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Re: A Walk in the Park

Postby overbarrel49 » Tue Jun 04, 2013 7:57 am

web-ed wrote:The guest appearances of the middle-aged spanking couple, Carl and Dianne, is a welcome development in our spanking storyline.


hi web-ed,

i'm glad you think so since it seemed a really appropriate development to me :D . in the "ideal" world created by my own fantasies, most wives and girl friends would get spanked by their men from time to time so it would be reasonable that spankings in settings like this one would be something that would be continued from generation to generation. that being the case, it's entirely plausible that couples of different ages would have spanking memories generated from the same locations.....and might even run onto a man spanking his girl at the same place you spanked your sweetheart in years past 8-) .

web-ed wrote: I think the interaction between the ladies is the most interesting thing here. Dianne is genuinely sympathetic to Laura's plight, remembering how it once felt to be in her position, and rubbing her own bottom (perhaps subconsciously) as she recalls the stinging pain. But Laura is in such distress from the pain and embarrassment she might not even fully hear Dianne's words, and isn't deriving much comfort from knowing that Dianne has been in her shoes. I think Laura is about "done" now, in more ways than one.


you're not the only one to comment about this. one of my spankee friends had the following comment, "LOL......another great 'Toon.....but this one made me Laugh Out Loud....What A TIME to be socializing and telling tales of the past......"on this very spot, many years ago".....I think that's also a line from The Legend of Sleepy Hollow.....another fine place to conduct an outdoors Spanking..." as you can see, this young lady thought that Laura might not be paying much attention to what Dianne is saying either :lol: . i told her that i figured it was because Dianne is a mother..........trying to help, trying to comfort Laura even though she knows it probably not much comfort and even though she's not Laura's mother :lol: .

web-ed wrote:As for the artwork, Dan mentioned the excellent OTK positioning, so important for connoisseurs of traditional hand spanking. I'll bring up the surrounding greenery, which is really beginning to grow on me, so to speak :) - we could almost subtitle this work "A Pastoral Paddling" because of its atmospherics. Your control with Poser is really excellent - I can only think of about three people who have done as well using spanking subject matter: Photino, who seems to have retired, a second guy whose name escapes me and who like Photino unfortunately hasn't done much M/F work, and third guy who did an excellent F/F piece and then seems to have disappeared.


i'm glad you like the setting.........while it may not actually be part of the spanking, i think it does add to the overall effect :D . thanks for the comment about my control of Poser. i work hard on it and it's nice to know it's appreciated :D . i wasn't familiar with Photino so i looked him up. i only found a couple of pics both of which were F/M which doesn't suit my taste. the pics i saw were nicely done but had no actually contact between the spanker and spankee. it's a challenge requiring practice and experience to pose the characters under any circumstances but especially so if there are 2 characters who are in contact with each other. while most Poser artists don't do spanking pics, there are lots of highly regarded, experienced Poser artists. what i have noticed is that many of these artists avoid contact between characters like the plague. ive done a lot of OTK positions as well as hugging and kissing after the spankings and other "contact" poses and in my mind this is my strongest suit with Poser. Thanks for commenting about my control with poser. i greatly appreciate that you noticed :D . thanks, phil

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Re: A Walk in the Park

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Jun 07, 2013 7:50 am

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hi everyone,

by this time, Laura must be wondering how come so many folks are stopping by to watch but no one's helping her :lol: . i see that Carl and Dianne are having some really fond memories of their time on that bench :D . she probably wouldn't think so right now but i have to speculate that in years to come, Laura and Ken may have some fond memories of their own 8-) . i hope you all enjoy the new pic. phil

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Re: A Walk in the Park #16

Postby web-ed » Sat Jun 08, 2013 9:57 am

Yes, I think Laura and Kenny will one day be as sentimental as Carl and Dianne, but for the moment, Laura just wishes her spanking were over. In its own way, "A Walk in the Park" taken as a whole when it's completed will represent the eternal condition of young lovers, and I think it's fair to say that young men spanking young women will continue as long as the human race endures.

We have another "moment of impact" shot, and this one just about finishes Laura off, for her resistance is completely at an end and her bottom is absolutely on fire. If Kenny wants to lay down any conditions, this is the time because Laura will surely agree to them!
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Re: A Walk in the Park

Postby daneldorado » Sat Jun 08, 2013 9:30 pm

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Lest we forget... Do we all remember how differently Laura felt at the beginning of her punishment, from how she feels NOW?

To quote some of her earlier comments, even those she was THINKING and not articulating:

"It's actually pretty exhilarating!"

"I've always fantasized about getting spanked outdoors...!"

"It's all so... (gulp) totally intense!"

But, from the moment the first "visitor" (the female jogger) comes on the scene, Laura's happy mood, and the "exhilaration", changes to "Stop it, Kenny! Let me go! You wouldn't DARE!"

Obviously Laura was okay with having her glutes spanked by Kenny, and why not? After all, as Phil told us: This is what brats want! :D But once that first visitor shows up, Laura is suddenly NOT okay with it. Now she is pleading with Kenny to stop the artillery barrage. But to no avail. Apparently Kenny is enjoying spanking Laura and he's perfectly okay with having an audience.

For us, though, we are personally 100 per cent okay with the scene, and will want to remember it always. Because we, as spankos, know full well that the pain produced by a spanking is only half of the joy. We not only want the lady to receive the swats, but also she should feel the humiliation of a good trip over her spanker's knee. Don't want to come off as some smug chauvinist here, but as a veteran of the "scene" I know that the spanking is not quite complete until your spankee begins to feel the humiliation. And the joy should apply to both parties. Fem libbers need not apply.

Phil, you are doing a tremendous job with this "A Walk in the Park" toon. An outdoor spanking, with witnesses? Gotta be great! :lol:

Cheers,
Dan

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Re: A Walk in the Park

Postby overbarrel49 » Sun Jun 09, 2013 8:11 am

web-ed wrote:Yes, I think Laura and Kenny will one day be as sentimental as Carl and Dianne, but for the moment, Laura just wishes her spanking were over. In its own way, "A Walk in the Park" taken as a whole when it's completed will represent the eternal condition of young lovers, and I think it's fair to say that young men spanking young women will continue as long as the human race endures.


hi web-ed,

i like your comments here and i sincerely hope that you are 100% right about this :D . it sure represents my idea of the ideal situation ;) .

web-ed wrote:We have another "moment of impact" shot, and this one just about finishes Laura off, for her resistance is completely at an end and her bottom is absolutely on fire. If Kenny wants to lay down any conditions, this is the time because Laura will surely agree to them!


you're right again and this toon will be over shortly. i think i have an ending figured out that everyone will enjoy. now i just have to get time to work on it :lol: . thanks, phil

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Re: A Walk in the Park

Postby overbarrel49 » Sun Jun 09, 2013 8:40 am

daneldorado wrote:.
Lest we forget... Do we all remember how differently Laura felt at the beginning of her punishment, from how she feels NOW?

To quote some of her earlier comments, even those she was THINKING and not articulating:

"It's actually pretty exhilarating!"

"I've always fantasized about getting spanked outdoors...!"

"It's all so... (gulp) totally intense!"

But, from the moment the first "visitor" (the female jogger) comes on the scene, Laura's happy mood, and the "exhilaration", changes to "Stop it, Kenny! Let me go! You wouldn't DARE!"


hi Dan,

i'm glad to see that you're paying attention to the dialog since i spend as much time trying to get that right as i do the pic :lol: of course, it deserves that attention because the emotions of a spanking are at least as important as the spankee's stinging bottom 8-) .

daneldorado wrote:For us, though, we are personally 100 per cent okay with the scene, and will want to remember it always. Because we, as spankos, know full well that the pain produced by a spanking is only half of the joy. We not only want the lady to receive the swats, but also she should feel the humiliation of a good trip over her spanker's knee. Don't want to come off as some smug chauvinist here, but as a veteran of the "scene" I know that the spanking is not quite complete until your spankee begins to feel the humiliation. And the joy should apply to both parties. Fem libbers need not apply.


it should indeed apply to both parties. i have a spankee friend who maintains that a girl getting her bare bottom spanked in public is actually enjoying the opportunity to "show off" even if she is frantic about it at the same time 8-) . remember too that Laura knew things might get out of hand but kept pushing anyway. kind of makes me wonder if a spankee doesn't "enjoy" that humiliation as well as the spanking itself. as you said, the joy should apply to both parties :D .

daneldorado wrote:Phil, you are doing a tremendous job with this "A Walk in the Park" toon. An outdoor spanking, with witnesses? Gotta be great! :lol:

Cheers,
Dan


i'm glad you're enjoying it :D . thanks, phil

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Re: A Walk in the Park

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Jun 14, 2013 8:17 am

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hi everyone,

boy! that area with the gazebo and the bench is turning out to be pretty busy :o ................and here i thought that girl who came by a while ago was just jogging :lol: . i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil

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Re: A Walk in the Park

Postby willjohn » Sun Jun 16, 2013 6:19 am

Laura wont be sitting comfortably for quite a while and the jogging lady may soon be wishing she was faster. :roll:

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Re: A Walk in the Park

Postby daneldorado » Sun Jun 16, 2013 2:44 pm

Holy (gulp) Toledo! Will you take a look at Laura's bottom, now? Those twin spheres are now redder than red, they are almost purple! Her attitude has done a 180, too. Instead of trying to force the issue, she now seems downright rueful, like a naughty 5-year-old who has just received her first spanking.

"Sob! Gasp! Sniff! Yes Sir! I'll be good! P-p-please let me up! Sob!"

And now, how does this new couple fit in? Is the woman the same gal who came jogging by, a few panels back? What's HER story?

In the off chance that we are about to see a second couple performing a spanking... Will this be one of those lovely double spankings, with both girls being spanked simultaneously? Your compadre in the spanking art business, "b00m," has frequently drawn pics with both Katie and Clorene getting it at the same time, but I don't believe you've ever gone there.

Time will tell. Oh, and no pressure Phil. You have already favored this website with wonderful spanking pictures, and for that alone we are grateful.

Cheers,
Dan

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Re: A Walk in the Park #17

Postby web-ed » Mon Jun 17, 2013 10:14 am

I think Laura's bottom couldn't take a second spanking just now, so I'd guess that she and Kenny will vacate the bench (which, as we observed early on, just happens to be perfectly designed for spanking ;) ) to make room for the other couple (we saw both of them before, but didn't realize the guy was pursuing the girl or that she was trying to evade her own well-deserved punishment). By sheer coincidence :) Laura's attitude has gotten better and better as her bottom has gotten redder and redder! She's learned a good lesson, but only time will tell if she remembers it.

As for the jogger, I really like knowing the trepidation she feels right now - yes my dear, I'm afraid you did overdo the bratting a bit, and your bottom will soon be as red as Laura's, or nearly so! :)
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