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Re: Another Level

Postby samantha » Fri Oct 19, 2012 11:39 pm

Phil, this is the favorite one I've seen by you so far. I did appreciate the build up...so important for women, or at least important for me. I do notice that the women you draw often tend to cry and that's very appealing to me too. Very, very nice. I liked how he is sweet to her at the end of the whole thing. Thanks for your work.

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Re: Another Level

Postby overbarrel49 » Sun Oct 21, 2012 10:30 am

samantha wrote:Phil, this is the favorite one I've seen by you so far. I did appreciate the build up...so important for women, or at least important for me. I do notice that the women you draw often tend to cry and that's very appealing to me too. Very, very nice. I liked how he is sweet to her at the end of the whole thing. Thanks for your work.


hi Samantha,

i'm glad you mentioned the build up and how important it is for women because showing that time spent........allowing the intensity of emotions to build and work on the spankee was main theme of this toon :D . this always seemed to me to be particularly effective if the spanking couples are husband/wife or boyfriend/girlfriend where there is already an emotional connection. the crying is also very appealing to me although there seem to be a lot of women who can't cry during a spanking even if they want to for the emotional release. there again, from the ladies i have talked to about it, they are more likely to cry for emotional reasons than from the pain of a spanking. for example, they might be more inclined to cry if they think they have they have disappointed their husband even though the spanking might not be as intense as another one they have received where that motivation was missing. i'm glad you enjoyed the ending :D . i tried to make it obvious that he was thinking about her well being and the well being of their relationship right from the start. perhaps that caring is part of what caused her tears during the spanking. thanks, phil

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Re: Another Level

Postby sunflower309 » Mon Nov 11, 2013 8:11 pm

hi phil!

a love story of sorts. I think I will like this one!

I like that she has jeans on and that he unfastened them for her.it is easier for a spankee to have her spanker lower her pants. at least in my case it is. I also learned that jeans are hard on a spankers hand. I will have to avoid jeans so I can keep my pants on longer. I would not like to start a spanking on my bare bottom. I like a build up to that. the second most embarrassing time for me is right before I go over his knee. then I am nervous and wonder if and when my pants and panties are coming down.

I didn't mind that the spanking didn't start right away. the more build up to a spanking the more intense all the feelings and emotions. and a first adult spanking has almost overwhelming emotions and sensations. even the comment "now i'm going to spank you, turn over my knee" means my spanking is imminent and intensifies my emotions. the slow build up is best I think.

the look on her face before she goes over his knee says it all. I imagine all spankees have that look on their face. and to me that first spank has the most intense feeling to me. it is probably the lightest spank I will receive but it signals the start of something I have NO control over. and not panic exactly, but something close to it washes over me. and helplessness. and then as the sting increases all I can think of is my bottom.

I will comment more later on the spanking itself so my comments don't turn into a book! enjoying this one for sure my friend!

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Re: Another Level

Postby overbarrel49 » Tue Nov 12, 2013 8:30 am

sunflower309 wrote:hi phil!

a love story of sorts. I think I will like this one!

I like that she has jeans on and that he unfastened them for her.it is easier for a spankee to have her spanker lower her pants. at least in my case it is. I also learned that jeans are hard on a spankers hand. I will have to avoid jeans so I can keep my pants on longer. I would not like to start a spanking on my bare bottom. I like a build up to that. the second most embarrassing time for me is right before I go over his knee. then I am nervous and wonder if and when my pants and panties are coming down.


hi Sunflower,

yes, a love story. i have mentioned before that many of my toons are just love stories with spanking in them. that's because i really like stories best where the spanker and spankee are involved romantically............it's more intimate that way :D . not wearing jeans might allow you to keep your pants on longer although i don't know that i would count on that if i were you :lol: . i agree with you that the build up is a very important part of the spanking and that's why many of my toons start out with her getting spanked on the seat of her panties instead of going straight to bare bottom spanking. of course, that isn't always true as this toon indicates.

sunflower309 wrote:I didn't mind that the spanking didn't start right away. the more build up to a spanking the more intense all the feelings and emotions. and a first adult spanking has almost overwhelming emotions and sensations. even the comment "now i'm going to spank you, turn over my knee" means my spanking is imminent and intensifies my emotions. the slow build up is best I think.


i have to agree with you and the comments i have gotten from "An Alternate Proposal" and your comments here would seem to indicate that many of my viewers feel the same way. from now on, i won't be in such a hurry to get to the actual spanking. as you noted, that anticipation allows those emotions to build intensity before the spanking starts 8-) . i liked your comments about that first adult spanking. we don't often get to hear those and i'm really enjoying the fact that you have shared your experiences with us from the beginning :D .

[quote="sunflower309"]the look on her face before she goes over his knee says it all. I imagine all spankees have that look on their face. and to me that first spank has the most intense feeling to me. it is probably the lightest spank I will receive but it signals the start of something I have NO control over. and not panic exactly, but something close to it washes over me. and helplessness. and then as the sting increases all I can think of is my bottom.

I will comment more later on the spanking itself so my comments don't turn into a book! enjoying this one for sure my friend!



i'm glad that you think i nailed her expression on this one :D . that's something that i have to draw from my own experiences so i;m glad it made a connection with you 8-) . all those emotions you mentioned are sometimes hard to put into one expression so i am going by what i think and expressions i have seen in the past. the problem is that everyone has different faces with different ways of expressing those emotions. thanks, phil

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Re: Another Level

Postby sunflower309 » Tue Nov 12, 2013 11:31 am

hi phil!

I do have one criticism that I forgot to put in my last post. her jeans and panties are around her ankles but they are too neat and in place. I can tell you from personal experience that if she is kicking and wiggling and squirming as she seems to be doing her jeans would be turned inside out and all twisted up. since you don't show pants too often or generally your spankee doesn't have jeans on you would not have known that. maybe the spankers would not notice that either. but as a spankee I am very aware of how hard it is to get my jeans straightened out and right. that is also another part of the embarrassment of a bare bottom OTK spanking with jeans on. like we spankees need more embarrassment! :oops:

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Re: Another Level

Postby overbarrel49 » Tue Nov 12, 2013 1:28 pm

sunflower309 wrote:hi phil!

I do have one criticism that I forgot to put in my last post. her jeans and panties are around her ankles but they are too neat and in place. I can tell you from personal experience that if she is kicking and wiggling and squirming as she seems to be doing her jeans would be turned inside out and all twisted up. since you don't show pants too often or generally your spankee doesn't have jeans on you would not have known that. maybe the spankers would not notice that either. but as a spankee I am very aware of how hard it is to get my jeans straightened out and right. that is also another part of the embarrassment of a bare bottom OTK spanking with jeans on. like we spankees need more embarrassment! :oops:

sunflower


hi Sunflower,

that sounds like good information to me. i'll try to remember that next time :D . thanks, phil

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Re: Another Level

Postby sunflower309 » Tue Nov 12, 2013 4:42 pm

hi phil!

ready? here I go!

one of the things I really enjoy is liking for your logo. sometimes it's easy to spot, sometimes not. makes your toons more fun, like a computer game almost.....where's phil? :lol: I like all aspects of your toon as you have an attention to detail.

and yes spankees say really dumb stuff to try and delay or stop the inevitable. it's not easy to think when all your attention is on the sting in your bare bottom. :? I always try and keep my panties up and some really dumb things have come out of my mouth. adds to my embarrassment! and I have not found anything that works yet. I don't think there is anything that would work, but I keep trying. in my case I guess I say dumb stuff because I am almost in a panic. most of my brain is focused on whats about to happen. the last little part of my brain that is preoccupied is inadequate to put an intelligent thought together. I guess I get a little frantic because I just can't let go of my control. I give up some but it's hard to give up complete control. that feeling hasn't lessened for me yet.

and you are right that being over a mans knee is the most embarrassing position there is. I also think it is the most submissive it does make me feel like a naughty child again. and I have less freedom of movement. I have NO control.it has all been taken from me. when I got to leave my pants on OTK it was still more embarrassing than being bent over bare bottom.

also while being spanked we cannot think quickly or clearly! we will on the other hand promise anything. I will paint your house or detail your car.........just stop!

yep, all emotions and sensations fly out the window during a spanking. everything is centered on a red, stinging bottom. after the spanking is over all rational thoughts do return and I can think of all kinds of things I could have said.

since I always get a post spanking hug I liked the ending of this story. and I imagine Christine and Kevin took that a lot farther.

I saw this whole story from the spankees point of view and you captured that very well indeed. it's my favorite so far.

sunflower

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Re: Another Level

Postby overbarrel49 » Wed Nov 13, 2013 8:00 am

sunflower309 wrote:hi phil!

ready? here I go!

one of the things I really enjoy is liking for your logo. sometimes it's easy to spot, sometimes not. makes your toons more fun, like a computer game almost.....where's phil? :lol: I like all aspects of your toon as you have an attention to detail.


hi Sunflower,

i'm glad you like the logo hunt :D . mostly, i just started doing that because it's more fun than just putting it in the lower right corner each time.

sunflower309 wrote:and yes spankees say really dumb stuff to try and delay or stop the inevitable. it's not easy to think when all your attention is on the sting in your bare bottom. :? I always try and keep my panties up and some really dumb things have come out of my mouth. adds to my embarrassment! and I have not found anything that works yet. I don't think there is anything that would work, but I keep trying. in my case I guess I say dumb stuff because I am almost in a panic. most of my brain is focused on whats about to happen. the last little part of my brain that is preoccupied is inadequate to put an intelligent thought together. I guess I get a little frantic because I just can't let go of my control. I give up some but it's hard to give up complete control. that feeling hasn't lessened for me yet.


well, as a spanker, i had to laugh at your comments :lol: . having said that, i think you are exactly right and i think most spankees would agree with you too. i did a toon where a man is advancing on a girl and it's obvious that when he gets his hands on her, he is going to turn her over for a good spanking. she says, "what are you going to do". the spankees who commented on this got a chuckle from it and there was a lot of discussion about just why they say dumb stuff like that when it's obvious what's going to happen :lol: . i think the general consensus was that it was just an automatic response and there really wasn't a lot of thought put into it...............sort of like nervous giggling when a spanking has been announced :lol: . as far as giving up complete control goes...............i think that's normal too and probably only comes with time and trust.

sunflower309 wrote:and you are right that being over a mans knee is the most embarrassing position there is. I also think it is the most submissive it does make me feel like a naughty child again. and I have less freedom of movement. I have NO control.it has all been taken from me. when I got to leave my pants on OTK it was still more embarrassing than being bent over bare bottom.


that sounds right to me. you mentioned that you have less freedom of movement and no control. do you think that the fact that you are in contact with the spanker and he can feel your reactions might have something to do with that too?

sunflower309 wrote:also while being spanked we cannot think quickly or clearly! we will on the other hand promise anything. I will paint your house or detail your car.........just stop!


:lol: :lol: i have heard many spankees make comments about promising anything but i never heard anyone else make it quite this clear :lol: .

sunflower309 wrote:yep, all emotions and sensations fly out the window during a spanking. everything is centered on a red, stinging bottom. after the spanking is over all rational thoughts do return and I can think of all kinds of things I could have said.


again, i think this is a very typical kind of reaction for a spankee. that flood of emotions that inundates a spankee before the spanking starts and is so powerful and intense, is totally forgotten when the spanking starts to hurt like the dickens. i like your comment that you can think of all kinds of things afterward when your rational thoughts return. i don't know that i've ever heard this part of it discussed before but it certainly does make sense.

sunflower309 wrote:since I always get a post spanking hug I liked the ending of this story. and I imagine Christine and Kevin took that a lot farther.


yes. that was my intention when i ended this story....................that they took it a lot farther by going to the bedroom to finish their reconnection. to me this is a happy ending :D . that's one reason i like it when the spanking couple is romantically involved............it's so much more intimate 8-) .

sunflower309 wrote:I saw this whole story from the spankees point of view and you captured that very well indeed. it's my favorite so far.

sunflower


i appreciate this comment since i was trying to show it from the spankee's point of view.............her thoughts and her emotions :D . phil

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Re: Another Level

Postby jimc » Wed Sep 16, 2015 7:55 am

Hi Phil as I said I am going back and rereading a lot of the old toons. I cannot understand why I did not comment more on this one. I was reading my comments and some of the others and I saw that I never mentioned the background for this one. The paneling, the expensive floors, the grandfather clock, the spanking chair, the ornate hardware and several other things that I did not comment on when I 1st read it. I enjoyed your model with the blonde hair as well. I really enjoyed the back view of her rubbing her bottom before she got spanked. So I wanted to correct my error and say again WOW. I really enjoy Spring Rose as I enjoy brunettes being otk the most and Spring Rose does indeed look forward to her birthday spankings and all but I enjoy this model espically as she does remind me of an old girlfriend that I used to spank and I really enjoyed those memories again. Thanks again and have a great day.
Jim

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Re: Another Level

Postby overbarrel49 » Wed Sep 16, 2015 10:25 am

jimc wrote:Hi Phil as I said I am going back and rereading a lot of the old toons. I cannot understand why I did not comment more on this one. I was reading my comments and some of the others and I saw that I never mentioned the background for this one. The paneling, the expensive floors, the grandfather clock, the spanking chair, the ornate hardware and several other things that I did not comment on when I 1st read it. I enjoyed your model with the blonde hair as well. I really enjoyed the back view of her rubbing her bottom before she got spanked. So I wanted to correct my error and say again WOW.


hi Jim,

i'm glad you enjoyed the detailed background in this one. this is one i bought several years ago because it just seemed like a nice den setting which would be perfect for spanking naughty girls ;) . fortunately, all i have to do is load this scene in Poser. if i had to draw that in every panel i think it would take a lot of work and a long time. and yeah, i think we all like to see a spankee rubbing her bottom in anticipation of what's coming 8-) .

jimc wrote: I really enjoy Spring Rose as I enjoy brunettes being otk the most and Spring Rose does indeed look forward to her birthday spankings and all but I enjoy this model espically as she does remind me of an old girlfriend that I used to spank and I really enjoyed those memories again. Thanks again and have a great day.
Jim


the Springrose birthday toons seem to be perennial favrorites. i have an idea for this year. now, if i can just get time to work on it :? . thanks, phil


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