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hugob00m wrote:I'm always a little bit uncomfortable about spankings given by fathers, uncles and grandfathers... it almost "smacks" of incest
hi boom,

nope, no incest or even any sexual interest in this spanking. just grand dad making sure that his grand daughter behaves better in the future :D .
hugob00m wrote:Jennifer is very pretty and sufficiently bratty!
i'm glad you like the character but i can't believe you didn't mention that she has red hair :o :lol:
hugob00m wrote:I liked seeing all the old men watching her show off her panties, and now it looks like she's going to be a part of a show she hadn't planned!
i like that part too. you just know they'd just love to have a peek :lol: and you're exactly right................both Jennifer and the seat of her panties are gonna be part of that unexpected show :D hopefully those old timers will have some other reactions as we go along. thanks, phil
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Hi Phil,
I like your stories very much. You are really telling stories and the preparations and expressions on their faces are as much importent as the real spanking. I love also, that the first smacks are over the skirt and panties. I love well tauten panties ;-))
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hi yo,
yo_yu_02 wrote:I like your stories very much. You are really telling stories and the preparations and expressions on their faces are as much important as the real spanking.
i heartily agree with you. the emotional mix that takes place during a spanking it a large part of what makes it such an intense experience and the reactions and expressions of the couple involved reflect those emotions. i think this is especially true at the beginning of the spanking. the conversation before the spanking and the announcement that there is gonna be a spanking is what really gets the whole process started :D . since you like spanking over panties i figure you'll probably like the pics i am getting ready to post here in a few minutes. glad you're enjoying the toon so far :D thanks, phil
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hi everyone,

it's beginning to look as if Jennifer's plan to tease the old timers who embarrassed her isn't gonna end up well. as a matter of fact, it appears she's gonna end up "end" up :lol: . one part of the plan does seem to be working well though. she wanted to tease them and make them horny. well, this ought to do it :D . i hope you enjoy them. phil
Looks like Jennifer's not gonna talk her way out of this one.
Looks like Jennifer's not gonna talk her way out of this one.
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Looks like ordering grand dad to stop wasn't the way to go..............LOL
Looks like ordering grand dad to stop wasn't the way to go..............LOL
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Given that most folks fast forward thru videos to get to the spankings, 'setup' isn't exactly what the average spankophile wants to spend half the resource on- (not that I ALWAYS agree with this.) So I think one can widen thier belief with the way Phil has presented the story. And most of us 'flesh it all out' in our own imagination anyway.
I have alway been a fan (and anyone reading any of the Spank Central stories would agree) of the more over the top fantasies..... Girl being spanked for bad grades or consistant tardiness at work gets stale pretty quickly... And I rarely find myself needing to re-read those tomes..... But a Taking Charge or Back street story would be the kind of stuff I would keep on top of the pile..

Just saying..

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Marvelous how she knows what happened or did not happen to her mother before she was born, isn't it? :lol:

Great set of cartoons.
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hi Ray,

it's nice to hear that you're enjoying the story as well as the pics :D . personally i think the story can really enhance any spanking scene if it's a "good" story. i go with a fantasy that pleases me and most of the time there are others who like it too. i usually have the whole story mapped out in my mind early on but many times comments from viewers cause me to change some things before we get there. seems the viewers have good ideas about these things too :D .
jesseray wrote:But a Taking Charge or Back street story would be the kind of stuff I would keep on top of the pile..

thanks for mentioning these toons :D . you are apparently not alone here as these 2 have been among the most commented on which i assume means the most liked too. hopefully "one good turn" will turn out to be that way too. thanks, phil
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willjohn wrote:Marvelous how she knows what happened or did not happen to her mother before she was born, isn't it? :lol:
hi willjohn,

she does seem to be quite intuitive about this :lol: . i know this may come as a surprise but i have it on good authority that a young lady trying to talk her way out of a spanking may say things at times that are not necessarily totally factual :D glad you're enjoying the pics :D . thanks, phil
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Excellent work (so far), Phil.

Your pic titled "008" shows us a truly solid and believable "contact" position. Gramps is as true with this swat as it ever gets, right smack on the meatiest part of Jennifer's gorgeous right buttcheek. The girl is surely mortified by this turn of events, but this shameless flirt truly deserves what is happening to her.

Having said that, I wish I could say that the picture is perfect. But the spanker's left (non-spanking) hand is idle, whereas it should be holding down the small of the girl's back, so that she cannot squirm away.

Despite that one little cavil, I admire your artistry and wish I could match it.

And as I have said before, I hope there will be more than just one spanking panel... especially since you have fiendishly made us wait so long for the inevitable. Now that the inevitable has begun, I'm hoping it stays with us for a while.

You know, some spanking toons are like the rides at Disneyland. You spend half an hour waiting in line to get on the ride, then when you finally get into your little cart, the ride is over with before you know it. After all that time waiting! I do hope that we will be able to savor Jennifer's punishment for at least as long as we've been waiting for it!

Great work, Phil.

Cheers,
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hi Dan,
daneldorado wrote:Your pic titled "008" shows us a truly solid and believable "contact" position. Gramps is as true with this swat as it ever gets, right smack on the meatiest part of Jennifer's gorgeous right buttcheek.
thanks for noticing this. i worked a long time to get his hand in that position and it's nice to know someone noticed it :D . it's easy enough to get his hand there but you have collar, shoulder, forearm, hand and all the fingers to manipulate and if you're not careful it will look unnatural. all the parts have to be moved without over moving them or it won't look right at all.
daneldorado wrote:Having said that, I wish I could say that the picture is perfect. But the spanker's left (non-spanking) hand is idle, whereas it should be holding down the small of the girl's back, so that she cannot squirm away.
ok, i actually did it this way intentionally in an attempt to show that he landed a particularly hard smack which perhaps caused his left hand to slip off her back. actually, his entire pose is an attempt to convey this. apparently it was attempt was less than completely successful................sigh. that's why his upper body is twisted, leaning forward and side to side. that's also why his legs are braced as well. it is difficult to convey this without the use of motion lines and such.

would i leave you with just one spanking panel :lol:? . believe me, there will be plenty of spanking action in this toon :D . i already have 2 more pics done with grand dad spanking jennifer and i'm not done by a long shot ;)

thanks for the nice words about the pic. i'm glad you enjoyed them :D . phil
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Entertaining as usual Phil, although I do agree with Dan's comment about the left arm. It should be holding the young lady tightly for balance. :D
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I loved Jennifer's pouty expression in panel 7! Along with Dan, I hope this spanking goes on for a while, and I think it probably will!
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hi solsunbeach,

it looks like i'm gonna have to try to find a different position for my spankers when i'm trying to show that they have landed a hard swat.............one that includes his left hand holding her down ;) . i'm glad you liked the pics anyway :D . thanks for your comments. phil
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hi web-ed,

i liked that expression too so i was happy that you mentioned it :D . so far grand dad has only landed one swat so you can count on more spanking panels to follow.........after all, we have to get her to the point where she's truly sorry for her behavior which might take a while :D . thanks, phil
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hi everyone,

judging from Jennifer's reactions it looks like grand dad must be spanking with a certain "gusto". yep, she's really feeling it. it kinda looks like the old timers who are watching are feeling something too.
looks like grand dad has things in full swing.
looks like grand dad has things in full swing.
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grand dad's doing such a good job that it kinda brings a tear to your eye:P
grand dad's doing such a good job that it kinda brings a tear to your eye:P
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Getting better and better, different angles please, perhaps a few from behind the chair. :D
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hi solsunbeach.

i'm not used to doing pics that are cluttered with so many people and i've found it difficult to get myself lined out on just how to proceed as far as getting different camera angles but i think i'm getting it lined out now :) . i have the 2 pics for next week nearly done now and they are both from different angles and i'll try to keep them changing. there's plenty more spanking action to go in this toon. glad you're enjoying it so far :D . thanks, phil
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Wow! This story just keeps getting better and better!

Phil, I gotta tell ya... These last two pics are among the very best spanking pics I have ever seen... and I've seen PLENTY!

In pic no. 10, especially, we can see the spanking at its apex. Jennifer is struggling mightily to squirm free of Granddad's grip and avert the walloping she is sure to get. Her body appears to be trying to "lift off" from his lap, but at this point her struggles seem to be for naught. Gramps still has a sure grip!

And YOU, Phil, are not only a great artist, you are also a very intuitive observer of the human scene. I say that because someone on this thread -- I forget who -- wrote that it is "unseemly" for a grandfather to spank the seat of his young and nubile granddaughter's panties in front of a bunch of "dirty old men." That, I believe, is the only negative comment on this cartoon so far.

But now you have thwarted those thoughts by having one of the grizzled onlookers saying "My heart's pounding... it seems familiar but I can't remember somehow. It sure feels good though!"

No doubt, these thoughts are shared by most, if not all, of the geezers looking on. If Jennifer were being spanked in front of a bunch of college guys in their 20s, I would probably agree that that might be inappropriate. But THIS audience is in the Viagra-plus generation, meaning they are beyond impotence and even Cialis won't help. But the view is still mighty attractive.

GO, Phil! GO!!!

Cheers,
Dan
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