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Hi Phil.

I really like the latest addition to your story. I realize that not every spanking has to include The Lecture, but it does increase the tension and anticipation for the spankee... and... let's just admit this... it's a whole lot of fun for the spanker!

Whenever I do The Lecture, I like to do it just like Steve is doing it: with the lady already in the position and my hand resting on her bottom! Of course, I have to come up with some kind of longwinded B.S. explanation for why her punishment is totally justified... but really, it's all just an excuse to put my hand across her butt!

In this panel, you've chosen to show his spoken dialog and her internal thoughts. I hope some of the ladies in the audience will speak up about how accurate you are. Meanwhile... I know Steve's internal thoughts without having to have them shown. He's thinking the same thing I thought the last time I had a beautiful woman across my lap and I was giving her The Lecture.

hugob00m wrote:Hi Phil.

I really like the latest addition to your story. I realize that not every spanking has to include The Lecture, but it does increase the tension and anticipation for the spankee... and... let's just admit this... it's a whole lot of fun for the spanker!

hi Boom,

i like the lecture.......especially if the spanking is between romantic partners . i agree with you that it does indeed increase the nervousness and anticipation of the spankee and it is also a lot of fun for the spanker, of course .

hugob00m wrote: Whenever I do The Lecture, I like to do it just like Steve is doing it: with the lady already in the position and my hand resting on her bottom! Of course, I have to come up with some kind of longwinded B.S. explanation for why her punishment is totally justified... but really, it's all just an excuse to put my hand across her butt!

yeah, just an excuse and i think we spankers are, of necessity, masters of coming up with excuses for spankings .

hugob00m wrote:In this panel, you've chosen to show his spoken dialog and her internal thoughts. I hope some of the ladies in the audience will speak up about how accurate you are. Meanwhile... I know Steve's internal thoughts without having to have them shown. He's thinking the same thing I thought the last time I had a beautiful woman across my lap and I was giving her The Lecture.

it's been my experience that spankees will often think things they will never say to their man. i think some of that is due to embarrassment and the rest may be some kind of unwritten code that girls must keep certain aspects of being a girl secret from men . i have only gotten one reply from a spankee on this one so far and she comments, "This scene of Tina gives Me little twinges. Tina's thoughts are SO Great." as you can see, her comments do express some confirmation that Tina's thoughts are good ones but without going into any embarrassing details . yeah, Steve's thoughts here are unnecessary.......at least for another spanker to understand . i'm glad you enjoyed the new pic . thanks, phil

hi everyone!

sorry i couldn't get her sooner. Phil, you got a spankees perspective spot on. there are things that we won't share, but you've really captured spankees thoughts and fears and anticipations! i can tell you that during a lecture, i, personally don't really hear what is being said. it's like the charlie brown cartoons where when the adults talk all you hear is blah, blah, blah etc. i hear something, but feel the hand on my bottom, rubbing and wondering when the first spank is going to land, how fast and hard are the spanks going to be? my partner keeps the lecture going and sometimes spanks fast, sometimes slow, there is never a set pattern. but i really don't hear what he is saying. sometimes i answer the questions wrong because i don't hear them! spankers like the lecture, me, as a spankee, like the hand on my bottom during the lecture. a win win situation i'd say!

i think this is your best story to date and it is really striking a chord for me for sure! you get better and better! can't wait until i see what you have coming next! great job and highly appreciated by me for sure!!! now i can imagine what i look like (at least my facial expressions) before, during and after a spanking! great fun Phil!!!!

sunflower

sunflower309 wrote:hi everyone!

sorry i couldn't get her sooner. Phil, you got a spankees perspective spot on. there are things that we won't share, but you've really captured spankees thoughts and fears and anticipations! i can tell you that during a lecture, i, personally don't really hear what is being said. it's like the charlie brown cartoons where when the adults talk all you hear is blah, blah, blah etc. i hear something, but feel the hand on my bottom, rubbing and wondering when the first spank is going to land, how fast and hard are the spanks going to be? my partner keeps the lecture going and sometimes spanks fast, sometimes slow, there is never a set pattern. but i really don't hear what he is saying. sometimes i answer the questions wrong because i don't hear them! spankers like the lecture, me, as a spankee, like the hand on my bottom during the lecture. a win win situation i'd say!

hi Sunflower,

it's good to see you again . your comment that my depiction of the spankee's perspective is spot on brought a big smile to my face . i think i can speak for all the males here at CSR when i say, we love hearing a spanking scenario from the spankee's perspective so we really appreciate the insights you've given us here . it's just as i always suspected, the girl isn't really listening to what i'm saying so the lecturing is basically just to make me feel better .it is nice to know that she is, at least, paying attention to what i'm doing to her bottom .

sunflower309 wrote:i think this is your best story to date and it is really striking a chord for me for sure! you get better and better! can't wait until i see what you have coming next! great job and highly appreciated by me for sure!!! now i can imagine what i look like (at least my facial expressions) before, during and after a spanking! great fun Phil!!!!

sunflower

i'm glad you're enjoying the toon and particularly glad to hear that it has struck a chord with you . i'm glad i was able to help you out with the facial expressions . it might be easier to just buy your spanker a couple of big mirrors for the room though. thanks, phil

Hi, Sunflower! It's good to see your comments again!

sunflower309 wrote: i can tell you that during a lecture, i, personally don't really hear what is being said. it's like the charlie brown cartoons where when the adults talk all you hear is blah, blah, blah etc.

Hmmmm! When i've given a girl The Lecture prior ro spanking her, I've always tried to be so clever with my words... and according to you, it's all for nothing. All I really need to say is, "Blah blah blah blah."

I think that the sound they use in the Charlie Brown cartoons is done with a trumpet and a mute. I might be able to get a similar sound with a guitar and a wah wah pedal... but it would be difficult holding a girl and a guitar on my lap at the same time!

But it's interesting for mr to read that the important thing to you is also the important thing to me: I like to sit there with a beautiful woman across my lap, resting my hand on her backside while I talk... Holding it still, or maybe rubbing a little... savoring the feel of her soft skin against my palm! Yummy!

hi everyone,


because of the Thanksgiving holiday tomorrow, i'm going to change things up a bit from our normal routine. i am posting this week's installment of "Family Tradition" today. then, on Friday, i'll be starting to post some Christmas themed pics .


Now, for today's look at Steve and Tina.........it's been my experience that, sometimes, when the spankee starts feeling that sting in her bottom, she will panic a bit and say something she really hadn't intended . let's check in and see how Tina's handling her spanking so far. i hope you enjoy the new pic . i also hope that those of you who celebrate Thanksgiving have a great one ! phil

Great start to Tina's spanking odyssey, Phil. A beautiful girl, turned over her man's knee, her bottom bare and welcoming, as Steve begins the (hopefully) lengthy task of turning her bottom a crimson shade of red.

As I've mentioned a time or twenty, my favorite sort of spanking picture is one where the spanker uses his hand, and only his hand, to smack his loved one's derriere. I think that's because with your bare hand, you can come in direct contact with her bare bottom. Flesh against flesh. Yeah, that's the main reason why I like your panel 045. The paddle, the strap, and the hairbrush can come later; but only a hand spanking can give both parties the tactile sense of intimacy that I think this experience can provide.

Cheers,
Dan

As Willjohn said, we are certainly getting someplace now. The thing that caught my eye was the camera angle used here - it's actually very attractive and effective for an OTK composition. Now, this isn't exactly the first panel in which we've seen one of the ladies OTK , but I checked back through all the preceding panels and this is the first time this camera angle has been used in this story, so it provides some variety as well.

As to Steven's placement of the paddle where Tina can see it during her spanking's early stages, I think this topic may have come up before but I'll say (again?) that I try to do the same thing: if a spankee is to receive both a spanking and paddling, I try to put the paddle where she can see it long before it's used, say on the bed or hanging on the closet door. This gives her something to think about (and worry about! ) during the hand spanking. In fact, even if she's only going to get the paddling, it's still very effective to have that paddle hanging in the background while I administer a lecture (in the case of a disciplinary scene). I think any woman who's been in that position will agree it's very hard to pay attention to what's being said, and her eyes will keep glancing at the paddle, knowing the moment it will be applied is coming ever-nearer.

daneldorado wrote:Great start to Tina's spanking odyssey, Phil. A beautiful girl, turned over her man's knee, her bottom bare and welcoming, as Steve begins the (hopefully) lengthy task of turning her bottom a crimson shade of red.

hi Dan,

i'm glad you enjoyed the view . i think you can count on Steve giving Tina a pretty lengthy spanking since he has the hand spanking and the paddling to go .

daneldorado wrote:As I've mentioned a time or twenty, my favorite sort of spanking picture is one where the spanker uses his hand, and only his hand, to smack his loved one's derriere. I think that's because with your bare hand, you can come in direct contact with her bare bottom. Flesh against flesh. Yeah, that's the main reason why I like your panel 045. The paddle, the strap, and the hairbrush can come later; but only a hand spanking can give both parties the tactile sense of intimacy that I think this experience can provide.

Cheers,
Dan

i totally agree with you. you mentioned intimacy and that's why i like OTK, hand spanking best. if the spankee is over her spanker's lap, the 2 of them can feel each other and their reactions during the spanking. the same is true of using your hand on her bare bottom . it's a great way for a couple to re connect and regain that sense of intimacy between them. not only that, but also, it just enhances that sexual aspect which is always present in a spanking between romantic partners . as you said, the paddle can come later for the spanker to further demonstrate his dominance and to make sure she understands the lesson to be learned . i'm glad you enjoyed this pic . thanks, phil

web-ed wrote:As Willjohn said, we are certainly getting someplace now. The thing that caught my eye was the camera angle used here - it's actually very attractive and effective for an OTK composition. Now, this isn't exactly the first panel in which we've seen one of the ladies OTK , but I checked back through all the preceding panels and this is the first time this camera angle has been used in this story, so it provides some variety as well.

hi web-ed,

i'm glad you enjoyed the view in a long story, such as this one, i have a tendency to repeat poses and OTK positions because it's easier. on the other hand, i don't want to see the exact same thing over and over again so i modify the positions of the spanker and especially the spankee some but i've found that the most effective way to create a more unique scene is by using the camera angle. there are things of interest during a spanking, no matter where you view it from. not only do you get different looks at the spankee's bottom and her face but her struggles also have different looks from different angles. anyway, i do try to keep the pics from being repetitive and i was pleased that you noticed that .

web-ed wrote:As to Steven's placement of the paddle where Tina can see it during her spanking's early stages, I think this topic may have come up before but I'll say (again?) that I try to do the same thing: if a spankee is to receive both a spanking and paddling, I try to put the paddle where she can see it long before it's used, say on the bed or hanging on the closet door. This gives her something to think about (and worry about! ) during the hand spanking. In fact, even if she's only going to get the paddling, it's still very effective to have that paddle hanging in the background while I administer a lecture (in the case of a disciplinary scene). I think any woman who's been in that position will agree it's very hard to pay attention to what's being said, and her eyes will keep glancing at the paddle, knowing the moment it will be applied is coming ever-nearer.

yeah, there's a lot more to a spanking than just swatting her bottom. as we've discussed before, stinging the spankee's bottom is mostly to have an effect on her already heightened emotional state . i figured looking at that paddle was just another weapon in a spanker's bag of psychological tricks, just like playing with her bare bottom to underscore her exposure and vulnerability or describing how her bottom is bouncing and turning red now that you mention it, it does seem to me like i remember you talking about having various paddles and other spanking implements hanging around the room when the spankee enters not only because they are easy to access but also because it gives her something to think about . i kind of hope Sunflower will see this and jump in with her comments. i'm particularly interested since she's already said that she doesn't really hear what the spanker is lecturing about so now i'm wondering if her eyes do keep going to that paddle she knows will ultimately be used on her bottom . thanks, phil

I have a feeling that Tina's asking Steve to "stop it" will only encourage him to lay it on with a vengeance.

Tina will think twice before looking through a window at another woman's misfortune and the hypocrite she is married to will never let on that he was standing next to her.

willjohn wrote:I have a feeling that Tina's asking Steve to "stop it" will only encourage him to lay it on with a vengeance.

hi Willjohn,

i think you're right and what's more, i'm betting that Tina knows it and is already sorry she said that . just goes to show you what a bit of panic will do for you .

willjohn wrote:Tina will think twice before looking through a window at another woman's misfortune and the hypocrite she is married to will never let on that he was standing next to her.

yeah, he probably won't. he's probably gonna just keep her guessing about how he knows all this stuff. of course, i don't think girls would really have a valid complaint about that since they all conspire to do that to us males all the time . thanks, phil

Hi Phil.

Mmmm! I love your newest panel! I agree with what Web-ed said about your angle. Tina's lovely bottom is the center of attention, as it should be, and her face is also clearly visible. I'm guessing you share my preference for seeing the spankee's butt and face in the same frame, since that's what you usually do.

I also share Dan's preference for the hand as a primary spanking implement, so I'm glad to see Steve using it... at least to begin with. Of course, Tina has earned the paddle, and she even agreed to it! But even though she's earned the paddle, just like her mother did earlier in the evening... a cute little backside like hers needs to be swatted with a male hand!

She's already a little bit red... and due to become a whole lot redder!

It's a great addition to your story, and I look forward to seeing the rest of it.

hugob00m wrote:Hi Phil.

Mmmm! I love your newest panel! I agree with what Web-ed said about your angle. Tina's lovely bottom is the center of attention, as it should be, and her face is also clearly visible. I'm guessing you share my preference for seeing the spankee's butt and face in the same frame, since that's what you usually do.

hi Boom,

i'm glad you enjoyed it . you would be guessing right about seeing both bottom and face in the same panel. of course, all of us here at CSR love looking at a shapely, spankable, upturned female bottom but the emotions of a spanking are really the most important part and i think it really adds to the pic if we can see the spankee's reactions on her face. besides, it seems reasonable to me that, particularly at the start of the spanking, she would be trying to look back and see what she can feel is happening to her bottom .

hugob00m wrote:I also share Dan's preference for the hand as a primary spanking implement, so I'm glad to see Steve using it... at least to begin with. Of course, Tina has earned the paddle, and she even agreed to it! But even though she's earned the paddle, just like her mother did earlier in the evening... a cute little backside like hers needs to be swatted with a male hand!

we all seem to be in agreement on this point too. the paddle is nice, but a hand spanking is more fun .

hugob00m wrote:She's already a little bit red... and due to become a whole lot redder!

It's a great addition to your story, and I look forward to seeing the rest of it.

yeah, more red is definitely indicated here.............just as it is in most of my toons . more coming up and also i have started posting Christmas spanking pics so i hope you'll check those out too. thanks, phil

Yes I agree with web-ed and b00m that I do enjoy seeing her face and bottom in the same frame. I love her position in this one too as you can see Stevens hands (both the spanking hand and the restraining hand. ) I do wonder about Tina telling Steven to stop as she has been spanked before and this one was just starting and she knew it was going to be a long spanking and paddling. I also wonder if there was some other reason that she wanted him to stop as she realized that he had seen the spanking too. Anyway great story and artwork as usual. I love them very much. Have a great day.
Jim

jimc wrote:Yes I agree with web-ed and b00m that I do enjoy seeing her face and bottom in the same frame. I love her position in this one too as you can see Stevens hands (both the spanking hand and the restraining hand. )

hi Jim,

i'm glad you enjoyed the view i really hadn't thought about the fact that both his hands are visible in this pic but it's an interesting observation. that is a part of the spanking too as it shows his domination and control over her .

jimc wrote: I do wonder about Tina telling Steven to stop as she has been spanked before and this one was just starting and she knew it was going to be a long spanking and paddling. I also wonder if there was some other reason that she wanted him to stop as she realized that he had seen the spanking too.

i think Tina just got a bit frantic and yelled that out in a moment of panic. i have a hunch she knows better than to do that . perhaps the panic surfaced because of the spanking she just watched her mom getting .

jimc wrote: Anyway great story and artwork as usual. I love them very much. Have a great day.
Jim

i'm glad you enjoyed both the story and the pic . thanks, phil

hi everyone,


it looks like Steve is taking a moment to explain some things to Tina even though she already knows all of it . i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil

Rudolf's nose has nothing on Tina's bum for redness!

willjohn wrote:Rudolf's nose has nothing on Tina's bum for redness!

hi will john,

yeah, and this spanking is far from over.........HOHOHO . i'm glad you enjoyed the pic . thanks, phil

One great spanking panel after another. Great artwork, Phil. You seem to be on a roll, and I for one hope it won't stop for a good long while.

Even this latest, panel no. 46, is solid even though there is no spanking going on. Tina is shown, half naked, across her husband's lap, her delicate fanny sporting the color of flame. She is not struggling, that's the point. She has accepted that she will be spanked. Now her concern is the severity of the punishment... and its duration.

Chers,
Dan