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...And the chapter heading:

Bullmoose gives her a head start, just so he can watch her run!Can you blame him?

The lab? Can any good come of that decision?Huh? Time travel? Did she say time travel?

Some math...

Math and... something more interesting!

She builds a blue box......hence the story title! Yeah, I know, it's a blatant rip-off of a certain BBC TV series! So what?

But we can't have everything work that smoothly, can we?

Could she be a distant ancestor of Katie who gets spanked by cavemen?

Nope. This is not January 2015!

I introduced Elaine in a previous story... Here's the url: viewtopic.php?f=13&t=305&start=120
Right after the part with the "Scarlet Asp".She's Katie's descendant from the distant future who has been exiled to the distant past.

I decided to name the Neanderthal clone "Grant"... 'cause he's got to have a name and I didn't want some stereotypical caveman name like "Ugh". And I was thinking about James Edward Grant, who wrote the script for McLintock!

...speaking of Grant...

That's the end of chapter one... No spanking yet... but I'm just setting things up! I'll post the next chapter soon. Comments? I want to know what you think!

willjohn wrote:Could she be a distant ancestor of Katie who gets spanked by cavemen?

Thanks for commenting so quickly! I was still in the middle of posting the first chapter! Actually, the girl in the leopard skin is a rogue time-traveler, and a descendant of Katie's, who was exiled to the Stone Age, along with the Neanderthal clone Katie made in a previous story. I think we can assume that, during her time with him, she's earned a few caveman spankings!

So Elaine has gone to relieve herself in Katie's Tardis? Not very friendly.

Looks like the Neanderthal has his eye on Katie's most popular feature.

Hi Boom,

I like panel 01......Katie's running in a short skirt so what's not to like I thought Bullmoose following with the hairbrush was a nice touch too . I also like his idea in panel 04 to let Katie bounce and jiggle her way to a head start . in panel 05 it's always good to see Katie rubbing but I think what I like most is the way her panties are peeking out from under her skirt as she runs . I just had to take a close look at Katie's equation in panel 07. I couldn't help notice that she has 2 terms in brackets times each other. Since one of them is 3691215182124-3691215182124, which is, of course 0, it makes the whole first part pointless . The terms following that seem familiar somehow and I assume they are meant to indicate that she's going to get a spanking just for including that first part lol: . That's a really great view of Katie writing on the board......no equation needed for us to figure out what to do with that . I have to say I like the pic of Elaine running in panel 11 . This time we have only bare bottom skin peeking out from under the skin dress she's wearing but then I suppose panties were pretty scarce in the stone age . Looking at the last panel, I have to wonder if Grant isn't thinking about giving Katie a spanking for allowing Elaine to escape . I'll be looking forward to the next installment of this story .

Hi, WillJohn.

Thanks for being the first and the second to comment on my latest O.T. Katie comic.

willjohn wrote:So Elaine has gone to relieve herself in Katie's Tardis? Not very friendly.

Relieve herself? Are you thinking that she mistook Katie's time machine for the other kind of blue box?I didn't think of that... but it would've been funny if I had!

willjohn wrote:Looks like the Neanderthal has his eye on Katie's most popular feature.

Definitely!

That I did. Portaloos. I remember them being on grass verges of properties where new houses were being built.

Hi, Phil.

Thanks for your comments.

overbarrel49 wrote:I like panel 01......Katie's running in a short skirt so what's not to like I thought Bullmoose following with the hairbrush was a nice touch too.

I'm glad you liked that. I enjoy seeing a pretty girl run... especially if she's trying to escape an inevitable spanking! And... it's even better if she's wearing a short dress on a windy day!

overbarrel49 wrote:I also like his idea in panel 04 to let Katie bounce and jiggle her way to a head start.

That's what I'd do... but not enough of a head start to let her get away!

overbarrel49 wrote: in panel 05 it's always good to see Katie rubbing but I think what I like most is the way her panties are peeking out from under her skirt as she runs.

So far, she's just rubbing in anticipation... but later... And, as this story progresses... I don't think I'll be accused of "spoilers" if I say... you're going to be seeing her panties a lot!

overbarrel49 wrote: I just had to take a close look at Katie's equation in panel 07. I couldn't help notice that she has 2 terms in brackets times each other. Since one of them is 3691215182124-3691215182124, which is, of course 0, it makes the whole first part pointless. The terms following that seem familiar somehow and I assume they are meant to indicate that she's going to get a spanking just for including that first part.

Most of her equation is just meaningless symbols, but yeah, I put 3691215182124-3691215182124 in there on purpose. Also there's the Greek letter, pi, followed by the fraction i over 8.

overbarrel49 wrote:That's a really great view of Katie writing on the board......no equation needed for us to figure out what to do with that.

Right! With that to look at, I didn't know whether anyone would notice the board at all!

overbarrel49 wrote: I have to say I like the pic of Elaine running in panel 11. This time we have only bare bottom skin peeking out from under the skin dress she's wearing but then I suppose panties were pretty scarce in the stone age.

Uh huh... and that's why I made her hair frizzy. I figure things like conditioner and hairspray are pretty much non-existent in the stone age too. And if she had a hairbrush, chances are it would get used for something other than her hair!

overbarrel49 wrote:Looking at the last panel, I have to wonder if Grant isn't thinking about giving Katie a spanking for allowing Elaine to escape.

Good guess. I don't think it would be too much of a spoiler to say you're right about that. The main reason I decided to name the Neanderthal "Grant" is because I didn't want to use a stereotypical caveman name like "Ugh", and I was thinking about James Edward Grant, the screenwriter for McLintock! and Donovan's Reef. He once said that all it took to write a script for a John Wayne movie was to give him a hoity-toity dame he could spank and some jerks he could smash in the face. That seems like somewhat of a Neanderthal attitude... but it worked!

Since this is an O.T. Katie comic, not a John Wayne movie, I think I can do without the jerks getting smashed in the face.

Hmmmm... Is Katie hoity-toity? Well, maybe a Neanderthal would think that any woman who's more advanced than a Cro-Magnon is hoity-toity! Anyway... I definitely have a woman to spank in my story... (and maybe two! Don'tcha think Elaine might deserve a spanking herself?)

willjohn wrote:That I did. Portaloos. I remember them being on grass verges of properties where new houses were being built.

"Portaloos"... Hmmm! In the U.S. we call them "porta-potties" or "johnnie-on-the-jobs". I sure wouldn't want someone mistaking a tardis for one of them! (although I suppose a Timelord would have to have some kind of facilities aboard for long trips, wouldn't he?)