn" story. I pray to see at least one more that shows Sara Ann receiving another hard swat on her gorgeous globes. This is the BEST picture story I have ever seen!
Cheers,
Dan
Aah, Phil, what a wicked, evil mind you have! Imagine... having a guy deliver hard spankings to not one, but TWO beautiful women, in front of a gathering of his friends! Have you no shame? No? Thank God. This is delicious stuff!
Your latest panel, no. 23, is the baddest of the bunch. True to your artistic style, you are allowing Sara Ann's glowing derriere to turn redder by the panel. In no. 21, it was the color of flame. No. 22, it went to vermillion. Now at no. 23, we are at CARDINAL! Can scarlet be far "behind?"
But seriously: In your latest panel, you have Sara Ann positioned exactly as I have positioned Spanky Sal for decades. I love this angle. Her back is arched, her fanny is held high, her right thigh is almost vertical as she kicks back with her left leg. Very, very juicy.
My only regret is that you, Phil, have told us there are only two (2) more panels to come in this "One Good Turn" story. I pray to see at least one more that shows Sara Ann receiving another hard swat on her gorgeous globes. This is the BEST picture story I have ever seen!
Cheers,
Dan
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Re: One Good Turn
Agreed - the OTK positioning in this panel is the most attractive feature, and it's not just for show as that paddle is applied repeatedly where Sara Ann needs it most! This is fun!daneldorado wrote: In your latest panel, you have Sara Ann positioned exactly as I have positioned Spanky Sal for decades. I love this angle. Her back is arched, her fanny is held high, her right thigh is almost vertical as she kicks back with her left leg. Very, very juicy.
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Re: One Good Turn
hi Dan,
call a press conference indeed...............especially at his age i just couldn't resist that after watching all those Viagra commercials.daneldorado wrote:Hey Sam... If "it" lasts four hours, don't call a doctor... call a press conference!
thank you, thank you the owner of the yahoo spanking discussion group i belong to categorizes me as "delightfully warped"daneldorado wrote:Aah, Phil, what a wicked, evil mind you have! Imagine... having a guy deliver hard spankings to not one, but TWO beautiful women, in front of a gathering of his friends! Have you no shame? No? Thank God. This is delicious stuff!
i too like this pose and this camera angle. at the time i was doing this one i wasn't aware of the similarities between this and Spanky Sal. i was just looking for a pose i liked. of course, i've been looking at all the spanking drawings i could get my hands on for years now and i have no doubt that i have been influenced by many of them, including Spanky Sal, Sam Swatt and Captain Woodsheddaneldorado wrote:But seriously: In your latest panel, you have Sara Ann positioned exactly as I have positioned Spanky Sal for decades. I love this angle. Her back is arched, her fanny is held high, her right thigh is almost vertical as she kicks back with her left leg. Very, very juicy.
This i very high praise thanks so much for your comments. phildaneldorado wrote:My only regret is that you, Phil, have told us there are only two (2) more panels to come in this "One Good Turn" story. I pray to see at least one more that shows Sara Ann receiving another hard swat on her gorgeous globes.
i think i did say there were only 2 more but i was wrong. there are 3 more. we have one more of Sara Ann over grand dad's lap and then 2 to wrap the toon up. of course, i don't want to reveal too much about the pics but i am hopeful that everyone will approve of the last spanking pic . i also think i have what will be a surprise ending to all this.................you'll probably want to remember your comments about me having no shame for this
daneldorado wrote:This is the BEST picture story I have ever seen!
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Re: One Good Turn
hi web-ed,
indeed it isn't just for show but as Dan pointed out it is for showing the changing color of Sara Ann's bottom as the paddle is applied i'm glad you're enjoying the toon . thanks, philweb-ed wrote:Agreed - the OTK positioning in this panel is the most attractive feature, and it's not just for show as that paddle is applied repeatedly where Sara Ann needs it most! This is fun!
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Re: One Good Turn
I saw an ad for Viagra or another similar product that claimed it would give you a four hour erection. Maybe that was what he was playing with.overbarrel49 wrote:hi everyone,
i think Harley is getting his point across. that paddle of his really has Sara Ann in motion. now that i think of it though, everyone else is pretty much in motion too . i hope you enjoy it. phil
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hi willjohn,
i have seen those commercials too which is why i couldn't resist phil
i have seen those commercials too which is why i couldn't resist phil
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Great minds sink alike.overbarrel49 wrote:hi willjohn,
i have seen those commercials too which is why i couldn't resist phil
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Re: One Good Turn
well, we've come to the end of another toon. it's now time to answer the questions that have been on everyone's mind since pic #4.........................will Harley finally get that beer he came in for and will any of the old timers croak while watching the spankings ? we will be answering these questions and more as we look at the last 3 pics and complete our toon. phil
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for those of you who may be thinking that i am a mean SOB after checking out the ending, be advised that i prefer to think of myself as "delightfully warped" . i hope you've enjoyed this toon. we'll be starting a new one next week. phil
Re: One Good Turn
Wow, what a fitting end to a wonderful comic strip!
To answer your comment about Dan liking pic no. 24... Hell yes, I like it! This is a righteous final smack right on Sara's sit-spot, which is now glowing brighter and redder than ever before! Phil, I mean it when I say I have never seen another comic this audacious, or this satisfying. In fact, I've got a slight tumescence. And is it my imagination, or does Jennifer have a wicked smile on her face, as she witnesses her mother being soundly spanked?
The finale, with the girls forced to serve beer in their underwear to the guys, would surely unleash the fiery wrath of the feminists upon you, Phil... if they haven't already done so. But to guys like us, it seems proper and fitting that these two naughty ladies be forced to serve as waitresses to Harley's friends, as servants do for their masters. This is a crotch-achingly delicious finale... but wait! You haven't finished yet!
As a fitting coda, we see that Ben has inflicted the "ultimate insult" on Sara Ann, by pinching her already-flaming bottom as she makes her rounds. Ooh man, that had to hurt! Her vanity, if nothing more.
In all, Phil, "One Good Turn" is the baddest spanking comic of all time. Back in the day, I used to think that the strip with The Phantom spanking Queen Pera... who is then spanked by Jorge... was the most audacious spanking story ever. You have surpassed it.
I like the "Overbarrel's Tavern" apron too. Nice touch.
Cheers,
Dan
To answer your comment about Dan liking pic no. 24... Hell yes, I like it! This is a righteous final smack right on Sara's sit-spot, which is now glowing brighter and redder than ever before! Phil, I mean it when I say I have never seen another comic this audacious, or this satisfying. In fact, I've got a slight tumescence. And is it my imagination, or does Jennifer have a wicked smile on her face, as she witnesses her mother being soundly spanked?
The finale, with the girls forced to serve beer in their underwear to the guys, would surely unleash the fiery wrath of the feminists upon you, Phil... if they haven't already done so. But to guys like us, it seems proper and fitting that these two naughty ladies be forced to serve as waitresses to Harley's friends, as servants do for their masters. This is a crotch-achingly delicious finale... but wait! You haven't finished yet!
As a fitting coda, we see that Ben has inflicted the "ultimate insult" on Sara Ann, by pinching her already-flaming bottom as she makes her rounds. Ooh man, that had to hurt! Her vanity, if nothing more.
In all, Phil, "One Good Turn" is the baddest spanking comic of all time. Back in the day, I used to think that the strip with The Phantom spanking Queen Pera... who is then spanked by Jorge... was the most audacious spanking story ever. You have surpassed it.
I like the "Overbarrel's Tavern" apron too. Nice touch.
Cheers,
Dan