daneldorado wrote:Phil, I have a hunch that the latest panel of your masterpiece, the one that begins with Steve saying: "Considering the way you'e been treating me since we got married..." may just be the BEST single toon you have ever created.
hi Dan,
i too like this pic although i hadn't thought about it being the best one i've ever done. still, it's nice to hear that you think it could be
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daneldorado wrote:I especially like the way you have framed this stage of the spanking. His right (spanking) hand is at its apogee, indicating a humongous swat coming. (One of many, no doubt.) Her delicious legs are shown at their maximum best here, with the thighs close together while the lower legs kick wildly; her bottom is higher than her head, indicating Tina's submission despite her pleas to be released. And I love your style of showing us what the participants are saying to each other, followed by the thought balloons showing us what they are really thinking.
thanks for your comments on the pic itself. as you know, it's always helpful to know what people like about one of my pics
. i'm glad you liked the dialog too
. i don't always have both conversation and thoughts but in this case, i thought it was necessary..........especially since our couple is so young and inexperienced. i can remember having some of the thoughts Steve is having now in my younger days. of course, at the time i had no idea what my spankee was thinking
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daneldorado wrote:And, as b00m pointed out, the rosy red coloring of her bottom is indicative of the pain that little Tina is only now beginning to feel. When her sense of outrage begins morphing into the realization that she is being truly and soundly walloped, we'll see a different side of her anger. By then, it will be not only anger, but compliant submission.
i do think her attitude will be changing............if it isn't starting too already
............as the spanking progresses and the sting in her naughty bottom builds up
. i also think that the more Steve sees her increasingly intense reactions, the more confidence he's going to have
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daneldorado wrote:In short, Phil... this one's a winner. Hope you keep it going for a while.
Cheers,
Dan
i'll do my best to do just that
. i'm glad you're enjoying it. thanks, phil