web-ed wrote:
I agree that #11 is good, but I think #12 may be even more exciting. Great OTK positioning, and while I can't see all of Jennifer's bottom, I can see enough to get my imagination working! I
hi web-ed,
i'm glad you like angle in pic #12 actually, i use similar angles quite often.............especially when i want a clear view of the spankee's face.................perhaps to show her fretting about her panties coming down as you mentioned . somehow the outline of that bottom does seem to do the job imagination wise in these cases. i'm not sure about the arm. it probably has to do with the "cameras in poser some how but i'm not sure. fear not, that paddle will be getting applied with gusto soon . thanks, phil
Jennifer's talking really fast here but apparently not fast enough
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hi everyone,
it looks like Jennifer's mouth has gotten her bottom in even "more" trouble . you'd think that a naughty girl who's already getting a spanking would be more careful about what she says. too late now though. grand dad is "really" upset and things are going south for Jennifer.............starting with her panties .
Phil, this story is turning into a MAJOR example of spanking artwork!
I've seen lots of toons, movies and videos that feature spankings... but NEVER BEFORE, have I been as aroused as I am with your story of Jennifer and her Granddad. How in the world do you DO that? This work is seminal. It is every spankophile's dream come (almost) true.
And of course, I am happy that you finally did get around to showing Jennifer kicking with her right leg higher than her left, in pic no. 13. Now I'm hoping that in later panels, we will get to see the paddle actually LANDING on her delightful globes... but of course, that is your call.
Hey Phil... Thanks for letting us see Jen's delectable backside WITHOUT showing us her lady organs. I always consider that stuff pornographic. You are doing the spanko world a favor by depicting a scenario where the "victim" gets to retain some of her dignity. Of course, little Jennifer is feeling mighty embarrassed right about now, and rightly so. But at least she is not being made to display her private parts. Your self-restraint here shows a touch of class that, I am sorry to say, too many cartoonists lack.
(FYI: In my own copy of this, I will be amending your pic no. 14 to obscure Woody's watchamacallit. That's a detail I don't think this artwork needs.)
Great, great work on your part, Phil. I predict that your story of Jennifer and her Granddad will become the touchstone for all spanking art of the future.
Cheers,
Dan
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willjohn wrote:She may have to leave town after this. Wonder if any cell phone photos will turn up?
hi willjohn,
i couldn't say about that. i figure these old timers probably do well just to take or make a phone call . besides, i used all that up on the "takin charge" toon.
willjohn wrote:I wonder if the interest in this series is the reason the other resident artists have not started anything for a while?
i seriously doubt that. boom posted a wonderful ending to his toon about Katie and the clones and dan has been posting some pics about miss Johnson getting spanked by her student, Tommy so you might want to go check those out too . thanks, phil
I wonder if the interest in this series is the reason the other resident artists have not started anything for a while?
I can't speak for b00m... but a remark like that is not going to motivate me to return to the drawing board anytime soon. Just the opposite, I would think.
solsunbeach wrote:Coming along nicely Phil - I love the look of determination on the grandfathers face, or is that just dedication to doing a good job!
i would say it's probably both. after all. if a job's worth doing, it's worth doing right of course, it could be that he's just really irritated , glad you're enjoying it . thanks, phil
grand dad is "really" upset and things are going south for Jennifer.............starting with her panties.
Coming along nicely Phil - I love the look of determination on the grandfathers face, or is that just dedication to doing a good job!
i would say it's probably both. after all. if a job's worth doing, it's worth doing right of course, it could be that he's just really irritated , glad you're enjoying it .
The above are all comments on your "One Good Turn" picture story. Granddad is "upset," he's "determined," he's "dedicated," he's "irritated".... All good points, I guess. But there is one other category I wonder about.
It's this:
Do you suppose there's a part of Granddad that is... (gulp) ENJOYING this?
Normally I wouldn't ask. After all, he's Jennifer's grandfather, and grandpas are usually very protective of their children's children, and would NEVER think to revel in their being punished. But Jennifer has already told us that "he often spanks me because I'm a naughty girl!"
That being said, I offer a double question:
Does Jennifer actually ENJOY being spanked? In front of witnesses? It sounds as if she gets spankings from Granddad often. Yet, here she is, asking for more. And when Granddad puts her over his knee and proceeds to humiliate his granddaughter in front of his friends, is HE enjoying it?
You know, I have spanked a lot of girls, and I always enjoy it. But in my real, vanilla life I have two granddaughters, both very pretty and both in their teens, and I would NEVER think to spank either of them unless it was a well-deserved punishment spanking. As you know, punitive spankings are an entirely different thing from consensual, "fun" spankings.
But in your excellent picture play, the grandfather is really whaling away at granddaughter's heinie, and in front of several witnesses. It is so enjoyable for US to look at, I have to wonder: Is there a part of Granddad that really enjoys what he is doing?
daneldorado wrote:Does Jennifer actually ENJOY being spanked? In front of witnesses? It sounds as if she gets spankings from Granddad often. Yet, here she is, asking for more. And when Granddad puts her over his knee and proceeds to humiliate his granddaughter in front of his friends, is HE enjoying it?
hi Dan,
interesting questions! let's start with Jennifer. she was certainly enjoying letting the old timers see her panties and pretending not to notice at the beginning of the toon. i have it on good authority that there are lots of "naughty" girls who enjoy doing this so i thought that was a fairly realistic thing for a young lady to do. also, i have had many ladies tell me that they fantasize about getting spanked in public. most of them, but not all, will say that it is a great fantasy but would be really embarrassing and they don't really want it to happen. i think we can safely conclude that many women find at least the "idea" of having their bottoms bared and spanked in public pretty exciting. of course, this is a fantasy toon so it would be pretty safe for them to sit back and enjoy the scenario but i too have to wonder how many would be excited if it really happened to them..............perhaps not while their bottoms were getting blistered but at least afterward. after all, no matter how you slice it, spanking is a very sexual activity.
now, about grand dad. i hadn't intended that he was enjoying this except from the standpoint of lovingly correcting his naughty grand daughter. my intent here was to indicate that he had often spanked her, maybe because her dad was no longer around, most of her life and was just continuing to do so. yours is an interesting thought though. i have had a young lady or 2 tell me that they got spankings from their dads as long as they lived at home even though they were in college. one of these said that when she was spanked, her mom was always present and in agreement that the spanking was needed. she also said that her folks would often have sex later and that spanking was part of the foreplay. i have to figure that this leaves open the possibility that even a needed punishment spanking may be sexually arousing for for at least some parents even though it is not the intent of the spanking. this situation is somewhat different since it is her grand dad but who knows. perhaps he is thinking about what he's gonna do to grand mother when he gets home
anyone else got thoughts about this? interesting post Dan. thanks for the comments, phil
I had not had the thought that grandad was being aroused by this and I think it would be more appropriate/realistic for him not to be. He has administered punishments for years, since she was a little girl, and in his eyes she is still just a little girl acting out.
I did have another thought though. What if grandad notices the other geezers, his friends, are enjoying the scene and becoming aroused. In my mind I had wondered if the story might not take a comical turn toward the end and have grandad take a switch and start chasing his buddies around with it, them all hollering and whooping and laughing at each other as he chases them in turn. It wouldn't be sexual at all, just funny, and perhaps it would miss the point, but it was something I could see happening. Perhaps Jennifer might also start laughing at the shenanigans and eventually she and grandad could hug (again in a completely non sexual way - grandad to granddaughter).
Up to you of course. I think the things I am picturing would take a long time to render and carefully place, etc., and can see them being a lot of work for little or no payoff (most of us come here to see the pretty girls getting spanked, not one old guy chasing others around).
don't you just love it when you know you're getting your point across?
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hi everyone,
have you ever heard the quote, "methinks the lady doth protest too much"? i don't think this is exactly what the author of this quote had in mind though. this seems to be more about timing.the plot thickens . you'll see what i mean .
solsunbeach wrote:I think I know where this is going - Welcome to the party Sara Ann!
hi solsunbeach,
i got a laugh from your comments............well said . i guess i must have been a little too obvious on this one. you would have thought Jennifer's mom would have known better . stay tooned for more spanking. thanks, phil
Nice segue, Phil. But because you have been so painstakingly accurate about positioning, body parts, and such, I cannot help wondering:
WHAT the hell does Sara Ann have in her MOUTH?
To the casual observer, she looks as if she is swallowing a red tennis ball. Maybe you should give her some teeth and a tongue, or something.
Otherwise, your art has -- to this point -- been excellent.
And I especially like your "side" jokes, in this case when old Sam pleads with his friend Woody to get him a pill. Sam wants a nitro pill to help with his heart, but Woody misunderstands and gives him a Viagra instead. You really know how to make your secondary characters a part of the show.
daneldorado wrote:To the casual observer, she looks as if she is swallowing a red tennis ball. Maybe you should give her some teeth and a tongue, or something.
hi Dan,
i have a hunch your monitor and mine must be really different. i can see her teeth and tongue just fine all i did to her after the render was to darken the inside of her mouth a little so it doesn't look like white shining teeth back in her mouth. i even used the same color to do the darkening as i always do.
daneldorado wrote:And I especially like your "side" jokes, in this case when old Sam pleads with his friend Woody to get him a pill. Sam wants a nitro pill to help with his heart, but Woody misunderstands and gives him a Viagra instead. You really know how to make your secondary characters a part of the show.
thanks for noticing this. i was planning on having a little fun with the old timers right from the outset they will continue to play a part as we go along. glad you're enjoying Jennifer's punishment. hopefully that will continue with Sara Ann. thanks, phil
actually, i use similar angles quite often.............especially when i want a clear view of the spankee's face.................perhaps to show her fretting about her panties coming down as you mentioned 
. somehow the outline of that bottom does seem to do the job imagination wise in these cases. i'm not sure about the arm. it probably has to do with the "cameras in poser some how but i'm not sure. fear not, that paddle will be getting applied with gusto soon 
of course, it could be that he's just really irritated 
all i did to her after the render was to darken the inside of her mouth a little so it doesn't look like white shining teeth back in her mouth. i even used the same color to do the darkening as i always do.