Growing Pains-episode 2

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Re: Growing Pains-episode 2

Postby daneldorado » Fri Nov 03, 2017 5:52 pm

Thanks a mil, Phil, for delivering a scrumptious "contact" panel showing Lynne getting spanked by Tom (her dad). You show his hand landing right on the meatiest part of her right buttock, and that is nirvana for us, though Lynne herself probably isn't enjoying it so much. :D

The many thought balloons you have scattered throughout this panel give us the thought processes that each party is going through.

"I just hope that getting a spanking from me still helps her as much as it used to...."


"Once my spanking starts, I won't be thinking about anything... GULP! other than what his hand is doing to my poor, tender little butt! Even though I know he loves me and he's going to do what's best for me!"

I especially like this thought balloon, from Lynne's mind:

"I know the sting is going to GULP! get worse as he spanks me but I also know I just have to let it happen! OOOOOH!"

These thought balloons are a handy device for letting the readers know what the characters are thinking, and they do help develop a new level of understanding into the minds of the participants. Like other ancillary devices, though, there is always the danger that we may overdo a good thing.

Phil, your picture is perfect. Thanks for making this one a "contact" pic.

Cheers,
Dan

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Re: Growing Pains-episode 2

Postby web-ed » Fri Nov 03, 2017 8:08 pm

I'm basically with Dan on this one, Phil - great picture, and I think our story is progressing satisfactorily.
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Re: Growing Pains-episode 2

Postby Sweetspot » Fri Nov 03, 2017 8:59 pm

I'm recently returned with helping out a close family member who lives in another state recover from surgery. When I got back to the mid-west I immediately took sick so I'm just now catching up with episode 2. I've never seen the female figure more superbly rendered, in this particular art form, than Lynne is here. When Tom reminds his wife that everyone needs "help" once in awhile and refers to the "help" they've both received from "family and friends" I right away pictured a kind of community spanking related organization that provides mentoring and mutual support. I imagine this family living on Birch Street and among the friends referred to would be the Otk family, Mr. and Mrs. Thrash and perhaps Pinky and Red Buttman. Anyway this is an outstanding episode unfolding before us and I'm very appreciative of the storyline and the dialogue.

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Re: Growing Pains-episode 2

Postby willjohn » Sun Nov 05, 2017 4:16 am

...or as Nursie said to Queenie in the second series of " Blackadder" " Mr and Mrs Spank may pay a visit to Bottietown."

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Re: Growing Pains-episode 2

Postby overbarrel49 » Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:44 pm

butch46163@yahoo.com wrote:The impact is great as he flatten her bottom! love to see a large red hand print showing when he lift his hand :lol: didn`t think Lynne would have so much thoughts going through her mind other than Pain and embarrassment :lol: Stop worry so much Dad ! and get on teaching your daughter a lesson that will help her in the future ! Great Story 8-)


Hi Butch,

I'm glad you enjoyed the point of impact shot :D . As for Lynne's thoughts......most of them happened before her dad's hand landed on her tender, young bottom 8-) . I think from here on, she will be having fewer thoughts and more reactions as his hand directs her attention to her rear end ;) . I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far :D . Thanks, Phil

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Re: Growing Pains-episode 2

Postby overbarrel49 » Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:54 pm

daneldorado wrote:Thanks a mil, Phil, for delivering a scrumptious "contact" panel showing Lynne getting spanked by Tom (her dad). You show his hand landing right on the meatiest part of her right buttock, and that is nirvana for us, though Lynne herself probably isn't enjoying it so much. :D


Hi Dan,

You're quite welcome and thanks for reminding me that I had forgotten that :D . I would assume you're right and that Lynne is enjoying dad's hand landing on her tender bottom much less than we are enjoying watching it :lol: .

daneldorado wrote:The many thought balloons you have scattered throughout this panel give us the thought processes that each party is going through.

"I just hope that getting a spanking from me still helps her as much as it used to...."

"Once my spanking starts, I won't be thinking about anything... GULP! other than what his hand is doing to my poor, tender little butt! Even though I know he loves me and he's going to do what's best for me!"

I especially like this thought balloon, from Lynne's mind:

"I know the sting is going to GULP! get worse as he spanks me but I also know I just have to let it happen! OOOOOH!"

These thought balloons are a handy device for letting the readers know what the characters are thinking, and they do help develop a new level of understanding into the minds of the participants. Like other ancillary devices, though, there is always the danger that we may overdo a good thing.


Thanks for the specific comments about just which thoughts you liked the best. that's really helpful when I am doing these types of scenes. As far as the danger of over doing it goes.....I know I have a tendency to go a bit overboard at times. In this case, I figured that Lynne would be doing most of her thinking before her spanking actually started. As you will see in the coming pics, she will be doing less thinking and more yelling and such as the spanking continues :lol: .

daneldorado wrote:Phil, your picture is perfect. Thanks for making this one a "contact" pic.

Cheers,
Dan


I'm glad you enjoy the view in this pic :D . Thanks, Phil

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Re: Growing Pains-episode 2

Postby overbarrel49 » Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:57 pm

web-ed wrote:I'm basically with Dan on this one, Phil - great picture, and I think our story is progressing satisfactorily.


Hi web-ed,

I'm glad you're enjoying the story and the pic :D . Thanks, Phil

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Re: Growing Pains-episode 2

Postby overbarrel49 » Sun Nov 05, 2017 4:02 pm

Sweetspot wrote:I'm recently returned with helping out a close family member who lives in another state recover from surgery. When I got back to the mid-west I immediately took sick so I'm just now catching up with episode 2. I've never seen the female figure more superbly rendered, in this particular art form, than Lynne is here. When Tom reminds his wife that everyone needs "help" once in awhile and refers to the "help" they've both received from "family and friends" I right away pictured a kind of community spanking related organization that provides mentoring and mutual support. I imagine this family living on Birch Street and among the friends referred to would be the Otk family, Mr. and Mrs. Thrash and perhaps Pinky and Red Buttman. Anyway this is an outstanding episode unfolding before us and I'm very appreciative of the storyline and the dialogue.


Hi Phil,

It sounds like you've been really busy recently and I know what you mean. Right now I am playing in 3 concert bands, one dance band and a brass quintet so I'm gonna be busy between now and Christmas. Fortunately, I haven't been sick so far. Anyway, I appreciate it that you took time to comment on this pic. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and the view of Lynne over her dad's lap 8-) . Thanks, Phil

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Re: Growing Pains-episode 2

Postby jimc » Tue Nov 07, 2017 5:51 pm

Hi Phil, i have been away for several weeks myself and just started this excellant series. I love the bedtime spanking and i really enjoy your outfits for this series. I love brunettes getting spanked otk and this is great. I do wish every female needed a focus spanking. I really enjoy all of your series, but cannot comment as much as i should. Thanks for the great stories. Have a great day.
Jim

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Re: Growing Pains-episode 2

Postby overbarrel49 » Thu Nov 09, 2017 8:35 am

jimc wrote:Post by jimc » Tue Nov 07, 2017 6:51 pm
Hi Phil, i have been away for several weeks myself and just started this excellant series. I love the bedtime spanking and i really enjoy your outfits for this series. I love brunettes getting spanked otk and this is great. I do wish every female needed a focus spanking. I really enjoy all of your series, but cannot comment as much as i should. Thanks for the great stories. Have a great day.
Jim


Hi Jim,

It's funny how real life so often gets in the way of the fun stuff we'd like to do. I'm glad you're enjoying this toon and I particularly appreciate your specific comments about what parts you liked best. You aren't the only one who has mentioned the sleep set that Lynne is wearing and I too love brunettes getting spanked OTK :D . I'm not sure what percentage of women need a focus spanking but I have a hunch it might be higher than we think. It's my opinion that there are probably some who do need them but just aren't aware of it because they've never had a man who understood their needs. I also think it's very possible there are girls out there who know they need such spanking and want them but can't find a way to get a man to do it for them..........as strange as that sounds to us. Thanks, Phil


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