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daneldorado wrote:Hi Phil:

Very, very good job on your latest "A Walk in the Park" story. The picture of little Laura getting smacked on her bare behind is definitely a "keeper." We hope to see more good action like this, in the near future.
hi Dan,

i'm glad you enjoyed this one :D .................and there will be more action from here on out 8-) .
daneldorado wrote:As I say, Laura is displayed here perfectly. But now I think that "Kenny" is a little long in the torso. Of course, Kenny is not the main focus of your readers' interest, Laura is. But have a look at how long his upper body is. Maybe if you look at this picture (013) WITHOUT Laura across his lap, you can see that Kenny's upper body is too long for the rest of him.
i may just try that. i still have the live Poser file so i can re open it, remove Laura completely and then render it again with everything exactly the same except without her. it might just be interesting. when i get that done i'll post it for you to check out.
daneldorado wrote:Oh, and thanks for including some "contact" pics in the telling of your story. So far, we have eight (8) pics of the spanking itself, so it would look weird if every single OTK pic showed Kenny's hand in the air. From the looks of Laura's crimson tush, it seems she is receiving a monumental walloping. And we wouldn't have it any other way. :lol:

Cheers,
Dan
you're welcome. more spanking coming up as well as other fun activities :lol: . thanks, phil
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I think this is my favorite picture so far - we have a nice "moment of contact" shot with Kenny's hand coming down on Laura's bottom, a good viewing angle, and the emotional tide has turned now as Laura realizes that she went too far and now genuinely regrets having been so provocative. It is at this point that demands will be replaced by pleading, which is a key part of attitude adjustment! :)
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web-ed wrote:I think this is my favorite picture so far - we have a nice "moment of contact" shot with Kenny's hand coming down on Laura's bottom, a good viewing angle, and the emotional tide has turned now as Laura realizes that she went too far and now genuinely regrets having been so provocative. It is at this point that demands will be replaced by pleading, which is a key part of attitude adjustment! :)
hi web-ed,

i'm glad you liked this one :D . i think you have it figured out about Laura's regrets................which is pretty much what my bratty spankee adviser was talking about before i even started this one 8-) . we'll be seeing more of that attitude adjustment coming up ;) . thanks, phil
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Laura's spanking is out of control
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hi everyone,

it appears that Laura's spanking is starting to hurt and that she's getting a bit frantic 8-) ...............good thing she's not in a position to see what's coming next :lol: . i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil
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The humiliation of a public spanking is something we will only ever see in drawings or staged photographs these days, so I applaud and recommend that you give us more of this kind of work at every given opportunity - thanks for this anyway. p.s. where is that parks officer when you need him - hint, hint.
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Hi Phil... Maybe I'm the only one here who enjoys looking at pretty legs as much as watching cute girls getting spanked, but... I gotta say, you are doing this board's users a great big favor!

You are a wonderful "Poser" artist. We are getting a perfect pictorial of what happens when a bratty girl tries to push all her boyfriend's buttons. She gets spanked! :D And not only does she get spanked, but we are being treated to a lavish cheesecake feast!

Probably your pic no. 13 shows off Laura's legs to best advantage... but all through your latest masterwork, those gorgeous gams are majorly on display. As I say, I may be the only guy here that spends more time ogling her legs more than her tush, though I did notice that it is getting mighty RED! :lol:

And I wonder if this new couple, Carl and his sweetie, will be inspired by Kenny and Laura to revisit their former encounter on that very same park bench? The lady is speaking in parables when she tries to conflate the words "embarrassing" and "lucky," but you and I know what she means.

It's a paradox, all right. A beautiful paradox. Laura is hurting right now, but she will have heavenly feelings afterwards. Her bottom may get sore, but it will all be worth it, later, when she thinks about this beautiful encounter with Kenny's strong right hand. :lol: :lol:

Cheers,
Dan
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So now the onlookers are coming to stop and stare - Laura better hope that Kenny winds up the spanking soon, before she becomes a featured park attraction! Perhaps the Parks Commission should officially designate that bench for spanking purposes. :) The color of her bottom complements those pink flowers in the background rather nicely, and her attitude has improved - she's saying "please" now instead of making demands. More proof, if any were needed, that spanking works!
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solsunbeach wrote:The humiliation of a public spanking is something we will only ever see in drawings or staged photographs these days, so I applaud and recommend that you give us more of this kind of work at every given opportunity - thanks for this anyway. p.s. where is that parks officer when you need him - hint, hint.
hi Solsunbeach,

i'm glad you're enjoying this particular story :D . you are far from the only one who likes these public spanking fantasies so i think you can count on seeing more as we go forward ;) . damn, the idea of having an officer come by is a really good one. i'll have to give that matter some thought and maybe keep it in mind for future reference. several years ago i did a toon called "In Training". there was a spanking in the park in that one administered by Officer Yank. i wish i thought about including him in this one before it got so late in the toon. anyway, i'm glad you've been enjoying this one :D . thanks, phil
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daneldorado wrote:Hi Phil... Maybe I'm the only one here who enjoys looking at pretty legs as much as watching cute girls getting spanked, but... I gotta say, you are doing this board's users a great big favor!
hi Dan,

i'm glad you've been enjoying the view :D . you may be the only one who specifically mentions those lovely legs but they are part of the whole package that we all love to look at during these spankings ;) .
daneldorado wrote:You are a wonderful "Poser" artist. We are getting a perfect pictorial of what happens when a bratty girl tries to push all her boyfriend's buttons. She gets spanked! :D And not only does she get spanked, but we are being treated to a lavish cheesecake feast!
thanks for the kind words about my toons. it's nice to know that you're enjoying not only the pictures but also the stories :D . i was really happy when i first discovered Poser because it provided an outlet for all the spanking fantasies running around in my head 8-) .
daneldorado wrote:Probably your pic no. 13 shows off Laura's legs to best advantage... but all through your latest masterwork, those gorgeous gams are majorly on display. As I say, I may be the only guy here that spends more time ogling her legs more than her tush, though I did notice that it is getting mighty RED! :lol:
i do try to give as many different looks during the course of a toon as i can so we don't get bored :lol: . that red color you refer to is also part of what happens when a bratty girls goes pushing her boyfriend's buttons :D .
daneldorado wrote:And I wonder if this new couple, Carl and his sweetie, will be inspired by Kenny and Laura to revisit their former encounter on that very same park bench? The lady is speaking in parables when she tries to conflate the words "embarrassing" and "lucky," but you and I know what she means.
i'm surprised that you didn't recognize the older couple who are walking up the path towards the spot where Ken is spanking Laura. they are Carl and Dianne............Barbara's parents from the story " In the Family" that i did a while back 8-) . we already saw Dianne getting a spanking after her daughter Barbara got spanked by her boyfriend :lol: . they seemed a logical couple to be out walking in the park. i'm sure as long as they've been married they have probably taken lots of walks............and other activities in the the park :lol: .
daneldorado wrote:It's a paradox, all right. A beautiful paradox. Laura is hurting right now, but she will have heavenly feelings afterwards. Her bottom may get sore, but it will all be worth it, later, when she thinks about this beautiful encounter with Kenny's strong right hand. :lol: :lol:

Cheers,
Dan
that all sounds just right to me ;) i'm glad you're enjoying this toon :D . thanks, phil
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web-ed wrote:So now the onlookers are coming to stop and stare - Laura better hope that Kenny winds up the spanking soon, before she becomes a featured park attraction! Perhaps the Parks Commission should officially designate that bench for spanking purposes. :) The color of her bottom complements those pink flowers in the background rather nicely, and her attitude has improved - she's saying "please" now instead of making demands. More proof, if any were needed, that spanking works!
i love the idea of Laura becoming a "featured attraction" :lol: so far she doesn't seem to be enjoying even being the "guest of honor :lol: . perhaps Carl and Dianne could donate a plaque reserving the bench for the spanking of naughty girls :D . yeah, i think that red color of her bottom has a lot to do with her rapidly improving attitude..............just as it should be ;) . i'm glad you approve of the direction this toon is taking :D . thanks, phil
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Hi Phil

Is it possible to have some costume drama's in the future. I seem to remember a wild west series you did which I enjoyed.
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overbarrel49 wrote:


i'm surprised that you didn't recognize the older couple who are walking up the path towards the spot where Ken is spanking Laura. they are Carl and Dianne............Barbara's parents from the story " In the Family" that i did a while back.


Ya know, I did not recognize Carl and Dianne. Although I love all your pictorial creations, I only store the ones that appeal to me the most. If you ever bring back Sara Ann and Jennifer, I would certainly recognize them... because to me, that story is the best one you've ever done.

Maybe when it's finished, "A Walk in the Park" will take its place alongside "One Good Turn." That one is gre-a-e-e-at!! :lol:

Cheers,
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solsunbeach wrote:Hi Phil

Is it possible to have some costume drama's in the future. I seem to remember a wild west series you did which I enjoyed.
hi Solsunbeach,

i did indeed do a wild western for Springrose's birthday one time. you must have been hanging around my toon groups for a long time if you remember that one :D . those costumes with the long skirts are harder for me to work with but i'll give this matter some thought and see what i can come up with. if you have an specific scenarios in mind you might email me with those but bear in mind that the more complex the scenes, the harder they are for me to do. thanks, phil
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daneldorado wrote: Ya know, I did not recognize Carl and Dianne. Although I love all your pictorial creations, I only store the ones that appeal to me the most. If you ever bring back Sara Ann and Jennifer, I would certainly recognize them... because to me, that story is the best one you've ever done.

Maybe when it's finished, "A Walk in the Park" will take its place alongside "One Good Turn." That one is gre-a-e-e-at!! :lol:

Cheers,
Dan
hi Dan,

i had no doubt that you would recognize Jennifer and Sara Ann :lol: . when you come right down to it though, there's no real reason for you to store these since they are available at my toon groups. i did have a couple viewers who recognized Carl and Dianne right away and mentioned it to me ;) . thanks, phil
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hi everyone,

they say that misery loves company. probably not if the company's watching though :lol: . i have it on good authority that having people watching a young lady while she's kicking and squirming with her panties down can cause her to have some sexual nervousness in addition to all those other emotions and sensations she's being flooded with 8-) . i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil
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Zowie Phil! You just keep on turning up the heat, don't you?

What was originally a simple "tease" by Laura has escalated into a rip-roaring, four-alarm fire for the little lady. As if that weren't enough humiliation, now she's got the added degradation of being spanked before an audience! She's in pain and God help me, but I love it! :P

Dianne, the lady who is now witnessing Laura's embarrassing ordeal, lets her know that she's been where Laura is now... and reflexively, Dianne stands there, holding her own bottom. For what? For protection? Methinks Dianne's emotions are a mix of remembered pain and a touch of jealousy, now that she sees another young woman getting the spanking she, herself, admits was a blessing. She and her man, Carl, remember their own visit to this bench. The memories of that fateful earlier spanking are gravid with happy memories. And we get the feeling that after her own ordeal, Laura will remember this night fondly.

As for your artwork: What can I say? The over-the-knee positioning is perfect, Laura's fine limbs are kicking nicely and giving us a joyously welcome leg show, and Kenny's strong right arm is fit and seemingly eager to continue spanking for a long time to come. (His left arm, however, seems disconnected at the elbow.) And Laura's exquisite bottom is both round and red, as her ordeal continues.

In all, Phil, a very welcome addition to the Overbarrel canon of work. I absolutely love the way this action developed: A superb take-down of the comely brat, followed by a raising of her skirt, then a sharp attack on her pantied nates, followed by the inevitable baring of the lady's tush... which is getting redder and redder by the panel. What can I say? This is exactly the way a good spanking should look! :lol:

Phil, we as connoisseurs of the spanking art, are entirely in your debt. I hope you get a lot of positive reaction to this one. It's a keeper!

Cheers,
Dan
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Re: costume drama's - What about the student and the less than ethical tutor? The plaid skirt look is always popular
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daneldorado wrote:Zowie Phil! You just keep on turning up the heat, don't you?

What was originally a simple "tease" by Laura has escalated into a rip-roaring, four-alarm fire for the little lady. As if that weren't enough humiliation, now she's got the added degradation of being spanked before an audience! She's in pain and God help me, but I love it! :P
hi Dan,

i'm glad you're enjoying this toon :D . i think turning up the heat as you go along is what spanking is all about ;) .
daneldorado wrote:Dianne, the lady who is now witnessing Laura's embarrassing ordeal, lets her know that she's been where Laura is now... and reflexively, Dianne stands there, holding her own bottom. For what? For protection? Methinks Dianne's emotions are a mix of remembered pain and a touch of jealousy, now that she sees another young woman getting the spanking she, herself, admits was a blessing. She and her man, Carl, remember their own visit to this bench. The memories of that fateful earlier spanking are gravid with happy memories. And we get the feeling that after her own ordeal, Laura will remember this night fondly.
this is some interesting speculation on your part and i have a hunch much of it very accurate. one thing is certain, it is a very emotional time for both ladies 8-) . personally, i like to think that spanking is just like many other aspects of life.............decisions are made, actions are taken, emotions are brought forth, memories are made, the torch is passed from one generation to the next and those old memories bring forth the emotions again ;) . good observations.
daneldorado wrote: As for your artwork: What can I say? The over-the-knee positioning is perfect, Laura's fine limbs are kicking nicely and giving us a joyously welcome leg show, and Kenny's strong right arm is fit and seemingly eager to continue spanking for a long time to come. (His left arm, however, seems disconnected at the elbow.) And Laura's exquisite bottom is both round and red, as her ordeal continues.
the left elbow does indeed look weird. it is a function of the male characters i am using with Poser. i noticed this and was planning on fixing it as i've done in many other pics. somehow i managed to forget though :lol: . i'm glad it didn't spoil your enjoyment of the pic :D .
daneldorado wrote: In all, Phil, a very welcome addition to the Overbarrel canon of work. I absolutely love the way this action developed: A superb take-down of the comely brat, followed by a raising of her skirt, then a sharp attack on her pantied nates, followed by the inevitable baring of the lady's tush... which is getting redder and redder by the panel. What can I say? This is exactly the way a good spanking should look! :lol:

Phil, we as connoisseurs of the spanking art, are entirely in your debt. I hope you get a lot of positive reaction to this one. It's a keeper!

Cheers,
Dan
i'm glad you're enjoying the story and the art work and yes, i have had a lot of positive reaction to this one :D . thanks, phil
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solsunbeach wrote:Re: costume drama's - What about the student and the less than ethical tutor? The plaid skirt look is always popular
hi Solsunbeach,

i'll give this matter some consideration. i think i might just have a suitable costume. thanks, phil
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The guest appearances of the middle-aged spanking couple, Carl and Dianne, is a welcome development in our spanking storyline. I think the interaction between the ladies is the most interesting thing here. Dianne is genuinely sympathetic to Laura's plight, remembering how it once felt to be in her position, and rubbing her own bottom (perhaps subconsciously) as she recalls the stinging pain. But Laura is in such distress from the pain and embarrassment she might not even fully hear Dianne's words, and isn't deriving much comfort from knowing that Dianne has been in her shoes. I think Laura is about "done" now, in more ways than one.

As for the artwork, Dan mentioned the excellent OTK positioning, so important for connoisseurs of traditional hand spanking. I'll bring up the surrounding greenery, which is really beginning to grow on me, so to speak :) - we could almost subtitle this work "A Pastoral Paddling" because of its atmospherics. Your control with Poser is really excellent - I can only think of about three people who have done as well using spanking subject matter: Photino, who seems to have retired, a second guy whose name escapes me and who like Photino unfortunately hasn't done much M/F work, and third guy who did an excellent F/F piece and then seems to have disappeared.
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