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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby sunflower309 » Sat Feb 15, 2014 12:58 am

daneldorado wrote:What this tells me -- Sunflower, please correct me if you think I am wrong -- is that if a spankee is somewhat reluctant to be spanked, you can always try to temper her unease by setting a limit on the number of spanks, or on the pain level that she finds appropriate.


Hi Dan,

you are not wrong. I am never reluctant to be spanked (even though when I am getting spanked it hurts and I wonder why I asked for it!) but I always know what to expect as far as my swats are concerned. I am told how many are coming and I either count them (I find that embarrassing) or he does (almost as embarrassing) when I am OTK there are no set amount of spanks but he seems to know when I have had enough. even though I protest that my spankings hurt (and they do! trust me) they are never alarming to me. they are well within my tolerance level. I have received some swats that were pretty stingy, more than I thought they would be, but stuff happens! so yes, if limits are set before a spanking, us spankees are more comfortable with that. you seem to be a very considerate spanker Dan. a no nonsense spanker, but considerate. that is important.

web-ed wrote:And she forgot to count the swat, which means she gets it again - ouch! I think the first time this happens to a spankee, she's horrified just as Natalie is here, but they get over it eventually. I think you've captured the moment accurately.


it is indeed horrifying, and believe me, it will only happen once. because no pleading will stop it from being repeated. I have lost count once, because let's face it, with the sting going on in my bottom, it's hard to remember where the count is. but thank goodness, I recovered and continued to count. I don't know what would have happened if I got the count wrong. I don't even want to think about it! and yes, we get over it eventually! but no extra swats are needed, thank you very much!

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby sunflower309 » Sat Feb 15, 2014 6:42 am

it's easy to forget to count.......once. because yes, if you don't count, the spanker assumes you didn't feel it (yeah, right!) it just so happens that maybe that one was harder then the others. sometimes I get a "good one" that stings more. when you're whole being is focused on the fire in your bottom it is easy to forget! but again, no more swats necessary, so that helps the memory.

sunflower

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby hugob00m » Sat Feb 15, 2014 9:17 am

Mmmm! I love it! She forgot to count a swat! My question is: does she just get that one over again, or does he have to start ALL OVER with NUMBER ONE? I can hardly wait 'til next week so I can find out! (Her bottom is looking pretty red already! :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: I bet she's hoping he won't start all over... but then... she seems to be panicking at the thought of getting just that one a second time!)

Meanwhile, I'm loving the view of her cute round backside pointing up at the audience! :D :D :D :D

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby overbarrel49 » Sat Feb 15, 2014 10:46 am

web-ed wrote:Wow - is that the setting sun in shades of pink and red? Oh no wait, it's Natalie's ____! Lovely work :) And she forgot to count the swat, which means she gets it again - ouch! :D I think the first time this happens to a spankee, she's horrified just as Natalie is here, but they get over it eventually. I think you've captured the moment accurately.


hi web-ed,

i'm glad you enjoyed the view in this one :D ...............there's nothing wrong with a little ambient "glow" in a situation like this one :lol: . i was hoping you'd have a comment about that first missed count since i know you've given many penalty swats in your day. i was particularly gratified that you thought Natalie's reaction was an accurate one and that i did indeed capture the moment :D .

web-ed wrote:So we have, I think, two panels left, enough for the final swat, which should be a good one in every sense :lol: and an after-the-spanking panel in which the couple's problems are over and it's time for some love-making - if as I think you post this one on 2/28 it will help bring Romantic Spanking Month to a very satisfying conclusion (in more ways than one :lol: ).


i can tell from the "thoughtful" nature of the comments you always make, that you are paying a lot of attention to my pics and toons ;) :D . you almost always have things figured out and i don't mind being somewhat predictable. in this case you are partly right. there are actually 4 pics left but the ending will indeed come on the 28th. i have one for next week and then will post the final 3 pics to wrap it up on the 28th so i will be adding to conclusion of Romantic Spanking Month :D . however, i may still have some surprises in store for the ending of this one..........we'll see 8-) . i mentioned when i posted this one that there was a similarity to Boom's Valentine Katie strip. upon further review, i have discovered a second similarity and i will mention those when i post the final pics. thanks for your comments :D . phil

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby overbarrel49 » Sat Feb 15, 2014 10:58 am

sunflower309 wrote:it's easy to forget to count.......once. because yes, if you don't count, the spanker assumes you didn't feel it (yeah, right!) it just so happens that maybe that one was harder then the others. sometimes I get a "good one" that stings more. when you're whole being is focused on the fire in your bottom it is easy to forget! but again, no more swats necessary, so that helps the memory.

sunflower


hi Sunflower,

you seem skeptical that the spanker really does assume you missed that swat you forgot to count :lol: .hmmmmm, i wonder just why your spanker feels the need to give you those "good ones"........................perhaps you did something to make him think that 8-) btw, you aren't the only spankee to make that comment about it being easy to forget because you're concentrating on what's happening to your bottom :lol: i'm glad you connected with this pic :D . thanks, phil

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby overbarrel49 » Sat Feb 15, 2014 11:07 am

hugob00m wrote:Mmmm! I love it! She forgot to count a swat! My question is: does she just get that one over again, or does he have to start ALL OVER with NUMBER ONE? I can hardly wait 'til next week so I can find out! (Her bottom is looking pretty red already! :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: I bet she's hoping he won't start all over... but then... she seems to be panicking at the thought of getting just that one a second time!)


hi Boom,

yeah, i love it too :lol: i have to give credit to Sunflower here who was kind enough to tell me a short story about the first penalty swat that she forgot to count ;) that's how i was able to "capture" this moment so well as web-ed commented :D . fyi, Mark wouldn't be mean enough to totally start over but Natalie WILL be getting that forgotten swat over again and she won't be enjoying it :lol:. Natalie does seem to be panicking a bit here..............kind of makes me think that paddle is really stinging her bare bottom :lol: .

hugob00m wrote:Meanwhile, I'm loving the view of her cute round backside pointing up at the audience! :D :D :D :D


i'm glad you're enjoying the view..............especially since i'm not used to depicting this kind of position and i had to give these camera angles a lot of thought :D thanks, phil

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Feb 21, 2014 9:41 am

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hi everyone,

Oh, man! That smarts :shock: ! That last swat even caused Natalie a few tears :? ..............of course, considering the discussion of their lives going forward, there could be an emotional component to those tears too 8-) ! Then, on the other hand, Natalie might just be pissed off that she forgot to count that one swat :lol: . i hope you enjoy this pic. we'll be finishing this toon up next week so stay tooned for the grand finale. thanks, phil

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby willjohn » Fri Feb 21, 2014 3:50 pm

Perhaps Natalie should have brushed up on her arithmetic before taking up with Mark.

At least he seems to have cured her of indecision.

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Re: An Alternate Proposal

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Feb 21, 2014 10:03 pm

willjohn wrote:Perhaps Natalie should have brushed up on her arithmetic before taking up with Mark.


hi Willjohn,

no doubt she's wishing she had...............i'll bet she'll remember next time :lol:

willjohn wrote:At least he seems to have cured her of indecision.


you are exactly right. i think she has indeed made some decisions as to what will be best for her ;) . of course, Mark may have had a little something to do with that 8-) , thanks, phil

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Re: An Alternate Proposal #32

Postby web-ed » Sun Feb 23, 2014 12:15 pm

Well! We have reached our story's ultimate swat and penultimate panel, and I think we can safely say Natalie is grateful for that ;) . Now as we discussed a couple of weeks ago, the bending-over positions lend themselves to being depicted from many different camera angles, and you took advantage of the fact that by using a different angle in each of the six panels (#27 - 32) where Natalie has been made to assume that position. So we've enjoyed a very pleasant variety as the swats were applied (although Natalie hasn't!), culminating in a frontal view of Natalie's face as she reacts to the final swat (which she obviously felt :D ), so some very good storytelling here. As to that final swat, Natalie's face is at the center of the composition, and I find myself reacting with a mixture of compassion for her ordeal and satisfaction because she had it coming to her.

Natalie also knows now that she'll be subjected to more spankings in the future, and after a while she'll grow to like the idea (you can't expect her to feel that way right now while her fanny's still on fire from that last swat). Mark may have another condition or two to lay down, and I look forward to seeing that next time along with a very contrite Natalie. :)
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