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Lucky cop!

Now it's almost over.

The end... for now!

hi Boom,

delightful story...............and there certainly was plenty of spanking action in this one . i like all the little details in this one.............dresses flipping at the girls walked.......................Katie pulling her short dress down as Clorene and her boyfriend approached..................the way her dress was pushed up a little as she was being turned over....................and the bare bottom spankings too. all good stuff . i liked the reference to Bill Ward and the acknowledgement that you never do F/F spankings there shouldn't be any question about other folks spanking Katie now. personally, if i could be any one character from this toon, i'd like to be the cop . i wouldn't even mind spanking Clorene, even though her bottom is flat and uninteresting . i did have one question though....................what happened to Bullmoose after the cop took him away? thanks for sharing this with us. phil

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Wow, b00m! A new OTKatie toon, and with FORTY-THREE panels! (I think I counted them right.) That shows a lot of work and a lot of dedication on your part. I really appreciate your efforts.

And I hope you receive tons of comments and accolades for this work. A while back, I was posting cartoons here too, but that ended when I posted some of my best work and it went for days without a single comment, so I gave up on that. Guess I'll stick to posting messages from now on. But I'm very glad that you have come up with a new "OTKatie," because your work is, in my humble op, the best stuff to grace these pages.

What's best about your artwork is that although it is tantalizingly sexy, it is clean. All of us who come to this website are aficionados of spanking; but at times, some of the art that gets posted here is tainted by a hint of pornography. Yes, I know that some folks think ALL spanking art is pornography, but I don't belong to that group. I truly appreciate a good story with a pretty girl getting an over-the-knee spanking, especially one in which her short skirt is pulled up. And I strongly believe that that sort of thing is clean and enjoyable to both genders.

This story, in which both Katie and her friend Clorene are spanked repeatedly, by different guys, is marvelous. So are some of the jokes you build into your plot line, like the one where Katie tells Clorene she would spank her too, "if this were a Bill Ward cartoon." Very clever. And lest I forget: It's great that you show both girls with bright red, shiny bottoms at the end of the day. Great stuff!

Keep on keepin' the faith, b00m!

Cheers,
Dan

overbarrel49 wrote:delightful story...............and there certainly was plenty of spanking action in this one .

Thank you for your kind words. As is so often the case, you're the first to comment, and I'm glad you liked it.

overbarrel49 wrote:i like all the little details in this one.............dresses flipping at the girls walked.......................Katie pulling her short dress down as Clorene and her boyfriend approached..................the way her dress was pushed up a little as she was being turned over....................

And thank you for noticing the little details. I put some time and effort into trying to make the hems of the girls' dresses look light and airy, and it's nice that you appreciated it.

overbarrel49 wrote: . i liked the reference to Bill Ward and the acknowledgement that you never do F/F spankings

If there ever was a time for an F/F spanking it would've been in this story... but I just don't like to draw a woman over another woman's knee... and besides, Katie would've had to be able to sit in order to do that!

overbarrel49 wrote:if i could be any one character from this toon, i'd like to be the cop . i wouldn't even mind spanking Clorene, even though her bottom is flat and uninteresting

Yeah! Where can I apply for his job?

overbarrel49 wrote:. i did have one question though....................what happened to Bullmoose after the cop took him away?

I didn't include what happened to Bullmoose because it didn't seem relevant to the end of the story, but since you asked, the police held him in an interrogation room for a while and then let him go. He'll be home in time for Katie's next adventure, I'm sure.

daneldorado wrote:What's best about your artwork is that although it is tantalizingly sexy, it is clean. All of us who come to this website are aficionados of spanking; but at times, some of the art that gets posted here is tainted by a hint of pornography. Yes, I know that some folks think ALL spanking art is pornography, but I don't belong to that group. I truly appreciate a good story with a pretty girl getting an over-the-knee spanking, especially one in which her short skirt is pulled up. And I strongly believe that that sort of thing is clean and enjoyable to both genders.

And thank you too, Dan for your comments. Yes, I believe there is a fine line between sexy and pornographic, and I try to stay close to that line without crossing it.

It's wonderful to see Katie and friends back amongst us, Thanks Boom. However, I have noticed that the captions are now starting to dominate the cartoon, even masking some of the spanking scenes, which takes away from your drawing prowess.

solsunbeach wrote:It's wonderful to see Katie and friends back amongst us, Thanks Boom.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

solsunbeach wrote: However, I have noticed that the captions are now starting to dominate the cartoon, even masking some of the spanking scenes, which takes away from your drawing prowess.

Looking back at some of them, I think you're right. I''ll have to be more careful next time not to obscure important parts of the drawing with dialog.

"Drawing prowess", eh? I have to give you credit. Even when you criticize, you make it seem like a compliment. Very diplomatic. And yes, you have a valid point. Thanks for mentioning it.

43 pictures (with approximately 60 separate panels since some of them are two-panel) and 9 separate spankings - truly a magnum opus! This was a fun romp, with Katie deserving 5 out of the 6 spankings she got - I laughed all the way through them ! I enjoyed Chlorene's spankings too, but in a slightly different way - it was more of the "let justice be done" type of satisfaction, as Chlorene certainly deserved everything she got!

As usual, b00m, you came up with a number of ingenious ways to get O.T. Katie OTK! The humor stems mainly from the fact that Katie can't seem to avoid getting spanked over and over again. There is a purity in your vision - as Dan notes, your drawings are "clean" - and also they're pretty much exclusively M/F OTK. Katie alludes to Bill Ward's penchant for doing F/F, and Chlorene believes she has found safe refuge in the fact that you don't do likewise. She was wrong about thinking herself immune from further spanking, but I'm glad you don't do F/F - I don't mind seeing it, but there's a lot of it around already and however well done it may be, it's still a distant second to M/F.

I hope lots of CSR's readers see and enjoy this one as much as everyone who's commented so far did.

My newest O.T. Katie story is a little bit different than the ones I've done before. (Don't worry though, Katie still going to get spanked... That isn't going to change!)

On another thread, there had been a discussion of the spy genre and how spankings could be incorporated into a tale of espionage. I had made a comment at the time that someone could do a story about a female equivalent of Maxwell Smart, a woman whose bumbling mistakes get her into trouble with her supervisor.

After that, I started thinking about a show called The Secret Life of Henry Phyfe, about a civilain drafted into spy work because of his resemblance to an enemy agent. The main character was inept for the simple reason that he wasn't actually a spy in the first place!

So then, I thought, Why not put Katie into a situation like that? The following is what I came up with starting from that idea.

Another thing I did was to split up this story into episodes. The whole story is so long that It just needed to be separated into shorter segments. And then when I started looking for logical places to end each chapter, I decided that I could do goofy cliffhangers and make it into a spoof of the old serials that were so popular in the '40s and '50s

Well, I guess that's enough introduction. Here goes!

Here's the second panel, with the actual beginning of the story.

Katie's new boss.

The expository panel in which a character has to explain an important part of the story to the reader.

A moment of defiance from Katie!

An appeal to her nober instincts...

I hated to stop just short of the first spanking,,, but that's what makes it a cliffhanger!There will be a spanking! (actually there will be more than just one!) I promose you!

What a tease you are,Boom! Looking forward to it immensely.I don't know what outfit she is going to change into, but the one you have her wearing now is perfect!

solsunbeach wrote:What a tease you are,Boom! Looking forward to it immensely.

It's a little discouraging that only one person has commented since I posted my newest O.T.Katie story, but I appreciate what you said about it.

solsunbeach wrote:I don't know what outfit she is going to change into, but the one you have her wearing now is perfect!

Well, I hope you'll like the "femme fatale" outfit that's going to be her disguise, but you'll be happy to know that the first spanking she receives in this story will be in the outfit that she starts out with.

I don't know exactly why you haven't had more comments yet, B00m, but I think it's just bad luck. Phil has been tied up with a serious injury his Aunt received, JimC hasn't been with us for the last six weeks, I think because of personal concerns, Tanner mentioned last week he hadn't been able to visit in awhile so he may have something going on too, and I myself was tied up with board maintenance and some silly "Missed Opportunity" posts and so didn't get to your new Katie adventure until today. Luckily solsunbeach was johnny-on-the-spot or you might have thought no one had seen it at all!

But I'm very pleased with it so far and I think Dan and the others will be too when they see it. We needed the exposition, and although we've only had two butt-slaps so far, we know that Katie's new boss is about to administer a thorough bottom-warming, because a schoolgirl outfit is a terrible thing to waste .

I know you don't need any help in devising reasons for Katie to go OTK, but one idea that occurs to me here is that Katie could be captured by enemy agents who interrogate her using the most modern method applicable to female operatives - spanking! Little do they know that Katie has probably taken more spankings than all our other female operatives combined, and so is able to convince them that she doesn't know anything, but not until after she's gotten spanked but good!

I'm so glad that a second person has seen my latest endeavor and liked it! I'd like to know what you think of making this one into a serial. I did it because, for one thing, posting it all at once would probably take me at least an hour and a half, and for another thing, it takes me so long to complete a story, that, this way, I have something to post while I work on the next one.

web-ed wrote:I know you don't need any help in devising reasons for Katie to go OTK, but one idea that occurs to me here is that Katie could be captured by enemy agents who interrogate her using the most modern method applicable to female operatives - spanking! Little do they know that Katie has probably taken more spankings than all our other female operatives combined, and so is able to convince them that she doesn't know anything, but not until after she's gotten spanked but good!

That might work, but it'll have to wait. The story that I posted a little piece of is completed, but your scenario might fit a later spy story... IF Katie keeps her current job, working for the Security Protection Agency of North Kansas.

web-ed wrote:we know that Katie's new boss is about to administer a thorough bottom-warming, because a schoolgirl outfit is a terrible thing to waste

So, you and solosunbeach both like the plaid skirt! I'll keep that in mind for future stories!