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Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 4:25 pm
by web-ed
Yes, things are progressing in a most satisfactory manner
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Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 4:40 pm
by daneldorado
Phil:
I have already posted a comment on your latest artwork, which I continue to believe is wonderful.
But I just had another look at your "One Good Turn" story, and I noticed that you have now posted THREE (3) actual spanking panels. I'm grateful to you for that, but... if you are going to post more of these -- and I hope you WILL -- please note that in all three panels, Jennifer's legs are shown with her right leg down, and her left leg up. Over the course of the spanking, she should change that position, and vary the position of her legs.
I look forward to seeing more of Jennifer's spanking, but I hope that you will reverse the position of her legs and show the right leg up and the left leg down. The girl is kicking, after all.
Cheers,
Dan
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 7:25 pm
by overbarrel49
daneldorado wrote:Wow! This story just keeps getting better and better!
Phil, I gotta tell ya... These last two pics are among the very best spanking pics I have ever seen... and I've seen PLENTY!
hi Dan,
thanks for the very kind words. they brought a big grin to my face
. as you well know, it's nice to have your work appreciated. i also appreciate the fact that you really looked at this pic as well as the whole story and have specific comments on things you like. grand dad is obviously an experienced spanker and does indeed have a good grip as we will continue to see in the next couple pics
. as far as the old timers go, it was my opinion that while, as you noted, they could still enjoy the view, they were all too old to do much about it and i think grand dad knew that
. i am hoping that some of their antics will add a bit of humor to this toon as we go along too. thanks again, phil
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 7:27 pm
by overbarrel49
hi web-ed,
i will attempt to keep it headed in this direction. glad you're enjoying it
. thanks, phil
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 7:36 pm
by overbarrel49
daneldorado wrote: please note that in all three panels, Jennifer's legs are shown with her right leg down, and her left leg up. Over the course of the spanking, she should change that position, and vary the position of her legs.
hi again Dan,
i do have a tendency to do that because i always have the spanker right handed and i guess i am trying to keep the right leg from blocking the view of her bottom. of course, in the views done from either more front or rear it should be no problem to change the position and i will remember this. in pic #10 it was necessary to have her right leg down and the left one up since she is twisting her body toward the front and her legs would have had to be in this position to allow her to twist in this manner and try to avoid the spanks landing. i have pics #11&12 already completed. #11 is the same way but #12 has them reversed. i'll work in more diversity as we go along now that you've mentioned it. thanks for the tip. phil
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 6:57 pm
by willjohn
daneldorado wrote:Wow! This story just keeps getting better and better!
Phil, I gotta tell ya... These last two pics are among the very best spanking pics I have ever seen... and I've seen PLENTY!
In pic no. 10, especially, we can see the spanking at its apex. Jennifer is struggling mightily to squirm free of Granddad's grip and avert the walloping she is sure to get. Her body appears to be trying to "lift off" from his lap, but at this point her struggles seem to be for naught. Gramps still has a sure grip!
And YOU, Phil, are not only a great artist, you are also a very intuitive observer of the human scene. I say that because someone on this thread -- I forget who -- wrote that it is "unseemly" for a grandfather to spank the seat of his young and nubile granddaughter's panties in front of a bunch of "dirty old men." That, I believe, is the only negative comment on this cartoon so far.
But now you have thwarted those thoughts by having one of the grizzled onlookers saying "My heart's pounding... it seems familiar but I can't remember somehow. It sure feels good though!"
No doubt, these thoughts are shared by most, if not all, of the geezers looking on. If Jennifer were being spanked in front of a bunch of college guys in their 20s, I would probably agree that that might be inappropriate. But THIS audience is in the Viagra-plus generation, meaning they are beyond impotence and even Cialis won't help. But the view is still mighty attractive.
GO, Phil! GO!!!
Cheers,
Dan
Never underestimate the mixture of a randy man of any age and a little blue pill.
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 9:41 am
by hugob00m
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 3:47 pm
by overbarrel49
hi boom,
the old timers are "indeed' enjoying the show..................although at least one of them is having trouble remembering why
. glad your enjoying the toon
. thanks, phil
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 12:54 pm
by solsunbeach
Phil, Why is Grandad wearing a T-shirt and jeans? Surely a suit and tie would have been more appropriate.
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 2:54 pm
by overbarrel49
hi solsunbeach,
i'm afraid your age is showing
. true, my grandfather or even my dad would probably have done so even to just go to town. however, i am the grandfather now and i am wearing jeans and a pocket t-shirt as we speak. i'll probably do so to go to town too although sometimes i let my wife talk me into wearing a shirt with a collar
. later, phil
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 4:53 pm
by jesseray
And it is really more about what she is not wearing (soon I hope!)
Ray
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 9:13 pm
by overbarrel49
jesseray wrote:And it is really more about what she is not wearing (soon I hope!)
Ray
hi ray,
we have a long way to go in this toon so i hope jennifer still having her panties is "not wearing" on you
...........sorry about that. i'll post the next 2 on sunday so you can see just where it's headed
. thanks, phil
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 9:53 am
by overbarrel49
hi everyone,
i've heard rumors that red heads are strong willed ladies with bad tempers and subject to throw temper tantrums from time to time without considering all the possible consequences
. of course, even considering these consequences, if you're gonna lose your temper, timing is still crucial
. i hope you enjoy these. phil
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Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 9:56 am
by overbarrel49
- "now' she thinks about those consequences
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Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 10:31 am
by solsunbeach
I just love most beautifuly pronounced buttock cheeks, over his right knee - Perfect positioning, if ever I saw it - Lovely Phil
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 11:21 am
by overbarrel49
hi solsunbeach,
i'm glad to hear that you're enjoying the view
. thanks, phil
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 3:47 pm
by daneldorado
Wow! Is there any such thing as TOO MUCH of a good thing?
These latest pics by you, Phil, of Jennifer being spanked by her granddad, are superb. Considering the full series -- from the first time she goes over his lap, to this latest spectacular pair o' pics -- this will have to stand for all time as the touchstone of spanking art. But I hope you haven't stopped yet. I'm hoping to see little Jen get even more smacks to her perky backside, in front of these old fogies.
As I've said once before, you have chosen your cast well. It might not be "proper" to give Jennifer such a humiliating spanking in front of her peers, but... here there are no "peers," just a bunch of old men for whom sex is merely a dim memory. I'm glad that Grand Dad is giving them (and us) a treat, and of course Jen is richly deserving of this humiliation anyway.
Your artistry is excellent, especially with Pic no. 11, where you have opted to show Jen's feet in the foreground and her head in the background, giving us a good "3-D" angle.
My only cavil with this series is that you still haven't decided to shade the molars, especially in pics nos. 9 and 12. It looks a little strange for Grand Dad to have two rows of pearly white teeth, when half of them are way inside his mouth and should appear darker. But that is such a tiny gripe, considering the glorious panorama of spanking we are seeing here.
Keep up the good work, Phil... just watch them molars, okay?
Cheers,
Dan
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 4:07 pm
by willjohn
daneldorado wrote:Wow! Is there any such thing as TOO MUCH of a good thing?
These latest pics by you, Phil, of Jennifer being spanked by her granddad, are superb. Considering the full series -- from the first time she goes over his lap, to this latest spectacular pair o' pics -- this will have to stand for all time as the touchstone of spanking art. But I hope you haven't stopped yet. I'm hoping to see little Jen get even more smacks to her perky backside, in front of these old fogies.
As I've said once before, you have chosen your cast well. It might not be "proper" to give Jennifer such a humiliating spanking in front of her peers, but... here there are no "peers," just a bunch of old men for whom sex is merely a dim memory. I'm glad that Grand Dad is giving them (and us) a treat, and of course Jen is richly deserving of this humiliation anyway.
Your artistry is excellent, especially with Pic no. 11, where you have opted to show Jen's feet in the foreground and her head in the background, giving us a good "3-D" angle.
My only cavil with this series is that you still haven't decided to shade the molars, especially in pics nos. 9 and 12. It looks a little strange for Grand Dad to have two rows of pearly white teeth, when half of them are way inside his mouth and should appear darker. But that is such a tiny gripe, considering the glorious panorama of spanking we are seeing here.
Keep up the good work, Phil... just watch them molars, okay?
Cheers,
Dan
Maybe there is plenty of fluoride in the local water supply or he has a new set of dentures.
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:45 pm
by overbarrel49
daneldorado wrote:These latest pics by you, Phil, of Jennifer being spanked by her granddad, are superb. Considering the full series -- from the first time she goes over his lap, to this latest spectacular pair o' pics -- this will have to stand for all time as the touchstone of spanking art. But I hope you haven't stopped yet. I'm hoping to see little Jen get even more smacks to her perky backside, in front of these old fogies.
hi Dan,
thanks again for the kind comments
. i'm glad you're enjoying the pics. thanks for mentioning pic #11 too. i thought this particular angle was just right for this pic so it's nice to hear that you agree. i think this will be a favorite of mine as well:D . we have plenty more smacks yet to come in this toon
.
daneldorado wrote:My only cavil with this series is that you still haven't decided to shade the molars, especially in pics nos. 9 and 12. It looks a little strange for Grand Dad to have two rows of pearly white teeth, when half of them are way inside his mouth and should appear darker. But that is such a tiny gripe, considering the glorious panorama of spanking we are seeing here.
rats! i did jennifer's mouth and was planning on doing grand dad's too but apparently i couldn't remember it long enough to actually get the job done. one of the hazards of getting old i guess
. maybe i'll remember to check the spanker as well as the spankee in the future. thanks, phil
Re: One Good Turn
Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:14 am
by web-ed
I agree that #11 is good, but I think #12 may be even more exciting. Great OTK positioning, and while I can't see all of Jennifer's bottom, I can see enough to get my imagination working! I liked the way Grand Dad pinned her right arm back, although for some reason her upper arm (right side) came out a little too long, but that's a minor matter. And then there's the paddle! I love paddles, and can't wait to see it applied where it will do the most good! I'll bet Jennifer wishes now she hadn't used such bad language, and watching her fret about the possibility of getting her panties taken down is most enjoyable
!
The old guys who have been sitting around watching, are certainly enjoying the show...