A slight detour...
Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2016 4:47 am
After I thought I was finished with my Big Blue Box story, I thought of something that should go between the next-to-last chapter and the last.
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Yeah. For a real-life woman that would be excessive... but Katie can take it!willjohn wrote:1.001 smacks! That's the a spanking and a half, and then some!
I'm glad you liked the sign. She's spanned quite a few years in this story, from the present to the Stone Age, to the 1990s, back to the Stone Age, and now almost a thousand years into the future.overbarrel49 wrote:Nice detour sign..........not to mention a bit ominous for Katie.
Yeah. I always try to make her look appealing, covered, uncovered, or somewhere in between! I'm glad you think it's working!overbarrel49 wrote:Katie looks very appealing in panel 03 as Mac explains where they are, even though her smarting bottom is completely covered.
I was hoping someone would enjoy that delayed reaction... and, of course, when it dawns on her that she's going to get yet another spanking, she instinctively starts to rub her bottom! I love it when girls do that!overbarrel49 wrote: Katie's getting a real kick from her 1000th birthday...........until the realization strikes.
Swatty? Mr. Spanks? I think I've missed one of your stories! A Star Trek parody to celebrate Springrose's birthday? I'd really like to see that!overbarrel49 wrote: I like panel 05 as the time machine removes her clothes. If you remember, I did something similar for one of Springrose's birthdays except I had Swatty use the transporter to remove her clothes as he beamed her to directly to Mr. Spank's quarters.
I'm glad you said she looks cute. I like it when a girl is led somewhere, even it it's just a few steps, to get her spanking!overbarrel49 wrote:Katie looks so very cute in panel 06, wearing nothing but heels and a bright red bottom, as she's led away for her marathon birthday spanking.
I think this might be the first time I've had Katie's nipples exposed. Usually they're covered, but this time, and in this pose, I thought it would've looked to awkward to have her arms blocking the view. I'm not as much of a "boob-man" as most of the guys I know, but I do appreciate a nice pair... and Katie's are rather large... (I think these emoticons are supposed to represent a raspberry... but they're the closet thing I could find to a tongue hanging out!)overbarrel49 wrote:I also love the look on her face in panel 08. I have to admit I'm not used to seeing her breasts though.........not complaining of course.
I call that the "Coffee-Style" pose, because I got the idea from an old Chase and Sanborn ad.overbarrel49 wrote:I can't see her face in the second part of the panel but I definitely like what I can see.
Not quite. I guess if I made him a "Time Lord" like they have in Doctor Who, he might actually be that old... but he's just a normal man from the future... (well maybe with some enhancements to his arm to be able to give a 1000-swat birthday spanking!). What I meant was that the first time I introduced him, he was prevented from spanking Katie... And he's never been around to celebrate any of Katie's birthdays from her eighteenth to the present. However... with this birthday spanking, plus all the spankings he gave her during the Groundhog-Day-Time-Loop, I think he's caught up!overbarrel49 wrote:In panel 09, Mac comments that he's been wanting to do this for a long time..........I wonder if he meant 1000 years.
I'm glad you picked up the smugness in his expression. With such simplified outlines, I wonder how well I'm conveying the attitudes of my characters.overbarrel49 wrote: I love the smug smile on Mac's face as he reminds Katie what's waiting for her back in the present. Katie just looks pissed as she dances and waits for the time machine to fully restore her clothes.
At one point, I had thought about going into more detail about the function of that machine... but I think more detail would've been tedious... AND risk exposing my medical ignorance! So... it's just a ray that fades the redness of a spanked bottom without eliminating the sting!overbarrel49 wrote:That's a pretty cool machine in panel 11. I notice that he only mentions that it fades the redness but says nothing about reducing the sting.
Yes. It's an interesting side effect of the ray... if you happen to be watching from the right angle!overbarrel49 wrote:Of course, the thing I like best about it is that it's blowing the back of Katie's dress up giving us a very appealing view of Katie's bottom and her panties.
Mac really likes those pats, doesn't he?overbarrel49 wrote:Then Mac gives her one last pat as he sends her on her way and Katie's already thinking about what's coming next as she arrives back in the present.
If nothing goes wrong, I intend to post the end of this story next week. I'm glad you've been enjoying it! Thanks for the comments!overbarrel49 wrote:I'll be looking forward to seeing katie getting what she was trying to escape that started all this.
Yeah! Thanks for being the first (and second) to comment on my latest addition to the story.willjohn wrote:First whack with Bullmoose's hairbrush will be a brand new exercise in pain on top of that.