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...And now... We go back to S.P.A.N.K. headquarters, and see that Mr. Argyle is still "interrogating" Delores...

Hiya b00m... Thanks for treating us to a new OTKatie story. I like the way it starts, and I'm glad you brought the spanking(s) right in, after only five panels.

I notice that Argyle seems to spank with his left hand. But Agent Rednor seems to use his RIGHT hand for that purpose. And that leads me to suspect that you may have something planned, something along the lines of your "Katie's Thanksgiving" story from a few years back.

Remember that one? Katie and her sister go to their parents' house for Thanksgiving dinner... together with both girls' new boyfriends. It turns out that both girls start behaving like brats, yelling at each other and stuff, and to keep the peace, the guys decide to give their girls some OTK spankings... all with their mother's blessing, of course.

And you end the story with BOTH girls being spanked at the same time, by their respective boyfriends. Because you have to show both spankings in the same panel, it is necessary for one of the guys to be a right-hander, while the other is a southpaw. (Well, not literally "necessary," but it makes more sense that way.)

Now I think of it, you did the same thing with a double spanking for Katie and Clorene when they went shopping for Tartan Blend Coffee. This time, the girls were spanked by Officer Yank (a righty) and store manager "Mr. Ross" (a left-hander).

Guess you can tell: I do like seeing girls getting a double spanking.

Cheers,
Dan

I'm glad you're enjoying part two of this story.

daneldorado wrote: notice that Argyle seems to spank with his left hand. But Agent Rednor seems to use his RIGHT hand for that purpose. And that leads me to suspect that you may have something planned, something along the lines of your "Katie's Thanksgiving" story from a few years back.

This time around, I don't have any plans to do a double spanking. Argyle is a lefty because I made him lefthanded in an earlier story. Since you like the double spanking panels, I'll try to come up with one for my next story.

Meanwhile... Katie and Delores ARE going to get more spankings... just not together.

hi Boom,

nice shot of Delores walking along in panel 013...........i always like those bouncing bottoms as the girls stroll along in your toons . i see it didn't take Mr. Argyle long to see through Delores' disguise in panel 014 . i always like the way you depict that little skip step when one of the men pats one of the girls on the bottom . i also like the way Delores skirt is flipping up and giving us a peek of her bottom cheek as he leads her away for her spanking . i like the expressions in panel 015 as Argyle turns a snarling Delores over his knee . funny but he's not snarling at all . as always, Argyle's hand is properly placed for the task . in panel 016 i love the skimpy panties Delores is wearing as well as her kicking legs and her panicked expression...........and of course, i love the straight on view of her shiny hiney in the second view . btw, i certainly approve of this method of interrogation . in panel 017 i like Katie's kicking legs and stretched hands...........must be a pretty good spanking . Katie is being very clever here...........not bad thinking for a girl with her bottom on fire. i guess necessity is the mother of invention after all . in panel 018, Katie looks very cute lying over his lap with her deeply blushed cheeks and stinging bottom although............not as cute as she does in the second part as she rubs her bottom . Katie even looks good with that coat on in panel 019. we can still see the shape of her stinging bottom . i like Katie's expression in panel 021............she obviously finds the idea of Delores getting a paddling to be a satisfying one............me too for that matter in the last panel, you have a great OTK position with her head a bit lower than her bottom. Delores is very stubborn, which needs to be spanked out of her . good thing Argyle is an experienced interrogator . i can't wait to see what happens next . thanks for sharing . phil

overbarrel49 wrote:nice shot of Delores walking along in panel 013...........i always like those bouncing bottoms as the girls stroll along in your toons.

I'm glad you enjoy that. A wiggling, jiggling, bouncing bottom can be so much fun to watch! That's ONE of the reasons Argyle had to reach out and give her a pat as she walked by. The other reason...

overbarrel49 wrote:i see it didn't take Mr. Argyle long to see through Delores' disguise in panel 014.

Not long at all!

overbarrel49 wrote:i always like the way you depict that little skip step when one of the men pats one of the girls on the bottom.

Yes! That was one of the poses that, once I had drawn it the first time, I decided to save it and re-use it over and over.

overbarrel49 wrote:i also like the way Delores skirt is flipping up and giving us a peek of her bottom cheek as he leads her away for her spanking.

That's one of the nice things about a pleated skirt (especially one that's that short!)

overbarrel49 wrote:i like the expressions in panel 015 as Argyle turns a snarling Delores over his knee. funny but he's not snarling at all. as always, Argyle's hand is properly placed for the task.

Uh huh! And maybe the placement of his hand is part of the reason he's got such a big smile! Delores. on the other hand, has a hot, stinging bottom to look forward to!

overbarrel49 wrote:in panel 016 i love the skimpy panties Delores is wearing as well as her kicking legs and her panicked expression...........and of course, i love the straight on view of her shiny hiney in the second view.

They ARE skimpy... not quite a thong, but they leave a large area of her butt exposed and vulnerable! I've noticed that in some real-life spanking videos, the spanker discourages the spankee from moving her legs... but to an observer, watching the poor girl kick is a big part of the fun! Don't you think so?

overbarrel49 wrote:in panel 017 i like Katie's kicking legs and stretched hands...........must be a pretty good spanking.

Yeah. And I decided to do a movie-inspired trick. I cut away near the end of the last episode and then cut back in the middle of this one... to give the implication that this spanking has been going on for quite some time!

overbarrel49 wrote: Katie is being very clever here...........not bad thinking for a girl with her bottom on fire. i guess necessity is the mother of invention after all.

Poor Katie has never been able to talk her way out of a spanking... but this time she talked Agent Rednor into ending it sooner than he would've.

overbarrel49 wrote:i like Katie's expression in panel 021............she obviously finds the idea of Delores getting a paddling to be a satisfying one............me too for that matter

This is one spanking that Katie clearly DIDN'T DESERVE! And if she can get some kind of revenge, I think she's entitled to it!

overbarrel49 wrote:in the last panel, you have a great OTK position with her head a bit lower than her bottom. Delores is very stubborn, which needs to be spanked out of her. good thing Argyle is an experienced interrogator.

I'd say it's a win-win for Argyle! If Delores talks, he can mount a rescue ioperation to go get his agent out of danger. ...And if she doesn't talk, he can go on spanking her until his arm gets tired, just like he's threatened to do! What about the other part of his threat? Do you think he'll have to resort to using the Dan-o-matic?

overbarrel49 wrote: i can't wait to see what happens next. thanks for sharing.

I've got the next episode drawn and ready. I'm planning to post it next week... AFTER I've gotten some feedback on this one. Thanks for your comments. You and Dan are the first two, and I appreciate that.

It occurs to me to wonder how Argyle recognized Delores through her disguise. Not that I'm complaining - it certainly justified him in taking her OTK ! Of course, Katie is getting spanked also, but we expect that . Katie was rather clever to induce Rednor to defect, but his real motivation seems to be wanting to spank Delores, for which I can't blame him. Of course, as long as Delores is disguised as Katie, there's always the possibility of a comic mix-up in which Rednor believes he's spanking Delores, but it's really poor Katie again !

I'm looking forward to seeing Delores break under "torture" - surely it won't be long before she starts crying her eyes out, especially if the dreaded Dan-O-Matic is used! Even then, though, since Katie and Rednor will have left Delores' hideout, Argyle won't find anything there. It would be ironic if he heads over to Delores' hideout while Katie and Rednor make their way to S.P.A.N.K. HQ, missing each other in passing, but it would also have some comic possibilities.

I eagerly await the next episode!

B00m,

I am really enjoying your new Katie! again, Phil is more eloquent than me, but I do know what I like! thanks for sharing your hard work......again!!! looking forward to more.

and thanks web-ed for sharing some of the older Katies. Phil had shared where his older stuff was and now to see some early Katies is quite a treat for me. Phil and b00m are my 2 favorite artists by far! I look forward to many many more offerings from these 2!

and b00m. I will let you know if I think you ever are "off the mark" on a spankees reaction. but so far you have done a fantastic job and everything is right on the money! I'm always here for any "technical" advice you might want or need!

Sunflower

web-ed wrote:It occurs to me to wonder how Argyle recognized Delores through her disguise. Not that I'm complaining - it certainly justified him in taking her OTK ! Of course, Katie is getting spanked also, but we expect that . Katie was rather clever to induce Rednor to defect, but his real motivation seems to be wanting to spank Delores, for which I can't blame him. Of course, as long as Delores is disguised as Katie, there's always the possibility of a comic mix-up in which Rednor believes he's spanking Delores, but it's really poor Katie again !

I'm looking forward to seeing Delores break under "torture" - surely it won't be long before she starts crying her eyes out, especially if the dreaded Dan-O-Matic is used! Even then, though, since Katie and Rednor will have left Delores' hideout, Argyle won't find anything there. It would be ironic if he heads over to Delores' hideout while Katie and Rednor make their way to S.P.A.N.K. HQ, missing each other in passing, but it would also have some comic possibilities.

I eagerly await the next episode!

I doubt that Delores could affect Katie's innocent look, she is too hard faced.

web-ed wrote:It occurs to me to wonder how Argyle recognized Delores through her disguise. Not that I'm complaining - it certainly justified him in taking her OTK!

Yess! And I believe Argyle would use any excuse he could to give a spanking to a pretty girl! Regarding his quick recognition of the phony Katie... If you haven't already figured it out, it will be explained in the episode after the next one.

web-ed wrote:Of course, Katie is getting spanked also, but we expect that. Katie was rather clever to induce Rednor to defect, but his real motivation seems to be wanting to spank Delores, for which I can't blame him.

Will she be able to negotiate on Rednor's behalf, and persuade Argyle to let the defecting enemy agent spank his evil boss? Maybe... if he still believes Delores needs further punishment... AFTER his own hand has gotten tired. It might save him the trouble of firing up the Dan-o-matic.

web-ed wrote:Of course, as long as Delores is disguised as Katie, there's always the possibility of a comic mix-up in which Rednor believes he's spanking Delores, but it's really poor Katie again!

I'm looking forward to seeing Delores break under "torture" - surely it won't be long before she starts crying her eyes out, especially if the dreaded Dan-O-Matic is used! Even then, though, since Katie and Rednor will have left Delores' hideout, Argyle won't find anything there. It would be ironic if he heads over to Delores' hideout while Katie and Rednor make their way to S.P.A.N.K. HQ, missing each other in passing, but it would also have some comic possibilities.

I like both of those ideas... but I've already done something else that would make it difficult... if not impossible... to incorporate them into the existing story. If I had wanted to do an even longer story than I already did, I would've had Delores go on a destructive rampage and do a bunch of stuff that Katie would get blamed for. Maybe, at some later time, Delores will have to escape again... or maybe she can be released for "good behavior" with Argyle wrongly believing that he's rehabilitated her. Hmmm! I think I'm beginning to have ideas for the NEXT Delores story!

sunflower309 wrote:I am really enjoying your new Katie! again, Phil is more eloquent than me, but I do know what I like! thanks for sharing your hard work......again!!! looking forward to more.

You may not be a "eloquent" as Phil, but I do appreciate your input. Sometimes knowing what you like can be enough. Favorable and unfavorable comments are both welcome. The favorable ones help to boost my ego, and let me know what I need to keep doing. The unfavorable ones can show me where I have room to improve. If you just tell me you like something I did, I'm glad to know I did something right.

sunflower309 wrote:and thanks web-ed for sharing some of the older Katies. Phil had shared where his older stuff was and now to see some early Katies is quite a treat for me. Phil and b00m are my 2 favorite artists by far! I look forward to many many more offerings from these 2!

Yeah, web-ed, thanks from me too. I think the stuff you rescued from Underground Animations is all that's left of any old O.T. Katie strips. I've deleted most of the old stuff to have enough memory to work on my current projects.

sunflower309 wrote:and b00m. I will let you know if I think you ever are "off the mark" on a spankees reaction. but so far you have done a fantastic job and everything is right on the money! I'm always here for any "technical" advice you might want or need!

Thanks!

willjohn wrote:I doubt that Delores could affect Katie's innocent look, she is too hard faced.

You may be right about that.

And, since her deception failed, she's going to have to take a long hard spanking from Argyle.

...And the title page for episode three...

Bullmoose? What's he got to do with this story?

So then... Bullmoose has arrived at S.P.A.N.K. headquarters just as the evil Katie lookalike is being "interrogated" by Argyle! What's going to happen now?

Uh oh! Will Bullmoose be fooled by the fake Katie?

Delores tries to get Bullmoose's sympathy... Will it work?

Bullmoose isn't fooled... but how did he know?

Argyle explains... but will Bullmoose believe him instead of the Katie doppelganger?

Did anybody REALLY not know what Bullmoose's reaction would be?