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Re: A Walk in the Park 1 -4

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willjohn wrote:...with the eventual bare ass for the embarrassment factor. :lol:
Or as we might put it, the em-BARE-ASS-ment factor! :lol: We've certainly gotten off to a promising start here, with Kenny responding to Laura's bratting a little sooner than she anticipated. So why do women like Laura brat?

Strange as it may sound, the brat is seeking reassurance, and it is fairly common behavior among women, even those who don't want a spanking. What they are looking for really is reassurance that the man they have selected is a good, strong one who will stand up to them and not allow them to get away with too much. They want the man to rise to the challenge and in effect say "no" to them. If the woman is into spanking, then she wants the masculine response to take the form of an OTK session.

Of course, most brats do not want to be humiliated in public even though getting publicly spanked is a fairly common fantasy because it enhances the humiliation that is at the heart of every spanking. Laura here thought she would receive her discipline privately, but she miscalculated (an inherent danger in bratting). The more exhibitionistic brats are o.k. with getting it in a public or semi-public setting, and that is why you'll see them in large numbers at a typical spanking party (if there is such a thing).

I think our park designer here must have gone to the Overbarrel School of Recreational Architecture, because he thoughtfully provided a bench with a flat (not sloping) seat and no arms or back to get in the way of taking a brat over your knee! :)
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web-ed wrote:Strange as it may sound, the brat is seeking reassurance, and it is fairly common behavior among women, even those who don't want a spanking. What they are looking for really is reassurance that the man they have selected is a good, strong one who will stand up to them and not allow them to get away with too much. They want the man to rise to the challenge and in effect say "no" to them. If the woman is into spanking, then she wants the masculine response to take the form of an OTK session.
hi web-ed,

i see that you and i agree on this matter :D . the difference i see is that you are much more concise than i am..............there are times i could use your services when i am doing the dialog for my pics :lol: .
web-ed wrote:Of course, most brats do not want to be humiliated in public even though getting publicly spanked is a fairly common fantasy because it enhances the humiliation that is at the heart of every spanking. Laura here thought she would receive her discipline privately, but she miscalculated (an inherent danger in bratting). The more exhibitionistic brats are o.k. with getting it in a public or semi-public setting, and that is why you'll see them in large numbers at a typical spanking party (if there is such a thing).
again, you are quite right. i have had many ladies from the online spanking community who have mentioned that they have the fantasy of getting a public spanking.............especially an outdoor one, but 99% of them say they don't REALLY want one. i think that other 1% both want a public spanking and don't want one, if you know what i mean. Laura did indeed miscalculate...........as you said, it is an inherent danger of bratting :lol:
web-ed wrote:I think our park designer here must have gone to the Overbarrel School of Recreational Architecture, because he thoughtfully provided a bench with a flat (not sloping) seat and no arms or back to get in the way of taking a brat over your knee! :)
i can guarantee that the park designer did indeed go to the Overbarrel School of Recreational Architecture :lol: i worked in a state part here in Indiana after i graduate from Purdue and i did take a course in landscape architecture. one of the first things they taught us was to make sure that the furniture was designed with the user in mind ;) . ......................although they didn't specifically mention spanking :lol: i will mention that i have indeed given a few spankings in parks although most of the time i tried to find "the path less traveled by" for such activities. even at that, i can guarantee that the girl i was spanking didn't want to be turned over with her dress pulled up and panties pulled down in the great outdoors no matter how far we were away from other people :lol: thanks, phil
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looks like that cool air is causing some shivering!
looks like that cool air is causing some shivering!
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hi everyone,

i have something special planned for tomorrow so i decided to go ahead and post the next installment of our new toon today :D . it appears that having her dressed raised right out in the open has caught Laura a bit by surprise :lol: . that cool air that she's now feeling as a result seems to be causing a veritable flood of emotions :oops: 8-) .........not to mention some quietly spoken supplications for a decreased volume level or a change of venue :lol: . i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil
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This is a wonderful addition to your latest story! I just wish I would've been walking in the park at just the right time to see a pretty girl getting spanked by her boyfriend! Seeing your poser art version of it is the next best thing. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

If the weather there in Indiana is anything like what we're having in Kansas, Laura must be feeling a bit of a chill with her skirt raised up like that! But I'm confident that Kenny knows just how to warm her up!
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hugob00m wrote:This is a wonderful addition to your latest story! I just wish I would've been walking in the park at just the right time to see a pretty girl getting spanked by her boyfriend! Seeing your poser art version of it is the next best thing. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
hi Boom,


i'm glad you enjoyed the latest addition to my story :D i used to work at a state park and as a result i have given a few spankings in the great outdoors...........not only in that park though. once i tried it, i really liked it so i did it in other parks and it was great fun even though i usually made sure i was well hidden from passers by. the one thing i never did get to do at any of these parks though was to stumble on a spanking in progress :( so i guess i'll have to settle for poser art too..............sigh.
hugob00m wrote:If the weather there in Indiana is anything like what we're having in Kansas, Laura must be feeling a bit of a chill with her skirt raised up like that! But I'm confident that Kenny knows just how to warm her up!
it's still pretty chilly here as temps are running 10-20 degrees below where they are supposed to be this time of year so Laura is definitely feeling that cool air :lol: . Ken, being a gentleman, will surely not allow her bottom to be cold for long though ;) . thanks, phil
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Re: A Walk in the Park #5

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interesting that you set the spanking bench next to a gazebo. Of course, right now Laura is more worried about Kenny lifting her skirt to reveal her own gazebo :lol: I wonder how far the sound of spanking travels in a quiet park?
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web-ed wrote:interesting that you set the spanking bench next to a gazebo.
hi web-ed,

you seem suspicious of my intentions here :lol: . it was designed by that same overbarrel school of recreational architecture :lol: .
web-ed wrote: Of course, right now Laura is more worried about Kenny lifting her skirt to reveal her own gazebo :lol: I wonder how far the sound of spanking travels in a quiet park?
i'm not sure about that but i'm betting that it seems to carry way farther than Laura would want it too..............especially since she seems to be trying to keep the "conversation" as quiet as possible :lol: . thanks, phil
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hi everyone,

that first spank landing seems to be bringing a certain "reality" to that outdoor spanking that Laura has previously only fantasized about :D ...............as well as some sort of sensory overload 8-) . i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil
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Hiya Phil:

Your latest panel for "A Walk in the Park" is beautiful. Not just good, but actually beautiful. While I don't expect many fem-libbers to voice their support, I'm sure that every other category of person who is viewing this story just LOVES IT!

Laura is now learning, the hard way, the truth of the old maxim: Bratty behavior leads to bratty consequences.

I am very, very pleased with the looks of this panel. You have positioned Laura perfectly over Kenny's knee, with her lovely behind perched at the apex of the composition. Her gorgeous legs -- you KNOW that's what I love -- :lol: -- are as good as legs ever get, and they are already kicking, at this first of what I'm sure will be MANY swats. Her dress has been lifted, and is now bunched around her midsection, giving Kenny full access to every square inch of her fine buttocks :D !

And I'm very glad that you, like b00m and myself, know to include some panels showing an occasional swat LANDING, rather than simply showing the man's hand waving in the air. Both positions are essential to a proper spanking. So, when drawing a sequence rather than a single panel, it is necessary to show the man's hand landing on its lovely target.

Just one thing bothers me... and it's not you exactly, it concerns one of your fans who posted a comment.

In one of the comments following your newest panel, the respondent says something like: The spanking is taking place next to a gazebo, and he wonders if Laura will show us her "own" gazebo. I pray that she does NOT. A good spanking can be just as scenic if the lady maintains her dignity and doesn't expose herself... or did I get that wrong, Phil? Just wondering.

Anyway, Phil, for what it's worth: This sort of drawing is the main reason you have so many fans. Spank on!

Cheers,
Dan
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Another great panel for your newest story! Laura feels the impact of Kenny's hand on her cute little panty-clad backside! I love it! :D :D :D :D I can hardly wait to see what you do next! Perhaps there may be some passers-by to be entertained by the show and add to Laura's embarrassment? :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:
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daneldorado wrote:Your latest panel for "A Walk in the Park" is beautiful. Not just good, but actually beautiful. While I don't expect many fem-libbers to voice their support, I'm sure that every other category of person who is viewing this story just LOVES IT!
hi Dan,

i'm glad you enjoyed the view on this pic :D . i know i love it but then it's my fantasy so i guess that's not a surprise :lol: .
daneldorado wrote:Laura is now learning, the hard way, the truth of the old maxim: Bratty behavior leads to bratty consequences.
i had some help with the planning of this toon and the spankee who assisted me, an admitted brat, pointed out some paradoxes about being a brat. on the one hand, she allowed as how she plans on how to get a spanking because that's what she wants ;) . on the other hand, she wonders why she lets it get out of hand and always winds up getting a bottom that's way more sore than she had in mind :o . then she finished up by saying, " but a brat knows how to get what she wants" :lol: . i have a feeling that her paradoxes are in play here with Laura who wanted a spanking but hadn't thought about having it take place here in the park where anyone might wander by 8-) .
daneldorado wrote:I am very, very pleased with the looks of this panel. You have positioned Laura perfectly over Kenny's knee, with her lovely behind perched at the apex of the composition. Her gorgeous legs -- you KNOW that's what I love -- :lol: -- are as good as legs ever get, and they are already kicking, at this first of what I'm sure will be MANY swats. Her dress has been lifted, and is now bunched around her midsection, giving Kenny full access to every square inch of her fine buttocks :D !
:D thanks! i thought this was a nice angle that showed off Laura's attributes as well as the predicament she's in very well so it's nice to know i did a good job conveying that :D .
daneldorado wrote:And I'm very glad that you, like b00m and myself, know to include some panels showing an occasional swat LANDING, rather than simply showing the man's hand waving in the air. Both positions are essential to a proper spanking. So, when drawing a sequence rather than a single panel, it is necessary to show the man's hand landing on its lovely target.
since i started doing pics showing the spanker's hand landing i've decided that if properly done that landing hand can actually enhance the intensity of the pic even though part of the spankee's bottom is covered by the spanker's hand. the trick seems to be to pick a camera angle and a situation where that landing hand is used to maximum effect and i think this pic is a good example of that ;) .
daneldorado wrote:Just one thing bothers me... and it's not you exactly, it concerns one of your fans who posted a comment.

In one of the comments following your newest panel, the respondent says something like: The spanking is taking place next to a gazebo, and he wonders if Laura will show us her "own" gazebo. I pray that she does NOT. A good spanking can be just as scenic if the lady maintains her dignity and doesn't expose herself... or did I get that wrong, Phil? Just wondering.

Anyway, Phil, for what it's worth: This sort of drawing is the main reason you have so many fans. Spank on!

Cheers,
Dan
i really didn't read this into this comment. to me it seemed a reference to her embarrassment at having her dress raised in the great outdoors :lol: thanks for that last comment. if brought a grin to my face :D . phil
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hugob00m wrote:Another great panel for your newest story! Laura feels the impact of Kenny's hand on her cute little panty-clad backside! I love it! :D :D :D :D I can hardly wait to see what you do next! Perhaps there may be some passers-by to be entertained by the show and add to Laura's embarrassment? :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:
hi Boom,

you and i seem to see eye to eye concerning Laura's backside...............i too think it looks really cute covered with those soft, little panties :D . you seem suspicious that there may be some passers by accidentally witnessing portions of this spanking ................would i do anything like that :lol: . thanks, phil
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Laura is finding out that reality is different than fantasy - and it hurts more, too! :) I see that Dan was a little worried by my "gazebo" comment - I was actually using "gazebo" to mean her fanny, nothing else. It was a failed attempt at humor based on the fact that the word "gazebo" is not in common usage. It was a little like the pianist/humorist Victor Borge explaining to the audience that he had reached an agreement with his soprano not to touch her coloratura. ;)

I don't advocate for "exposure" as we have used the term in the past to refer to the spankee's most intimate area, believing this is best left to the artist's discretion, although I do like to see a nice bare bottom :D !
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web-ed wrote:Laura is finding out that reality is different than fantasy - and it hurts more, too!
hi web-ed,

i do think that Laura is finding out about reality here and it seems to me that her fantasy is changing too ;) .
web-ed wrote:I don't advocate for "exposure" as we have used the term in the past to refer to the spankee's most intimate area, believing this is best left to the artist's discretion, although I do like to see a nice bare bottom :D !
i understood your "gazebo" comment to mean only her bottom and of course, we will be having some bare bottom coming up before it's all over :D . thanks, phil
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Web-ed wrote:


It was a little like the pianist/humorist Victor Borge explaining to the audience that he had reached an agreement with his soprano not to touch her coloratura.


Very funny, and that reminds me of an incident from my youth, although it is OT. When I was in high school I was a member of the school Orchestra. We were practicing some new composition when suddenly our director, Mr. Farrar, signalled us to "stop."

Mr. Farrar was a bit of a joker, and he loved his plays on words. As we music students sat and waited to hear his reasons for stopping, he singled out the girl who played the bass fiddle. And he said to her:

"Nancy, are you sure you are using the correct embouchure?" Nancy was quiet. She didn't understand what an embouchure was, let alone how to use one.

Mr. Farrar pressed his advantage. He then said, to the mortified girl, "All girls have an embouchure, you know that?"

At this point Nancy's cheeks (talkin' about her face, guys) reddened noticeably.

Some of us laughed, but you could tell that most of the kids didn't understand the word embouchure. After a couple of seconds of silence, Mr. Farrar said, "Okay, that's all right. EVERYBODY has an embouchure!" And then the whole rehearsal hall burst into laughter. Nancy was a good sport, and eventually she joined in the laughter too.

You reminded me of that, when you mentioned Victor Borge and his play on the word "coloratura."

Cheers,
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For some strange reason it reminded me of Spike Milligan in his TV series "The world of Beachcomber."

Milligan was playing a barrister who said to the judge "M'lud, may I elucidate?" Judge replied "If you must, but I feel I must warn you it can cause blindness."
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willjohn wrote:For some strange reason it reminded me of Spike Milligan in his TV series "The world of Beachcomber."

Milligan was playing a barrister who said to the judge "M'lud, may I elucidate?" Judge replied "If you must, but I feel I must warn you it can cause blindness."
I take it that was the BBC about 45 years ago - you couldn't say anything like that on American TV at the time. But yes, it's the same kind of joke. Benny Hill did the same kind of thing once or twice as I recall.
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The BBC wiped most of Spike's shows so they could re use the video tape. No foresight.
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it looks like Laura just likes "hanging out" in the park
it looks like Laura just likes "hanging out" in the park
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hi everyone,

Poor Laura!...............face down, dress up, getting her bottom spanked.............and right out in the open where anyone could come along and see :D . still, it's funny just how naughty girls actually react to a situation like this one 8-) . what was it Laura said in the first pic? oh, yeah, "once a brat, always a brat" :lol: . i hope you all enjoy the new pic. phil
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Re: A Walk in the Park

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So then... Laura finds herself in that position, :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: and her way of dealing with it is to goad her boyfriend that he doesn't spank hard enough? Oooooh! Got to LOVE a brat like her! Heh heh! :D :D :D :D
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