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hugob00m wrote:So then... Laura finds herself in that position, :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: and her way of dealing with it is to goad her boyfriend that he doesn't spank hard enough? Oooooh! Got to LOVE a brat like her! Heh heh! :D :D :D :D
hi Boom,

i couldn't agree with you more............i just love a brat like her because it's so much more fun to blister her bottom knowing that she has totally earned it :D . i guess that's why this has been a favorite fantasy of mine all these years 8-) . thanks, phil
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Pure brattiness! But Laura hasn't yet learned that most basic of lessons: bratting has consequences, and goading Kenny further at this point is not a wise move. She'll learn, sort of, the hard way, which is the only way brats ever seem to learn anything. I enjoyed the "scenery" in this last cartoon, if you know what I mean. ;)
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web-ed wrote:Pure brattiness! But Laura hasn't yet learned that most basic of lessons: bratting has consequences, and goading Kenny further at this point is not a wise move. She'll learn, sort of, the hard way, which is the only way brats ever seem to learn anything. I enjoyed the "scenery" in this last cartoon, if you know what I mean. ;)
hi Web-ed,

you're right.............goading him isn't smart and i think that many brats understand this but they just have to see "exactly" where that line is :lol: . i'm glad you enjoyed the scenery............more coming up :D . thanks, phil
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the calm before the storm
the calm before the storm
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hi everyone,

you know, we all sometimes wonder about why bratty spankees do things the way they do and i have it on good authority that there are many times when even the brat herself wonders why she pushed things as far as she did :? .....................especially when her bottom is feeling like it's on fire :lol: . of course, i also have it on good authority that brats know how to get what they need 8-) . i hope you enjoy this week's pic. phil
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Hiya Phil... Another nice panel from you, shows things progressing pretty much as expected, in your story "A Walk in the Park."

After some righteous smacks to Laura's delicious bottomcheeks, Kenny finds his girlfriend turning sassy on him. To this point, we can say Laura is confident that she will be receiving the kind of loving spanking she is used to getting. But Kenny is now thinking of "turning up the heat." Do you think little Laura will be okay with the spanking she has wrought?

Looking forward to many more spanking panels, and a squelching of Laura's sassiness.

Cheers,
Dan
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Well we don't need any long-winded analysis here - Laura has gone too far, as brats always seem to do, and she will soon pay the price :) ! For us, there's nothing to do but sit back and enjoy it.
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daneldorado wrote:After some righteous smacks to Laura's delicious bottomcheeks, Kenny finds his girlfriend turning sassy on him. To this point, we can say Laura is confident that she will be receiving the kind of loving spanking she is used to getting. But Kenny is now thinking of "turning up the heat." Do you think little Laura will be okay with the spanking she has wrought?
hi Dan,

i would say yes and no :lol: . she''ll probably be wondering why she kept going until he decided to set her bottom on fire even if this is what she secretly wanted all along :D .
daneldorado wrote: Looking forward to many more spanking panels, and a squelching of Laura's sassiness.

Cheers,
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more coming up. this toon seems entirely predictable so far but coming up with any surprises might be a problem since everyone seems to be very familiar with bratty behavior 8-) . thanks, phil
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web-ed wrote:Well we don't need any long-winded analysis here - Laura has gone too far, as brats always seem to do, and she will soon pay the price :) ! For us, there's nothing to do but sit back and enjoy it.
hi web-ed,

that's pretty much what i was just telling Dan :lol: . i am glad that you mentioned sitting back and enjoying this though, because i DO love watching a brat get what's coming to her so maybe surprising plot twists aren't necessary here :D . thanks, phil
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getting harder to keep quiet
getting harder to keep quiet
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hi everyone,

our bratty, young Laura seems to have discovered that sometimes words can come back to haunt you...............especially if you're already OTK when you say them :lol: . it's interesting how it all seems to have led to a lot of conflicting and overwhelming feelings for her 8-) . i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil
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overbarrel49 wrote:our bratty, young Laura seems to have discovered that sometimes words can come back to haunt you...............especially if you're already OTK when you say them.
Right! Sometimes your words can come back and bite you on the butt! Heh heh! I'm enjoying this story a lot!
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Are you really going to finish this with her pants still up?
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Great new pic, Phil. And I admire that you have found a way to bring us a nice OTK spanking that is both merited and consensual. As much as I like to see punitive spankings of naughty girls, I have to say that if the spanking is consensual, that adds another layer of delight for us, the viewers.

I notice that willjohn, a faithful reader of this site, is now urging you to lower Laura's panties for the next phase of her spanking. Personally, I can do without the fetish that demands that all spankees be bare by the end of their ordeal. Maybe others like that, and I don't hold it against them. It's their choice, I guess. But I am an opponent of bare bottom spankings, for the simple fact that there is always a chance of undue exposure that, really, has no place in a spanking cartoon. If you want to progress from the panty spanking phase, I think the next logical step would be for the spanker to raise the sides of the girl's panties to fully expose the buttocks, and go to work walloping them.

Seriously, as far as the spankee is concerned, there is really no difference between receiving spanks on her skimpy panties and receiving them on her bare behind. It's not as if the panties are any protection.

Getting back to my opening statement, I do like that you have made this into the tale of a consensual spanking. Yes, I can certainly understand that Laura may soon be enduring a walloping much harder than she has bargained for, and that would be just and proper. If a girl purposely provokes her boyfriend into putting her over his knee, she should not be entitled to call a halt to the spanking whenever she wants to. It's a chance she has to take.. and I suspect that Laura will soon be trying to squirm away from the punishment that she, herself, has wrought. :lol:

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daneldorado wrote:Great new pic, Phil. And I admire that you have found a way to bring us a nice OTK spanking that is both merited and consensual. As much as I like to see punitive spankings of naughty girls, I have to say that if the spanking is consensual, that adds another layer of delight for us, the viewers.
hi Dan,

i tend to agree that the consensual aspect does indeed add another layer of delight. when the girl getting the spanking is wanting/needing the spanking it does make it that much more satisfying for the spanker too :D .
daneldorado wrote:Getting back to my opening statement, I do like that you have made this into the tale of a consensual spanking. Yes, I can certainly understand that Laura may soon be enduring a walloping much harder than she has bargained for, and that would be just and proper. If a girl purposely provokes her boyfriend into putting her over his knee, she should not be entitled to call a halt to the spanking whenever she wants to. It's a chance she has to take.. and I suspect that Laura will soon be trying to squirm away from the punishment that she, herself, has wrought. :lol:
even though the spanking may have a consensual side to it. the spankee doesn't get a say in how hard or how long the spanking is.............just as it would be in a totally punishment spanking 8-) if she did have a say, it would probably ruin the "needed" effects of the spanking for her and that probably goes even more for a girl who brats go get a spanking ;) .
willjohn wrote:Are you really going to finish this with her pants still up?
daneldorado wrote: I notice that willjohn, a faithful reader of this site, is now urging you to lower Laura's panties for the next phase of her spanking. Personally, I can do without the fetish that demands that all spankees be bare by the end of their ordeal. Maybe others like that, and I don't hold it against them. It's their choice, I guess. But I am an opponent of bare bottom spankings, for the simple fact that there is always a chance of undue exposure that, really, has no place in a spanking cartoon. If you want to progress from the panty spanking phase, I think the next logical step would be for the spanker to raise the sides of the girl's panties to fully expose the buttocks, and go to work walloping them.

Seriously, as far as the spankee is concerned, there is really no difference between receiving spanks on her skimpy panties and receiving them on her bare behind. It's not as if the panties are any protection.
we seem to have a difference of opinion here. as i always say, "there are as many kinds of spanking as there are people participating in spanking" :D . i also had a comment from a viewer at my toon group complaining that it was time for her to lose that hint of a smile that she's had on her face. i have 2 different things going on in this toon. 1) the spankee bratting to get a spanking and 2) the spanking taking place outdoors. this has proved to be a problem for me and has slowed the progress of the toon although i think it's going to work out ok. because of this, the decision of how to proceed in this matter was kind of automatically made for me as i thought through the toon. in any case, i hope everyone will still enjoy the toon :D . thanks, phil
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Things are progressing logically and therefore quite satisfactorily, from my point of view. Our brat is slowly - very slowly - beginning to repent her ways, and a long enough spanking should bring about the desired change in attitude. As to the "panties up or down?" question, as you note there will be differing opinions on this, and your best bet is to follow your own judgment. Dan prefers panties up; Willjohn panties down; I myself generally favor panties down except for the case of superheroines in costume, because that's the way I spank in real life and it maximizes the spankee's humiliation and embarrassment. :) Either way will work here, since some boyfriends would spare their girlfriends the possible embarrassment of being caught panties down by any passers-by in the park while others wouldn't.
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web-ed wrote:Things are progressing logically and therefore quite satisfactorily, from my point of view. Our brat is slowly - very slowly - beginning to repent her ways, and a long enough spanking should bring about the desired change in attitude.
hi web-ed,

she is indeed beginning to repent :lol: . as for the speed of this repentance, or lack of speed, i have a hunch that's a common attribute among bratty girls who brat to get that spanking good attention they crave :D .
web-ed wrote: As to the "panties up or down?" question, as you note there will be differing opinions on this, and your best bet is to follow your own judgment. Dan prefers panties up; Willjohn panties down; I myself generally favor panties down except for the case of superheroines in costume, because that's the way I spank in real life and it maximizes the spankee's humiliation and embarrassment. :) Either way will work here, since some boyfriends would spare their girlfriends the possible embarrassment of being caught panties down by any passers-by in the park while others wouldn't.
it's funny but personally, i love spankings both ways :D ..........or better yet, both ways in the same spanking 8-) . as you note, either way would work here but as usual, i have a specific motive that will determine which is the one that happens..............a motive that will be dictated by the story line itself ;) . i'm glad you're enjoying the toon :D . more to come. thanks, phil
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THAT'S gotta be embarrassing
THAT'S gotta be embarrassing
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hi everyone,

it looks like what started out as a walk in the park now has Laura trying to run............too bad her feet aren't touching the ground :lol: laughing. funny though, other passers by don't seem to be having any trouble and are even giving advice 8-) . i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil
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Ooh, this is getting better. It was already "good," but now it is getting delicious. :D

As Kenny continues to wallop the seat of Laura's panties, suddenly a lone jogger comes upon the scene. She (the jogger) apparently approves of what she sees, and encourages Kenny to really lay it on! For his part, Kenny is demanding to see "smoke" arise from Laura's bottom. Sudden thought: Would he settle for a fart? Or does he really believe the heat in Laura's butt can produce visible smoke? Hmmm... Maybe we'll see.

As always, Phil, your over-the-knee positioning is excellent.

Web-ed has already chimed in here, offering this point: "i have a hunch that's a common attribute among bratty girls who brat to get that spanking good attention they crave...." Yes, that's a factor we rarely discuss on this magnificent website... but maybe we should. Once, a lady who is very much into the "scene" told me that what a sub wants, more than anything else, is for someone to pay attention to her.

Being on the receiving end of a thousand swats may seem like a steep price to pay for someone's attention. Nevertheless, it seems that little Laura's thoughts are right in sync with this idea. Earlier, when we were reading her thoughts, we "heard" :


"Oooh! Face down over his lap! Out here in the open! My dress up and...Gulp!... The seat of my panties waving around in the air!... Groan! So exposed! So helpless! So embarrassed! Gasp! So why am I so... Shiver!... Excited! Whew!"


Now I ask you. Does this sound like a reluctant spankee? I think not.

The inclusion of the jogger in your latest panel sent my mind on a wild chase through many "possibles." Here's what I thought would be fun, except that it would require more work on your part:

First, the lone jogger. Then, an elderly couple pass by on their daily constitutional. Then, a bunch of little kids, who are transfixed by the scene of the grown-up Laura being spanked like a naughty child. In my feverish fantasy, I then imagine a nine-man baseball team, stopping by on their way to the practice field. More and more people arrive and are witnesses to the best outdoor spanking they've ever seen. Finally, Laura is getting spanked in front of a joint session of the U.S. Congress.

Okay, NOW she's getting all the attention she wanted. And then some. :lol: And the spanking continues and continues, until twilight comes and blankets the scene in darkness. But no worries. The shine on her well-spanked bottom will light their way out of the park and to their car. Of course, little Laura will not be able to sit down, so she crouches in the back seat for the whole ride, as a fully satisfied Kenny drives them home.

Can't wait.

Cheers,
Dan
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I thought Kenny may have grabbed the jogger on her way back and spanked her for sticking her bib in.
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Love the humiliation, it always adds extra spice to the story.
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Kenny and Laura have their first witness! :D :D :D :D I love it. Y'know what I would REALLY like to see in your story? If an old man with a white beard and a buzzcut wearing a hawaiian shirt stops to watch! It would make me feel like I was there! ;) ;) ;) ;)
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