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...And this one begins with the mechanical arm of the Dan-O-Matic reaching for Delores!

...Soon the evil mastermind, Delores, will feel the sting of the Dan-O-Matic's metalic paddle!

Is Agent Dumas enjoying his boss's predicament? Yeah! So am I, and I hope those of you in the audience are too!

While Delores is getting her just desserts, what's going on with Katie, who had just taken off running the other direction when we saw her last?

...And speaking of that missile...

I hope the rest of you think this is funny...I cracked up when I had this idea! ...But I guess Katie isn't nearly so amused by it!

...And now, this week's cliffhanger...

Hiya b00m:

Wow! Where to begin? Today's updates on the "Kate Tanda: Secret Spy" caper show us a LOT of action... and I sense there will be a slam-bang, exciting conclusion to this OTKatie story. But not too soon, I hope. Your last update showed us NO spankings, and in this new chapter you show us only ONE. Keep 'em coming!

It is, of course, a bit silly that Agents Dumas and Delores are trying to make their getaway right in front of the gigantic Dan-O-Matic, but fortunately you knew to steer this pair so that the malevolent Delores would end up with her end up, in the claws of the gargantuan gizmo.

Of course it's delicious seeing Delores getting her just desserts (and then some!), right in front of her henchman for extra humiliation. But what about Katie? Will our heroine also be ensnared by the machine? Or will the heat-seeking missile be diverted towards the NEW "hottest target in town," aka Delores' heiny...?

Weighty measures to ponder here, b00m. And I love how you have Katie speaking directly to YOU, in that last panel.

Cheers,
Dan

The end is nye! (sorry). Boom, Why is it that all your female characters seem to lose their clothes, within the first few episodes? are you trying to turn us all into naturists?

hi Boom,

i like the look of "realization" on Delores' face as she runs by the Dan-O-Matic in panel 002 . nice bouncing bottom too . Delores is nicely placed in panel 003 as agent Dumas makes sure the controls are stuck......ah.......er....i mean tries to clear the stuck controls in panel 004, Delores has a great reaction to the first swat as well as looking a bit mad about the whole thing. i'd really like to see the expression agent Dumas has but i have no trouble imagining that it's a lot like expression on the Dan-O-Matic . in panel 005 i think Katie is quite alluring with her naked legs sticking out of that rain coat reminding us that she is totally naked underneath and her bottom bouncing as she runs . i like Katie's protests to you in panel 007 good thinking on her feet by Katie in the last one and another great cliffhanger . can't wait for the next episode. phil

daneldorado wrote:Today's updates on the "Kate Tanda: Secret Spy" caper show us a LOT of action... and I sense there will be a slam-bang, exciting conclusion to this OTKatie story. But not too soon, I hope. Your last update showed us NO spankings, and in this new chapter you show us only ONE. Keep 'em coming!

I still have more chapters in this story...
and although a couple of them are set-up only, I'm not going to end everything without Katie getting spanked again.

daneldorado wrote:It is, of course, a bit silly that Agents Dumas and Delores are trying to make their getaway right in front of the gigantic Dan-O-Matic, but fortunately you knew to steer this pair so that the malevolent Delores would end up with her end up, in the claws of the gargantuan gizmo.

I admit I made my emeny spies a bit inept, especially Dumas, but that's intended for comic effect. In her new job, Katie is sort of a female Maxwell Smart, and the only way she'll ever succeed on a mission is if she gets really lucky, or if the villains make even more mistakes than a wet-behind-the-ears beginner.

daneldorado wrote:Of course it's delicious seeing Delores getting her just desserts (and then some!), right in front of her henchman for extra humiliation. But what about Katie? Will our heroine also be ensnared by the machine? Or will the heat-seeking missile be diverted towards the NEW "hottest target in town," aka Delores' heiny...?

Having the missile redirect towards Delores is a good idea... and I considered it... but I didn't want to blow her up. I came up with a different solution to the "Kansas Missile Crisis", which will be part of my next episode.

solsunbeach wrote:The end is nye! (sorry). Boom, Why is it that all your female characters seem to lose their clothes, within the first few episodes? are you trying to turn us all into naturists?

Not necessarily... but I'm a longtime fan of the old western film, McLintock! I think it's fun sometimes to see the heroine lose a bit of her clothing just before she gets a big spanking! Maybe it's the em-BARE-ASS-ment of it!
Thank you both for your comments!

overbarrel49 wrote:i like the look of "realization" on Delores' face as she runs by the Dan-O-Matic in panel 002. nice bouncing bottom too.

Heh heh! I'm glad you enjoyed that part!

overbarrel49 wrote:Delores is nicely placed in panel 003 as agent Dumas makes sure the controls are stuck......ah.......er....i mean tries to clear the stuck controls in panel 004,

Did he tamper with the machine so that it would grab Dealores and spank her, or was it a totally accidental malfunction? I'm going to leave that up to each reader's own interpretation. And again... Heh heh!

overbarrel49 wrote:in panel 004, Delores has a great reaction to the first swat as well as looking a bit mad about the whole thing. i'd really like to see the expression agent Dumas has but i have no trouble imagining that it's a lot like expression on the Dan-O-Matic.

Dumas tried to hide his amusement as long as he could... but I'm sure he must've cracked a smile eventually!

overbarrel49 wrote:in panel 005 i think Katie is quite alluring with her naked legs sticking out of that rain coat reminding us that she is totally naked underneath and her bottom bouncing as she runs.

I'm glad you consider her legs alluring. I've endeavored to make her legs long and shapely, without going into a lot of detail on them.

overbarrel49 wrote:i like Katie's protests to you in panel 007

daneldorado wrote: And I love how you have Katie speaking directly to YOU, in that last panel.

Two of you have commented favorably on this little aside to the story. Endart did that occasionally. I actually got the idea (and maybe Endart did too) from an old Daffy Duck cartoon!

daneldorado wrote:Or will the heat-seeking missile be diverted towards the NEW "hottest target in town," aka Delores' heiny...?

Because of this question, I decided to re-think, and eventually re-write my next episode. Here it is:

It picks up where the last episode left off...I had considered a lot of options, and thought that my best one was to have Katie dive into the acid vat, where the missile would follow her and be dissolved... but then, I asked myself: Am i getting rid of the missile too quickly? Shouldn't Delores get chased around a little bit before it's safely destroyed? Dan seems to think that the missile should go after Delores, and maybe some of the rest of you might think so too.

When we last saw Delores, she had been captured by the Dan-O-Matic... Now it's finishied with her!

More abuse for Dumas...

At one point, I had planned for the missile to already be destroyed by now... but we really need at least one panel of Delores running frantically with the missile hot on her tail...dont we?

...Or maybe two panels of Delores running frantically with the missile hot on her tail!

...And now, this week's cliffhanger!

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Oh, this is rich.

B00m, not only are Katie's and Delores' fannies "on fire," but YOU are on fire, too, for dreaming up these new panels in the "Kate Tanda: Secret Spy" story!

All the panels are exciting, but my favorite is the one where Delores slaps Dumas' face and exhorts him:

"If you thought I needed to be spanked... Why didn't you put me across your lap... like a REAL MAN would do?"

Sounds to me like Delores actually WANTS to be spanked by her fellow agent... doesn't it? Apparently she is his boss, yet she gives us the unmistakable feeling that she wouldn't mind getting spanked, as long as it isn't by that impersonal robotic machine. Yeah, that's it: Let her feel the hand of an actual human being, landing sharply and repeatedly on her already overheated heinie. Maybe, when the time comes, Dumas will be able to match or exceed the "1,000 swats at maximum sting" she has already suffered from the Dan-O-Matic!

B00m, I don't know if I'll be able to sleep tonight. I'll be thinking about the remaining panels of this OTKatie story and imagining what might come.

Cheers,
Dan