Good Marks

[overbarrel49]

hope Anna tells us who spanked the hardest her dad or Al

Hi Butch,

That topic might indeed come up during their discussion but I have to wonder if it isn't more likely that Anna would talk about which spanking had the greatest emotional impact or perhaps the differences in the 2 spankings . We'll see as the story unfolds. Thanks, Phil

[overbarrel49]

Nice grouping of images, Phil. In place of a "normal" panel, you have created a DREAM panel, i.e., a picture with deliberately blurred edges, to indicate that this is a flashback to something that happened in the past. The RECENT past, I would guess. Also, you have completely revamped your usual method of displaying the thought balloons. Rather than putting them in the TOP HALF of your drawing, there they are... down below! These deviations from the norm combine to let us know: This panel is different; this time it's of another time, outside the flow of "Good Marks" in the girls' dormitory!

Hi Dan,

Your assessment of what I have done here is right on the money and I did all this for a reason . In past toons I have depicted what the spanking couple are saying before, during and after a spanking.......I have also shown some of the things they are thinking and feeling ( emotional feelings, that is, since we already know what they are feeling physically, especially the spankee's bottom ) during these times........I have shown the reactions of unseen onlookers..........we have also investigated the thoughts and comments of onlookers who are present for a spanking that both spanker and spankee know is being given in public.............not to mention the reactions of the spanking couple to participating in a public spanking. Having said all that, it's been my experience that women will often put up a front when talking to their men but are generally more open and honest with their girl friends and will admit things to them they would never admit to their boyfriends/husbands. I thought it was time we investigated some of the things these girls might discuss in private when talking about spankings they have gotten and this is the method I came up with for doing just that .

So, we are gifted with a really nice OTK pic of Anna, squirming over the lap of her boyfriend Al. There was nothing in the preceding panels that would lead us to believe we would receive this bonus... so, I'm offering my thanks to you, Phil. You really know how to please your followers!

I was glad to read your comments. I post these pics at my blog and a yahoo group to which I belong as well as here at CSR and yours was the first comment concerning the changes I made in the way I am presenting this. As usual when I try something new, I am never certain how what I think is a good idea will be received so I was very pleased that you liked this idea . We will be proceeding in this manner for most of the rest of this toon.

And I'm with Butch... he hopes that Anna will tell us who spanked harder... her dad or Al? Why do we care? Why do we want to know? Oh, no reason except it's titillating. That's the way it goes, in the spanko community. Cheers,Dan

That is indeed the way it goes in the spanko community . I'll refer you to my reply to the comments Butch made for my answer about what differences Anna may see in a spanking from her dad and one from Al. Thanks, Phil

[overbarrel49]

Hi,Phil.I wondered if your were going to do any flashbacks... and now I see that's what you're doing.I like the way you have the present-day girls in a little inset at the bottom of the frame, providing some narration for the scene.I look forward to the rest of it!

Hi Boom,

We are indeed having flashbacks in the form of private discussions of previous spankings between the girls . As I commented to Dan, I am never certain how a new idea will be received by other folks so I am pleased that you approve of the way I'm handling this . We will continue on this way for most of the rest of the toon. Thanks, Phil

[willjohn]

Somehow I doubt that Anna will be comparing Al's spanking of her with the ones she got for misbehaving as a child. That is another country.

[overbarrel49]

Somehow I doubt that Anna will be comparing Al's spanking of her with the ones she got for misbehaving as a child. That is another country.

Hi Willjohn,

This is an interesting theory and the emotional aspects are definitely going to be different. We'll see exactly what Anna has to say as we go through the toon . Thanks, Phil

[jimc]

I really enjoy the way you have positioned Anna in this frame I love otk the best and it was a great flashback. Quite well done. Thank you for sharing it and have a great day.
Jim

[overbarrel49]

I really enjoy the way you have positioned Anna in this frame I love otk the best and it was a great flashback. Quite well done. Thank you for sharing it and have a great day.Jim

Hi Jim,

I'm glad you enjoyed the view . I love OTK the best too . Thanks, Phil

[web-ed]

Well, I certainly am not going to complain about a flashback sequence whose possibility I raised last time, especially when the OTK positioning is as great as it is here! Of course getting a girl OTK is not a new problem for you, but it takes some effort to get it right I'm sure and you have done it once again!

Hope this series continues for a long, long time!

[overbarrel49]

Well, I certainly am not going to complain about a flashback sequence whose possibility I raised last time, especially when the OTK positioning is as great as it is here! Of course getting a girl OTK is not a new problem for you, but it takes some effort to get it right I'm sure and you have done it once again!

Hi web-ed,

OK, I'm really confused. I seem to have completely missed your reply to the pic I posted before this one, even though it looks like I replied to some that came after it?!? I'm usually very thorough and try to read everything that's posted to the forum but this one seems to have blown right by me.......sigh. Anyway, I'm going to go back to your comments on that pic and try to reply to that before I move on to the current pic.

You said, Nice scene here, Phil. Girls love to talk, and of course they tell each other practically everything about their boyfriends. It's quite possible you could work in a flashback sequence at this point, with Anna narrating while we see her over Al's knee, if you wanted to.


You called it! and I might add, so did Boom . You guys are starting to understand me way too well . I will refer you to my reply to Dan's comments about the current pic for an explanation as to why I thought this was a good idea. I have a hunch there are many of us spankers who would love to be a fly on the wall when girls are talking about their relationships with their men privately and that's especially true when they are talking about spankings they've gotten .

You went on to say, I really love the Overbarrel University poster ! Naturally two sorority paddles are part of the design. If anyone objects, we can point out that at many colleges these days learning is treated as secondary to the school's football or basketball program, so they might as well focus on something really important - like spanking!


Thanks for your comments about the Overbarrel U poster . I too thought the sorority paddles were a logical addition to my logo and I'm sure most CSR members would agree with you too . I couldn't agree more with your comments about the sports programs and I'm going to limit my comments to that so as to avoid getting on a soap box . As far as I know, there are no college sponsored spanking teams but it sure brings some interesting thoughts to mind .

You also said, I worked out the first verse for an O.U. school song a while back, and you've got an emblem now, but I can't remember: did we ever discuss what the school's colors should be? Red would have to be one of them... We're almost ready to open up O.U. as an online university! The only problem is I can't think of how we could spank and paddle the co-eds over the internet!

I have not given any thought to the school colors but I definitely agree that one of the should be red . As for the other one, perhaps our members could send in their suggestions to help us decide. Perhaps our pennant could be shaped like the back of a pair of panties Perhaps the co-eds could come to regional campuses located at our houses, to get their spankings . I'll bet the local people would have some interesting reactions to signs on the buildings .

OK, now on to your current comments;

Well, I certainly am not going to complain about a flashback sequence whose possibility I raised last time, especially when the OTK positioning is as great as it is here! Of course getting a girl OTK is not a new problem for you, but it takes some effort to get it right I'm sure and you have done it once again!

I'm glad you approve of the flashback sequence since I am planning to finish most of the rest of this toon in this manner . BTW, Anna will not be the only one narrating such an event before the end of the toon . Thanks for the compliment on the OTK positioning. It's always my intention to get the spanking started out right by having the naughty girl properly placed .

Hope this series continues for a long, long time!

We do have quite a ways to go. Anna has to finish her story, which will be followed by at least one other girl who will attempt to help Xandra think through her current emotional confusion and then Xandra herself will have a story to tell . It occurred to me a few days ago that this story will not be finished before Christmas so I will no doubt have to interrupt it for some Christmas toons. All I have to do is think of some Christmas themed spanking scenarios, which is becoming more difficult as the years pass. Thanks, Phil

[willjohn]

I doubt that Xandra will be thinking through much apart from the fact that her arse has never been so hot.

[web-ed]

I'm sure we'll all be very glad to see some Christmas-themed cartoons, Phil - perhaps the Hiney sisters will make their return.

[willjohn]

Could they be Xandra's cousins?

[overbarrel49]

I'm sure we'll all be very glad to see some Christmas-themed cartoons, Phil - perhaps the Hiney sisters will make their return.

HI web-ed,

I will do my best to show the Hiney sisters having a Merry Christmas . Thanks, Phil

[overbarrel49]

Could they be Xandra's cousins?

Hi Willjohn,

While I don't know of any such relationship, this all happens in my ideal, spanking fantasy world so they can be related to anyone you want . One thing is certain, they are all spanking sisters . Thanks, Phil

[overbarrel49]

Hi everyone,

Our co-eds are continuing their discussion. It appears that Anna was really confused ........until a point in time where Al caused her to be less confused . I hope you enjoy the new pic. Phil

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[daneldorado]

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Okay now, Phil, this is just ridiculous.

Up until now, I have admired your mastery of pen and poser, and have expressed my admiration here on these pages. But now, with your new panel 043, you have surpassed all your previous efforts, giving us a "Moment of Truth" panel that shows Al landing his strong right hand smack on Anna's right buttcheek, and doing so with determination and authority! It is the sort of smack that signals "only the beginning," because I don't think anybody lands a swat like that without intending to follow it up with many, many more!

Of course I hope that Al will continue to spank Anna for a good, long session, and that we will get to see most of it on these pages. But I gotta tell ya: This panel gets everything right: Anna shows us the shock and fear on her face, the sudden realization that she is about to experience a gigantic walloping on her exposed rear end, with all the pain and humiliation that goes with it. She deserves it, she's going to get it, and we the lucky ones are about to enjoy an ecstatic spectacle.

Cheers,
Dan

[willjohn]

So every red bottomed member of the sorority will recount her first experience of being spanked by a lover.

As Arte Johnson would have said "Veeery interesting!"

[overbarrel49]

Okay now, Phil, this is just ridiculous. Up until now, I have admired your mastery of pen and poser, and have expressed my admiration here on these pages. But now, with your new panel 043, you have surpassed all your previous efforts, giving us a "Moment of Truth" panel that shows Al landing his strong right hand smack on Anna's right buttcheek, and doing so with determination and authority! It is the sort of smack that signals "only the beginning," because I don't think anybody lands a swat like that without intending to follow it up with many, many more!

Hi Dan,

Thanks for your very generous comments . This is actually just what I needed to hear someone say. Yesterday, this pic didn't look quite like this. The smack just didn't look all that hard to me and I thought it should be so I set out to see if I could improve it. I thought the final result was much better at depicting that hard smack so I'm really happy that you agree . You are also correct that this smack signals this is just the beginning . FYI, Poser renders the pics for me but I have to use photoshop to draw the shading that makes it appear that his hand landing did more than just impact on the surface. It's usually a tedious and time consuming task and many times requires several tries before it looks right to me.

Of course I hope that Al will continue to spank Anna for a good, long session, and that we will get to see most of it on these pages. But I gotta tell ya: This panel gets everything right: Anna shows us the shock and fear on her face, the sudden realization that she is about to experience a gigantic walloping on her exposed rear end, with all the pain and humiliation that goes with it. She deserves it, she's going to get it, and we the lucky ones are about to enjoy an ecstatic spectacle. Cheers,Dan

I assure you that Al will be giving Anna a proper spanking and that we will be seeing much of it as she describes the action to Xandra I must admit that I had a big grin on my face when I read your comment that this panel got everything right........it's exactly the kind of comment we artists love to hear . As I think I have mentioned before, while I love seeing a young lady's bottom upturned for a spanking, the emotional part is the most important and most intense part of a spanking so I spend lots of time on the spankee's expression, so I always love hearing that I got it right . Stay tooned for more of Anna's narrative . Thanks, Phil

[overbarrel49]

So every red bottomed member of the sorority will recount her first experience of being spanked by a lover.As Arte Johnson would have said "Veeery interesting!"

Hi Willjohn,

While I can't say for certain that every one of them will recount their experiences with their friends, I can say that girls living together like this will indeed discuss their romantic relationships with each other. Also, I have it on good authority that these girls do get vicarious thrills from these discussions and the more shocking it is, the greater the thrill. That being the case, I have a hunch that most girls who get spankings from their boyfriends will probably talk about their experiences with their friends . Of course, at good, old Overbarrel U., I would say that the percentage of girls getting spanked and the percentage of these girls who are telling all to their friends are both close to 100% . Thanks, Phil

[willjohn]

Sue looks that way!