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Re: Another Level

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Jan 06, 2012 7:59 am

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Re: Another Level

Postby willjohn » Fri Jan 06, 2012 11:03 pm

i hope she is not too good, I would like to see more of her juicy red arse. :P

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Re: Another Level

Postby daneldorado » Sat Jan 07, 2012 2:25 am

Hi Phil...

An excellent ending for your latest saga. And I think that, with "Another Level," you have greatly improved on your already awesome skills as a poser artist. Good show!

My one... and ONLY... cavil is that you never did tell us, just WHAT Chris did, in the first place, to merit such a hard spanking? You have Kevin saying: "I had to make sure you wouldn't repeat this...." Repeat WHAT? You never let us know. Obviously, the lady has done something (or forgotten to do something) and has misbehaved in some way or other. I will always wonder what the hell it was.

Nevertheless, a fine story, and brilliant artwork to go with it.

Cheers,
Dan

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Re: Another Level

Postby overbarrel49 » Sat Jan 07, 2012 5:19 pm

willjohn wrote:i hope she is not too good, I would like to see more of her juicy red arse. :P


hi Willjohn,

i see you have your own agenda concerning this matter :lol: . i have a hunch that Kevin is probably hoping the same thing. i know i wish my wife would be more naughty sometimes :lol: . thanks, phil

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Re: Another Level

Postby overbarrel49 » Sat Jan 07, 2012 5:48 pm

daneldorado wrote:An excellent ending for your latest saga. And I think that, with "Another Level," you have greatly improved on your already awesome skills as a poser artist. Good show!


hi Dan,

thanks for this comment. i think every artist strives to keep improving over time and i am no exception so i got a great deal of satisfaction from your comments :D .

daneldorado wrote:Nevertheless, a fine story, and brilliant artwork to go with it.


thanks again. it always pleases me when other folks enjoy my toons :D . as far as what she did wrong...............i really never had anything in mind other than she sneaked around behind his back rather than telling him the truth. i figured that deception rather than honesty was sufficient reason for a good spanking. since i never really had anything in mind perhaps you can conjure up a scenario on your own this time. i will, however, remember this in the future and try to provide a satisfactory reason for the spankings. thanks, phil

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Another Level - The Conclusion

Postby web-ed » Sun Jan 08, 2012 9:18 am

With #17 and 18, we have at last reached a satisfying ending to "Another Level." I liked the way Christine was dancing up and down in panel 17 due to the sting in her bottom, while the hug in panel 18 is the very best way to conclude a spanking (I'm a great believer in post-spanking hugs). Of course, since they're lovers, things are probably going to go beyond the hugging stage in the next few minutes ...

The important thing is that Kevin has demanded total submission from Christine, and gotten it - because he wasn't afraid to use spanking as the means to compel her submission. This is the central point of the work, and it has been made very effectively. I'm not sure how many women there are in Phil's group, where his art can also be seen, but they should like this aspect of the story as much as the men do.

I don't think I have a single favorite panel, but if I did, it would be #8 in which Christine is bare-bottomed over Kevin's knee and feeling very, very vulnerable, because this is probably the moment of greatest erotic anticipation. :)
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Re: Another Level

Postby overbarrel49 » Sun Jan 08, 2012 7:51 pm

web-ed wrote:With #17 and 18, we have at last reached a satisfying ending to "Another Level." I liked the way Christine was dancing up and down in panel 17 due to the sting in her bottom, while the hug in panel 18 is the very best way to conclude a spanking (I'm a great believer in post-spanking hugs). Of course, since they're lovers, things are probably going to go beyond the hugging stage in the next few minutes ...


hi web-ed,

i'm glad you found the ending to be satisfying. i figure that if this was an actual couple, it would have been satisfying for them too ;) . i think you can count on things going beyond the hugging stage immediately if not sooner :D . there must be lots of dancing enthusiasts in the spanko community............just about every one commented on pic #17 :lol: .

web-ed wrote:The important thing is that Kevin has demanded total submission from Christine, and gotten it - because he wasn't afraid to use spanking as the means to compel her submission. This is the central point of the work, and it has been made very effectively. I'm not sure how many women there are in Phil's group, where his art can also be seen, but they should like this aspect of the story as much as the men do.


i'm glad i was able to convey that :D . some folks don't understand just how powerful all the emotions and sensations of a spanking can be and just how much they can bring a couple together. i have many women in my groups. of course, everyone seems to identify with different things so i get only a fraction of them commenting on any particular pic or toon. the comments i have had from the ladies have been favorable and while most of them don't always say exactly what they made a connection with, i would draw that conclusion from the fact that they liked this toon ;) .

web-ed wrote:I don't think I have a single favorite panel, but if I did, it would be #8 in which Christine is bare-bottomed over Kevin's knee and feeling very, very vulnerable, because this is probably the moment of greatest erotic anticipation. :)


interesting choice. you picked one of the pics which is less physical and more emotional :D . i'm glad you enjoyed the toon and the conclusion :D . thanks, phil

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Re: Another Level

Postby hugob00m » Tue Jan 10, 2012 8:31 am

Oh yes! I had suggested that you do a post-spank hug for your two lovers... not knowing that you were already going to do just that! Like the newspaper ads for McLintock! said: "Such a tender love story!" ;)

I, for one, enjoy a romantic spanking much more than a parental one. If it's a husband spanking his wife, the erotic aspects of their relationship can be fully explored without any limits. Or if it's a couple who are destined to be lovers, but don't know it yet, a spanking can be the catalyst that makes them realise, or admit for the first time how much they desire each other. Those are the kind of stories that you always do so well.

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Re: Another Level

Postby overbarrel49 » Wed Jan 11, 2012 11:39 am

hugob00m wrote:Oh yes! I had suggested that you do a post-spank hug for your two lovers... not knowing that you were already going to do just that! Like the newspaper ads for McLintock! said: "Such a tender love story!" ;)


hi Boom,

thanks for this comment. this story was always intended to be a love story :D .....................and i'm betting her bottom is pretty tender :lol: .

hugob00m wrote:I, for one, enjoy a romantic spanking much more than a parental one. If it's a husband spanking his wife, the erotic aspects of their relationship can be fully explored without any limits. Or if it's a couple who are destined to be lovers, but don't know it yet, a spanking can be the catalyst that makes them realise, or admit for the first time how much they desire each other. Those are the kind of stories that you always do so well.


actually, i too enjoy the stories of spankings between lovers. i mean spanking is a sexual activity................just look at the area being focused on ;) . so when a spanking is between lovers or even future lovers, as you mentioned, that sexual aspect can be included along with the rest of the intense sensations of a spanking. the next toon, which i am working on now, is also between a man and wife although this one will have a little different tone to it. this time it will be a little older couple who have been married a while too. i'm glad you think i do this kind of story well :D . thanks, phil

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Re: Another Level

Postby willjohn » Thu Jan 12, 2012 2:34 pm

hugob00m wrote:Oh yes! I had suggested that you do a post-spank hug for your two lovers... not knowing that you were already going to do just that! Like the newspaper ads for McLintock! said: "Such a tender love story!" ;)

I, for one, enjoy a romantic spanking much more than a parental one. If it's a husband spanking his wife, the erotic aspects of their relationship can be fully explored without any limits. Or if it's a couple who are destined to be lovers, but don't know it yet, a spanking can be the catalyst that makes them realise, or admit for the first time how much they desire each other. Those are the kind of stories that you always do so well.


Is that like the old gag about the spanked girl being like a steam engine, she has a tender behind?


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