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Here's the conclusion of my "Coffee for Bullmoose" story.

An apology from Clorene?

...Or maybe not!

Clorene changes her tune pretty quickly!...but it's too late to avoind a spanking!

Steve and Katie follow...

Clorene gets the hairbrush!

Katie accepts Clorene's apology...

Oooh! Clorene's backside is REALLY RED isn't it?

Has Clorene learned her lesson?...Well... for now maybe!

Now they all go into the living room to watch the show.

The end of this story.I had considered having ONE MORE spanking in the story, but Clorene and Katie have gotten five apiece... I guess that's enough for one day!

hi Boom,

i just loved Clorene's "frosty' attitude in panel 5t002.............i just knew her bottom was soon gonna be well hot enough to melt that frost . that certainly was a quick attitude change by Clorene in panel 5t003 . and even more changes in the next one . i thought it was interesting that Katie only slowly agreed that it might be "fun" to watch while Clorene got her richly deserved spanking in panel 5t005. perhaps that's because she's uneasy that there might be yet another spanking in it for her . i love view of Clorene as she is squalling over Bullmoose's lap in 5t006 . i just KNEW that it was an unwise move for Clorene to question her acceptance of Katie's apology in 5t007 . wow! Clorene's hiney is positively glowing in 5t008 kind of makes me wonder if Katie is rubbing her own bottom because it's still sore or if there's also an element of sympathy there . it does indeed look like a happy ending to me ...........although, Clorene might want to watch her mouth . great toon Boom . thanks so much for sharing this with us. phil

Thanks! You're the first one to comment on this episode.

overbarrel49 wrote:i just loved Clorene's "frosty' attitude in panel 5t002.............i just knew her bottom was soon gonna be well hot enough to melt that frost.

I was hoping you'd appreciate that! Heh heh!

overbarrel49 wrote:that certainly was a quick attitude change by Clorene in panel 5t003. and even more changes in the next one.

Uh huh! A spanking from Bullmoose can go a long way in changing a naughty girl's attitude!

overbarrel49 wrote:i thought it was interesting that Katie only slowly agreed that it might be "fun" to watch while Clorene got her richly deserved spanking in panel 5t005. perhaps that's because she's uneasy that there might be yet another spanking in it for her.

...And there might've been if she had continued her fight a little longer!

overbarrel49 wrote:i just KNEW that it was an unwise move for Clorene to question her acceptance of Katie's apology in 5t007. wow! Clorene's hiney is positively glowing in 5t008.

Yeah. This time around, Clorene was clearly naughtier than Katie was, and therefore, punished more severely... but then, Katie didn't exactly get off scot=free! Heh heh!

overbarrel49 wrote:kind of makes me wonder if Katie is rubbing her own bottom because it's still sore or if there's also an element of sympathy there.

Katie is so kindhearted (and, of course, naive) that she still thinks of Clorene as her friend, in spite of all the times her "friend" has betrayed her.

overbarrel49 wrote: it does indeed look like a happy ending to me ...........although, Clorene might want to watch her mouth. great toon Boom. thanks so much for sharing this with us.

It's definitely a happy ending for Bullmoose and Steve... and hopefully a happy ending for those of you in the audience! For my next story, I've got another spy "adventure" in progress.

..whether Katie and Clorene are happy about the state of their endings is another matter!

It would be hard not to be satisfied with our story's conclusion: the boys are sitting comfortably, Katie and Chlorene have chosen to stand , and Tartan Blend coffee is being served. Justice was served also as Clorene took a hairbrush spanking from Bullmoose! It's interesting to observe, in light of the earlier discussion about bringing some consensuality to O. T. Katie, that Katie ultimately accepts the idea that failure to serve good coffee is grounds (heh-heh!) for a spanking, whereas Clorene does not. I think that excludes Clorene as a possible female character who likes to be spanked, so if you go that route, B00m, you're going to have to create a new female character.

web-ed wrote:I think that excludes Clorene as a possible female character who likes to be spanked, so if you go that route, B00m, you're going to have to create a new female character.

Yeah. I think you're right about Clorene. Either I have to make an all-new character... or maybe start a storyline with Marie, the wardrobe lady at S.P.A.N.K. I've got another Kate Tanda: Secret Spy story in progress.

And so ended the fourth O.T. Katie thread, smacked bottoms and all.

OK, it's still there. I'm glad I didn't lose Kate Tanda: Secret Spy.