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Re: Family Tradition

Postby overbarrel49 » Thu Mar 03, 2016 3:46 pm

Remember, everyone, I posted 10 pics today so you'll have to go back to page 45 to find the first one and read them in order. Phil
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Re: Family Tradition

Postby willjohn » Thu Mar 03, 2016 6:26 pm

Hard to believe it took just over a year (ending in a leap year) for this story about what happened in less than a day to come to an end.

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Re: Family Tradition

Postby overbarrel49 » Thu Mar 03, 2016 7:41 pm

willjohn wrote:Hard to believe it took just over a year (ending in a leap year) for this story about what happened in less than a day to come to an end.


hi Willjohn,

it is kind of hard to believe. I really hadn't realized it myself until web-ed mentioned that it was a long toon and I got to thinking about how many pics there were. that's when I went back to see when the first one was posted. I guess it was a long day for the girls :lol: . Like I said, this one kind of took on a life of it's own once I got it going :lol: . I like it when that happens 8-). thanks, Phil

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Re: Family Tradition

Postby daneldorado » Fri Mar 04, 2016 12:59 pm

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Bravo Phil!

The ending panels of "Family Tradition" are superb, as are the memories we will all take from viewing this story. You are quite right when you say this denouement is probably new to some of us spankos. Certainly I had never thought of ending a spanking story in that fashion. But you have quite a creative forum here, and I know that some of our spanko cousins are probably salivating over that delectable ending. :lol:

Is there anything "wrong" with this style? Oh, I suppose that I could come up with some negatives if I wanted to. One thing that I noticed as I was reading through all your panels is that you use the word "blister" or "blistered" quite a lot. It appears at least 6 (SIX!) times in the final scene.

Also... Most all of your spankee ladies seem to be red heads... or at least brownettes. But there are lots of brunettes (black hair) out there. Can we see one of them getting spanked?

Once again, Phil... many congratulations. This one's a beauty.

Cheers,
Dan

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Re: Family Tradition

Postby hugob00m » Fri Mar 04, 2016 3:58 pm

Hi, Phil!

Great end to a great story! I had hoped for a quiet little mother/daughter conversation on the morning following some very dramatic spankings. Wow! The two women sat down (on some soft pillows! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: ) and had a nice friendly chat about life with their men and the inevitable spankings they get from those men.

I have not been privy to one of those conversations in real life either... but it's fun to see your rendition of how such a conversation might play out.

Your final panel is hilarious! The words, "The End", on the screen like an old-time movie, and the ladies flipping up their skirts to show an appreciative audience one last look at their well-reddened, panty-clad bottoms! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

After such a long time seeing these women every week, it's almost as if they've become old friends! I'm looking forward to your next story, most likely with an all-new cast of characters, but I also hope we haven't seen the last of Tina and Vicky. (Oh, here's a perverse idea for a sequel: What if Vicky gets a little too meddlesome in her grown-up daughter's life and STEVE finds it necessary to apply the paddle across his Mother-in-law's behind? How would Uly respond to his wife being spanked by his Son-in-law? How would Tina respond?)

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Re: Family Tradition

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Mar 04, 2016 9:08 pm

daneldorado wrote:Bravo Phil!

The ending panels of "Family Tradition" are superb, as are the memories we will all take from viewing this story. You are quite right when you say this denouement is probably new to some of us spankos. Certainly I had never thought of ending a spanking story in that fashion. But you have quite a creative forum here, and I know that some of our spanko cousins are probably salivating over that delectable ending. :lol:


Hi Dan,

I'm glad you enjoyed the ending of this toon . I have always had fantasies about girls discussing their spankings with each other but had never seen anyone try to depict this. I was a bit hesitant to try it myself because I wondered of folks really wanted to see more spanking action rather than more dialog but I finally decided that if I was fantasizing about it, perhaps others were too. So far the comments I've gotten have been really positive and several folks have ask me to do more of this kind of thing, which pleases me. I was also pleased by your comment about my forum being creative :D

daneldorado wrote:Is there anything "wrong" with this style? Oh, I suppose that I could come up with some negatives if I wanted to. One thing that I noticed as I was reading through all your panels is that you use the word "blister" or "blistered" quite a lot. It appears at least 6 (SIX!) times in the final scene.


Not only have I noticed this too but I actually agree with you. I have been trying to watch and keep from using the same words and phrases over and over again.............not always successfully though. In some cases, it's a matter of what I like personally. For example, there are lots of words for a woman's panties..........knickers, underpants bloomers etc. but the word panties pushes my buttons just right 8-) so I will probably never use any other word for them even though the women in my toons probably would in a real life setting. That's probably also at least part of the problem with the the word blistered. However, there are other words that are just as good and if I'm more vigilant, perhaps I can make some progress in making these things more readable. Anyway, I do think you've made a valid point here.

daneldorado wrote:Also... Most all of your spankee ladies seem to be red heads... or at least brownettes. But there are lots of brunettes (black hair) out there. Can we see one of them getting spanked?


Hmmmmm, I guess I do kind of prefer red heads although I thought I had been doing a good job of mixing them up. I will have to pay more attention to that. The spankee in the new toon I'll be starting Friday is a blonde, btw. There is a girl in some of the pics who has just gotten a spanking from her boyfriend and she has black hair so maybe that will suffice for this toon :lol: .

daneldorado wrote:Once again, Phil... many congratulations. This one's a beauty.

Cheers,
Dan



Again, I'm glad you enjoyed this toon and the ending. That brings a smile to my face :D . thanks, Phil


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