that was good thinking on your part in panel 058 to give us one last look at Katie's well spanked bottom with her nighty still on. i did INDEED enjoy it















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I enjoyed that view too!overbarrel49 wrote:that was good thinking on your part in panel 058 to give us one last look at Katie's well spanked bottom with her nighty still on. i did INDEED enjoy it ............such a nicely shaped bottom with red showing though the nighty.
I suppose someone could accuse me of including a gratuitous undressing scene... but I think I could say it was integral to the story... and it was fun too!overbarrel49 wrote:i also enjoyed the view of Delores removing Katie's clothing.
Yeah. I'm just guessing on that. I've never actually heard a conversation like the one in that part of the story. However, I figure that Delores is being contrite... or putting on a really good act. And Katie has every right to be angry with the villainess (or maybe former villainess?) who is clearly to blame.overbarrel49 wrote:i also like the dialog between the 2 well spanked young ladies in the first 2 panels. i always figured that if 2 girls who get spanked ever got together, they would discuss those spankings with each other.
I always ehjoy seeing a girl who's been spanked recently rubbing her tender bottom!overbarrel49 wrote:i like the bottom rubbing Delores is doing in panel 060.......that's always cute. Delores seems very subdued too as she follows meekly along behind Katie.
I'm glad you like that. I think Delores would have to be taken completely by surprise that Katie woud actually subject her to a spanking from the Dan-o-matic!overbarrel49 wrote:i thought you did a great job of depicting Delores' surprise at being grabbed by the Dan-O-Matic.............both her expression and the reaction of her body.
Yeah. Those tubes underneathe her abdomen are there to serve the function of a man's lap during a spanking.overbarrel49 wrote:i like the OTK position in panel 062...........that is, assuming the Dan-O-Matic has knees
In panel 62, the Dan-o-matic is stil maneuvering her into position... Later, it'll be smiling.overbarrel49 wrote:i also like the way you have depicted Delores with her legs dangling helplessly in it's clutches. i am a bit confused that the Dan-O-Matic is not smiling though.
Heh heh! This'll make her sixth spanking in this story! (And don't forget, this story began on the same night the previous story ended... so then... that makes seven spankings for Katie within the last 24 hours!overbarrel49 wrote:i love Katie's look of terror as she realizes Dave is going to spank her again in panel 064 and the peek at Katie's red bottom as her skirt flip up a bit.
Lucky Dave! He's gets to record Delores getting paddled by th Dan-o-matic, while Katie is there in person over his knee!overbarrel49 wrote: both girls kicking and squalling in panel 065.
I don't think you'll call it a "spoiler" if I say that Katie is in for another spanking bofore it's all over!overbarrel49 wrote:i love Katie's little "skip step" as Dave sends her on her way with a pat on the bottom in the last panel. poor Katie is so naive. can't wait for the next episode.
Hi, Dan, and thanks.daneldorado wrote:Hiya b00m... Like all your fans, I am enjoying your latest OTKatie story.
Yes, she is! In fact, from my point of view, most of the humor in my O.T. Katie strips is centered around her naivete.daneldorado wrote:But now I'm wondering: Is Katie NAIVE?
That's true.willjohn wrote:I can't see Dave letting Delores down any time soon. She has been a very naughty girl & Dave thinks she should suffer for it.
I don't like belt spankings myself... but if anyone deserves one, it would be Delores (and maybe Clorene... but she's not a part of this story)willjohn wrote:It is also the organisation's revenge for their agent, Katie suffering the same punishment on Delores' orders. Delores should be black & blue beneath the belt after this.
Yes, that's true. If Delores was in the standing up, bending over position, Katie could stand there and use a paddle on her. But it's also true that I would be drawing an F.F scene, which i didn't want to do. However... with the Dan-o-matic, I guess I' did an IO/F or maybe a AI/F (inanimate object/female, or artificial intelligence/female... depending on just how intelligent the Dan-o-matic really is).web-ed wrote:Well B00m, there were a couple of ways you could solve the problem of how Katie could spank Delores when she can't sit down herself just yet (which I thought a very funny predicament). One is suggested by Delores' bending-over position as she removes Katie's skirt to reveal her own glowing behind - Katie could take a paddle to her. The only problem with that is you're still left with a F/F scene.
I''m glad you agree with my choice. It felt right to me.web-ed wrote:To get around that, I think you chose the right solution, which was conveniently "at hand": get some more use out of the Dan-O-Matic!
You're right. I don't think I'd be guilty of giving out a "spoiler" if I say that Katie is NOT finished getting spanked!web-ed wrote: I have to imagine Dave is in no hurry to rescue Delores- I wouldn't be either, in his shoes. Some things just can't be rushed So Katie gets yet another spanking from Dave, and Delores will have to take her 1000 swats. And as usual, Katie is naive enough to believe her spankings are over. I predict we'll see differently next time, which is an easy prediction to make given the final caption!