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Another episode of The Black Bird.

...And it begins with a jeep trip on a bumpy road......After the spankings she's gotten today, she must be feeling every piece of gravel those tires hit!

They arrive at the place where the Bird is being held...

...And they sneak through the grounds...

Actually, that was probably a legitimate question...

...Another legitimate question...I've often wondered about that myself!

Mission Impossible meets I Love Lucy!

Uh oh! She set off the alarm!

Unfortunately, there's no spanking in this week's episode... but by committing one little blunder... tapping on the glass dome before Agent Burns had a chance to disable the alarm... Katie has set herself up for the likelihood that she's going to get at least TWO more spankings in future episodes! Stay tuned!

Next week, I'll reveal whose house they're breaking into. It's a character from a previous story. ...And I don't think it's too much of a spoiler if I reveal that Katie will not make it through the next episode unspanked!

'Til then, I'd appreciate all the comments I can get! Tell me if you like it. Tell me if you hate it! ...And... Katie wants you to tell her if the outfit she's wearing makes her hiney look fat!

There was a lot of old-fashioned humor in this installment, in the first part with Agent Burns' blatant, unapologetic ogling of Katie, watching her jiggle in the jeep, making her walk ahead of him to he can look at her some more, and even patting her butt, like in an old Benny Hill routine, and in the second part with Katie's massive screw-up which we know without being told is sure to result in at least two spankings (one from the bad guy for breaking in and one from Burns for screwing up). Apart from the Black Bird, the bad guy's taste in art appears impeccable with some classic spanking art hanging on the wall. Lowering her from the skylight above does indeed remind me of Mission Impossible! and also the two Robert Wagner shows It Takes a Thief and Switch.

Art-wise, I think you got some good effects with the red alarm light which perhaps can be reused next time when Katie will be thinking she's got a four-alarm fire where she sits down! And certainly Katie's skin-tight outfit is ideal for spanking, just as those of the superheroines Batgirl, Black Widow, and Spider-Woman were.

Looking forward to the inevitable spanking in the next episode

hi Boom,

i just love the expression on Katie's face in panel 402 as she rides that rough road on her sore bottom . the sweat flying off her is a nice touch too. in 403 i think Katie's glowing backside could be used to light their way in the dark if she didn't have her hands back there rubbing her bottom . i also liked agent Burns thoughts...........no surprise there . and of course, he acts upon this in panel 404 by having Katie walk in front of him where he can keep track of her jiggling bottom..........he's such a gentleman allowing her to go first . nice shot of her aforementioned bottom in panel 405 and i like Katie's skip step and continued surprise as Burns pats her bottom . good question by Katie in 406 although i almost missed it because i was too busy looking at Katie's over all form which is nicely silhouetted . nice spanking art in panel 407...........i have that one in my collection too . Mission Impossible meets I love Lucy and i remember just which episode of Lucy you're talking about . it looks like Katie's just gonna be hanging around, waiting for a spanking while the alarm goes off . i wouldn't worry about there being no spanking in this week's episode. there are plenty of shots of Katie's marvelous form as well as the expressions on her face. besides, there was a lot of set up for future spankings and i enjoyed the references to Mission Impossible and Lucy . tell Katie that i don't think her bottom looks fat at all in that outfit. as a matter of fact, i would say that her plump, shapely, perfect little bottom looks just right in that outfit . i'll be looking forward to the next episode. thanks, phil

Web-ed and Overbarrel! Thank you both for being the first to comment on my latest installment of The Black Bird!

web-ed wrote:There was a lot of old-fashioned humor in this installment, in the first part with Agent Burns' blatant, unapologetic ogling of Katie, watching her jiggle in the jeep, making her walk ahead of him to he can look at her some more, and even patting her butt, like in an old Benny Hill routine,

I didn't think of Benny Hill, at least not consciously, while I was writing this story, but you're right. Agent Burns really does belong in a Benny Hill routine!

overbarrel49 wrote:i just love the expression on Katie's face in panel 402 as she rides that rough road on her sore bottom . the sweat flying off her is a nice touch too. in 403 i think Katie's glowing backside could be used to light their way in the dark if she didn't have her hands back there rubbing her bottom.

I'm glad you enjoyed that part. It must be tough going on a long bumpy Jeep ride after all the spankings she's gotten... not to mention the ride back to S.P.A.N.K. headquarters after they retrieve the Bird!

overbarrel49 wrote: i also liked agent Burns thoughts...........no surprise there. and of course, he acts upon this in panel 404 by having Katie walk in front of him where he can keep track of her jiggling bottom..........he's such a gentleman allowing her to go first. nice shot of her aforementioned bottom in panel 405 and i like Katie's skip step and continued surprise as Burns pats her bottom.

Again... I wasn't deliberately trying to make Agent Burns like Benny Hill, but there are some strong similarities! AND... I don't know if anyone is keeping track, but I believe that Agent Burns is the first man in one of my stories to notice Katie's BOOBS!

overbarrel49 wrote:good question by Katie in 406 although i almost missed it because i was too busy looking at Katie's over all form which is nicely silhouetted.

If I ever have a valuable art treasure, I don't think I'm going to put it right under a skylight.

web-ed wrote:Apart from the Black Bird, the bad guy's taste in art appears impeccable with some classic spanking art hanging on the wall.

overbarrel49 wrote:nice spanking art in panel 407...........i have that one in my collection too.

I'm glad both of you noticed the painting on the wall. I don't remember where I found that one... It was on somebody's website with no explanation as to its origin. The style looks like it may have been done by a magazine illustrator. Do either of you know anything about it?

web-ed wrote:Lowering her from the skylight above does indeed remind me of Mission Impossible! and also the two Robert Wagner shows It Takes a Thief and Switch.

overbarrel49 wrote:Mission Impossible meets I love Lucy and i remember just which episode of Lucy you're talking about. it looks like Katie's just gonna be hanging around, waiting for a spanking while the alarm goes off. i wouldn't worry about there being no spanking in this week's episode. there are plenty of shots of Katie's marvelous form as well as the expressions on her face. besides, there was a lot of set up for future spankings and i enjoyed the references to Mission Impossible and Lucy.

I don't know if anyone else has ever connected the two. Most of the time, in a serious drama, it's a man who gets lowered on some kind of harness to commit the theft, but still... I started thinking, What if they lowered a pretty female spy on the hoist? And what if she gets stuck there? And what if she gets caught and the owner of the art treasure gets the idea to take the law into his own hands... so to speak! You'll find out soon whose house she's broken into and what he decides to do about it.

web-ed wrote:Art-wise, I think you got some good effects with the red alarm light which perhaps can be reused next time when Katie will be thinking she's got a four-alarm fire where she sits down! And certainly Katie's skin-tight outfit is ideal for spanking, just as those of the superheroines Batgirl, Black Widow, and Spider-Woman were.

I'm glad you're enjoying the alarm light and Katie's tight-fitting burglar costume. I like the idea of Katie setting off a fire alarm! I might have to use it in a future story. (After all, I already had her attract a heat-seeking missile. Heh heh! )

overbarrel49 wrote:tell Katie that i don't think her bottom looks fat at all in that outfit. as a matter of fact, i would say that her plump, shapely, perfect little bottom looks just right in that outfit.

Most likely, no amount of telling will convince her that her bottom isn't fat! ...Just like some real-life women I know.

Here's part five of The Black Bird...

When we left her last week, Katie had set off the alarm...

The person whose house Katie has broken into is about to be revealed... drumroll...

Are any of you surprised? Is anyone glad to see Scottie MacHottie back? Let me know.

What's he going to do next? Heh heh! What do you think?

So now we have a little expository panel... Bear with me while MacHottie gets a little wordy...

"Delores" is revealed as an imposter!