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hugob00m wrote:Ahhhh! The first swat! And you're right, Raquel doesn't seem to be too sympathetic about her friend getting spanked! Hmmm! I wonder if, at some time in the past, Raquel took the sole blame for something they were both guilty of, and now it's time for turnabout! ...Maybe. Anyway, she seems to know sometrhing about the dress... and she seems to agree that Oliver is doing the right thing to spank her for buying it!

hi Boom,

i like it that my toons always seem to get you thinking . i'm not sure about anything in the past but Penny and Raquel are friends and neighbors so they probably know all kinds of stuff about each other................like whether they've been naughty and might deserve a spanking .

hugob00m wrote: However... I somehow think that Raquel won't be getting off Scot-free!

yeah, you seen a number of my toons by now and i will admit to being a bit predictable .

hugob00m wrote:Meanwhile, Penny is already really embarrassed... and she doesn't even know she has an audience! Not only that, but she's still covered by her panties! (I suspect that situation isn't going to last much longer! )

I'm looking forward to more!

see previous comment thanks, phil

O.K., I'm just a bit late here, and sorry I missed seeing the first swat before today ! I think what makes this scene work for me is that neither girl fully appreciates at this point that the first swat was just that - the first of many! As the "swat total" mounts up, Penny will become more focused on the fiery sensation, and so will Raquel, but of course at second hand. Psychologically, as the spanking progresses and becomes more serious, Raquel should be unable to avoid imagining herself in her friend's place, and worrying about it even though she does not seem in any imminent danger of getting spanked herself (that's her perception; of course we know better). That's how women think. And Raquel should also be affected when Penny's panties come down and when the hairbrush is applied.

web-ed wrote:O.K., I'm just a bit late here, and sorry I missed seeing the first swat before today !

hi web-ed,

no problem. i convinced Oliver to hold that first swat until you got here .

web-ed wrote:I think what makes this scene work for me is that neither girl fully appreciates at this point that the first swat was just that - the first of many! As the "swat total" mounts up, Penny will become more focused on the fiery sensation, and so will Raquel, but of course at second hand. Psychologically, as the spanking progresses and becomes more serious, Raquel should be unable to avoid imagining herself in her friend's place, and worrying about it even though she does not seem in any imminent danger of getting spanked herself (that's her perception; of course we know better). That's how women think. And Raquel should also be affected when Penny's panties come down and when the hairbrush is applied.

i think your analysis is exactly right.............neither girl has thought ahead past that first swat..................but they will . Penny seems a bit surprised but i she will definitely forget about that as her bottom heats up. as the spectator, Raquel has some interesting sensations and experiences in store for her too . there are "other things" that Raquel hasn't perceived..............or remembered either as we will see as we go along . we will see just what effects the spanking and the panties and the hairbrush have on both girls as we move along i'm glad you enjoyed this scene. thanks, phil

hi everyone,

it appears that Penny's initial shock at finding out that this really IS a spanking seems to have been replaced by...........ah............er............."other"considerations . spankers, do you ever get the feeling that your spankee isn't REALLY listening while you're lecturing her in situations like this . i hope you all enjoy the new pic. phil

Not too much needs to be said about this latest installment - the spanking is well underway now, and Raquel is getting an eyeful as Penny's posterior turns red ! This is the kind of panel that tends to be underrated because nothing really jumps out at you - and yet, everything is as it should be, from composition to expression. If there is a point of emphasis here, it's the look on Penny's face as the spanking is beginning to "take hold".

Now in answer to your question, Phil, "do you ever get the feeling that your spankee isn't REALLY listening while you're lecturing her in situations like this?" my answer is that the spankee's attention is evenly divided between what I'm telling her and worrying about how much her bottom stings. I know she's listening because the point is reached where, amazingly, she agrees with everything I say . But at the same time I know she's paying attention to the sting - it's in a woman's nature to be very worried about how much more it's going to hurt before the spanking's over .

I find it interesting that Raquel's memories are of watching her sister getting spanked by her father... but no mention is made of her getting spanked in the past. And now, again, she is an observer... but I have a feeling that the current situation isn't going to last much longer! Something she said earlier seemed to indicate that she and Penny were up to no good, since she was intending to get there before the men arrived. Maybe more shopping? Drive the credit card bills up even higher?

Meanwhile, Penny's backside is turning a nice shade of red, and Oliver hasn't even started the hairbrush phase of her spanking! She's really going to regret buying that dress! (I, on the other hand, am glad she bought it, because it gave her man a reason to spank her and she looks so deliciously spankable wearing it!)

web-ed wrote:Not too much needs to be said about this latest installment - the spanking is well underway now, and Raquel is getting an eyeful as Penny's posterior turns red ! This is the kind of panel that tends to be underrated because nothing really jumps out at you - and yet, everything is as it should be, from composition to expression. If there is a point of emphasis here, it's the look on Penny's face as the spanking is beginning to "take hold".

hi web-ed,

thanks for the compliments on my pic . this is one of those "ordinary" pics that had to be here to keep the story going. i actually shot this one from a bit farther back for a couple of reasons. 1) i wanted to get the entire scene in to show that the spanking is in full swing and 2) so i'd have room to include all of Raquel's thoughts. as you mentioned, nothing jumps out at you in this one but it was still a pic that i thought was necessary to keep the continuity going .

web-ed wrote:Now in answer to your question, Phil, "do you ever get the feeling that your spankee isn't REALLY listening while you're lecturing her in situations like this?" my answer is that the spankee's attention is evenly divided between what I'm telling her and worrying about how much her bottom stings. I know she's listening because the point is reached where, amazingly, she agrees with everything I say . But at the same time I know she's paying attention to the sting - it's in a woman's nature to be very worried about how much more it's going to hurt before the spanking's over .

hmmmmm, that's an interesting theory. do you lecture while you're in the act of spanking or do you stop spanking to lecture or both? i always kind of figured that if i was lecturing and spanking at the same time, the spankee might not really be paying attention to anything except what my hand was doing to her bottom............or in some cases to how well her plan is working out . i'm always suspicious of the spankee's motivations during a spanking and i take what they say with a grain of salt. perhaps you are right though...............as i said, i'm pretty suspicious of spankees generally . thanks, phil

hugob00m wrote:I find it interesting that Raquel's memories are of watching her sister getting spanked by her father... but no mention is made of her getting spanked in the past. And now, again, she is an observer... but I have a feeling that the current situation isn't going to last much longer! Something she said earlier seemed to indicate that she and Penny were up to no good, since she was intending to get there before the men arrived. Maybe more shopping? Drive the credit card bills up even higher?

hi Boom,

perhaps Raquel is remembering the spankings that were the most fun for her............or perhaps she's just remembering ones that she watched before since she's watching one now? i see that i'm not the only one who is suspicious of spankees .

hugob00m wrote:Meanwhile, Penny's backside is turning a nice shade of red, and Oliver hasn't even started the hairbrush phase of her spanking! She's really going to regret buying that dress! (I, on the other hand, am glad she bought it, because it gave her man a reason to spank her and she looks so deliciously spankable wearing it!)

yeah, i think she's going to regret it . i'm glad you like it and also that you think it's a good spanking outfit . i agree. thanks, phil

hi Phil!

web-ed wrote:Now in answer to your question, Phil, "do you ever get the feeling that your spankee isn't REALLY listening while you're lecturing her in situations like this?" my answer is that the spankee's attention is evenly divided between what I'm telling her and worrying about how much her bottom stings. I know she's listening because the point is reached where, amazingly, she agrees with everything I say . But at the same time I know she's paying attention to the sting - it's in a woman's nature to be very worried about how much more it's going to hurt before the spanking's over

web-ed is usually right (in fact I've never known him to be wrong) but since I have nothing to lose here, i'm telling him he's wrong. very wrong. I would agree to wax the car or paint the house just to have the spanking end. it's just easier to agree with anything and everything. 99% of my attention is focused on the sting I am experiencing. what I mostly hear is like from the Charlie Brown cartoons. you know the ones where the grownups are talking and all you hear is wah, wah, wah? that's what I hear. yes is a pretty good answer to almost everything. I pay just enough attention sometimes to give a cogent answer.

but again Phil, great pic and enjoy your hard work. looking forward to more! this is outside my experience, but it is very entertaining! and I like how you captured the girls expressions. they are right on. and I would rather have Raquel's expression, rather than Penny's. keep 'em coming!

sunflower

sunflower309 wrote:web-ed is usually right (in fact I've never known him to be wrong) but since I have nothing to lose here, i'm telling him he's wrong. very wrong. I would agree to wax the car or paint the house just to have the spanking end. it's just easier to agree with anything and everything. 99% of my attention is focused on the sting I am experiencing. what I mostly hear is like from the Charlie Brown cartoons. you know the ones where the grownups are talking and all you hear is wah, wah, wah? that's what I hear. yes is a pretty good answer to almost everything. I pay just enough attention sometimes to give a cogent answer.

Yes indeed, Sunflower, I am indeed almost always right ! I was being just a tad facetious when I wrote "I know she's listening because the point is reached where, amazingly, she agrees with everything I say." I should probably have added a " " or an " " One of the great things about spanking is that the spankee reaches a point where she will indeed agree with whatever the spanker says. Her feelings might be expressed thus: "Yes, anything you say, sir!"

sunflower309 wrote: web-ed is usually right (in fact I've never known him to be wrong) but since I have nothing to lose here, i'm telling him he's wrong. very wrong. I would agree to wax the car or paint the house just to have the spanking end. it's just easier to agree with anything and everything. 99% of my attention is focused on the sting I am experiencing. what I mostly hear is like from the Charlie Brown cartoons. you know the ones where the grownups are talking and all you hear is wah, wah, wah? that's what I hear. yes is a pretty good answer to almost everything. I pay just enough attention sometimes to give a cogent answer.

hi Sunflower,

hmmmmmm, i think i'm gonna skip over the who's right portion of this and go right to the car waxing and house painting................which does kind of support my supposition that my spankees had their own concerns, and perhaps their own agendas at times, and weren't really interested in what i was saying .............as does the part about Charlie Brown . somehow that just seemed to be a typical spankee reaction to me .

sunflower309 wrote: but again Phil, great pic and enjoy your hard work. looking forward to more! this is outside my experience, but it is very entertaining! and I like how you captured the girls expressions. they are right on. and I would rather have Raquel's expression, rather than Penny's. keep 'em coming!

sunflower

i'm glad you enjoyed the pic . i also like it that you thought i got the girls expressions right . thanks, phil

hi everyone,
weeeeell, now, Penny's bottom is bouncing and bucking nicely now and it seems to have caused everyone concerned to draw some conclusions about this spanking . funny how 3 people getting the same information can all draw DIFFERENT conclusions . i hope you enjoy this episode . phil

hi Phil,

great new pic! Oliver and Raquel seem to be enjoying themselves and Penny, not so much. and I have a feeling that is about to get more interesting and entertaining for Raquel as Penny loses her panties! and more fun for Oliver too. and right about now poor Penny is really, really sorry, but will get even more sorry i'm sure! thanks Phl! because again, you captured he girls expressions!

sunflower

sunflower309 wrote:hi Phil,

great new pic

hi Sunflower,

i'm glad you liked it .

sunflower309 wrote: Oliver and Raquel seem to be enjoying themselves and Penny, not so much. and I have a feeling that is about to get more interesting and entertaining for Raquel as Penny loses her panties! and more fun for Oliver too.

Oliver is enjoying making his point for sure for sure . Raquel is still giggling a bit but her feelings seem to me to be changing somewhat as the spanking goes along . i agree with you that Raquel's view of the spanking is going to get more interesting although, since she can't take her eyes off of Penny's spanking, it must be pretty interesting right now . we'll see what kind of reactions she has as things progress .

sunflower309 wrote:and right about now poor Penny is really, really sorry, but will get even more sorry i'm sure!

when you say Penny is really sorry did you mean sorry for behaving badly or sorry she's getting a spanking? you spankees are pretty tricky and i've learned to be a bit suspicious .

sunflower309 wrote: thanks Phl! because again, you captured he girls expressions!

thanks for your compliment about the girl's expressions............i thought they were just about right too . thanks, phil

Ooooh! Penny's cute little backside is already such a bright shade of red... and Oliver hasn't even started with the hairbrush! His comment about working too hard makes me think that, maybe, he's about to reach for it! Is he going to pull her panties down at the same time... or do it in steps?

And I've wondered all along what Raquel has been up to. When she first arrived at Oliver and Penny's place, she had been hoping to get there before the men. Why? I'm looking forward to seeing Raquel's man show up. I think... like Lucy... she has some 'splainin' to do! Maybe then, he... and the audience, will find out what Raquel was planning for that afternoon. (Somehow, I think her plans, whatever they were, are going to be superceded by... well... if I had to guess... A GOOD SPANKING! )

I love what you've done with the story so far, and I'm looking forward to more!

overbarrel49 wrote:when you say Penny is really sorry did you mean sorry for behaving badly or sorry she's getting a spanking? you spankees are pretty tricky and i've learned to be a bit suspicious .

I refuse to answer on the grounds it might incriminate me!

sunflower

Beautiful stuff, Phil. Your story line seems to be suggesting that we are all in for a nice view of a double spanking. I think that's what b00m is expecting, too. How much longer till we see Raquel's guy?

Cheers,
Dan

sunflower309 wrote:

overbarrel49 wrote:when you say Penny is really sorry did you mean sorry for behaving badly or sorry she's getting a spanking? you spankees are pretty tricky and i've learned to be a bit suspicious .

I refuse to answer on the grounds it might incriminate me!

sunflower

Right now, I'd say that Penny is sorry she's getting a spanking, but that's all. Therefore, the spanking will have to continue until she's genuinely sorry for busting the budget! An interesting question is, will Raquel's boyfriend Quinton arrive on the scene before or after this point is reached? And what will his reaction be to seeing not only Penny getting spanked, but Raquel watching the spanking?

hugob00m wrote:Ooooh! Penny's cute little backside is already such a bright shade of red... and Oliver hasn't even started with the hairbrush! His comment about working too hard makes me think that, maybe, he's about to reach for it! Is he going to pull her panties down at the same time... or do it in steps?

hi Boom,

i'm glad you're enjoying the view of Penny's rapidly reddening backside . as far as what actions Oliver will take next, we'll just have to wait till Friday to find out .

hugob00m wrote:And I've wondered all along what Raquel has been up to. When she first arrived at Oliver and Penny's place, she had been hoping to get there before the men. Why? I'm looking forward to seeing Raquel's man show up. I think... like Lucy... she has some 'splainin' to do! Maybe then, he... and the audience, will find out what Raquel was planning for that afternoon. (Somehow, I think her plans, whatever they were, are going to be superceded by... well... if I had to guess... A GOOD SPANKING! )

if you look back at the earlier pics, you'll see that Raquel was just going over to tell Penny when they were going shopping the next day and then got caught up in watching Penny's spanking.

hugob00m wrote:I love what you've done with the story so far, and I'm looking forward to more!

i'm glad you're enjoying the toon . more coming up. thanks, phil

sunflower309 wrote: I refuse to answer on the grounds it might incriminate me!

sunflower

uh-huh . phil