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Re: Family Tradition
Remember, everyone, I posted 10 pics today so you'll have to go back to page 45 to find the first one and read them in order. Phil
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Re: Family Tradition
Hard to believe it took just over a year (ending in a leap year) for this story about what happened in less than a day to come to an end.
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Re: Family Tradition
hi Willjohn,willjohn wrote:Hard to believe it took just over a year (ending in a leap year) for this story about what happened in less than a day to come to an end.
it is kind of hard to believe. I really hadn't realized it myself until web-ed mentioned that it was a long toon and I got to thinking about how many pics there were. that's when I went back to see when the first one was posted. I guess it was a long day for the girls
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Re: Family Tradition
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Bravo Phil!
The ending panels of "Family Tradition" are superb, as are the memories we will all take from viewing this story. You are quite right when you say this denouement is probably new to some of us spankos. Certainly I had never thought of ending a spanking story in that fashion. But you have quite a creative forum here, and I know that some of our spanko cousins are probably salivating over that delectable ending.
Is there anything "wrong" with this style? Oh, I suppose that I could come up with some negatives if I wanted to. One thing that I noticed as I was reading through all your panels is that you use the word "blister" or "blistered" quite a lot. It appears at least 6 (SIX!) times in the final scene.
Also... Most all of your spankee ladies seem to be red heads... or at least brownettes. But there are lots of brunettes (black hair) out there. Can we see one of them getting spanked?
Once again, Phil... many congratulations. This one's a beauty.
Cheers,
Dan
Bravo Phil!
The ending panels of "Family Tradition" are superb, as are the memories we will all take from viewing this story. You are quite right when you say this denouement is probably new to some of us spankos. Certainly I had never thought of ending a spanking story in that fashion. But you have quite a creative forum here, and I know that some of our spanko cousins are probably salivating over that delectable ending.
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Is there anything "wrong" with this style? Oh, I suppose that I could come up with some negatives if I wanted to. One thing that I noticed as I was reading through all your panels is that you use the word "blister" or "blistered" quite a lot. It appears at least 6 (SIX!) times in the final scene.
Also... Most all of your spankee ladies seem to be red heads... or at least brownettes. But there are lots of brunettes (black hair) out there. Can we see one of them getting spanked?
Once again, Phil... many congratulations. This one's a beauty.
Cheers,
Dan
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Re: Family Tradition
Hi, Phil!
Great end to a great story! I had hoped for a quiet little mother/daughter conversation on the morning following some very dramatic spankings. Wow! The two women sat down (on some soft pillows!
) and had a nice friendly chat about life with their men and the inevitable spankings they get from those men.
I have not been privy to one of those conversations in real life either... but it's fun to see your rendition of how such a conversation might play out.
Your final panel is hilarious! The words, "The End", on the screen like an old-time movie, and the ladies flipping up their skirts to show an appreciative audience one last look at their well-reddened, panty-clad bottoms!
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After such a long time seeing these women every week, it's almost as if they've become old friends! I'm looking forward to your next story, most likely with an all-new cast of characters, but I also hope we haven't seen the last of Tina and Vicky. (Oh, here's a perverse idea for a sequel: What if Vicky gets a little too meddlesome in her grown-up daughter's life and STEVE finds it necessary to apply the paddle across his Mother-in-law's behind? How would Uly respond to his wife being spanked by his Son-in-law? How would Tina respond?)
Great end to a great story! I had hoped for a quiet little mother/daughter conversation on the morning following some very dramatic spankings. Wow! The two women sat down (on some soft pillows!
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I have not been privy to one of those conversations in real life either... but it's fun to see your rendition of how such a conversation might play out.
Your final panel is hilarious! The words, "The End", on the screen like an old-time movie, and the ladies flipping up their skirts to show an appreciative audience one last look at their well-reddened, panty-clad bottoms!
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After such a long time seeing these women every week, it's almost as if they've become old friends! I'm looking forward to your next story, most likely with an all-new cast of characters, but I also hope we haven't seen the last of Tina and Vicky. (Oh, here's a perverse idea for a sequel: What if Vicky gets a little too meddlesome in her grown-up daughter's life and STEVE finds it necessary to apply the paddle across his Mother-in-law's behind? How would Uly respond to his wife being spanked by his Son-in-law? How would Tina respond?)
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Re: Family Tradition
Hi Dan,daneldorado wrote:Bravo Phil!
The ending panels of "Family Tradition" are superb, as are the memories we will all take from viewing this story. You are quite right when you say this denouement is probably new to some of us spankos. Certainly I had never thought of ending a spanking story in that fashion. But you have quite a creative forum here, and I know that some of our spanko cousins are probably salivating over that delectable ending.
I'm glad you enjoyed the ending of this toon . I have always had fantasies about girls discussing their spankings with each other but had never seen anyone try to depict this. I was a bit hesitant to try it myself because I wondered of folks really wanted to see more spanking action rather than more dialog but I finally decided that if I was fantasizing about it, perhaps others were too. So far the comments I've gotten have been really positive and several folks have ask me to do more of this kind of thing, which pleases me. I was also pleased by your comment about my forum being creative
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daneldorado wrote:Is there anything "wrong" with this style? Oh, I suppose that I could come up with some negatives if I wanted to. One thing that I noticed as I was reading through all your panels is that you use the word "blister" or "blistered" quite a lot. It appears at least 6 (SIX!) times in the final scene.
Not only have I noticed this too but I actually agree with you. I have been trying to watch and keep from using the same words and phrases over and over again.............not always successfully though. In some cases, it's a matter of what I like personally. For example, there are lots of words for a woman's panties..........knickers, underpants bloomers etc. but the word panties pushes my buttons just right
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Hmmmmm, I guess I do kind of prefer red heads although I thought I had been doing a good job of mixing them up. I will have to pay more attention to that. The spankee in the new toon I'll be starting Friday is a blonde, btw. There is a girl in some of the pics who has just gotten a spanking from her boyfriend and she has black hair so maybe that will suffice for this toondaneldorado wrote: Also... Most all of your spankee ladies seem to be red heads... or at least brownettes. But there are lots of brunettes (black hair) out there. Can we see one of them getting spanked?
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daneldorado wrote:Once again, Phil... many congratulations. This one's a beauty.
Cheers,
Dan
Again, I'm glad you enjoyed this toon and the ending. That brings a smile to my face
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Re: Family Tradition
Hi Boom,hugob00m wrote:Hi, Phil!
Great end to a great story! I had hoped for a quiet little mother/daughter conversation on the morning following some very dramatic spankings. Wow! The two women sat down (on some soft pillows!![]()
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) and had a nice friendly chat about life with their men and the inevitable spankings they get from those men.
I'm glad you liked the ending to my toon
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Yeah and it's unlikely that either of us will ever be privy to such a conversation. As Vicky said to Tina, " there are some things we girls never admit to". Whatever their reasons, women do tend to keep such secrets from us and I don't think we will ever be invited to such a conversationhugob00m wrote: I have not been privy to one of those conversations in real life either... but it's fun to see your rendition of how such a conversation might play out.
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I'm glad you liked thathugob00m wrote:Your final panel is hilarious! The words, "The End", on the screen like an old-time movie, and the ladies flipping up their skirts to show an appreciative audience one last look at their well-reddened, panty-clad bottoms!![]()
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I like it that my characters seem like old friends to you now. I'm glad I was able to get you involved in their liveshugob00m wrote:After such a long time seeing these women every week, it's almost as if they've become old friends! I'm looking forward to your next story, most likely with an all-new cast of characters, but I also hope we haven't seen the last of Tina and Vicky. (Oh, here's a perverse idea for a sequel: What if Vicky gets a little too meddlesome in her grown-up daughter's life and STEVE finds it necessary to apply the paddle across his Mother-in-law's behind? How would Uly respond to his wife being spanked by his Son-in-law? How would Tina respond?)
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hair color of spankees?
Hmmm... Yeah, I've noticed myself that you put a disproportunate number of redheads in your stories... but I've never raised any objections, since I happen to like ginger-haired spankees. Next to that you seem to have a lot of women with light-to-medium brown hair. Tammy is the only one I remember with black hair, and I don't recall any blondes. Is that just based on your own preference, or is there something about the poser program that makes extremely dark or extremely light hair more difficult to do?daneldorado wrote:Also... Most all of your spankee ladies seem to be red heads... or at least brownettes. But there are lots of brunettes (black hair) out there. Can we see one of them getting spanked?
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Re: Family Tradition
Does it have anything to do with the reputation redheads have for being fiery?
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Re: Family Tradition
daneldorado wrote:Also... Most all of your spankee ladies seem to be red heads... or at least brownettes. But there are lots of brunettes (black hair) out there. Can we see one of them getting spanked?
hugob00m wrote:Hmmm... Yeah, I've noticed myself that you put a disproportunate number of redheads in your stories... but I've never raised any objections, since I happen to like ginger-haired spankees. Next to that you seem to have a lot of women with light-to-medium brown hair. Tammy is the only one I remember with black hair, and I don't recall any blondes. Is that just based on your own preference, or is there something about the poser program that makes extremely dark or extremely light hair more difficult to do?
hi everyone,willjohn wrote:Does it have anything to do with the reputation redheads have for being fiery?
OK, after reading your comments I started wondering about this since it was always my intention to kind of rotate through all the hair colors and do some of each. I went through the toons I have posted here, checked the hair colors of all the spankees and totaled them all up. here are the results;
6 red heads, 6 brown, 2 blonde and 2 black. Now, that leaves 2 more that are less objective. one of them is kind of a reddish brown and the other is more reddish blonde. If we count those at red heads, that would make them the most numerous. i am assuming I was not counting them that way at the time I did the toons.
each of the different hair styles I use for my Poser girls, has it's own set of colors that can be used with them. they are all different and it's not always straight forward as to just what color they are. Still, it's obvious that I have used a disproportionate number with red or brown hair and very little black and blonde. I'm not sure why that is?? I am also a bit puzzled because in real life, I generally tend to be attracted to girls with brown hair......although I like red heads too. the spankee in the new toon I will be starting is blonde this time. Thanks, Phil
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Re: Family Tradition Conclusion
Phil, this is a remarkable conclusion to this wonderful series! The last panel with "The End" will be remembered fondly by all who see it!
Now as to the central hypothesis that underlies this 10-panel coda, if we may borrow a musical term, that women sometimes discuss their spankings, I have no doubt that it does indeed occur, especially among young women. In women the desire to share experiences is very strong, and there is no doubt that young women sometimes discuss sexual matters. But with women, we must remember that fear and embarrassment are much stronger restraints than they are with men, so many spanko women are left feeling strange and isolated, and are intimidated from disclosing to a trusted friend that they want (and get!) spankings. No doubt they often wonder how they could bring the subject up without revealing too much - such is the female psyche. Perhaps Sunflower or one of our other female readers would like to comment further.
As to the execution, I think you did a good job. You are running up here against one of the central problems with the comics medium, really in my view its greatest limitation: it does not support extended monologue or dialogue very well. Extended dialogue works better in every other narrative medium: prose, drama, and film, although even there you have to watch it and break the dialogue up somewhat. To keep a good balance between words and pictures, you need a whole lot of pictures! Very hard on the artist, while easier on the writer (prose) or actors (drama) or cameraman (film).
Here's an example of the difficulty you would face adapting something like Hamlet to comic form. The artwork and commentary are by Will Eisner in his Comics and Sequential Art:
![Image](http://www.chicagospankingreview.org/forum/will_eisner_hamlet_soliloquy.jpg)
You can see how many panels it would take to do the complete soliloquy that way. And so no one can really fault you for having somewhat word-heavy panels here, because that's just the medium: you either keep the speeches very short or else use a different medium. And no one could reasonably expect your to present this as a TV movie, although it would have worked pretty well
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Now as to the central hypothesis that underlies this 10-panel coda, if we may borrow a musical term, that women sometimes discuss their spankings, I have no doubt that it does indeed occur, especially among young women. In women the desire to share experiences is very strong, and there is no doubt that young women sometimes discuss sexual matters. But with women, we must remember that fear and embarrassment are much stronger restraints than they are with men, so many spanko women are left feeling strange and isolated, and are intimidated from disclosing to a trusted friend that they want (and get!) spankings. No doubt they often wonder how they could bring the subject up without revealing too much - such is the female psyche. Perhaps Sunflower or one of our other female readers would like to comment further.
As to the execution, I think you did a good job. You are running up here against one of the central problems with the comics medium, really in my view its greatest limitation: it does not support extended monologue or dialogue very well. Extended dialogue works better in every other narrative medium: prose, drama, and film, although even there you have to watch it and break the dialogue up somewhat. To keep a good balance between words and pictures, you need a whole lot of pictures! Very hard on the artist, while easier on the writer (prose) or actors (drama) or cameraman (film).
Here's an example of the difficulty you would face adapting something like Hamlet to comic form. The artwork and commentary are by Will Eisner in his Comics and Sequential Art:
![Image](http://www.chicagospankingreview.org/forum/will_eisner_hamlet_soliloquy.jpg)
You can see how many panels it would take to do the complete soliloquy that way. And so no one can really fault you for having somewhat word-heavy panels here, because that's just the medium: you either keep the speeches very short or else use a different medium. And no one could reasonably expect your to present this as a TV movie, although it would have worked pretty well
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I'm sorry to see this one end, but I know as soon as you're rested and refreshed you'll be cooking up some new surprises for us here in your gallery!
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Re: Family Tradition
hi web-ed,web-ed wrote:Phil, this is a remarkable conclusion to this wonderful series! The last panel with "The End" will be remembered fondly by all who see it!
I'm glad you enjoyed it
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OK, I know of one case personally where a young woman I spanked did indeed talk about it afterwards with a friend so it does happen. However, considering that spanking is not a routine part of most relationships, I have to figure it doesn't happen all that often, just for the reasons you mentioned. In this case, It seemed to me since Tina watched her mother's spankings, Vicky wouldn't have any of that hesitation discussing them with her daughter. Tina, in turn would then not have had so much hesitation to talk to Vicky about hers, especially since Steve had already mentioned that he spanks Tina. I had one spankee friend tell me that she found it plausible but thought it would be more likely that a woman would be more comfortable discussing a spanking with a close friend than with her mom. That actually seems reasonable to me but again, in this situation, the mother/daughter discussion seemed like it could happen to me.Of course, all this takes place in my idea spanking fantasy world in this caseweb-ed wrote:Now as to the central hypothesis that underlies this 10-panel coda, if we may borrow a musical term, that women sometimes discuss their spankings, I have no doubt that it does indeed occur, especially among young women. In women the desire to share experiences is very strong, and there is no doubt that young women sometimes discuss sexual matters. But with women, we must remember that fear and embarrassment are much stronger restraints than they are with men, so many spanko women are left feeling strange and isolated, and are intimidated from disclosing to a trusted friend that they want (and get!) spankings. No doubt they often wonder how they could bring the subject up without revealing too much - such is the female psyche. Perhaps Sunflower or one of our other female readers would like to comment further.
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I'm glad you thought I did well on thisweb-ed wrote: As to the execution, I think you did a good job. You are running up here against one of the central problems with the comics medium, really in my view its greatest limitation: it does not support extended monologue or dialogue very well. Extended dialogue works better in every other narrative medium: prose, drama, and film, although even there you have to watch it and break the dialogue up somewhat. To keep a good balance between words and pictures, you need a whole lot of pictures! Very hard on the artist, while easier on the writer (prose) or actors (drama) or cameraman (film).
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I thought the Hamlet example by will Eisner made your point well. It would indeed take a long time to do the whole play in a comic stripweb-ed wrote:You can see how many panels it would take to do the complete soliloquy that way. And so no one can really fault you for having somewhat word-heavy panels here, because that's just the medium: you either keep the speeches very short or else use a different medium. And no one could reasonably expect your to present this as a TV movie, although it would have worked pretty well!
![Laughing :lol:](./images/smilies/icon_lol.gif)
The new toon is already in the works and I am planning on posting the first 4 pics, to get us started off , this Fridayweb-ed wrote:I'm sorry to see this one end, but I know as soon as you're rested and refreshed you'll be cooking up some new surprises for us here in your gallery!
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