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That's it for this chapter. Hope you like it. I'd like to know what you think.

Hi, Solsunbeach.

solsunbeach wrote:I would be happy to offer any future script advice at any time in the future!

There is one idea I've been tossing around in my head for a long time, and haven't been able to fill in all the details. If you want to come up with some chain-reaction-type accidents, I might finally be able to finish the story.

The beginning is that Katie is walking down the sidewalk, just minding her own business, when a gust of wind raises her skirt. A painter on his ladder turns to stare at her and in a moment of inattentiveness, drops a bucket of paint.

So then... who does the paint land on, and how does that contribute to another disaster, and another, and another... ?

If I could come up with the middle of the story, the end would be a whole city block in shambles, and about a dozen men standing in line (or on queue) to give Katie a spanking, because they blame her for causing the whole mess!

Do you want to see if you can figure out something for that?

Nice of Katie to share joy wherever she goes...

Hi, WillJohn. Thanks for being the first to comment on the newest installment of Katie's current adventure.

willjohn wrote:Nice of Katie to share joy wherever she goes...

Yes! It's s-o-o-o nice of her, isn't it!

I've always been a supporter of law & order!

Hi Boom,

I have to say that I just love the view of Katie in the opening panel......I can almost see her beautiful bottom jiggling as she walks . The only problem with it is that I almost didn't see the words . I sure would like to have been officer Yank in the second panel when Katie bumps into him . And , of course, officer Yank has a better Idea. That's what he does best . In panel 3 Katie appears to be really worried, with good reason I might add as she knows full well what Yank has on his mind . Then, In panel 4, she looked positively scared as Yank is turning her over, again, with good reason . The look on Yank's face is obviously an expression of his love of being a cop and upholding the law . In panel 5 we see officer Yank making good on his oath to fairly and impartially uphold the law as he dutifully applies that law to Katie's backside . It strikes me that Katie's reaction can best be summed up in the words of poet John Greenleaf Whittier when he said, Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these, it might have been . She also looks really cute kicking her legs to the rhythm of her bouncing bottom . In panel 6, Katie's escalating reaction indicates that Yank has decided she should receive the maximum penalty the law allows......or the maximum her cute bottom can take . Of course, her wide eyed reaction to having Yank carry her off with his hand in the proper location to make absolutely sure she doesn't fall, is really cute too . In the last panel, looking at Katie's irritated expression, it would appear that everyone is indeed happy, with one notable expression . It was great seeing officer Yank again. Thanks for sharing this with us . Phil

Hi, Solsunbeach.

solsunbeach wrote:I've always been a supporter of law & order!

And I've always been a supporter of spankings for pretty female backsides!

WOW!!! What A Bottom Katie HAVE glad she didn`t try to escape the long arm of the Law

Hi, Phil. Thanks for your comments.

overbarrel49 wrote:I have to say that I just love the view of Katie in the opening panel......I can almost see her beautiful bottom jiggling as she walks. The only problem with it is that I almost didn't see the words.

Words? Oh yeah... I guess I did put some words in the panel. Speaking of words... did you happen to notice the poster on the wall?

overbarrel49 wrote:I sure would like to have been officer Yank in the second panel when Katie bumps into him.

I'd sure like to have his job! (Not the job of a real-life officer, but this one seems to spend most of his workday spanking pretty girls!)

overbarrel49 wrote: And, of course, officer Yank has a better Idea. That's what he does best.

Why take up jail space and have to fill out all that paperwork that goes with with an arrest?

overbarrel49 wrote:Then, In panel 4, she looked positively scared as Yank is turning her over, again, with good reason. The look on Yank's face is obviously an expression of his love of being a cop and upholding the law.

Yes! He is dedicated to his work! And she probably remembers the last spanking Officer Yank gave her!

overbarrel49 wrote:In panel 5 we see officer Yank making good on his oath to fairly and impartially uphold the law as he dutifully applies that law to Katie's backside. It strikes me that Katie's reaction can best be summed up in the words of poet John Greenleaf Whittier when he said, Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these, it might have been. She also looks really cute kicking her legs to the rhythm of her bouncing bottom.

I'm sure she regrets her decision to try to run away at this point... but will it prevent her from running the next time she has the opportunity? Probably not!

overbarrel49 wrote: In panel 6, Katie's escalating reaction indicates that Yank has decided she should receive the maximum penalty the law allows......or the maximum her cute bottom can take.

She is, after all a repeat offender! He caught her skinny-dipping in the park on her birthday in 2015!

overbarrel49 wrote:Of course, her wide eyed reaction to having Yank carry her off with his hand in the proper location to make absolutely sure she doesn't fall, is really cute too.

A firm grip is important!

overbarrel49 wrote: In the last panel, looking at Katie's irritated expression, it would appear that everyone is indeed happy, with one notable expression.

And I'm glad to know that you're happy with this episode too. As for Katie... well no, I guess she's not too pleased at the moment!

butch46163@yahoo.com wrote:WOW!!! What A Bottom Katie HAVE glad she didn`t try to escape the long arm of the Law

The long arm and the strong hand!

If you want to equate a real life bottom to Katie, it would have to be the ex-spanking model Chloe Elise

In real life Yank would be sacked & charged with assault. We are talking fantasy.

Hi, Solsunbeach.

solsunbeach wrote:If you want to equate a real life bottom to Katie, it would have to be the ex-spanking model Chloe Elise

Hmmmm. I found this picture of Chloe Elise......and yeah, there is some resemblance.

Hi, WillJohn.

willjohn wrote:In real life Yank would be sacked & charged with assault. We are talking fantasy.

Definitely! A real cop would be facing criminal charges and his department would probably have a lawsuit on its hands for trying the kind of thing that Officer Yank gets away with on a regular basis.

As a fantasy character, Officer Yank provides an opportunity for Katie to get into some kind of trouble with the law... but instead of getting arrested or ticketed, she gets another spanking!

Where would be the fun in seeing Katie paying a ticket, or sitting in a cell?

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