web-ed wrote:Well! We have reached our story's ultimate swat and penultimate panel, and I think we can safely say Natalie is grateful for that .
i agree with you.........i do think she got what she wanted........even if she didn't realize what form that might take..........and that she is grateful .
web-ed wrote: . Now as we discussed a couple of weeks ago, the bending-over positions lend themselves to being depicted from many different camera angles, and you took advantage of the fact that by using a different angle in each of the six panels (#27 - 32) where Natalie has been made to assume that position. So we've enjoyed a very pleasant variety as the swats were applied (although Natalie hasn't!), culminating in a frontal view of Natalie's face as she reacts to the final swat (which she obviously felt ), so some very good storytelling here. As to that final swat, Natalie's face is at the center of the composition, and I find myself reacting with a mixture of compassion for her ordeal and satisfaction because she had it coming to her.
i'm glad that you enjoyed the different views . i am used to doing mostly OTK spankings and camera angles that work for OTK don't necessarily lend themselves to this bent over position. it was a bit of a challenge for me so it's nice to know that you did enjoy what i came up with . as for this pic, i had this view in mind from the start. it was really the only one i had mostly figured out from the start. it just seemed right to me so i was gratified that you mentioned it . as i think i mentioned earlier, i did do some research by re reading your articles about positions and paddling and did my best to get the position of both Mark and Natalie correct so i was also gratified that i didn't hear anyone mention having any problems with their positions . thanks and a tip of the hat for providing that .
web-ed wrote:Natalie also knows now that she'll be subjected to more spankings in the future, and after a while she'll grow to like the idea (you can't expect her to feel that way right now while her fanny's still on fire from that last swat). Mark may have another condition or two to lay down, and I look forward to seeing that next time along with a very contrite Natalie.
again, i think you're right about her liking the idea of more spankings................or at least of Mark taking charge even if it means more spankings. i will post the last 3 pics this Friday so we'll see what everyone thinks about how that goes down . thanks, phil