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web-ed wrote:She's begging and pleading now, which indicates Quinton has finally managed to adjust Raquel's attitude. It appears he's intent on a little reinforcement before ending the spanking, though.

hi web-ed,

yeah, it does seem like Quinton has achieved the attitude adjustment he was hoping for. as for his intention to reinforce that a bit, i think he knows that naughty girls will sometimes say just about anything to get a spanking to stop when it gets to really hurting..............might as well go on a while, just to make sure she's sincere .

web-ed wrote: Meanwhile, I can identify with Oliver, who's really enjoying the site of Raquel's red bottom - and here you did a beautiful job, Phil! I love looking at that thoroughly-reddened behind and thinking about how well-spanked Raquel is at this point ! Her legs are positioned in such a way that we (and Oliver!) really have a good view of her rear end. I actually like to see some hip abduction as we have here during a bent-over paddling to inhibit clenching, but as noted it has the added advantage of helping to display the bottom to its best advantage .

i'm glad you enjoyed the "view" . i too thought this was a good camera angle...........not only for the way it presents her bottom but also because we can clearly see her face and i think it captured the action of this moment as well . thanks, phil

sunflower309 wrote:happy Friday Phil!

I'm glad that you are not too busy to post a new picture! I really like this one. I would not like to be Raquel at this point. I feel her pain! and I think she has learned her lesson, but how smart of Quinton to make sure. he had to have spanked before! and I think at this point Raquel is truly sorry! and like Penny I would probably be holding my bottom too, while watching! especially since not too long before she was in Raquel's position! and no doubt she is still feeling some heat back there!

hi Sunflower,

i had a full day today which is why i posted this last night. i am hoping that i will have time to actually do a new one over the weekend . i like hearing your take on all this from the spankee's point of view. it's always so interesting...........you wouldn't want to be Raquel right now but you still understand that it's wouldn't be good for either of them if Quinton quits too soon . i also think it's interesting that you have speculated what you would do while watching a spanking even though you haven't actually done so..........and even more interesting that you think my depiction of Penny holding her bottom might be right .

sunflower309 wrote:thanks Phil, for finding time to share with us! try and relax for awhile. sit in your new chair and take a nap!

sunflower

i have been relaxing in my chair and reading "the Lord of the Rings" since we returned this afternoon . tomorrow i will try to work on a new pic . thanks, phil

Raquel's bum is starting to look like it has a bad case of sunburn. Going to take a while for her to recover from that.

Reminds me of June Allyson heading for breakfast with a few pillows in "Too Young to Kiss".

willjohn wrote:Raquel's bum is starting to look like it has a bad case of sunburn. Going to take a while for her to recover from that.

Reminds me of June Allyson heading for breakfast with a few pillows in "Too Young to Kiss".

hi Willjohn,

i would say that both Raquel and Penny may need some of those pillows for a while maybe they'll be good girls for a few days . thanks, phil

hi everyone.

it looks like have something that everyone involved with this spanking agrees on..........that Raquel's bottom is well spanked . i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil

Hmmm! It looks like Quinton is just about satisfied that his lady's bottom has been sufficiently paddled! ...And meanwhile... it also looks like Penny and Oliver are in need of a little privacy!

I'm thinking you've probably just got another panel or two to wrap up this story... (unless the men happen to find out about that other shopping trip the ladies had planned! ...But then... that might be something you could save for later, just in case you decide to do a sequel!)

This current panel is lovely! the now-contrite Raquel is still turned bottom-side-up. blushing with all four of her cheeks. Oliver is standing to one side enjoying the view... along with the audience! And Penny, so soon after the paddling she got, is still rubbing her own bottom, and looking a bit red-faced herself! A spanking in progress for one lady and the other lady feeling the aftermath! Who could ask for more?

hugob00m wrote:Hmmm! It looks like Quinton is just about satisfied that his lady's bottom has been sufficiently paddled! ...And meanwhile... it also looks like Penny and Oliver are in need of a little privacy!

hi Boom,

yeah, it looks as if we're just about done here..............at least with any parts i plan to show . what the couples will be doing once they are alone, i will leave to the viewer's imagination .

hugob00m wrote:I'm thinking you've probably just got another panel or two to wrap up this story... (unless the men happen to find out about that other shopping trip the ladies had planned! ...But then... that might be something you could save for later, just in case you decide to do a sequel!)

yeah, we'll be finishing this up in a couple weeks.............provided i can get the pics done .

hugob00m wrote: This current panel is lovely! the now-contrite Raquel is still turned bottom-side-up. blushing with all four of her cheeks. Oliver is standing to one side enjoying the view... along with the audience! And Penny, so soon after the paddling she got, is still rubbing her own bottom, and looking a bit red-faced herself! A spanking in progress for one lady and the other lady feeling the aftermath! Who could ask for more?

i'm glad you enjoyed all the blushing cheeks as well as the overall pic thanks, phil

Phil - good composition in this latest panel. Everything is where it should be (well, almost everything - Oliver is going to place something somewhere soon, but we won't be seeing it !). Everyone seems satisfied that Raquel has been well and truly spanked. I hope in the next panel we get to see Raquel looking thoroughly humiliated, self-consciously aware that Oliver and Penny have had ring-side seats for her spanking, and that they (especially Oliver) have seen everything!

web-ed wrote:Phil - good composition in this latest panel. Everything is where it should be (well, almost everything - Oliver is going to place something somewhere soon, but we won't be seeing it !). Everyone seems satisfied that Raquel has been well and truly spanked. I hope in the next panel we get to see Raquel looking thoroughly humiliated, self-consciously aware that Oliver and Penny have had ring-side seats for her spanking, and that they (especially Oliver) have seen everything!

hi web-ed,

i'm glad you everything was in it's proper place ........at least as far as i'm taking it .................Raquel is on Quinton's lap, the hairbrush is on Raquel's bottom, along with some blisters and Penny's hands are on her bottom . it looks like you're right about Oliver placing something somewhere as soon as possible and i wouldn't be surprised if Quint had similar ideas for when they get home . it does seem reasonable that Raquel needs to stand in front of her neighbors, with her blistered bottom and apologize for her behavior . however, there's one more thing she has to do before that which we'll see next time . i'm glad you enjoyed the pic. thanks, phil

hi everyone,

you've probably heard the saying, "dance like no one is watching". in Raquel's case, that could be even more embarrassing than normal . i hope you like the new pic. phil

I got what I was looking for in this latest installment - Raquel subjected to the humiliation of doing her "spank dance" in front of everyone . Interestingly, Penny is unconsciously rubbing her own bottom while she watches Raquel dance around, yet she isn't all that sympathetic! As for the men, they're both having a jolly good time - they'd probably make natural readers of CSR! I'm guessing our story will wind up in another panel or two.

web-ed wrote:I got what I was looking for in this latest installment - Raquel subjected to the humiliation of doing her "spank dance" in front of everyone . Interestingly, Penny is unconsciously rubbing her own bottom while she watches Raquel dance around, yet she isn't all that sympathetic! As for the men, they're both having a jolly good time - they'd probably make natural readers of CSR! I'm guessing our story will wind up in another panel or two.

hi web-ed,

yeah, it's gonna be humiliating for her to be dancing in front of everyone but at this point i think she's more concerned with trying to rub and dance that sting away . i think Penny rubbing her bottom is just instinct . and no,she isn't giving Raquel much sympathy at this point. in fact, she seems to be feeling a bit of satisfaction that her friend has been punished for her betrayal i've had a theory for a long time that many women who are close with each other.............sisters, best friends, mom and daugher...............probably know each other so well that they would get a giggle from the other one getting a spanking just because they know good and well that the other is a naughty girl who needs a spanking. perhaps this has something to do with it too . yeah, the men are taking advantage of the situation to have some fun . no doubt they'd like CSR .........they certainly get horny enough during a spanking . this toon will indeed be coming to an end here in a couple more pics. then i have to try to get another one going. thanks, phil

I wonder if Penny will be in trouble for recovering her knickers from the bedroom?

willjohn wrote:I wonder if Penny will be in trouble for recovering her knickers from the bedroom?

hi Willjohn,

i really hadn't thought about that but you could be right because, looking at Oliver's condition, she probably won't be needing any panties for a while . in any case, our story will be ending before we get that far along so you are free to imagine any ending for this story you like i'm glad you've been enjoying it . thanks, phil

hi everyone,

I have posted the last 2 pics in our toon this morning and we'll be starting a new one next week . Penny and Raquel have now been thoroughly spanked for their naughty behavior and both seem really glad that their spankings are over . However, it does seem like Oliver and Quinton both know a good idea when they see one which makes me wonder............are the girl's spankings really over ??............... ! I hope you've enjoyed this toon. phil

What a great way to end this story! In the next-to-last panel, the two ladies are both standing there, rubbing their freshly-spanked bottoms, both of them relieved that the punishment is over... only to learn in the final panel, that both men have decided to make spankings a permanent part of their marital life!

And that shopping trip they had planned... Well, I'm not surprised to see it get postponed.

But maybe Oluver should think twice about making Penny take that dress back to the store! She sure looks good in it... the way it hugs her feminine curves... AND, I bet everytime she wears it, she'll think back to the first time she wore it, and reminisce about the spanking her husband gave her for buying it behind his back! If things afterwards go the way they should, she'll actually have fond memories of that day!

And... from now on there might be a little running joke between the two men... "Hey, Oliver! remenber the time I borrowed Penny's hairbrush? Well, I might need it again tonight!"

I really liked the story, and the way you fleshed out the characters, to the point that I can imagine their lives going on past the spot where you've chosen to put an ending.

hugob00m wrote:What a great way to end this story! In the next-to-last panel, the two ladies are both standing there, rubbing their freshly-spanked bottoms, both of them relieved that the punishment is over... only to learn in the final panel, that both men have decided to make spankings a permanent part of their marital life!

hi Boom,

i'm glad you liked the ending . it sure seemed to me that it could happen this way .

hugob00m wrote:And that shopping trip they had planned... Well, I'm not surprised to see it get postponed.

actually, it was your previous comments that gave me the idea for that..........i had to put that in just for you .

hugob00m wrote:But maybe Oluver should think twice about making Penny take that dress back to the store! She sure looks good in it... the way it hugs her feminine curves... AND, I bet everytime she wears it, she'll think back to the first time she wore it, and reminisce about the spanking her husband gave her for buying it behind his back! If things afterwards go the way they should, she'll actually have fond memories of that day!

she may indeed have fond memories of that day and Oliver may not allow her to take it back as you speculate. the good part is that she is willing to take it back at this point .

hugob00m wrote:And... from now on there might be a little running joke between the two men... "Hey, Oliver! remenber the time I borrowed Penny's hairbrush? Well, I might need it again tonight!"

and a good joke it would be . in any case, i do think there will be discussions going on about this day.........between the men...........between the women...............between each couple i sure would like to be a fly on the wall during any of those .

hugob00m wrote:I really liked the story, and the way you fleshed out the characters, to the point that I can imagine their lives going on past the spot where you've chosen to put an ending.

that's a very nice comment and it brought a big smile to my face. i'm glad you enjoyed both the toon and the characters . thanks, phil

Our story has reached a very satisfying conclusion as we have two very contrite young ladies in #32, followed by two very alarmed young ladies in #33 when they realize these spankings are only the first of many to come ! I'd say they'll be better-behaved after this, and that both relationships will be healthier, too. Meanwhile, our two heroes, Oliver and Quinton, look quite satisfied with the way things have turned out, and deservedly so. Once again, spanking has set things right.

In panel 32, my favorite part is the contrite expressions on the girls; in panel #33 it's the composition of the two similar sets of two - both men looking determined and satisfied, both women looking very worried about the future .

This was a long, sustained effort, Phil, and I'm sure everyone appreciates it as much as I do.

web-ed wrote:Our story has reached a very satisfying conclusion as we have two very contrite young ladies in #32, followed by two very alarmed young ladies in #33 when they realize these spankings are only the first of many to come ! I'd say they'll be better-behaved after this, and that both relationships will be healthier, too. Meanwhile, our two heroes, Oliver and Quinton, look quite satisfied with the way things have turned out, and deservedly so. Once again, spanking has set things right.

hi web-ed,

i'm glad you thought the conclusion was satisfying.............so did i . i think you're right that the girls will be better behaved now................at least until their bottoms aren't sore any more . my opinion is that spanking helps couples reconnect in a way that nothing else does so i agree that their relationships will be healthier from now on........especially with more spankings on the horizon . i have a hunch that when Quinton and Raquel have gone home and the couples are alone, both couples are going to finish that reconnection that the spankings started and get a good start on those healthier relationships .

web-ed wrote: In panel 32, my favorite part is the contrite expressions on the girls; in panel #33 it's the composition of the two similar sets of two - both men looking determined and satisfied, both women looking very worried about the future .

i'm glad you liked the expressions . in panel 33, i thought it was reasonable that the men would have similar feelings as would the girls which is why i did the similar sets of 2 . it just seemed like these expressions might be how our players would look.

web-ed wrote:This was a long, sustained effort, Phil, and I'm sure everyone appreciates it as much as I do.

thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it . new toon starting Friday. phil