An Alternate Proposal

[daneldorado]

Overbarrel wrote:


as for the word STOOP!. I did that intentionally. my plan was to indicate that she had tried to emphasize the word stop by stretching it out. perhaps i should have made it STOOOOOOOOP!


Or maybe STO-O-O-O-OP!!


Cheers,
Dan

[hugob00m]

Wow! This story is coming along nicely! Your latest picture has just about everything I could want in a spanking picture. There's a pretty redhead with a nicely-rounded posterior. She perfectly positioned over her man's knee and he's spanking her with the palm of his hand. I, for one, don't think you took too long with the build-up. So then, what I want to know now is whether she's going to agree to marry him after he's done spanking her!

[overbarrel49]

Wow! This story is coming along nicely! Your latest picture has just about everything I could want in a spanking picture. There's a pretty redhead with a nicely-rounded posterior. She perfectly positioned over her man's knee and he's spanking her with the palm of his hand. I, for one, don't think you took too long with the build-up. So then, what I want to know now is whether she's going to agree to marry him after he's done spanking her!

hi Boom,

i appreciate your kind comments . i have gotten quite a few positive comments about the long build up so from now on i won't be so anxious to get by the preliminaries and get on with the spanking. i'm glad you think this one has just about everything but i am adding one more element in the next pic so i'll be interested in seeing what folks think of that . you will be finding out about the effectiveness of this "alternate proposal" pretty soon soon . thanks, phil

[sunflower309]

I would bet that she does agree to marry him. spanking can only make their relationship stronger. but I bet she will have to think about it for awhile. after her spanking her emotions will be all over the place. it will take some time for her to collect and organize her thoughts. but she'll get there!

sunflower

[overbarrel49]

I would bet that she does agree to marry him. spanking can only make their relationship stronger. but I bet she will have to think about it for awhile. after her spanking her emotions will be all over the place. it will take some time for her to collect and organize her thoughts. but she'll get there!

sunflower

hi Sunflower,

this is some interesting speculation on your part and i like your reasoning. i will say also that i think others have their own ideas about this too and i can tell from the comments that everyone is hoping they will get engaged . we'll have to wait a bit for the actual results though . thanks, phil

[web-ed]

Obviously I've had some catching up to do, but when I finally got around to reviewing the two latest pics in the series I was not disappointed! Natalie's spanking is proceeding in a most satisfactory manner, although possibly Natalie would have a different opinion on that . What a nice view we have of her ever-reddening bottom in #16, while in #17 we realize that she's kicking up a storm - not that it will help her. In #17 I really like the shading of the target area, with two symmetric areas of deep red surrounded by a larger region of lighter red - this is quite realistic if the spanking is given very evenly, and is also characteristic of the wooden paddle if it's applied carefully to avoid misalignment and not too hard.

As for Mark, I'd guess he's not going to stop or even slow down until Natalie changes her tune from demanding that he stop to pleading that he do so. And then there's the matter of those penalty swats with the paddle she's got coming...

[overbarrel49]

Obviously I've had some catching up to do, but when I finally got around to reviewing the two latest pics in the series I was not disappointed! Natalie's spanking is proceeding in a most satisfactory manner, although possibly Natalie would have a different opinion on that . What a nice view we have of her ever-reddening bottom in #16, while in #17 we realize that she's kicking up a storm - not that it will help her. In #17 I really like the shading of the target area, with two symmetric areas of deep red surrounded by a larger region of lighter red - this is quite realistic if the spanking is given very evenly, and is also characteristic of the wooden paddle if it's applied carefully to avoid misalignment and not too hard.

hi web-ed,

i like your comment that Natalie might not agree that it's going satisfactorily . i actually think that she's not really in a position to realize how it's going at this point. right now she just wants the spanking to stop but later, afterward, she may realize just just how well the spanking actually went, if you know what i mean . thanks for your comment about her kicking. it's hard to depict this without the use of motion lines so it's nice to hear that you noticed it . i also appreciate your comment about the coloring of her bottom. it's something that seems to always be a struggle for me to get right. i think we can assume that Mark is taking his time and giving her a thorough spanking here and that is what i was trying to depict so i'm happy to see your comments .

As for Mark, I'd guess he's not going to stop or even slow down until Natalie changes her tune from demanding that he stop to pleading that he do so. And then there's the matter of those penalty swats with the paddle she's got coming...

good guess............you're obviously familiar with my toons . thanks, phil

[overbarrel49]

this looks like a mistake to me

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hi everybody,

Natalie seems to think she can't take any more but Mark has a different take on it . i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil

[sunflower309]

good morning phil!

poor Natalie! I can feel her pain. I would never put my hand back to interfere with my spanking. it would probably result in penalty swats, not my favorite thing! I think Mark has spanked before. he knows how to push Natalie to her limit and hold her there. reminds me of my last spanking. I was begging and squirming all over the place. and like my spanker Mark seems to have her under control, she's not going anywhere. and I truly thought I could take no more, but I got more. and was able to take it. i would bet that no amount of begging will stop her from getting what she deserves . and she will find she can take a little more, as unpleasant as it is! she doesn't realize it now but after her spanking is done she will feel so much better.....except for a very sore bottom of course.

and your logo looks very good on the oven door. another good one phil! thank you for sharing your hard work!

sunflower

[hugob00m]

Wow! She put her hand in the way! That's something I've never seen in one of your stories before! (And something I've never used in one of mine either!) I'll bet Natalie is about to learn why that's NOT a good idea!

[overbarrel49]

good morning phil!

poor Natalie! I can feel her pain. I would never put my hand back to interfere with my spanking. it would probably result in penalty swats, not my favorite thing! I think Mark has spanked before. he knows how to push Natalie to her limit and hold her there. reminds me of my last spanking. I was begging and squirming all over the place. and like my spanker Mark seems to have her under control, she's not going anywhere. and I truly thought I could take no more, but I got more. and was able to take it. i would bet that no amount of begging will stop her from getting what she deserves . and she will find she can take a little more, as unpleasant as it is! she doesn't realize it now but after her spanking is done she will feel so much better.....except for a very sore bottom of course.

hi Sunflower,

first off, i liked your comment that this reminds you of your last spanking. i just love it when a pic of mine make a connection like that with someone . also, it does indeed seem that Mark has had occasion to spank some naughty female bottoms before . your comparison of your own spanking and Natalie's is actually a good analysis of a good, sound spanking and of course Natalie will be able to stand more spanking even though her current panic tells her she can't . i thought your comment about Natalie not realizing yet how much better she will feel after the spanking really sums it all up nicely . i would actually take it a step further and say that she is currently having lots of feelings that she won't recognize.....or understand until later .

and your logo looks very good on the oven door. another good one phil! thank you for sharing your hard work!

sunflower

i'm glad you like this week's logo placement. it's just an added entertainment and i'm glad there are folks who like it . thanks, phil

[overbarrel49]

Wow! She put her hand in the way! That's something I've never seen in one of your stories before! (And something I've never used in one of mine either!) I'll bet Natalie is about to learn why that's NOT a good idea!

hi Boom,

i actually can't remember if i've done this before or not in one of my toons but it is something that happens............and i know that from having had girls do this while i was spanking them...............but only once . i'd say your comment about Natalie being about to learn why that isn't a good idea is a safe bet for sure . Natalie seems to have forgotten some things about getting a spanking but it'll come back to her . thanks, phil

[web-ed]

Yep - putting her hand back like that is a mistake. It's easy to take your spankee by the wrist and pin her arm back if she tries this - just be sure to move her arm as gently as you can - it doesn't take much force. And then she's more helpless than ever, as I suspect Natalie is about to find out ! Interesting twist here, Phil.

[overbarrel49]

Yep - putting her hand back like that is a mistake. It's easy to take your spankee by the wrist and pin her arm back if she tries this - just be sure to move her arm as gently as you can - it doesn't take much force. And then she's more helpless than ever, as I suspect Natalie is about to find out ! Interesting twist here, Phil.

hi web-ed,

it was indeed a mistake for Natalie to put her hand back. you mentioned several reasons here and also, Mark warned her earlier that she would get penalty swats for this after the spanking was over . going by your suspicions, i can see that i'm getting entirely too predictable here . i'm glad you enjoyed this one . thanks, phil

[overbarrel49]

every one saw this coming.............except Natalie

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hi everyone,

UH OH ! it looks like THAT didn't work and now Natalie's predicament has gotten even more intense . i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil

[sunflower309]

ahhhhhh, poor Natalie. I could have told her that was a mistake. having your arm pinned gives you less freedom of movement and increases your feeling of submission. and penalty swats! I can tell you from personal experience that those are not my favorite thing. they are a little harder and a reminder that I need a spanking and a paddling as a I can't even do what i'm supposed to do even during a spanking. it increases the naughty girl feeling. to say nothing of increasing the stinging in my poor bottom! I don't think Natalie has any idea what's in store for her! and not knowing what is going to happen leads to a more frantic feeling. and since this is her first spanking she has no idea what is going to happen. I have a feeling though that Mark knows where he is going to take her. they are on an adventure that Mark is definitely enjoying more than Natalie. at least while it is in progress. she might enjoy it later.

also I like your doorknob.......did you get that at Home Depot?
Natalie has an advantage over me in that I have no idea (well if my brain worked right I would) what I have earned penalty swats for. the only exception is when I am late. (which I am chronically, for everything) I know in advance how many swats I am getting for that infraction. it makes me try to be on time, at least for awhile.

again thanks Phil. very enjoyable and my sympathies are still with Natalie. she has to learn the hard way on what not to do during a spanking. of course a spankees brain doesn't always work too well during a good spanking so she is not to blame for that. but you spankers have no sympathy for us and we will just have to learn to live with it!

sunflower

[overbarrel49]

ahhhhhh, poor Natalie. I could have told her that was a mistake. having your arm pinned gives you less freedom of movement and increases your feeling of submission. and penalty swats! I can tell you from personal experience that those are not my favorite thing. they are a little harder and a reminder that I need a spanking and a paddling as a I can't even do what i'm supposed to do even during a spanking. it increases the naughty girl feeling. to say nothing of increasing the stinging in my poor bottom! I don't think Natalie has any idea what's in store for her! and not knowing what is going to happen leads to a more frantic feeling. and since this is her first spanking she has no idea what is going to happen. I have a feeling though that Mark knows where he is going to take her. they are on an adventure that Mark is definitely enjoying more than Natalie. at least while it is in progress. she might enjoy it later.

hi Sunflower,

it's too bad Natalie didn't have you to advise her . of course, i don't think it would have done much good anyway since Mark had already cautioned her not to put her hand back. i really appreciate your description of all this from the spankee's point of view . i have often speculated about such things and it's really nice to have some verification and clarification from an actual spankee. Natalie certainly is frantic right now which is what caused her to put her hand back in the first place and i think you're right that she's gonna be more frantic as Mark continues to blister her bottom . Mark does indeed seem to be an experienced spanker and others have mentioned that during the course of the toon. his goal is to get his questions answered instead of sidestepped as Natalie has been doing and i did intend to indicate that he has a plan for accomplishing that goal. i thought your comment that Natalie might enjoy it later was very interesting and also insightful.

also I like your doorknob.......did you get that at Home Depot?
Natalie has an advantage over me in that I have no idea (well if my brain worked right I would) what I have earned penalty swats for. the only exception is when I am late. (which I am chronically, for everything) I know in advance how many swats I am getting for that infraction. it makes me try to be on time, at least for awhile.

i'm glad you liked the logo placement. i haven't actually checked to see where these might be available but i have a hunch they might have to be special ordered . don't you get told what your penalty swats are for at the time you get them? i'm betting Natalie doesn't remember what she will be getting penalty swats for right now either . she will be reminded later though. good luck being on time. the ladies i know who are consistently late don't seem to be able to control that .

again thanks Phil. very enjoyable and my sympathies are still with Natalie. she has to learn the hard way on what not to do during a spanking. of course a spankees brain doesn't always work too well during a good spanking so she is not to blame for that. but you spankers have no sympathy for us and we will just have to learn to live with it!

sunflower

more interesting comments on the spankee's viewpoint i'm glad you liked the toon . thanks for your comments and insights. phil

[sunflower309]

don't you get told what your penalty swats are for at the time you get them? i'm betting Natalie doesn't remember what she will be getting penalty swats for right now either . she will be reminded later though. good luck being on time. the ladies i know who are consistently late don't seem to be able to control that .

once I am in place for my penalty swats I am told how many I am getting and the reason for them. and what makes them worse I have to count them, and sometimes thank my spanker for them. but I have to call him sir after every swat. like 1 sir, 2 sir or 1 thank you sir, 2 thank you sir. if I don't count he will assume I did not feel that one and give me a harder one. I have not forgotten to call him sir during this process. I don't know what would happen if I did. but I did remember I had some coming for being late. I did not agree on the number but I got them anyway.

I've been trying to be on time but it is so hard for me. I have spent years being late with no consequences. I do seem like I can't control being late. I have to really work on that and by the time I think of it i'm already going to be late.

his goal is to get his questions answered instead of sidestepped as Natalie has been doing and i did intend to indicate that he has a plan for accomplishing that goal. i thought your comment that Natalie might enjoy it later was very interesting and also insightful.

yes it seems like you spankers do not like your questions answered evasively. sometimes though it is sooooooooo hard to answer directly. I hate my spankings while they are happening but after I like to reflect on them and do enjoy the effects (well, not the sore bottom for sure but everything else.)

sunflower

[hugob00m]

Uh oh! Natalie has just been told that she's going to get some extra "penalty swats" with the paddle for putting her hand in the way! I bet she won't be making THAT mistake again! Poor girl! Her bottom is already REALLY RED, but I guess it can get even redder! I love this story! I hope that you'll consider putting Mark and Natalie in future stories when this one is finished!

[overbarrel49]

once I am in place for my penalty swats I am told how many I am getting and the reason for them. and what makes them worse I have to count them, and sometimes thank my spanker for them. but I have to call him sir after every swat. like 1 sir, 2 sir or 1 thank you sir, 2 thank you sir. if I don't count he will assume I did not feel that one and give me a harder one. I have not forgotten to call him sir during this process. I don't know what would happen if I did. but I did remember I had some coming for being late. I did not agree on the number but I got them anyway.

I've been trying to be on time but it is so hard for me. I have spent years being late with no consequences. I do seem like I can't control being late. I have to really work on that and by the time I think of it i'm already going to be late.

hi Sunflower,

well, it makes sense that if you don't count one of them your spanker would assume that you didn't notice it . i'm assuming that after taking a swat more than once, you will probably count it in a loud clear voice . i could be wrong but i have a hunch that he didn't ASK if you agreed with the number of swats . it kind of sounds like you have a lot to remember................just at a time when your mind is on other things . i'll be interested in hearing how well your spankings help you to be on time after all those years of being late. it's been my experience that a spanking will only help change those behaviors that the spankee actually WANTS to change.

yes it seems like you spankers do not like your questions answered evasively. sometimes though it is sooooooooo hard to answer directly. I hate my spankings while they are happening but after I like to reflect on them and do enjoy the effects (well, not the sore bottom for sure but everything else.)

sunflower

i know i want a direct answer and i want it answered with no hesitation. if you hem haw all around, i might think you are trying to fool me........and you don't want that . it's interesting that you hate the spanking at the time but have fonder memories of it afterward. that does sound right though . thanks, phil