daneldorado wrote:Phil, I'm very pleased to see the progress you have made in this story. This latest panel, no. 015, shows Ulysses taking a momentary "time out" during his spanking of Vicky. And Vicky pleads with him, most submissively, "Please stop spanking me! I'll be a good girl! I promise!"
Her body language echoes her pleas. Her shapely legs, which were flailing wildly a minute ago, are now at rest, with her thighs held close together. That's a submissive position. It might just mean that -- for the moment, at least -- Vicky really means it when she says, "No, really! I'll be a good girl! I'll be EVER SO GOOD!"
hi Dan,
yeah, Ulysses is making progress, as evidenced by Vicky's red bottom showing through her panties

. i think Vicky is now trying to be a submissive as possible, trying not to piss him off any more since her bottom is now sizzling

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daneldorado wrote:Okay, so maybe I'm a dope to think that Vicky's pleas are sincere. But in my mind's eye I think it would make for an even better story if Vicky's spanking should cease RIGHT NOW. The reason? Because that would preserve what is left of Vicky's dignity in front of her son-in-law. Her skirt has been pulled up, her legs exposed, and she has taken a very humiliating -- not to say painful -- spanking, all in front of Steve. But her panties are still in place. The good angel on my right shoulder is telling me Vicky should be spared any further indignity, having been severely chastened already.
well, i do think there is a certain amount of sincerity in what Vicky is saying...................she sincerely wants Ulysses to stop paddling her sore bottom

. of course, Ulysses, like many spankers probably suspects that her pleas are more from a hot, stinging bottom than from sincerity..............at least until he's spanked while longer

. besides, there's still the matter of her disobedience that they need to "discuss"

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daneldorado wrote:(Of course the bad angel on my other shoulder is shaking his head "no.")
Beautiful artwork so far, Phil. This is one of your graphic novels that I will revisit, often.
Cheers,
Dan
there's that suspicious spanker coming out in you

. i'm glad you're enjoying the artwork as well as the story

. thanks, phil