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Good Marks

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Mar 11, 2016 8:39 am

Hi everyone,

Today we are starting a new toon and I am going to post the first 4 pics to get us started and explain the situation. I'm sure that any of you who have ever lived in a dormitory know that all kinds of interesting things go on in such an environment 8-) . I can tell you from first hand experience, under the right circumstances, such things can sometimes become an EVENT!

When I separated from the U.S. Army, I hadn't seem my girlfriend for 9 months so the first thing I did was call her and make arrangements to come and pick her up for the weekend. All appeared to be quiet when I entered her dorm and asked to see her. A young woman went to get her and only a few seconds later, my girlfriend burst through the door, jumped into my arms and we just stood there making out! When we came up for air, there were at least 2 dozen grinning, approving young women watching us, applauding and cheering us on :shock: ! I have no idea where all those women came from or how they got there so fast but apparently, everyone knew I was coming and no one wanted to miss this EVENT! Anyway, you see my point :lol: .

With all this in mind, I will set the scene for you. It takes place in "Red Bottomly" Hall, a girls dormitory at Overbarrel University. This facility was named after Beauregard "Red" Bottomly who was the alumni who generously donated the money to build the dorm. As our scene opens, we see some young women chatting in the lounge. I'm calling the new toon " Good Marks". I didn't mention this in the post at my blog, but CSR readers are no doubt going to remember the name Beauregard Bottomly and the movie I stole it from :lol: I hope you'll enjoy the new toon. Phil
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Re: Good Marks

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Mar 11, 2016 8:40 am

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Re: Good Marks

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Mar 11, 2016 8:41 am

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Re: Good Marks

Postby overbarrel49 » Fri Mar 11, 2016 8:42 am

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Re: Good Marks

Postby willjohn » Sat Mar 12, 2016 8:14 pm

Xandra wouldn't be setting her nosy roommate up, would she?

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Re: Good Marks

Postby overbarrel49 » Sat Mar 12, 2016 8:55 pm

willjohn wrote:Xandra wouldn't be setting her nosy roommate up, would she?


hi Willjohn,

I just finished replying to a viewer who posted her comments at my blog. She also has ideas about what might be about to happen :lol: . It would seem that the scene I have set up is causing folks to think about how things might go 8-) . I am going to post the next 4 pics next week to move this toon along a bit and I think your question will be answered then :D . Thanks, Phil

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Re: Good Marks

Postby hugob00m » Sun Mar 13, 2016 12:22 am

What I like about your stories is that you always combine the expected with the unexpected. In this one, I'd say that the expected is that Xandra is going to get a spanking from her boyfriend sooner or later. She's already shown herself to be immature, irresponsible and inconsiderate. She deserves to be spanked and it's going to be a lot of fun to watch her get what's coming to her! :D :D :D :D

The unexpected? Well, if I knew, it wouldn't be unexpected, now would it? You always manage to throw in some kind of twist, and I'm looking forward to it! As a wild guess... I notice that there are four very attractive young ladies that you've shown us so far... Hmmmm! Maybe someone besides Xandra is in need of a spanking? I'll just wait and see.

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Re: Good Marks

Postby overbarrel49 » Sun Mar 13, 2016 8:46 am

hugob00m wrote:What I like about your stories is that you always combine the expected with the unexpected. In this one, I'd say that the expected is that Xandra is going to get a spanking from her boyfriend sooner or later. She's already shown herself to be immature, irresponsible and inconsiderate. She deserves to be spanked and it's going to be a lot of fun to watch her get what's coming to her! :D :D :D :D


hi Boom,

I'd say that you are exactly right. Xandra is going to get a spanking sooner or later :D . Considering how many of my toons folks have seen now, that's probably not a big surprise :lol: . From the dialog, I have a hunch that even Xandra's friends know she's a bit of a brat and I have to wonder if they would agree that she needs a spanking 8-) .

hugob00m wrote:The unexpected? Well, if I knew, it wouldn't be unexpected, now would it? You always manage to throw in some kind of twist, and I'm looking forward to it! As a wild guess... I notice that there are four very attractive young ladies that you've shown us so far... Hmmmm! Maybe someone besides Xandra is in need of a spanking? I'll just wait and see.


Well, we'll just have to wait and see how this all goes down . I wouldn't want to spoil anything unexpected. I've already had speculation about what might happen from several people:lol: . I'll post 4 more pics next time to get this toon rolling before settling in to my usual one per week ;) . Thanks, Phil

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Re: Good Marks

Postby web-ed » Tue Mar 15, 2016 10:30 pm

You know, Phil, it occurs to me that the reason some of your readers have thought that Xandra might be setting up her roomie to take the fall - and the spanking! - by telling this tale of deception is that the political season is upon us, and it naturally makes us think about scheming, lying, plotting, etc. since that's what politicians do! But I accept the scene at face value: Xandra has deceived her boyfriend, Walt, and deserves a good spanking for it. :)

So we're off to a good start, and I expect most of the exposition is out of the way. Since we just had the conclusion of "Family Tradition" and a discussion of the difficulty in supporting long sections of dialogue, it's not necessary to repeat those remarks here. Of course, how it will all unfold is yet to be seen, but I think you've at least succeeded in arousing our curiosity.

By the way, it has been my solemn duty these past few years to spank two or three young women who spent too much time partying and not enough time studying at college, so this kind of thing does occur in real life. Of course, my role was that of disciplinarian rather than boyfriend, but the spankings were just as real and, of course, just as disciplinary. ;)
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Re: Good Marks

Postby overbarrel49 » Wed Mar 16, 2016 9:46 am

web-ed wrote:You know, Phil, it occurs to me that the reason some of your readers have thought that Xandra might be setting up her roomie to take the fall - and the spanking! - by telling this tale of deception is that the political season is upon us, and it naturally makes us think about scheming, lying, plotting, etc. since that's what politicians do! But I accept the scene at face value: Xandra has deceived her boyfriend, Walt, and deserves a good spanking for it. :)


I hadn't thought about this but it sounds plausible to me :lol: . There is some plotting going on here but Xandra isn't the one doing it.......and we'll be seeing this starting to play out on Friday 8-) .

web-ed wrote:So we're off to a good start, and I expect most of the exposition is out of the way. Since we just had the conclusion of "Family Tradition" and a discussion of the difficulty in supporting long sections of dialogue, it's not necessary to repeat those remarks here. Of course, how it will all unfold is yet to be seen, but I think you've at least succeeded in arousing our curiosity


It's that curiosity that causes people's fantasies to kick in and start thinking about just how it might go down :D ..........just the way I like it ;) .

This kind of thing does indeed happen in real life. I threatened to spank one of my girl friends because of her grades, years ago. Sadly, she got them back up so I never got to actually give her that spanking :( . Not to worry though, I found other reasons :lol: . Thanks, Phil


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