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She's right about me not wanting to draw an F/F panel... and besides... Do you REALLY think Katie could sit down with her nemesis across her lap? But... what if there's another way for Katie to gt her revenge?

But Katie has an idea!

Ah ha! The infamous Dan-o-matic!

Katie knows quite well what the Dan-o-matic is capable of!

Uh oh! Caught by Dave, the surveillance guy!

And so, Katie is going to get spanked again... ...but what about Delores?

Oh yeah! Dan, you asked if I was going to do a double spanking in this story and I said not this time... but here's a SORT OF double spanking: Delores on Dave's monitors and Katie right there across his lap!

Dave has finished with Katie's most recent punishment, and he's sending her home... But it looks like he's not in much of a hurry to end the "unauthorized" spanking that Delores is getting! Well... that's it for the week. Next time, we'll see if Katie is able to get away without yet another spanking... And Delores? Hmmmm! Does anyone think Dave's going to rescue her before the machine delivers its thousandth swat?

A 1000 SPANKS FROM THE DAN-O- MATIC!! HER BOTTOM IS GOING TO BE VERY TENDER TRIPLE OUCH!!!!!

Hi, Butch.
Thanks for being the first to comment on my newest O.T. Katie cartoon.

butch46163@yahoo.com wrote:A 1000 SPANKS FROM THE DAN-O- MATIC!! HER BOTTOM IS GOING TO BE VERY TENDER TRIPLE OUCH!!!!!

Heh heh! Tripple ouch indeed! And that's after she's already been spanked by Argyle, Bullmoose, and Rednor!

hi Boom,

that was good thinking on your part in panel 058 to give us one last look at Katie's well spanked bottom with her nighty still on. i did INDEED enjoy it ............such a nicely shaped bottom with red showing though the nighty . i also enjoyed the view of Delores removing Katie's clothing. i also like the dialog between the 2 well spanked young ladies in the first 2 panels . i always figured that if 2 girls who get spanked ever got together, they would discuss those spankings with each other . i like the bottom rubbing Delores is doing in panel 060.......that's always cute . Delores seems very subdued too as she follows meekly along behind Katie. in panel 061 i thought you did a great job of depicting Delores' surprise at being grabbed by the Dan-O-Matic.............both her expression and the reaction of her body . of course, the girls look cute too..........Katie rubbing and Delores' bottom just hanging out, waiting to be spanked . i like the OTK position in panel 062...........that is, assuming the Dan-O-Matic has knees . i also like the way you have depicted Delores with her legs dangling helplessly in it's clutches. i am a bit confused that the Dan-O-Matic is not smiling though . in panel 063 those legs now have something to do other than dangling though . i love Katie's look of terror as she realizes Dave is going to spank her again in panel 064 and the peek at Katie's red bottom as her skirt flip up a bit . both girls kicking and squalling in panel 065 . i love Katie's little "skip step" as Dave sends her on her way with a pat on the bottom in the last panel . poor Katie is so naive . can't wait for the next episode. thanks, phil

Hi, Phil,
Thanks for your very detailed comment on my newest O.T.Katie episode.

overbarrel49 wrote:that was good thinking on your part in panel 058 to give us one last look at Katie's well spanked bottom with her nighty still on. i did INDEED enjoy it ............such a nicely shaped bottom with red showing though the nighty.

I enjoyed that view too!

overbarrel49 wrote:i also enjoyed the view of Delores removing Katie's clothing.

I suppose someone could accuse me of including a gratuitous undressing scene... but I think I could say it was integral to the story... and it was fun too!

overbarrel49 wrote:i also like the dialog between the 2 well spanked young ladies in the first 2 panels. i always figured that if 2 girls who get spanked ever got together, they would discuss those spankings with each other.

Yeah. I'm just guessing on that. I've never actually heard a conversation like the one in that part of the story. However, I figure that Delores is being contrite... or putting on a really good act. And Katie has every right to be angry with the villainess (or maybe former villainess?) who is clearly to blame.

But I wonder... Does anyone think they would've talked a little more about the men? Delores could've said something like "WOW! That boyfriend of yours sure has a powerful left arm!" And Katie might've responded "Ooooh! Don't I know it!" Y'know, stuff like that?

overbarrel49 wrote:i like the bottom rubbing Delores is doing in panel 060.......that's always cute. Delores seems very subdued too as she follows meekly along behind Katie.

I always ehjoy seeing a girl who's been spanked recently rubbing her tender bottom! Of course, Delores is still being contrite...(or maybe pretending) and besides... I don't think she really believes Katie is going to do anything to her.

overbarrel49 wrote:i thought you did a great job of depicting Delores' surprise at being grabbed by the Dan-O-Matic.............both her expression and the reaction of her body.

I'm glad you like that. I think Delores would have to be taken completely by surprise that Katie woud actually subject her to a spanking from the Dan-o-matic!

overbarrel49 wrote:i like the OTK position in panel 062...........that is, assuming the Dan-O-Matic has knees

Yeah. Those tubes underneathe her abdomen are there to serve the function of a man's lap during a spanking.

overbarrel49 wrote:i also like the way you have depicted Delores with her legs dangling helplessly in it's clutches. i am a bit confused that the Dan-O-Matic is not smiling though.

In panel 62, the Dan-o-matic is stil maneuvering her into position... Later, it'll be smiling.

overbarrel49 wrote:i love Katie's look of terror as she realizes Dave is going to spank her again in panel 064 and the peek at Katie's red bottom as her skirt flip up a bit.

Heh heh! This'll make her sixth spanking in this story! (And don't forget, this story began on the same night the previous story ended... so then... that makes seven spankings for Katie within the last 24 hours! )

overbarrel49 wrote: both girls kicking and squalling in panel 065.

Lucky Dave! He's gets to record Delores getting paddled by th Dan-o-matic, while Katie is there in person over his knee!

overbarrel49 wrote:i love Katie's little "skip step" as Dave sends her on her way with a pat on the bottom in the last panel. poor Katie is so naive. can't wait for the next episode.

I don't think you'll call it a "spoiler" if I say that Katie is in for another spanking bofore it's all over!

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Hiya b00m... Like all your fans, I am enjoying your latest OTKatie story.

But now I'm wondering: Is Katie NAIVE?

For example: In your earlier work, called "OTKatie and Clorene," you show us a panel where Clorene's boyfriend, Steve, gets the chance to put Katie over his knee. As he prepares to spank our heroine, Clorene tells him:

"Ooh yeah! Spank her good and hard! And try not to drool so much! She's not THAT great!"

We can read Steve's thoughts: "Oh yes, she IS!" And sure enough, he is drooling as he spanks the little carrot-top's perfect fanny.

So Katie is over Steve's lap, getting a good spanking, but she hears what the others are saying, and she thinks "DROOL? What in the world does she mean by THAT?"

Okay, that's exhibit A.

Now, in the new story about the "imp-poster," Kate is once again getting a good spanking, this time from the audio tech guy Dave. As he happily spanks her, he says: "I don't really have a reason to spank you this time... but I don't want to miss all the fun!" On hearing that, Katie wonders out loud, "FUN??"

And that's exhibit B.

Now then: Katie's responses to these spanking comments seem to indicate that she doesn't "get it." She apparently doesn't see herself as a desirable creature, being spanked by a man (Steve) who is lusting after her. And in exhibit B, she seems surprised to hear Dave say that spanking her is "fun."

There is at least one other example in your OTKatie posts where she seems surprised that anyone could derive carnal pleasure from spanking her, but I can't find it right now. Anyway: Is Katie Tanda really THAT naive? In all the years I've been reading her exploits, I never before got the idea that she is oblivious to the bawdy pleasures of giving/getting a spanking.

Cheers,
Dan

I can't see Dave letting Delores down any time soon. She has been a very naughty girl & Dave thinks she should suffer for it.

It is also the organisation's revenge for their agent, Katie suffering the same punishment on Delores' orders. Delores should be black & blue beneath the belt after this.

daneldorado wrote:Hiya b00m... Like all your fans, I am enjoying your latest OTKatie story.

Hi, Dan, and thanks.

daneldorado wrote:But now I'm wondering: Is Katie NAIVE?

Yes, she is! In fact, from my point of view, most of the humor in my O.T. Katie strips is centered around her naivete.

I don't think of her as stupid... (after all, she cracked the code to human cloning, built a machine that could make instant multiple copies of a single individual, and gene-spliced a human/alien hybrid using the aliens' own machinery!) ...but she does have a blind spot regarding her feminine allure. No matter what, she just can't get it through her pretty little head that the real reason that men want to spank her is that they just want to put their hands across her shapely backside!

The inspiration for this comes from the old Dan Decarlo "boss-spanks-secretary" cartoons. The boss, with his knowing leer, is letting the audience in on a joke that the young lady across his lap just doesn't get. She always has that baffled look on her face as if to say, "I've tried so hard to be a good girl in every way, but somehow, i've done one more naughty thing to earn another spanking!"

The biggest challenge in maintaining Katie's naivete is her relationship with Bullmoose. Obviously, the two of them have had sex with each other... and on occasion, it's happened right after he's finished spanking her. In fact, she's even admitted that she wants him more than ever right after he's finished spanking her! And, at least once, she even experienced an orgasm while he still had her over his knee. In the face of that, how can she not realize that the spankings she gets are primarily erotic? Well... I can offer two explanations for that: One is that, even though she sometimes becomes aroused by the spankings Bullmoose gives her, she doesn't realize that it's intentional on his part... She might even tell herself that it's not the spanking itself that turns her on so much, but the masculine strength of his dominance! And the other explanation is: What the heck! she's not a real woman... She's just a cartoon character... a fantasy of my perverted little brain!

willjohn wrote:I can't see Dave letting Delores down any time soon. She has been a very naughty girl & Dave thinks she should suffer for it.

That's true.

willjohn wrote:It is also the organisation's revenge for their agent, Katie suffering the same punishment on Delores' orders. Delores should be black & blue beneath the belt after this.

I don't like belt spankings myself... but if anyone deserves one, it would be Delores (and maybe Clorene... but she's not a part of this story)

Well B00m, there were a couple of ways you could solve the problem of how Katie could spank Delores when she can't sit down herself just yet (which I thought a very funny predicament). One is suggested by Delores' bending-over position as she removes Katie's skirt to reveal her own glowing behind - Katie could take a paddle to her. The only problem with that is you're still left with a F/F scene. To get around that, I think you chose the right solution, which was conveniently "at hand": get some more use out of the Dan-O-Matic !

And we get to see a paddle used, also. Speaking of which, I have to imagine Dave is in no hurry to rescue Delores - I wouldn't be either, in his shoes. Some things just can't be rushed So Katie gets yet another spanking from Dave, and Delores will have to take her 1000 swats. And as usual, Katie is naive enough to believe her spankings are over. I predict we'll see differently next time, which is an easy prediction to make given the final caption !

web-ed wrote:Well B00m, there were a couple of ways you could solve the problem of how Katie could spank Delores when she can't sit down herself just yet (which I thought a very funny predicament). One is suggested by Delores' bending-over position as she removes Katie's skirt to reveal her own glowing behind - Katie could take a paddle to her. The only problem with that is you're still left with a F/F scene.

Yes, that's true. If Delores was in the standing up, bending over position, Katie could stand there and use a paddle on her. But it's also true that I would be drawing an F.F scene, which i didn't want to do. However... with the Dan-o-matic, I guess I' did an IO/F or maybe a AI/F (inanimate object/female, or artificial intelligence/female... depending on just how intelligent the Dan-o-matic really is).

web-ed wrote:To get around that, I think you chose the right solution, which was conveniently "at hand": get some more use out of the Dan-O-Matic!

I''m glad you agree with my choice. It felt right to me.

web-ed wrote: I have to imagine Dave is in no hurry to rescue Delores- I wouldn't be either, in his shoes. Some things just can't be rushed So Katie gets yet another spanking from Dave, and Delores will have to take her 1000 swats. And as usual, Katie is naive enough to believe her spankings are over. I predict we'll see differently next time, which is an easy prediction to make given the final caption!

You're right. I don't think I'd be guilty of giving out a "spoiler" if I say that Katie is NOT finished getting spanked!

And, It'll be the episode after the next, but Delores will be dealt with appropriately!

Here's another episode...

Katie still hasn't made it out of the S.P.A.N.K. headquarters basement yet, and...