A Walk in the Park
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Re: A Walk in the Park
Hi Phil
Is it possible to have some costume drama's in the future. I seem to remember a wild west series you did which I enjoyed.
Is it possible to have some costume drama's in the future. I seem to remember a wild west series you did which I enjoyed.
Re: A Walk in the Park
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i'm surprised that you didn't recognize the older couple who are walking up the path towards the spot where Ken is spanking Laura. they are Carl and Dianne............Barbara's parents from the story " In the Family" that i did a while back.
Ya know, I did not recognize Carl and Dianne. Although I love all your pictorial creations, I only store the ones that appeal to me the most. If you ever bring back Sara Ann and Jennifer, I would certainly recognize them... because to me, that story is the best one you've ever done.
Maybe when it's finished, "A Walk in the Park" will take its place alongside "One Good Turn." That one is gre-a-e-e-at!!
Cheers,
Dan
i'm surprised that you didn't recognize the older couple who are walking up the path towards the spot where Ken is spanking Laura. they are Carl and Dianne............Barbara's parents from the story " In the Family" that i did a while back.
Ya know, I did not recognize Carl and Dianne. Although I love all your pictorial creations, I only store the ones that appeal to me the most. If you ever bring back Sara Ann and Jennifer, I would certainly recognize them... because to me, that story is the best one you've ever done.
Maybe when it's finished, "A Walk in the Park" will take its place alongside "One Good Turn." That one is gre-a-e-e-at!!

Cheers,
Dan
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Re: A Walk in the Park
hi Solsunbeach,solsunbeach wrote:Hi Phil
Is it possible to have some costume drama's in the future. I seem to remember a wild west series you did which I enjoyed.
i did indeed do a wild western for Springrose's birthday one time. you must have been hanging around my toon groups for a long time if you remember that one

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Re: A Walk in the Park
hi Dan,daneldorado wrote: Ya know, I did not recognize Carl and Dianne. Although I love all your pictorial creations, I only store the ones that appeal to me the most. If you ever bring back Sara Ann and Jennifer, I would certainly recognize them... because to me, that story is the best one you've ever done.
Maybe when it's finished, "A Walk in the Park" will take its place alongside "One Good Turn." That one is gre-a-e-e-at!!
Cheers,
Dan
i had no doubt that you would recognize Jennifer and Sara Ann


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Re: A Walk in the Park
they say that misery loves company. probably not if the company's watching though


Re: A Walk in the Park
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Zowie Phil! You just keep on turning up the heat, don't you?
What was originally a simple "tease" by Laura has escalated into a rip-roaring, four-alarm fire for the little lady. As if that weren't enough humiliation, now she's got the added degradation of being spanked before an audience! She's in pain and God help me, but I love it!
Dianne, the lady who is now witnessing Laura's embarrassing ordeal, lets her know that she's been where Laura is now... and reflexively, Dianne stands there, holding her own bottom. For what? For protection? Methinks Dianne's emotions are a mix of remembered pain and a touch of jealousy, now that she sees another young woman getting the spanking she, herself, admits was a blessing. She and her man, Carl, remember their own visit to this bench. The memories of that fateful earlier spanking are gravid with happy memories. And we get the feeling that after her own ordeal, Laura will remember this night fondly.
As for your artwork: What can I say? The over-the-knee positioning is perfect, Laura's fine limbs are kicking nicely and giving us a joyously welcome leg show, and Kenny's strong right arm is fit and seemingly eager to continue spanking for a long time to come. (His left arm, however, seems disconnected at the elbow.) And Laura's exquisite bottom is both round and red, as her ordeal continues.
In all, Phil, a very welcome addition to the Overbarrel canon of work. I absolutely love the way this action developed: A superb take-down of the comely brat, followed by a raising of her skirt, then a sharp attack on her pantied nates, followed by the inevitable baring of the lady's tush... which is getting redder and redder by the panel. What can I say? This is exactly the way a good spanking should look!
Phil, we as connoisseurs of the spanking art, are entirely in your debt. I hope you get a lot of positive reaction to this one. It's a keeper!
Cheers,
Dan
Zowie Phil! You just keep on turning up the heat, don't you?
What was originally a simple "tease" by Laura has escalated into a rip-roaring, four-alarm fire for the little lady. As if that weren't enough humiliation, now she's got the added degradation of being spanked before an audience! She's in pain and God help me, but I love it!

Dianne, the lady who is now witnessing Laura's embarrassing ordeal, lets her know that she's been where Laura is now... and reflexively, Dianne stands there, holding her own bottom. For what? For protection? Methinks Dianne's emotions are a mix of remembered pain and a touch of jealousy, now that she sees another young woman getting the spanking she, herself, admits was a blessing. She and her man, Carl, remember their own visit to this bench. The memories of that fateful earlier spanking are gravid with happy memories. And we get the feeling that after her own ordeal, Laura will remember this night fondly.
As for your artwork: What can I say? The over-the-knee positioning is perfect, Laura's fine limbs are kicking nicely and giving us a joyously welcome leg show, and Kenny's strong right arm is fit and seemingly eager to continue spanking for a long time to come. (His left arm, however, seems disconnected at the elbow.) And Laura's exquisite bottom is both round and red, as her ordeal continues.
In all, Phil, a very welcome addition to the Overbarrel canon of work. I absolutely love the way this action developed: A superb take-down of the comely brat, followed by a raising of her skirt, then a sharp attack on her pantied nates, followed by the inevitable baring of the lady's tush... which is getting redder and redder by the panel. What can I say? This is exactly the way a good spanking should look!

Phil, we as connoisseurs of the spanking art, are entirely in your debt. I hope you get a lot of positive reaction to this one. It's a keeper!
Cheers,
Dan
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Re: A Walk in the Park
Re: costume drama's - What about the student and the less than ethical tutor? The plaid skirt look is always popular
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Re: A Walk in the Park
hi Dan,daneldorado wrote:Zowie Phil! You just keep on turning up the heat, don't you?
What was originally a simple "tease" by Laura has escalated into a rip-roaring, four-alarm fire for the little lady. As if that weren't enough humiliation, now she's got the added degradation of being spanked before an audience! She's in pain and God help me, but I love it!![]()
i'm glad you're enjoying this toon


this is some interesting speculation on your part and i have a hunch much of it very accurate. one thing is certain, it is a very emotional time for both ladiesdaneldorado wrote:Dianne, the lady who is now witnessing Laura's embarrassing ordeal, lets her know that she's been where Laura is now... and reflexively, Dianne stands there, holding her own bottom. For what? For protection? Methinks Dianne's emotions are a mix of remembered pain and a touch of jealousy, now that she sees another young woman getting the spanking she, herself, admits was a blessing. She and her man, Carl, remember their own visit to this bench. The memories of that fateful earlier spanking are gravid with happy memories. And we get the feeling that after her own ordeal, Laura will remember this night fondly.


the left elbow does indeed look weird. it is a function of the male characters i am using with Poser. i noticed this and was planning on fixing it as i've done in many other pics. somehow i managed to forget thoughdaneldorado wrote: As for your artwork: What can I say? The over-the-knee positioning is perfect, Laura's fine limbs are kicking nicely and giving us a joyously welcome leg show, and Kenny's strong right arm is fit and seemingly eager to continue spanking for a long time to come. (His left arm, however, seems disconnected at the elbow.) And Laura's exquisite bottom is both round and red, as her ordeal continues.


i'm glad you're enjoying the story and the art work and yes, i have had a lot of positive reaction to this onedaneldorado wrote: In all, Phil, a very welcome addition to the Overbarrel canon of work. I absolutely love the way this action developed: A superb take-down of the comely brat, followed by a raising of her skirt, then a sharp attack on her pantied nates, followed by the inevitable baring of the lady's tush... which is getting redder and redder by the panel. What can I say? This is exactly the way a good spanking should look!
Phil, we as connoisseurs of the spanking art, are entirely in your debt. I hope you get a lot of positive reaction to this one. It's a keeper!
Cheers,
Dan

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Re: A Walk in the Park
hi Solsunbeach,solsunbeach wrote:Re: costume drama's - What about the student and the less than ethical tutor? The plaid skirt look is always popular
i'll give this matter some consideration. i think i might just have a suitable costume. thanks, phil
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Re: A Walk in the Park #15
The guest appearances of the middle-aged spanking couple, Carl and Dianne, is a welcome development in our spanking storyline. I think the interaction between the ladies is the most interesting thing here. Dianne is genuinely sympathetic to Laura's plight, remembering how it once felt to be in her position, and rubbing her own bottom (perhaps subconsciously) as she recalls the stinging pain. But Laura is in such distress from the pain and embarrassment she might not even fully hear Dianne's words, and isn't deriving much comfort from knowing that Dianne has been in her shoes. I think Laura is about "done" now, in more ways than one.
As for the artwork, Dan mentioned the excellent OTK positioning, so important for connoisseurs of traditional hand spanking. I'll bring up the surrounding greenery, which is really beginning to grow on me, so to speak
- we could almost subtitle this work "A Pastoral Paddling" because of its atmospherics. Your control with Poser is really excellent - I can only think of about three people who have done as well using spanking subject matter: Photino, who seems to have retired, a second guy whose name escapes me and who like Photino unfortunately hasn't done much M/F work, and third guy who did an excellent F/F piece and then seems to have disappeared.
As for the artwork, Dan mentioned the excellent OTK positioning, so important for connoisseurs of traditional hand spanking. I'll bring up the surrounding greenery, which is really beginning to grow on me, so to speak

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Re: A Walk in the Park
hi web-ed,web-ed wrote:The guest appearances of the middle-aged spanking couple, Carl and Dianne, is a welcome development in our spanking storyline.
i'm glad you think so since it seemed a really appropriate development to me


web-ed wrote: I think the interaction between the ladies is the most interesting thing here. Dianne is genuinely sympathetic to Laura's plight, remembering how it once felt to be in her position, and rubbing her own bottom (perhaps subconsciously) as she recalls the stinging pain. But Laura is in such distress from the pain and embarrassment she might not even fully hear Dianne's words, and isn't deriving much comfort from knowing that Dianne has been in her shoes. I think Laura is about "done" now, in more ways than one.
you're not the only one to comment about this. one of my spankee friends had the following comment, "LOL......another great 'Toon.....but this one made me Laugh Out Loud....What A TIME to be socializing and telling tales of the past......"on this very spot, many years ago".....I think that's also a line from The Legend of Sleepy Hollow.....another fine place to conduct an outdoors Spanking..." as you can see, this young lady thought that Laura might not be paying much attention to what Dianne is saying either


i'm glad you like the setting.........while it may not actually be part of the spanking, i think it does add to the overall effectweb-ed wrote:As for the artwork, Dan mentioned the excellent OTK positioning, so important for connoisseurs of traditional hand spanking. I'll bring up the surrounding greenery, which is really beginning to grow on me, so to speak- we could almost subtitle this work "A Pastoral Paddling" because of its atmospherics. Your control with Poser is really excellent - I can only think of about three people who have done as well using spanking subject matter: Photino, who seems to have retired, a second guy whose name escapes me and who like Photino unfortunately hasn't done much M/F work, and third guy who did an excellent F/F piece and then seems to have disappeared.



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Re: A Walk in the Park
by this time, Laura must be wondering how come so many folks are stopping by to watch but no one's helping her



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Re: A Walk in the Park #16
Yes, I think Laura and Kenny will one day be as sentimental as Carl and Dianne, but for the moment, Laura just wishes her spanking were over. In its own way, "A Walk in the Park" taken as a whole when it's completed will represent the eternal condition of young lovers, and I think it's fair to say that young men spanking young women will continue as long as the human race endures.
We have another "moment of impact" shot, and this one just about finishes Laura off, for her resistance is completely at an end and her bottom is absolutely on fire. If Kenny wants to lay down any conditions, this is the time because Laura will surely agree to them!
We have another "moment of impact" shot, and this one just about finishes Laura off, for her resistance is completely at an end and her bottom is absolutely on fire. If Kenny wants to lay down any conditions, this is the time because Laura will surely agree to them!
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Re: A Walk in the Park
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Lest we forget... Do we all remember how differently Laura felt at the beginning of her punishment, from how she feels NOW?
To quote some of her earlier comments, even those she was THINKING and not articulating:
"It's actually pretty exhilarating!"
"I've always fantasized about getting spanked outdoors...!"
"It's all so... (gulp) totally intense!"
But, from the moment the first "visitor" (the female jogger) comes on the scene, Laura's happy mood, and the "exhilaration", changes to "Stop it, Kenny! Let me go! You wouldn't DARE!"
Obviously Laura was okay with having her glutes spanked by Kenny, and why not? After all, as Phil told us: This is what brats want!
But once that first visitor shows up, Laura is suddenly NOT okay with it. Now she is pleading with Kenny to stop the artillery barrage. But to no avail. Apparently Kenny is enjoying spanking Laura and he's perfectly okay with having an audience.
For us, though, we are personally 100 per cent okay with the scene, and will want to remember it always. Because we, as spankos, know full well that the pain produced by a spanking is only half of the joy. We not only want the lady to receive the swats, but also she should feel the humiliation of a good trip over her spanker's knee. Don't want to come off as some smug chauvinist here, but as a veteran of the "scene" I know that the spanking is not quite complete until your spankee begins to feel the humiliation. And the joy should apply to both parties. Fem libbers need not apply.
Phil, you are doing a tremendous job with this "A Walk in the Park" toon. An outdoor spanking, with witnesses? Gotta be great!
Cheers,
Dan
Lest we forget... Do we all remember how differently Laura felt at the beginning of her punishment, from how she feels NOW?
To quote some of her earlier comments, even those she was THINKING and not articulating:
"It's actually pretty exhilarating!"
"I've always fantasized about getting spanked outdoors...!"
"It's all so... (gulp) totally intense!"
But, from the moment the first "visitor" (the female jogger) comes on the scene, Laura's happy mood, and the "exhilaration", changes to "Stop it, Kenny! Let me go! You wouldn't DARE!"
Obviously Laura was okay with having her glutes spanked by Kenny, and why not? After all, as Phil told us: This is what brats want!

For us, though, we are personally 100 per cent okay with the scene, and will want to remember it always. Because we, as spankos, know full well that the pain produced by a spanking is only half of the joy. We not only want the lady to receive the swats, but also she should feel the humiliation of a good trip over her spanker's knee. Don't want to come off as some smug chauvinist here, but as a veteran of the "scene" I know that the spanking is not quite complete until your spankee begins to feel the humiliation. And the joy should apply to both parties. Fem libbers need not apply.
Phil, you are doing a tremendous job with this "A Walk in the Park" toon. An outdoor spanking, with witnesses? Gotta be great!

Cheers,
Dan
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Re: A Walk in the Park
hi web-ed,web-ed wrote:Yes, I think Laura and Kenny will one day be as sentimental as Carl and Dianne, but for the moment, Laura just wishes her spanking were over. In its own way, "A Walk in the Park" taken as a whole when it's completed will represent the eternal condition of young lovers, and I think it's fair to say that young men spanking young women will continue as long as the human race endures.
i like your comments here and i sincerely hope that you are 100% right about this


you're right again and this toon will be over shortly. i think i have an ending figured out that everyone will enjoy. now i just have to get time to work on itweb-ed wrote:We have another "moment of impact" shot, and this one just about finishes Laura off, for her resistance is completely at an end and her bottom is absolutely on fire. If Kenny wants to lay down any conditions, this is the time because Laura will surely agree to them!

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hi Dan,daneldorado wrote:.
Lest we forget... Do we all remember how differently Laura felt at the beginning of her punishment, from how she feels NOW?
To quote some of her earlier comments, even those she was THINKING and not articulating:
"It's actually pretty exhilarating!"
"I've always fantasized about getting spanked outdoors...!"
"It's all so... (gulp) totally intense!"
But, from the moment the first "visitor" (the female jogger) comes on the scene, Laura's happy mood, and the "exhilaration", changes to "Stop it, Kenny! Let me go! You wouldn't DARE!"
i'm glad to see that you're paying attention to the dialog since i spend as much time trying to get that right as i do the pic


it should indeed apply to both parties. i have a spankee friend who maintains that a girl getting her bare bottom spanked in public is actually enjoying the opportunity to "show off" even if she is frantic about it at the same timedaneldorado wrote: For us, though, we are personally 100 per cent okay with the scene, and will want to remember it always. Because we, as spankos, know full well that the pain produced by a spanking is only half of the joy. We not only want the lady to receive the swats, but also she should feel the humiliation of a good trip over her spanker's knee. Don't want to come off as some smug chauvinist here, but as a veteran of the "scene" I know that the spanking is not quite complete until your spankee begins to feel the humiliation. And the joy should apply to both parties. Fem libbers need not apply.


i'm glad you're enjoying itdaneldorado wrote: Phil, you are doing a tremendous job with this "A Walk in the Park" toon. An outdoor spanking, with witnesses? Gotta be great!
Cheers,
Dan

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Re: A Walk in the Park
boy! that area with the gazebo and the bench is turning out to be pretty busy


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Re: A Walk in the Park
Laura wont be sitting comfortably for quite a while and the jogging lady may soon be wishing she was faster. 

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Holy (gulp) Toledo! Will you take a look at Laura's bottom, now? Those twin spheres are now redder than red, they are almost purple! Her attitude has done a 180, too. Instead of trying to force the issue, she now seems downright rueful, like a naughty 5-year-old who has just received her first spanking.
"Sob! Gasp! Sniff! Yes Sir! I'll be good! P-p-please let me up! Sob!"
And now, how does this new couple fit in? Is the woman the same gal who came jogging by, a few panels back? What's HER story?
In the off chance that we are about to see a second couple performing a spanking... Will this be one of those lovely double spankings, with both girls being spanked simultaneously? Your compadre in the spanking art business, "b00m," has frequently drawn pics with both Katie and Clorene getting it at the same time, but I don't believe you've ever gone there.
Time will tell. Oh, and no pressure Phil. You have already favored this website with wonderful spanking pictures, and for that alone we are grateful.
Cheers,
Dan
"Sob! Gasp! Sniff! Yes Sir! I'll be good! P-p-please let me up! Sob!"
And now, how does this new couple fit in? Is the woman the same gal who came jogging by, a few panels back? What's HER story?
In the off chance that we are about to see a second couple performing a spanking... Will this be one of those lovely double spankings, with both girls being spanked simultaneously? Your compadre in the spanking art business, "b00m," has frequently drawn pics with both Katie and Clorene getting it at the same time, but I don't believe you've ever gone there.
Time will tell. Oh, and no pressure Phil. You have already favored this website with wonderful spanking pictures, and for that alone we are grateful.
Cheers,
Dan
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Re: A Walk in the Park #17
I think Laura's bottom couldn't take a second spanking just now, so I'd guess that she and Kenny will vacate the bench (which, as we observed early on, just happens to be perfectly designed for spanking
) to make room for the other couple (we saw both of them before, but didn't realize the guy was pursuing the girl or that she was trying to evade her own well-deserved punishment). By sheer coincidence
Laura's attitude has gotten better and better as her bottom has gotten redder and redder! She's learned a good lesson, but only time will tell if she remembers it.
As for the jogger, I really like knowing the trepidation she feels right now - yes my dear, I'm afraid you did overdo the bratting a bit, and your bottom will soon be as red as Laura's, or nearly so!


As for the jogger, I really like knowing the trepidation she feels right now - yes my dear, I'm afraid you did overdo the bratting a bit, and your bottom will soon be as red as Laura's, or nearly so!

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