hugob00m wrote:Hi, Phil.
Ah! I love seeing a girl being pulled across he man's lap ALMOST as much as I like seeing the spanking itself! (ALMOST!) Poor Xandra must be realizing by now that all of her struggles and protests are useless!
Hi Boom,
I agree

. I've always said that the
preliminaries are what really set the stage for a spanking and get those emotions working overtime

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hugob00m wrote:But this time, there's not just one show going on! I can tell that each one of the other girls in that lounge has her own story... but how much of those other stories are we going to learn? Hmmmm... That's where the unexpected part begins to kick in.
I do think our onlookers are an integral part of this story and we will be learning more about each of them as we go along. As to just what form that may take for any given girl, I really haven't decided all that yet. We'll just roll along and see how things go here

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Although perhaps watching isn't as emotionally overwhelming as actually getting a spanking. I have a hunch that a girl watching a spanking might experience many of the same, sometimes conflicting, emotions as the spankee herself

. I liked your choice of the words "hands on"

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hugob00m wrote:And that one girl standing next to Barb is still saying "COOL... GIGGLE!"
COOL

. It kind of makes you wonder just what's going on inside that mind of hers, doesn't it

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Flashbacks, huh? That sounds like an interesting idea. Of course, there are decisions to be made such as which girl and how it fits in with Xandra's spanking. Peggy, the girl in the purple romper, definitely has some feelings about all this that are different from everyone else, I think

. Now, as for Barb........practically everyone who has commented so far thinks Barb should get a spanking too. They have all put forth arguments about just why a spanking for her is justified but I really don't think that she's committed any spanking offense. As a matter of fact, I would think that she's probably Walter's hero for giving him the information and setting him on this path. web-ed already mentioned all the "curves" the girls have in this toon and there's Barb's shapely, ample, spankable bottom, packed into those jeans right in the forefront of this pic

. Now you've mentioned mentioned this too. I have a hunch my viewers who want to see Barb get a spanking just like the look of her bottom and want to see it bared for a spanking, rather than having any real reason that she deserves one. I guess that's one of the hazards a girl faces when she has a bottom like that and chooses to show it off in tight jeans

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hugob00m wrote:
I see a lot of potential for more of the ladies to get spanked... and maybe the peripheral characters on this story will show up later as the stars of their own stories...
I agree with you that there is plenty of
potential for other girls to get spanked in this toon

We will see just how it all plays out. Your thought that this toon could have some spin offs featuring some of the onlookers from this one is an interesting idea with potential of it's own

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hugob00m wrote:But for now... it looks like Xandra's spanking is not too far away! So... I'm going to sit back and enjoy that show!
Great job, Phil!
I'm glad you're enjoying the show

. Thanks, Phil