Thanks for your comments, Phil! I can always count on you for a detailed analysis of the best parts of my stories!
overbarrel49 wrote:first off, thanks for the plug for my toon. i really love the idea of it being turned into a movie and put on DVD ..................and what better cover for the DVD than my logo. a love story with a spanking, who could ask for anything more indeed.
That was my way of acknowledging that your story was a large part of the inspiration for mine. I'm glad you approve!
overbarrel49 wrote: i see you couldn't resist a little conversation in panel 2 about the spankee being a red head. i wonder how you thought of that

Yeah. I admit I have a thing about redheads, and so does Bullmoose. I guess you must too... since you seem to feature a disproportionate number of them in your stories. Of course, in the context of a spanking story, natural redheads, with their fair complexions, tend to blush a brighter red (on BOTH sets of cheeks!

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overbarrel49 wrote: Katie seems to be uncertain what to say in panel but corrects that in panel 4. of course, everyone knew that her chosen course of action in panel 5 was gonna get her a spanking............isn't that a kick in the pants
Uh huh! In a way, Katie was right to show her indignation for Bullmoose's "hypothetical" proposal, as web-ed called it. He wanted a straight answer, but he didn't ask her the actual question. But I think she went too far when she gave him a kick while ushering him out of her house!
overbarrel49 wrote: i think Bullmoose was starting to panic in panel 6, leading to Katie's very loving acceptance of his real proposal in panel 7. this is all a bit different dynamic than we've seen from Katie and Bullmoose before. for just the briefest moment Bullmoose lost his usual total command of the situation and Katie took charge a bit. i think it was pretty scary for both of them and even though Katie is happy with the results,
It's really atypical behavior for Bullmoose, that's for sure. Web-ed though it was jarring, and I wasn't actully thrilled at showing him acting like a rejected little boy, but, on second thought, a lot of "mainstream" romance authors think it's important to show the vulnerable side of a strong man. I'm not sure.
overbarrel49 wrote:i think she was actually pretty relieved when Bullmoose took her by the hand in panel 8 to reassert his dominance even though she's back to protesting a supposedly unjustified spanking. i like the way Bullmoose his holding her in his arms.............with his right hand properly placed as well as the evil grin on his face
Yes, she probably WAS relieved to have the "normal" dominant Bullmoose back. And I can fully understand why, wheever he hugs her, he has to reach around and put a hand on her lovely backside! When she's not doing something to earn a spanking, I bet she must get a lot of pats and caresses from her man!
overbarrel49 wrote: no wonder he's smiling too as i couldn't help but notice that he's developing a bulge as he takes her by the hand. Katie, of course, looks really sweet trailing submissively behind him with her little skirt flipped up a bit giving us a peek at her little, green panties. i like his thoughts too.........
I like having him lead her to the place where he'll sit down and pull her across his lap... especially in this context.
overbarrel49 wrote:i wonder just what Katie was thinking about this time. panel 9 is my favorite. the knowing look on his face and her look of shock as they discuss the hairbrush is great. the absolute best part is the view of Katie's plump, bare bottom with her little panties pulled down....................Katie looks so cute from this angle as she's sweating this out . i can almost see her bottom jiggling as the anticipation and embarrassment she's thinking about gets the best of her.
Sunflower's favorite panel was the one with Katie the LEAST exposed... and you like the one with her jiggling bottom pointed straight at the viewer as Bullmoose lowers her panties!
overbarrel49 wrote:i liked your "who am i kidding" moment in panel 10.
Yeah. Even Bullmoose is playing the role of the strict disciplinarian, The appeal of Katie's bouncy butt is never far from his thoughts!
overbarrel49 wrote: saaaaay! that's a pretty happy look on Katie's face in panel 11. there's that happy ending that Sunflower made reference to.
I think that might be the biggest smile Katie has ever had during a spanking!
overbarrel49 wrote:i really like the view in panel 12...............showing the shape of Katie's red bottom while Bullmoose plays with her burning cheeks. Katie appears to be a bit limp here too with her feet resting on the couch and her head down...............WHEW!
If she was a smoker, I think she'd be lighting up a cigarette just then!
overbarrel49 wrote:! i laughed when i saw Katie pointing right at the bulge in his pants..............especially with that look on her face.............kind of like a hound dog looking in a butcher's window. btw, Katie looks cute rubbing her freshly spanked bottom as usual but even more than normal with her panties hanging around her knee
"like a hound dog looking in the butcher's window" I like that comparison... and in this case, it's a FRIENDLY butcher, because I think she's going to get some "meat" tonight!
overbarrel49 wrote: i think the engagement of Katie and Bullmoose will just add an extra dimension to Katie's adventures. this is a wonderful Valentine's toon for us. thanks so much for doing this for us.
You're welcome! And thank you for all the nice things you said about this story. I'll look forward to the conclusion of yours!