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daneldorado wrote:1. Girl is held firmly over the man's knee.
2. Her skirt is pulled all the way up, to reveal girl's well-curved bottom... but it is still covered, by her oh-so-thin panties.
3. He is spanking her with his hand... the best "implement" there is!
4. Her splendid legs are displayed in the familiar "Y" position...which will change rapidly, as the spanking continues.
Hmmm! I think I agree with all of those points!
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overbarrel49 wrote:When I send out the announcement for a new pic through my yahoo groups, I always attach the new pic to the email and also a plain version without the words. I had one spankee tell me that she likes looking at the plain version of this one because it's easier to concentrate on Xandra and her predicament.
Would you please post that version here?
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hugob00m wrote:Would you please post that version here?
Hi Boom,

here you go :D . Thanks, Phil
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Whew! A moment-of-impact shot - and a very good moment-of-impact shot - for the 19th panel in the series. Everyone else seems pleased with it, and so am I :D . Looks like Barb and the other girl are both getting snapshots of the scene (from different angles) so that they can taunt Xandra with them forever afterwards :lol: ! That other girl makes a funny remark, too, about how they all look just like Xandra when they get spanked, from which we may infer that the spanking of co-eds is a well-nigh universal practice at good ol' Overbarrel U. - and that is as it should be. :) Makes you want to sing the school hymn, doesn't it?

"Hail to thee, Overbarrel U
For over the knee thy co-eds go,..."


Just like last time, I like all the girls' expressions, and I especially liked to hear the one girl remarking that she "felt that one right through her panties" (and her own as well). As we discussed before, these girls are forced to identify with Xandra because they're female just as she is. What I'm wondering now is how you're going to handle the changing expressions as the spanking progresses? I guess we'll see. :)
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web-ed wrote:Whew! A moment-of-impact shot - and a very good moment-of-impact shot - for the 19th panel in the series. Everyone else seems pleased with it, and so am I :D .
Hi web-ed,

I was pleased with how this view of the moment of impact turned out and thought I captured it well, so your reaction to the pic brought a grin to my face :D .
web-ed wrote: Looks like Barb and the other girl are both getting snapshots of the scene (from different angles) so that they can taunt Xandra with them forever afterwards :lol: ! That other girl makes a funny remark, too, about how they all look just like Xandra when they get spanked, from which we may infer that the spanking of co-eds is a well-nigh universal practice at good ol' Overbarrel U. - and that is as it should be. :) Makes you want to sing the school hymn, doesn't it?

"Hail to thee, Overbarrel U
For over the knee thy co-eds go,..."
Actually, Xandra's in for more taunting than you think because the girls aren't taking snapshots.........they're taking videos of the entire spanking process :lol: . Since Overbarrel U exists in my ideal, fantasy spanking world, you may indeed infer that spanking co-eds is a universal practice 8-) . Each one of these onlookers are mentally putting themselves in Xandra's place and equating their own spankings with hers :D . The school song you wrote seems perfect to me and if this wasn't the school song before, it certainly is now :lol: :lol: .
web-ed wrote:Just like last time, I like all the girls' expressions, and I especially liked to hear the one girl remarking that she "felt that one right through her panties" (and her own as well). As we discussed before, these girls are forced to identify with Xandra because they're female just as she is. What I'm wondering now is how you're going to handle the changing expressions as the spanking progresses? I guess we'll see. :)
I'm glad you enjoyed the various expressions of the onlookers :D . I felt like each girl's expressions would change from moment to moment during the spanking as her emotions change from shock to joy to empathy to satisfaction etc. It seemed to me that each girl would probably react differently depending on her own experiences getting spanked by her boyfriend 8-) . I think we can safely conclude that Linda's reaction that she felt that swat right through her panties is probably the result of having felt such a first swat being delivered to her bottom by an irritated boyfriend :lol: . I'm also wondering just how I'm going to handle those changing emotions.........and expressions as the spanking moves forward :lol: . Thanks, Phil
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The girl in the pink summer dress is still rubbing her arse.

She must have got one hell of a spanking.
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Thanks for posting the "silent" version of panel 019.

The one with the talk balloons continues to progress the story, while the wordless one looks like someone took a still snapshot of the event! You have gotten really good at showing emotion in your poser pictures. That is the one thing that usually seems to be missing in poser art. The three-dimensional photo realism is apparently inherent to the program, but in a lot of other artists' work, the people just look like manikins that have been posed... (hence the name, "poser"?) You have really captured the motion and the E-motion of this part of the story!
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willjohn wrote:The girl in the pink summer dress is still rubbing her arse.

She must have got one hell of a spanking.
Hi Willjohn,

While I'm sure she did indeed get a good spanking, I don't think that's the reason she's still rubbing her bottom. I think that watching the process leading up to Xandra's spanking has reawakened some emotions in her and that gently rubbing her still sore bottom is enhancing that effect 8-) . Thanks, Phil
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hugob00m wrote:Thanks for posting the "silent" version of panel 019.

The one with the talk balloons continues to progress the story, while the wordless one looks like someone took a still snapshot of the event! You have gotten really good at showing emotion in your poser pictures. That is the one thing that usually seems to be missing in poser art. The three-dimensional photo realism is apparently inherent to the program, but in a lot of other artists' work, the people just look like manikins that have been posed... (hence the name, "poser"?) You have really captured the motion and the E-motion of this part of the story!
Hi Boom,

Thanks for the compliment about showing the emotions :D .That really pleases me because, in my opinion, the emotions of a spanking are even more important than the actual physical spanking and showing those emotions really adds to the realism ;) . Poser is indeed a 3 D program. When I am posing a scene, I can move the camera 360 degrees in any direction in order to show what I want. It also has the capability to cast shadows from the lights and that makes some Poser art even more realistic. Dave Wolfe has pointed out to me that if I would use these shadows from at least one camera, it might enhance my pics. I usually keep them all turned off, though, for 2 reasons. For one, I have certain things I like to be seen clearly, faces, bottoms etc. and the shadows almost always obscure something important. For another thing, using the shadows really slows the renders down. Perhaps I should use them but I probably won't.

As far as the people looking like manikins........it is often difficult to keep the characters from looking that way and that's especially true when you are first starting. I have spent a lot of time over the last 12 years making small changes so that my characters look like they are moving more naturally and I was really delighted by your comment :D :D . It's nice to know that, at least, some folks notice all that work. Once I get the characters looking the way I want, I save the poses to use as a starting point for other pics which limits the amount of time I have to spend posing them the next time to keep them looking natural. Thanks too for your comment about capturing the motion :D :D . I'm sure you know it's not an easy task in any medium when you're trying to capture that action in a single pic so it's nice to know you think I succeeded :D .

If you spend much time looking at Poser art, you will probably notice that while some artists use shadows well and other special effects, most of them will avoid physical contact between their characters like the plague. That's because Poser has no provision for accurately depicting the intersection of 2 objects. Being a spanking artist, I had little choice to figure ways around that problem :lol: . I think I have done well at either fixing or hiding such problems in my pics. Of course, I don't just use Poser. My pics spend as much time in photoshop as they do in Poser and I really couldn't make these pics look right without both programs. Anyway, thanks for the nice comments :D . Phil
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Hi everyone,

Now that the spanking is in progress, Walter's getting all kind of advice :lol: . He's also remembering just how FIT Xandra is :o . I hope you enjoy the new pic . Phil
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Hi, Phil. This is a great follow-up to your artistic triumph of last week!
overbarrel49 wrote:Now that the spanking is in progress, Walter's getting all kind of advice.
Hmmmm! Advice or instigation? The girls all seem to be enjoying the show, :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: but some of them want Walter to pull Xandra's panties down! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Peggy is especially funny, telling Walter what she's learned from personal experience! :D :D :D :D

And of course, we in the audience get another look at Xandra's kicking legs and jiggling buttcheeks! This one would have to rate very high on Dave Wolfe's Hilarity and Horniness scale! ;) ;) ;) ;)
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According to the story line at least two of the girls have had their bare arses spanked very recently. They probably think it only fair that Xandra gets the same treatment. :evil:
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hugob00m wrote:Hi, Phil. This is a great follow-up to your artistic triumph of last week!
Hi Boom,

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this week's episode :D .
hugob00m wrote:Hmmmm! Advice or instigation? The girls all seem to be enjoying the show, :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: but some of them want Walter to pull Xandra's panties down! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
I guess instigation might be a better word, now that you mention it :lol: . Xandra's friends do indeed seem to be enjoying her predicament and they are definitely encouraging Walter to do a good job of spanking her 8-) . I think the fact that they seem to know that a naughty girl is supposed to be spanked on her bare bottom just goes to show that watching Walter spank his naughty girlfriend is reminding them all of getting spanked by their own boyfriends 8-) .
hugob00m wrote:Peggy is especially funny, telling Walter what she's learned from personal experience! :D :D :D :D
Again, Peggy seems to have a different attitude about girls getting spanked by their boyfriends than the other girls 8-) . I have a hunch that she genuinely is hoping for Xandra to have what she thinks is the best spanking experience she can have.......so that the spanking will really give her what she needs ;) .
hugob00m wrote:And of course, we in the audience get another look at Xandra's kicking legs and jiggling buttcheeks! This one would have to rate very high on Dave Wolfe's Hilarity and Horniness scale! ;) ;) ;) ;)
I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the view in this one as well as the dialog :D . I'm also glad to see that you've adopted Dave Wolfe's H&H scale and that you think this pic rate high :D . Thanks, Phil
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willjohn wrote:According to the story line at least two of the girls have had their bare arses spanked very recently. They probably think it only fair that Xandra gets the same treatment. :evil:
Hi Willjohn,

I think you are right about that. I also think all this hilarity at Xandra's expense is their way to welcoming her to the spanked girlfriends club :lol: . Besides, they obviously think it's about time. Perhaps they are tired of watching Xandra get away with behavior that would have gotten them spanked. It all sounds right to me :lol: . Thanks, Phil
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All the proof we need that the spanking is progressing satisfactorily may be found in Xandra's expression and exclamations, for when the spankee cries "It hurts!" we know it's going along splendidly :lol: ! I have to wonder just how much of her housemates' exhortations Xandra is able to take in. Does she hear them encouraging Walter to spank her harder, and on her bare bottom? A panel focusing on her (no doubt horrified) response to these suggestions might be in order. The girl in the green dress on the right is already completely embarrassed by them. :)
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web-ed wrote:All the proof we need that the spanking is progressing satisfactorily may be found in Xandra's expression and exclamations, for when the spankee cries "It hurts!" we know it's going along splendidly :lol:
HI web-ed,

I'm glad you think the spanking is going splendidly :D I think Walter and the onlookers would agree with you 8-) .
web-ed wrote: I have to wonder just how much of her housemates' exhortations Xandra is able to take in. Does she hear them encouraging Walter to spank her harder, and on her bare bottom? A panel focusing on her (no doubt horrified) response to these suggestions might be in order. The girl in the green dress on the right is already completely embarrassed by them. :)
I would assume that Xandra isn't fully aware of what her friends are saying, at least not consciously. I'm betting she might be absorbing some of it at a subconscious level and it may come back to her later.......which could lead to some interesting discussions with her friends :lol: . I guess I should have provided a program with this toon since there are so many players and no one can remember everyone :lol: . Thanks, Phil
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Hi everyone,

According to Walter, a spanking is supposed to hurt......and it looks as if all the onlookers agree :lol: I hope you enjoy the new pic. Phil
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Does this mean Walter has been spanking Xandra for 4 days? That would be cruel and very unusual punishment!
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willjohn wrote:Does this mean Walter has been spanking Xandra for 4 days? That would be cruel and very unusual punishment!
Hi Willjohn,

I don't understand your comment??? Walter has just started the spanking. Can you clarify your comment for me? Thanks, Phil
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This is the third spanking panel we've had - perhaps Willjohn was counting panel 18, in which Walter is just getting ready to apply the first swat, as a spanking panel, giving four all together, when referring to a four-day spanking? - and the fun continues (for everyone except Xandra :lol: ).

I know that a while back in this discussion I brought up the humiliation factor, but it's worth raising the topic again because the essence of spanking is, after all, humiliation. So the girls' comments here are really good because they're rubbing in the fact that Xandra is getting spanked, thus increasing the humiliation factor (which is of course the reason having the spanking witnessed is part of so many women's spanking fantasies).

I've run the last three panels back and forth, and you can see the redness gradually increasing in Xandra's bottom, so you've clearly got the coloring under control. Of course, no matter how red her bottom is, Xandra's spanking will have to continue until she changes her attitude "from defiance to compliance". :lol:
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