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We have an old saying in Australia that would apply to this pair re their inability to quit while they are ahead.

"You can't put brains in monuments!" :roll:
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daneldorado wrote:Excellent finale pic to "Back to Basics", Phil. Or is it the finale? Not sure.
hi Dan,

this would probably be a good place to end this story but i'm not stopping just yet. first off, i had a different ending in mind and second, after the boys went to all the trouble to get both girls over their laps i figured we should watch them getting paddled for a while :lol: . fear not. i will let you know when i post the final pics ;) .
daneldorado wrote: In my feverish mind, I had hoped for a final panel showing that the boys decided to give their gals a double spanking after their initial chastisements. Yes, I earnestly hoped for that. It made me hot. But in that mischievous brain of mine, I was thinking you would treat us to a "double switch" -- that is, I imagined that for the grand finale, they would switch partners so that Isaac would spank Jan, while Gary spanked Hannah. All in the interest of a red-hot, orgasmic finish to this magnificent story.
it seems to me that you had mentioned this scenario earlier in the toon and i seriously considered it. as a matter of fact, you and others mentioned the idea of a double spanking which is what got me thinking about it. my original idea for this toon didn't include the double spanking. i decided not to have them switch because each man had his own set of recurring problems with his wife that he wanted to settle, although the scenario where sisters are getting spanked and their husbands are friends does lend itself to that scenario.
daneldorado wrote:About that final panel, it is a delight to see... and the only thing I could say might be "wrong" with it is that, while we can see the distressed face of Hannah (on the right) and her sister's very fine fanny and excellent legs on the left, we cannot see Jan's face. The positioning you have chosen clearly prevents a simultaneous view of both girls' faces, and I know we should be happy with that. Good grief, Jan's bottom is certainly a deep red in this pic!


in the pic i will post 2 weeks from now, i will correct the problem of not being able to see Jan's face :D . in that pic you will be able to see both the girl's faces although only Jan's bottom. as far as the color or Jan's bottom goes...............you have to remember that her first spanking has only been over for a few minutes :lol: .
daneldorado wrote:But some years ago, our co-conspirator here, the artist known as b00m, produced a cartoon panel showing a double spanking -- it was OTKatie and her sister both being spanked at the same time, in the story "Katie's Thanksgiving" -- and in b00m's positioning, we were able to see both girls' faces and appreciate the anguish of both at once.
this is another scenario that i considered. i can't remember if it was you or Boom but i think one of you mentioned this earlier in the toon. i have to admit taht the idea of being able to see both their faces during the spanking does have a certain "appeal" ;) however, both of my spankers are right handed which lent itself to this positioning better. second, if i do that you can't see either of their bottoms during the spanking and third i had an ulterior motive for placing them facing opposite ways which will become apparent next week 8-) .
daneldorado wrote: Anyway, Phil, if this is the windup of your "BacktoBasics", it is a very excellent and enjoyable story.

Thanks again!
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i'm glad you're enjoying the toon and we'll see if we can't squeeze a bit more enjoyment out of them during the next few weeks ;) . thanks, phil
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hugob00m wrote:Yes! I enjoy your newest addition to such a fun story! :D :D :D :D So... It looked as if the girls had learned their lesson and things were going to go smoothly for the rest of the evening... but now they've earned themselves another spanking! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: By the time dinner is ready, I'm pretty sure that Hannah and Janice are going to want to eat standing up! :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:
hi Boom,

it did seem like the rest of the evening should go smoothly but you know what they say about the "best laid plans" :lol: . the first reply i had this week was from a girl from one of my toon groups. here are her comments, "Great pics...they prove a brat will be spanked more than once for the same issue even on the same day until the point is driven home. Those poor girls LOL" . it sure sounds like experience talking to me :lol: . i don't plan on doing a pic showing them all eating but i will stipulate that the girls will be standing for supper..........good thought :lol: .
hugob00m wrote:The way I did the positioning in my Thanksgiving cartoon (as well as the collaborative work: Spanky Sal and O.T. Katie, Together for the First Time) requires that one spanker use his left hand while the other uses his right. Isaac and Gary appear to both be righties. However, having them face opposite directions gives the viewre the advantage of seeing one woman's face full-on, while having a glorious view of the other woman's reddening backside.
aaaaaah, i see you've found the silver lining in this arrangement :D . the straight on views you mentioned are something that we don't often see............at least not in my toons and that's another reason i wanted to do it this way. i'm glad you're enjoying the toon and the views. hopefully that will continue ;) . thanks, phil
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willjohn wrote:We have an old saying in Australia that would apply to this pair re their inability to quit while they are ahead.

"You can't put brains in monuments!" :roll:
hi Willjohn,

:lol: :lol: good saying! a spankee friend of mine has a saying that fits too, "sometimes the fastest way to get something through to a brat's brain is to go through her bottom :lol: . thanks, phil
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"sometimes the fastest way to get something through to a brat's brain is to go through her bottom" - words to live by! Certainly that appears to be the only way to get through to Jan and Hannah - I chuckled out loud when they went from being contrite little girls still rubbing their bottoms back to bickering adult brats, because I could see what was coming next :D . So back over the knee they go, but this time Gary and Isaac are armed with paddles, which certainly doesn't break my paddle-loving heart! And I could see Phil wasn't going to end the story here because Gary is talking about how to make it more effective while his fingers are grasping the waistband of Hannah's panties. Looks like these girls are going to get the paddle panties down - hooray :lol: ! I eagerly await the next episode.

Dan, b00m, and Phil have pretty much covered the compositional questions here as to the different ways you can position the couples for a double-spanking. I will only add one rather unusual real-life experience, which took place at a spanking party a number of years ago. A rather large-sized lady suggested that another man and myself spank her at the same time (she was really too big for one man to take her comfortably over his knee). So the other fellow and I put two chairs together as Phil did here and sat down facing each other, thus forming a sort of double-sized lap. We took her over-the-knees (all four of them) as you might say, and proceeded to do what was necessary :) . We had to follow the "hugob00m plan" in which one man spanks right-handed while the other becomes a southpaw. As I am nearly ambidexterous, I took on the left-handed role, and I can say that spanking is a lot of fun whichever hand you use :lol: !
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web-ed wrote:"sometimes the fastest way to get something through to a brat's brain is to go through her bottom" - words to live by! Certainly that appears to be the only way to get through to Jan and Hannah - I chuckled out loud when they went from being contrite little girls still rubbing their bottoms back to bickering adult brats, because I could see what was coming next :D . So back over the knee they go, but this time Gary and Isaac are armed with paddles, which certainly doesn't break my paddle-loving heart! And I could see Phil wasn't going to end the story here because Gary is talking about how to make it more effective while his fingers are grasping the waistband of Hannah's panties. Looks like these girls are going to get the paddle panties down - hooray :lol: ! I eagerly await the next episode.
hi web-ed,

i'm glad you got a chuckle from this week's episode :D that's what happens when those spankings are too few and far between. so, back over the knee they go indeed and no one can say they weren't warned ;) . btw, i have now had 2 spankee friends of mine write and comment that getting more than one spanking in a day is totally a reality at times:lol: one of them even mentioned that a brat knows what she needs and understands that it was her own doing when that happened. i don't think it's what Janice and Hannah had in mind at all though :lol: . of course our spankers are using paddles this time. after all, this is not only the second offense but it is also the second spanking in a day :D . i like nice, light, stingy paddles like ping pong paddles too ;) . from your comments i can see that it's no secret to you what is going to happen in the next panel :D . even at that, i may still have at least a small surprise coming in the next one ;) . thanks, phil
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now we're getting to the bottom of this matter!
now we're getting to the bottom of this matter!
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hi everyone,

you know, Hannah and Janice have really been pretty lucky in this toon. each of them got to watch her sister getting a good, sound spanking.............and from a perspective that is even better than the one the spanker gets :D . also, i couldn't help but notice that they each REALLY enjoyed the spectacle they were watching :lol: . well, it looks like our girls are about to get yet another perspective on spanking and each girl will still get to WATCH her sister getting a spanking. of course she'll be FEELING the same thing happening to her while she watches :lol: . kinda makes me wonder how much they'll enjoy this perspective 8-) . i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil
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The way this is going neither girl will have any skin left on her bum by the end of the day.
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Great new addition to your story! Although, in Hannah's case, the lowering of her panties seems to be more of a symbolic gesture than a necessity... since the spanked portion of her lovely backside was already exposed! And the "camera" angle you chose this time gives us a tantalizing view of one lady's glowing postierior and the other's expressive face. Delicious!
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willjohn wrote:The way this is going neither girl will have any skin left on her bum by the end of the day.
hi Willjohn,

well, hopefully it won't be that bad although...............it might FEEL like it by the time the paddlings are over :lol: . thanks, phil
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hugob00m wrote:Great new addition to your story! Although, in Hannah's case, the lowering of her panties seems to be more of a symbolic gesture than a necessity... since the spanked portion of her lovely backside was already exposed! And the "camera" angle you chose this time gives us a tantalizing view of one lady's glowing postierior and the other's expressive face. Delicious!
hi Boom,

you're probably right although i'm betting that Jan would still rather have kept her panties on :lol: i'm also betting that the dismayed and horrified expression on Hannah's face came from watching Jan's panties going down at the same time she feels her own panties being lowered :lol: . originally i was planning on having the camera angle shooting a straight line across Jan's bottom and directly to Hannah's face. this proved to be impossible though as Isaac's arm was in the way but i think this camera angle worked out nicely and conveyed just what i was hoping for so i'm happy that you enjoyed the view :D . thanks, phil
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Of course I'm really happy about this one: "Take their panties down and paddle their bare bottoms!" are sweet words indeed! Looking at Jan's bare bottom and Hannah's horrified expression as she realizes she's getting the same treatment made me laugh out loud :lol: ! This was a difficult viewing angle, but you pulled it off successfully.

If these girls have an ounce of sense, they're going to become contrite and submissive very quickly, lest their paddling go on too long (from their point of view). We'll see. 8-)
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web-ed wrote:Of course I'm really happy about this one: "Take their panties down and paddle their bare bottoms!" are sweet words indeed! Looking at Jan's bare bottom and Hannah's horrified expression as she realizes she's getting the same treatment made me laugh out loud :lol: ! This was a difficult viewing angle, but you pulled it off successfully.
hi web-ed,

what i found interesting about those sweet words you mentioned is that i had a couple of spankees who totally agree with you. one of them said that even though she really likes the pic, those words alone were enough to get a naughty girl going :D . i'm glad you got a kick out of this pic. i like a little humor in my spanking toons even if it isn't necessarily a humorous situation......besides, Hannah's expression seemed entirely plausible in a situation like this one :lol: . thanks for your comment about the viewing angle. i did find it difficult to do and i'm glad it conveyed what i wanted it to :D .
web-ed wrote:If these girls have an ounce of sense, they're going to become contrite and submissive very quickly, lest their paddling go on too long (from their point of view). We'll see. 8-)
oh,i think it won't take long at all. those paddles landing on already sore bottoms should make believers out of them in short order :lol: . the question is, how soon will Gary and Isaac start believing their contrition ;) . thanks, phil
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Man! that smarts!
Man! that smarts!
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hi everyone,

those paddles landing on already sore bottoms HAVE to hurt and my guess is that the girls are now wishing that they had behaved after the first spanking :D . Hannah and Janice don't seem to have a lot to say at this moment in time :lol: ..........but i have a hunch that will change...........just as soon as they catch their breath 8-) . i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil
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Holy crap, Phil... This latest picture takes my breath away!

I have never seen a spanking pic that conveys so perfectly all the anguish and humiliation these two (naughty) girls are suffering. For one thing, it is a picture of a double spanking (which is always great) :D but second, it is an unusual angle, and you are definitely the master at conquering different angles for the artwork you do.

Another thing I commend you for is the fact that you have chosen a pose in which the luckless Janice (the girl on the left) has her reddened bottom in the foreground... BUTT, you have very cleverly covered her nakedness with her hubby's hand and his paddle. That's how you can have your cake and eat it too. No one can question the purity of this pose, since you have taken pains to conceal her most private parts. I love to look at pretty bottoms -- especially when they have been freshly spanked -- but I don't favor the exposure of milady's most private parts. You have done a magnificent job with this toon. :lol:

Cheers,
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daneldorado wrote:Holy crap, Phil... This latest picture takes my breath away!
hi Dan,

this pic is my favorite of the toon so your above comment really pleases me :D .
daneldorado wrote:I have never seen a spanking pic that conveys so perfectly all the anguish and humiliation these two (naughty) girls are suffering. For one thing, it is a picture of a double spanking (which is always great) :D but second, it is an unusual angle, and you are definitely the master at conquering different angles for the artwork you do.
again, your comment pleases me because i too thought the pic caught this moment well. you mentioned the angle here and it's one of the few occasions when i can use such an angle because there are 2 spankings at the same time. as a matter of fact, i think that this angle is part of why the whole pic works so well. it seems to me that the camera angle combined with Jan's pose and the placement of her panties really shows off her exposure now that her panties are down as well as the effect of the paddle landing :D . i also like looking past Hannah's expression and seeing the outline of her bottom as seen from front to back ;) .
daneldorado wrote:Another thing I commend you for is the fact that you have chosen a pose in which the luckless Janice (the girl on the left) has her reddened bottom in the foreground... BUTT, you have very cleverly covered her nakedness with her hubby's hand and his paddle. That's how you can have your cake and eat it too. No one can question the purity of this pose, since you have taken pains to conceal her most private parts. I love to look at pretty bottoms -- especially when they have been freshly spanked -- but I don't favor the exposure of milady's most private parts. You have done a magnificent job with this toon. :lol:

Cheers,
Dan
i did indeed place that hand deliberately and i think coverage actually enhances the effect of the camera angle and conveys her exposure and humiliation better than it would have if i had moved the hand out of the way :D . of course, not everyone sees it this way. i already had one viewer write and complain that i finally got a camera angle he really liked and then blocked the view with the spanker's hand. personally, i like pics done both ways............depending on the circumstances. in this case i really think this way conveyed what i wanted to much better and you obviously do too. thanks for your comments. phil
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This is the best picture of a double-spanking I can remember. I wrote somewhere (I think it was in regard to a 1950's spanking picture I called "Retro Wrongo") that in any spanking picture there are two vital parts of the spankee's anatomy, the face and the fanny, and we need to be able to see at least one of them. In this case, we can actually see both of these two important regions and on both girls! No, we can't see the details of Hannah's backside, for that would be impossible given how much we see of Jan's, but we can see enough to appreciate where that paddle is landing - something that Hannah "appreciates" also, if we may use that word.

O, you foolish girls, promise that you've really learned your lesson this time before it's too late and you can't sit down :) !
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web-ed wrote:This is the best picture of a double-spanking I can remember.
hi web-ed,

as i mentioned to Dan, this is my favorite pic of the series so your comment really pleases me :D .
web-ed wrote: I wrote somewhere (I think it was in regard to a 1950's spanking picture I called "Retro Wrongo") that in any spanking picture there are two vital parts of the spankee's anatomy, the face and the fanny, and we need to be able to see at least one of them. In this case, we can actually see both of these two important regions and on both girls! No, we can't see the details of Hannah's backside, for that would be impossible given how much we see of Jan's, but we can see enough to appreciate where that paddle is landing - something that Hannah "appreciates" also, if we may use that word.
i did consider all the "important" parts when i was posing this pic. i changed the position of Hannah's face 3 times before i was satisfied that we had a good view of her expression. i wanted to get the camera angle where i could emphasize Jan's exposure now that her panties are down and at the same time show the nicely rounded outline of Hannah's bottom looking from front to back. anyway, i did spend quite a bit of time making sure we could see as much as possible so i appreciate your comments here too :D . looking at their faces, i think both girls appreciate where those paddles are landing :lol: .
web-ed wrote:O, you foolish girls, promise that you've really learned your lesson this time before it's too late and you can't sit down :) !
that sounds like good advice to me. we'll know shortly if they took it or not. i will post one pic next Friday and the final 3 pics the following Friday. thanks for your comments. phil
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funny how fast girls can talk if they have a good reason
funny how fast girls can talk if they have a good reason
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hi everyone,

well, it looks like i was right last time. the girls DEFINITELY have more to say now that they've caught their breath :D ...........and those paddles are landing more often :lol: . i hope you enjoy the new pic. thanks, phil
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I didn't ever log on last week, and so, my comments will encompass two week's worth of your art. Your positioning and "camera angle" give the audience a terrific view of one sister's lovely round backside and the other's pleading face! I love it! And the girls seem to be learning their lesson too. I doubt that they'll ignore their husbands for a long, long time!
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