Thank you, Phil, for your detailed analysis of my latest
O.T.Katie strip.
overbarrel49 wrote:in panel 2 Katie seems a bit irritated by having been awakened at such an early hour but i have to admit that even in her sleepy state, she looks really cute in her green nighty.
I'm glad you think she's cute in her skimpy little nightie. If she wasn't a bit groggy, she probably would've put her robe on when she answered the door the first time... but I wanted to begin the strip with her wearing something really sexy.
overbarrel49 wrote: in panel 3 i love it that Katie's hands automatically go to cover her bottom when she sees Haigh at the door. instinctive " fight or cover up" reaction............very evolutionary. i see Katie has figured out that he only shows up when he's planning on spanking her ...............not that all that talking and reasoning will help any.
Heh heh! I'm glad to see that you noticed her reaction! Yes, there are certain men who seem to make Katie want to put her hands back there! (And I suppose you could call the leprechaun a "man". He's certanly male, and he has a man's deep appreciation for well-rounded female backsides!)
overbarrel49 wrote:i see it took him a bit to come up with a reason to spank Katie but he does come up with a plausible reason...........you'd think he would have come better prepared.
Yeah! You'da thunk! Part of the reason he had so much trouble thinking if a reason to spank her is that when I first started drawing the strip,
I still hadn't thought of a reason... and I just figured it might be comical to have him puzzling over his reason too. Or maybe, he stopped by just intending to visit... but when he realized that she was
expecting to get spanked, he had to come up with something on short notice.
overbarrel49 wrote:nice pic of Katie's round bottom warming up as he spanks her in panel 6 great position over all and i like it that Katie is kicking as he spanks her and her bottom reddens.
I like to draw Katie with her legs kicking. Someone described the motion as a vain attempt to "swim away" from the spanking!

I think kicking calls attention to how pretty the spankee's legs are (Well... that is IF the spankee HAS pretty legs... and it is my intention to depict Katie as having pretty legs... in addition to a butt that no man can ignore!) And kicking seems to also be a reflexive reaction to the hot red sting that the spankee is feeling!

{B.T.W. Sunflower, if you're reading this, could you tell me whether YOU kick when you're being spanked!}
overbarrel49 wrote:Katie does seem suspicious of his "reason" for spanking her though...........perhaps a function of the sting in her bottom.
I can understand why she would be suspicious. I'm sure she had never heard of a "St. Patrick's Day Good Luck Spanking" before. (I never heard of it, but it seemed like a SOMEWHAT plausible reason to spank a pretty girl!)
overbarrel49 wrote:Katie looks really cute, rubbing her bottom even if she is pissed off and accusing you of BS in panel 7.
Cute... and really miffed at the cartoonist who comes up with so many questionable reasons for the men all around her to turn her over their knees!
overbarrel49 wrote:panel 8................WHO IS IT NOW!. i can see how she might feel that way . in panel 10 Katie looks very appealing as she walks back into the house, bottom bouncing and grinning at her good fortune .............and then her hands rubbing her bottom some more as she ponders the "lucky' spanking...............she seems pretty skeptical of how lucky it is but from the way she's rubbing, she is definitely a believer in how much it made her bottom sting.
Good luck can sometimes be a matter of subjective judgement... but the hot red sting of a freshly-spanked bottom is completely tangible!
overbarrel49 wrote: nice skip step as officer Yank pats her bottom in panel13................and you and i both know that's exactly what Yank would do.
Yeah! I'm sure he's thinking he'd rather have her across his lap, but he'll settle for a one-swat whenever he can get away with it!
overbarrel49 wrote:panel 15 has a nice view of Katie and her apprehension as Yank leads her off for another spanking. Katie looks really fetching in panel 16 while she's kicking and squalling as Yank reddens her bottom even more. i can see that Yank is a gentleman since he politely removed his hat indoors.
Oh yes! Always a gentleman! We couldn't nave some brutish lout spanking Katie,
could we? (Well, actually, I suppose we
could! There was that time she cloned a neanderthal!)
overbarrel49 wrote: i can't say that i like the robe..........especially after seeing Katie in the night gown but i can see it plays a part in the story. in panel 18 it seems like it might actually be holding in some of that heat radiating from Katie's bottom.
I didn't really like covering up Katie's nightie either, but I thought it was necessaary to the plot... and I guess it MIGHT retain some of the heat from her recent spankings... {Sunflower, What are your thoughts on that?}
overbarrel49 wrote:panel 19............now Katie is thinking if some is good, more must be better. in panel 20 Katie seems to be a bit confused although probably flattered by Haigh's characterization of her bottom as cute and little . i love Katie's surprised reaction in panel 21 as she realizes only one good luck spanking is permitted per year . she seems a bit pissed off as her throbbing hiney peeks out from under the robe.
Heh heh! I just noticed a little inconsistancy in my story... If she doesn't deliberately invite any of the spankings she gets, then WHY does she have a paddle in her house? ESPECIALLY a paddle with, "Spank Me, I'm Irish!" painted on it! I don't know why she would have something like that, but it turned out to be VERY useful!
overbarrel49 wrote: Katie has caught Haigh, just what Bullmoose was hoping for...........but let's him go without considering the consequences. opening the robe to show Bullmoose her nighty was a good try but ended just as we knew it would.
Letting Haigh go was a big mistake, and thinking that she could distract Bullmoose by showing him her sexy little nightgown just compounded it! I remember seeing a cartoon by an artist called "C.C." It was part of a series called
Avoiding Domestic Discipline. One segment of the series contained a warning to the ladies, that dressing up in a sexy outfit to and take the man's mind off of a spanking he's planning to give... is doomed to failure. ESPECIALLY if said sexy outfit calls attention to the intended target area!
overbarrel49 wrote:in panel 26 i love how Katie's REALLY kicking and squalling as he blisters her already sore bottom . Bullmoose looks positively happy and contented while spanking her bottom too. lovely view of the spanking on the bed.
Yeah. He's having some fun spanking his fiancee's cute little backside... as he always has! Maybe he's not so concerned about the leprechaun and his gold as he once seemed to be, but, of course, ANY reason to spank Katie is a good one in his mind!
