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hi b00m!

not a traditional spanking but great fun! I too do not think Katie is stupid. she just is naïve about how attractive her bottom is to spankers. and of course I like all the good looking sexy men waiting to give her a "pat" on the back. I wonder too if she noticed the line was almost never ending. I would really like to have a line like that waiting for me!

again your talent and hard work conveys to me that the "pats" were a little harder than normal pats on the back. at least Katie has her skirt to give her a little protection. I can't wit to see what comes next for her!

and I can't blame Marie for wanting a spanking from Scottie. I would feel the same way! every time I see a Katie I like her more and more! thank you!!

sunflower

Thank you, overbarrel and sunflower, for your comments.

overbarrel49 wrote:in panel 1303 Katie looks very cute, as usual, while rubbing her freshly spanked bottom.

And, as usual, she doesn't realise that it's her cuteness that gets her spanked so much!

overbarrel49 wrote:Marie looks "enthusiastic" to say the least ............and both girls have nicely rounded bottoms too as always. Marie is like a lot of girls i have known. that is to say, once she sets her mind on something, especially getting the spanking she wants, she fully intends to make it happen and that's certainly true in this case. i like the way her bottom bounces around in panel 1304. in panel 1305 she even gives us a wink to let us know how much she's enjoying the spanking and the dialog from Scottie.

Some of you had asked me to draw a character who likes to be spanked and actually invites men to turn her over their knees. I'm thinking Marie should fill the bill on that.

overbarrel49 wrote:of course, it's no secret why all of them want to give Katie a pat on the back or why they're all aiming so low............no secret to everyone but Katie that is. she still has that same surprised look after each pat. i have to wonder if she noticed any of those men who were going through the line more than once.

sunflower309 wrote:not a traditional spanking but great fun! I too do not think Katie is stupid. she just is naïve about how attractive her bottom is to spankers. and of course I like all the good looking sexy men waiting to give her a "pat" on the back. I wonder too if she noticed the line was almost never ending. I would really like to have a line like that waiting for me!

Maybe she doesn't know how many male employees the agency has... I think if I was in that line, i'd sneak back to the end after I had my turn!

sunflower309 wrote:and I can't blame Marie for wanting a spanking from Scottie. I would feel the same way!

I've been hoping I could get a woman's opinion about Scottie. I was trying to make a character who would be sexy to a female reader, but until now, I had no idea whether I had succeeded. He's supposed to be a composite of Sir Sean Connery, who's been a sex symbol ever since he did the 007 movies in the '60s and a little bit of Gerard Butler, who's a more recent Scottish heartthrob. If you wish that Scottie MacHottie was real, that's great! If you wish Scottie MacHottie was warming your backside right now, That's even better!

hugob00m wrote:I've been hoping I could get a woman's opinion about Scottie. I was trying to make a character who would be sexy to a female reader, but until now, I had no idea whether I had succeeded. He's supposed to be a composite of Sir Sean Connery, who's been a sex symbol ever since he did the 007 movies in the '60s and a little bit of Gerard Butler, who's a more recent Scottish heartthrob. If you wish that Scottie MacHottie was real, that's great! If you wish Scottie MacHottie was warming your backside right now, That's even better!

oh you have indeed succeeded in making Scottie sexy. when I read what he's saying I can hear him in Sean Connery's voice. and oh, if only he was real and I too would find a way to get him to turn me over his knee. like Marie I do enjoy spankings (not while they are happening so much but before and after.....oh yeah!) the look on my face during a spanking is probably more like Katies. I don't believe you would ever see a smile on my face or have me asking for more either for that matter! or no winking either. I am too busy concentrating going on behind me to think of anything else.

looking forward to more! and offering a woman's opinion whenever you need one.

sunflower

...And (drumroll) here's the final chapter of The Black Bird.

Katie's finally made it home!

Hmmm... I bet that cold water must be a relief!

WillJohn anticipated that I was going to get Bullmoose involved... but it wasn't quite time yet.

What do you think? Is this story going to have a happy ending?

Yeah... It's definitely going to be a happy ending!

...A happy ending for Bullmoose!

...And Katie gets ONE MORE SPANKING!

All good things must come to an end... ...and so does this story.

hi Boom,

hey! Katie finally made it home so now her bottom is safe..............right? . in panel 1303 i thought it was nice of you to show Katie undressing and i got a chuckle from the steam rising as she got into the bath tub . btw, you used numbers starting with 13 for the previous episode so i changed them all to 14 as i saved them to my "Boom" folder so it wouldn't erase the ones i already had. i thought Katie looked very fetching, standing there naked in panel 1304............especially the drawing where Bullmoose is pulling her to him..............that HAS to feel good . in panel 1305 Katie is finally leading him instead of the other way around and her bottom, which is now only a little red, is still bouncing nicely . of course, she might not be so eager if she knew what he had in mind for her . in panel 1306 Katie's mouth seems to have dropped open............although i almost didn't notice it as i was concentrating on other things . i see Bullmoose still has the hand placement down pat when he's turning Katie over in panel 1308 i like Katie's comment that the spanking feels pretty believable to her as her bottom returns to her normal cherry red state . what can i say about the final panel except.............nice views . the end indeed . this has been a great story and i hate to see it come to an end but i have confidence that you'll think of another one to keep us entertained . thanks for sharing this with us. phil

hi Boom!

a good story but not a very happy "ending" for Katies bottom. I like how you have Katie naked. you didn't have to show everything for us to get the fact that she is naked. very well done! I would not ever want to be spanked naked, but it's ok with me that Katie was. and I only wish that sitting in cold water would ease the burning sore bottom that comes from a good spanking! maybe I should try that next time! and I really like Bullmoose! I hope to see more of him!

I truly enjoyed this one and I am becoming a big fan of yours. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

sunflower

Thanks, overbarrel, for being the first to comment on my final episode of The Black Bird.

overbarrel49 wrote:hey! Katie finally made it home so now her bottom is safe..............right?

Heh heh!! Or so she thought! Katie's bottom is NEVER EVER safe!

overbarrel49 wrote:in panel 1303 i thought it was nice of you to show Katie undressing and i got a chuckle from the steam rising as she got into the bath tub.

Yeah. Somebody else used that gag, but I had steal it for this story! Even though it couldn't happen that way in real life, I think it's both funny and sexy for a pretty cartoon girl to make steam rise from a tub full of cold water with the heat from her posterior after she's been thoroughly spanked! I think there are some ladies who feel as if their backsides are that hot after a good spanking.

overbarrel49 wrote:btw, you used numbers starting with 13 for the previous episode so i changed them all to 14 as i saved them to my "Boom" folder so it wouldn't erase the ones i already had.

Oops! I didn't notice that!

overbarrel49 wrote:i thought Katie looked very fetching, standing there naked in panel 1304............especially the drawing where Bullmoose is pulling her to him..............that HAS to feel good.

Heh heh! Even when he hugs her, he likes to put his hand on her butt! (But GENTLY, VERY GENTLY!)

overbarrel49 wrote:in panel 1305 Katie is finally leading him instead of the other way around and her bottom, which is now only a little red, is still bouncing nicely. of course, she might not be so eager if she knew what he had in mind for her.

Yeah. She wants to get him into the bedroom... and feel free to assume that her plans for Bullmoose are postponed, not cancelled.

overbarrel49 wrote: in panel 1306 Katie's mouth seems to have dropped open............although i almost didn't notice it as i was concentrating on other things.

I don't think Katie was expecting Bullmoose to see her in the S.P.A.N.K.-issued bodysuit and make the logical assumption that she might be reverting to some of her old super-villianess behavior.

overbarrel49 wrote:i see Bullmoose still has the hand placement down pat when he's turning Katie over in panel 1308.

Oh yes! Bullmoose likes to have his hand on Katie's rear end, even before the spanking begins!

overbarrel49 wrote:i like Katie's comment that the spanking feels pretty believable to her as her bottom returns to her normal cherry red state.

I might have to do another story that explains why Bullmoose knows she's telling the truth, but has to pretend not to believe her. I've planted the hint that he's privy to the activities of the top-secret agency she belongs to. How does he know? Is he on the same side or working for the enemy? I don't know the answers to those questions myself yet. At least I have some potential material for a future story! Meanwhile, he has to give Katie a spanking that everyone (including Katie herself!) can believe!

overbarrel49 wrote:what can i say about the final panel except.............nice views. the end indeed. this has been a great story and i hate to see it come to an end but i have confidence that you'll think of another one to keep us entertained.

I think my next story will be considerably shorter, and have nothing to do with her job as a secret spy. However, if enough of you liked the spy story and want more of the adventures of S.P.A.N.K. I think I can come up with some more.

hugob00m wrote:I think my next story will be considerably shorter, and have nothing to do with her job as a secret spy. However, if enough of you liked the spy story and want more of the adventures of S.P.A.N.K. I think I can come up with some more

Boom!

oh yes please! I very much enjoyed this one and would like to see more. and short or long i'm sure I will enjoy it and appreciate all your hard work!

sunflower

Hi, sunflower! Thanks for your comments on the last chapter of The Black Bird.

sunflower309 wrote:a good story but not a very happy "ending" for Katies bottom.

True... But i had to give Bullmoose his chance, didn't I?

sunflower309 wrote:I like how you have Katie naked. you didn't have to show everything for us to get the fact that she is naked. very well done! I would not ever want to be spanked naked, but it's ok with me that Katie was.

There has been a long-running debate between members of this forum over nudity and exposure. Some of the guys don't like to see a woman's "private parts" when she's bent over for a spanking, but others think it's just fine to show everything. I've veered toward the "less exposure" point of view with my own drawings, keeping her "private parts" concealed, even when she's naked. And in this cartoon, I've even gone so far as to not show her nipples or her pubic hair (to the audience... I'm sure Bullmoose got to see everything! )

sunflower309 wrote:and I only wish that sitting in cold water would ease the burning sore bottom that comes from a good spanking! maybe I should try that next time!

Heh heh! Have you ever felt like. if you did soak your bottom in cold water, you'd make steam rise?

sunflower309 wrote:and I really like Bullmoose! I hope to see more of him!

When I first introduced Bullmoose, he was just a random male character. I made him a lefty so that I could show a double spanking finale with the two spankees facing each other. I brought him back a few more times, and then decided to make him into her boyfriend. I'm really glad you like Bullmoose. He's sort of become my favorite male character in these stories... which is why I did the final chapter with him showing up at the end of her bath, instead of just ending the story when Katie got home. I'm thinking my next story is going be much shorter and it'll be centered around Katie and Bullmoose.

hugob00m wrote: But i had to give Bullmoose his chance, didn't I?

hi again!

yes you had to give Bullmoose his chance. I would have been disappointed if you didn't! and it was a better ending for your story!

hugob00m wrote:There has been a long-running debate between members of this forum over nudity and exposure. Some of the guys don't like to see a woman's "private parts" when she's bent over for a spanking, but others think it's just fine to show everything. I've veered toward the "less exposure" point of view with my own drawings, keeping her "private parts" concealed, even when she's naked. And in this cartoon, I've even gone so far as to not show her nipples or her pubic hair (to the audience... I'm sure Bullmoose got to see everything! )

I think I commented on exposure somewhere on here but not sure where. I do not like to think a bout what my spanker sees when he is spanking me, both OTK and bent over for some penalty swats with the paddle. I think because of my job (I am a nurse in an alzheimers unit of a nursing home) I have lost most of my sense of modesty. but I do worry about my exposure. so when you portray it the way you did I can believe my spanker cannot see anything either (for awhile anyway.) so if I don't see nipples or any lady parts that is just fine with me. I get enough of that in real life! sorry if tmi! but if there was exposure and it was done right, it would not upset me. I have seen some nudity that phil has done and it is not vulgar so it was ok. I would hope that Bullmoose gets to see everything!

hugob00m wrote:Heh heh! Have you ever felt like. if you did soak your bottom in cold water, you'd make steam rise?

oh yes I have! and if it worked that would be the only place I would want to sit after a good spanking. and all my spankings are good ones so I do indeed feel that way! or maybe a giant block of ice would do the trick also!

hugob00m wrote: I'm thinking my next story is going be much shorter and it'll be centered around Katie and Bullmoose.]

I would like that very much and I look forward to it!

sunflower

b00m, you lucky guy... Not only do you create good, entertaining stories, but you actually get people to post their comments about it! I'm jealous. When I used to draw comics here, I would be lucky to get even ONE comment. So I've given up, but I still love to see your work! It looks as if you have the golden touch, all right. People always answer you.

Getting back to OTKatie: With this short final chapter, you have dispelled a notion I had before. I always thought that Katie and Bullmoose lived together, but here we see Bullmoose saying to Katie:

"I came by your house last night, and you weren't home...."

So apparently they are lovers who maintain their own separate dwellings, apart from each other. That actually feels better to me, because long-term, I would like to see Katie get spanked by numerous characters, not only her boyfriend. And so far, we ARE seeing her get her spankings by lots of guys.

Here, you have supplied your heroine with the most completely weasel-worded explanation possible, with her speech to Bullmoose about her role in "national security." That's delicious. I'm hoping that there will be more stories involving Katie and her job at S.P.A.N.K., as I do prefer those over the ones that have her working for Fitz and Kauf.

Do you ever grab those short video clips that appear on such sites as Spanking Tube.com? The reason I ask is that in your OTKatie story, you have your heroine in the unenviable position of a girl who has been spanked, repeatedly, over the course of the day, and her bottom now "feels like it's on fire!" Of course we are all in favor of her getting spanked... but her complaints about getting repeated spankings over a short period of time, DO resonate with us, and in a way we sympathize with her. Well, in one of the Spanking Tube videos, we get to see a cute Irish colleen who has received, it's said, FIVE spankings in a day, and yet we now see her going across the knee of one more guy, and lordy lordy, he gives her the hardest and longest spanking I've ever seen! The girl is called Aidan Kelly, and we actually bellieve it when they say she has received that many spankings in a day, because she is naked and her bottom cheeks are red as a tomato! Anyway, your final OTKatie toon today put me in mind of that video.

Cheers,
Dan

daneldorado wrote:b00m, you lucky guy... Not only do you create good, entertaining stories, but you actually get people to post their comments about it! I'm jealous. When I used to draw comics here, I would be lucky to get even ONE comment. So I've given up, but I still love to see your work! It looks as if you have the golden touch, all right. People always answer you.

hi Dan!

I will always comment on everybodys stories. I did comment on some of yours. I like your stuff. it reminds me of a time not so long ago when it was alright to give or get spankings. I like older movies and a lot of music from the 40's and 50's, and your stories seem to be from then. I will miss seeing new (or old even) stories from you. I still have some to look at on here so I will really enjoy them and I will comment on them. I do appreciate your hard work.

sunflower