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An Alternate Proposal

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Aug 02, 2013 8:38 am

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looks like everyone knows what's gonna happen next
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hi everyone,

well, things seldom go as i have planned and this is no exception. there was a problem with one of the boards on my new computer, which had to be replaced so i still don't have the new computer. in the mean time i have been working on a new toon and i have posted the first 3 pics this morning to get it started :D . in our new story Mark hasn't had much luck Proposing to Natalie so he decides to try "An Alternate Proposal 8-) . i hope you'll enjoy the new story. thanks, phil

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Aug 02, 2013 8:40 am

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there's the expected proposal............right on schedule............and the resulting turmoil
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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Aug 02, 2013 8:42 am

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well............HERE'S something unexpected
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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby web-ed » Fri Aug 02, 2013 1:55 pm

Sorry to hear you've still got computer problems, Phil, but anyway you're off to a good start here with An Alternate Proposal. Natalie's need for sexual submission and her desire for her man to take charge in the bedroom and indeed any time there's a crisis are indeed a basic part of female psychology. Reading her thoughts here brought to my mind the basic problem with F/M, paradoxical as that may sound, namely that women want to give up control, not take control, and so the vast majority of them are very put off by the idea of F/M. However, that's a subject for another day, if I ever get around to writing that treatise on the psychology of spanking.

Fortunately, Mark and Natalie both have the normal desires for their respective sexes, Mark to dominate and Natalie to submit, which leads inevitably to a M/F scene. As worried as Natalie is right now, and as scared as she's going to be once the spanking gets going, I'm sure that after it's finally over she's going to be very glad it happened :) ! She's a good-looking redhead with what appears to be an ample bottom, so I'm going to be glad she gets spanked, also!
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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Aug 02, 2013 5:01 pm

web-ed wrote:Sorry to hear you've still got computer problems, Phil, but anyway you're off to a good start here with An Alternate Proposal. Natalie's need for sexual submission and her desire for her man to take charge in the bedroom and indeed any time there's a crisis are indeed a basic part of female psychology. Reading her thoughts here brought to my mind the basic problem with F/M, paradoxical as that may sound, namely that women want to give up control, not take control, and so the vast majority of them are very put off by the idea of F/M. However, that's a subject for another day, if I ever get around to writing that treatise on the psychology of spanking.


hi web-ed,

i'm glad that you liked the start to the new toon :D . it appears that you and i have very similar opinions about the proper relationship between boyfriend/girlfriend or man/wife ;) . of course, i already knew that :D .

web-ed wrote:Fortunately, Mark and Natalie both have the normal desires for their respective sexes, Mark to dominate and Natalie to submit, which leads inevitably to a M/F scene. As worried as Natalie is right now, and as scared as she's going to be once the spanking gets going, I'm sure that after it's finally over she's going to be very glad it happened :) ! She's a good-looking redhead with what appears to be an ample bottom, so I'm going to be glad she gets spanked, also!


your analysis of all this seems pretty sound to me. now we just have to wait to see just exactly how it all goes down 8-) . hopefully you'll enjoy the trip. thanks, phil

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby hugob00m » Fri Aug 02, 2013 11:20 pm

overbarrel49 wrote:in our new story Mark hasn't had much luck Proposing to Natalie so he decides to try "An Alternate Proposal . i hope you'll enjoy the new story.
Well, it looks to me like you're off to a good start with this one. I like the way each character is thinking of a lot of stuff that needs to be said, but then when their mouths open, none of it comes out. Obviously, they're in love with each other, and he wants very much to be married to her, but she's being indecisive. She says silently to herself that she wants him to take charge. "Be careful what you wish for!" ;) ;) ;) ;)

The woman in your story is a pretty redhead with nice round hips... And that grabs my attention right away! So far, I've only seen her from the front, but I suspect that when it comes time for her to get her spanking, that there's plenty of her to spank! :D :D :D :D

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby overbarrel49 » Sat Aug 03, 2013 6:54 pm

hugob00m wrote:Well, it looks to me like you're off to a good start with this one. I like the way each character is thinking of a lot of stuff that needs to be said, but then when their mouths open, none of it comes out. Obviously, they're in love with each other, and he wants very much to be married to her, but she's being indecisive. She says silently to herself that she wants him to take charge. "Be careful what you wish for!" ;) ;) ;) ;)


hi Boom,

i'm glad you like the start of this new toon :D . i have had only a few replies so far but all of them agree with you that it's off to a good start. the unspoken thoughts they are having seemed pretty plausible to me. relationships have a tendency to be somewhat tentative in the dating stages so this seemed reasonable to me. i have also had comments from viewers stating that this seemed a realistic scenario to them :D . yeeeeees,
" be careful what you wish for indeed" :lol: . in this case, i think Natalie doesn't yet fully appreciate just what "taking charge" entails 8-) .

hugob00m wrote:The woman in your story is a pretty redhead with nice round hips... And that grabs my attention right away! So far, I've only seen her from the front, but I suspect that when it comes time for her to get her spanking, that there's plenty of her to spank! :D :D :D :D


i see both you and web-ed have made the same observations about her red hair and ample bottom :D . you can rest assured that we will be seeing plenty of that bottom as the toon goes on ;) . hopefully you will enjoy this toon even further as we go along. thanks, phil

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Aug 09, 2013 9:27 am

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instant butterflies for Natalie
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hi everyone,

there's just something about that moment when a spanking is announced that really sets the stage for what's to come and gets things rolling :D . there are so many emotions flooding in that it can be pretty overwhelming............even more so if the spankee didn't see it coming 8-) . i hope you enjoy the moment in this new pic. thanks, phil

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby hugob00m » Fri Aug 09, 2013 12:33 pm

Wow! I love the moment of anticipation that you've captured in this weeks panel! Natalie's memories of childhood spankings are flooding her mind, and she's understandably apprehensive. Mark is worried too... worried that she'll be so offended by him doing such a thing that she'll break things off for good between them. But the way you've presented the story so far, their relationship is at a standstill and, if Mark can't persuade Natalie to "take it to the next level", he's ready to rick losing her altogether!

It's a bit early to tell, but if things are going like I think they are between these two, this may become my favorite story you've ever done.

This week's installment ends with him ordering her to take her jeans off. Even though, at the moment, she's thinking back to the spankings her Daddy gave her when she was a stubborn teenager... I have a feeling that what Mark has in mind is anything but "fatherly"!

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Aug 09, 2013 5:20 pm

hugob00m wrote:Wow! I love the moment of anticipation that you've captured in this weeks panel! Natalie's memories of childhood spankings are flooding her mind, and she's understandably apprehensive. Mark is worried too... worried that she'll be so offended by him doing such a thing that she'll break things off for good between them. But the way you've presented the story so far, their relationship is at a standstill and, if Mark can't persuade Natalie to "take it to the next level", he's ready to rick losing her altogether!


hi Boom,

i'm glad you enjoyed this week's pic :D . your analysis is right on the money and i was trying to depict all those emotions as well as the situation they are in so it pleases me that i got that all across. i am planning on spending several pics showing the emotions from the first announcement of the spanking until the time she actually goes OTK before i concentrate on the spanking itself. the way i have it planned right now, she won't actually go OTK until pic #10.

hugob00m wrote:It's a bit early to tell, but if things are going like I think they are between these two, this may become my favorite story you've ever done.


i too think it's too early to do any predictions but i will say this, this is obviously a romantically involved couple and the spanking will have romantic overtones and will be changing their current relationship ;) .

hugob00m wrote:This week's installment ends with him ordering her to take her jeans off. Even though, at the moment, she's thinking back to the spankings her Daddy gave her when she was a stubborn teenager... I have a feeling that what Mark has in mind is anything but "fatherly"!


it is indeed :D thanks, phil


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