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I was thinking about doing something ghostly for Halloween this year... and I decided that my ghost could be "Dizzie" Lizzie McGill. I'm thinking if she had died recently, she would come back as the type of ghost that Marion Kirby used to be on the Topper TV series. She'd look young, the way she did in the '50s, and she'd be playful and flirtatious.

The object of Lizzie's flirtations for this story will be Jack, her great-granddaughter's fiance.

This would be a big disappointment if it was the end of the story.

fortunately, it's not!

I have a feeling she already knows she's going to feel it! She's sure squirming!

Yes, Lizzie... I like to see your "trademark wiggle" and I think most of your other fans will too.

I'll finish it off with a zoom-in and a fade-out.

And the very last thing to disappear is the hot red glow of her spanked bottom!

And, one last thing: my closing credit.

Some guys call a woman's breasts "headlights" Is a freshly-spanked backside her "taillights"?

That makes the fourth woman in that line Jack has spanked including one from the future and one from the past.

Hi, WillJohn. Thanks for commenting.

willjohn wrote:That makes the fourth woman in that line Jack has spanked including one from the future and one from the past.

That's true. Jack is one lucky guy! And he's spanked Delores, who may or may not be related... but sure looks like she could be.

I'd like for you to tell me what you think of Lizzie appearing as a ghost. I did it in this story because it's Halloween week and she seemed like the most likely character to turn into a ghost. Do you like the idea as a one-time deal, or something that would be worth repeating, or do you think it's something I shouldn't have done in the first place?

IF I ever decide to do any more Lizzie the ghost stories, I'm thinking she'd be sort of like Marion Kirby from the old Topper TV series. I know there were two books and two movies that came before the TV show, but I like the way Anne Jeffreys played the role.

I especially want your opinion, since you're the one who consistently reads and comments on my stories. Anyone else is invited to tell me what they think too. Solsunbeach? Butch? Web-ed?

One other (sort of) related question: Is Halloween a big thing in Australia? It started out as an Autumn Celebration in Europe and then became extremely popular in the U.S. But for you it's springtime, so how would it be different? Or is it even celebrated at all?

I am not familiar with Topper. If that was a TV series I doubt that it got to Australia. I think Lizzie the Ghost is probably best left as a one off as it works as a novelty but can be written off as Jack's dream.

Hi, WillJohn.

willjohn wrote:I am not familiar with Topper. If that was a TV series I doubt that it got to Australia.

I suppose not. It only ran here for two seasons in the mid-fifties. Anne Jeffreys played a sexy ghost (well... as sexy as she could get away with on American network television in the fifties). I was very young when it ran, but I remember seeing one episode that featured a cute marital spanking scene. As I recall, Topper's mother-in-law was visiting, and Marion thought it would be fun to play some tricks on her. (no one but Topper could see Marion, but she could move objects and anyone could see that) Meanwhile, the mother-in-law thought that Topper was trying to gaslight his wife, and Marion's actions seemed to confirm her suspicions. Marion's husband, George, spanked her for her mischief-making. It was fun to see Anne Jeffreys pulled into position for her punishment, but we didn't get to see Robert Sterling's hand make contact on her lovely backside, because the camera panned to her kicking legs and then the picture faded out. In the next scene, she was offered a pillow to sit on, and had trouble sitting even then.

willjohn wrote: I think Lizzie the Ghost is probably best left as a one off as it works as a novelty but can be written off as Jack's dream.

You're probably right about that. As it stands now, I don't have any other plot ideas for Lizzy the ghost.