hi Dan,daneldorado wrote:Phil, the newest panel in your "Learning Curve" story is a thing of beauty. It just may be the best one you have ever done.
thanks for your kinds words. it's nice to have a pic appreciated
i particularly like this comment because what you have described is exactly what i wanted this pic to convey .daneldorado wrote:During the main part of her spanking, Frances was wildly kicking those pretty legs of hers. But now that Eddie has paused for a moment and suggested the threat of "a nice, wooden paddle," she has stopped kicking and now holds her legs out straight behind her, as though signaling that NO, she does NOT want to experience the paddle. Her tearful face and her outstretched right arm plead with Eddie to spare her the indignity and pain that comes with a paddling.
and you may be right about them and the bed, however, everyone will have to make their own minds about that. i have completed the last 3 pics in this toon and even though i think they end the story nicely they stop just short of showing what their next activities will be .daneldorado wrote:You have changed the angle on this panel, too, showing us more of the tatami mat, along with a vase on the end table and that little purple clock we hadn't seen in the last few panels. Also, we can now see more of the surface of their large double bed, indicating perhaps that the time is nigh for these two lovers to end their foreplay and lie together in dreamland. Of course, Frances will have to sleep on her side.
this is another comment that i particularly like hearing . i think that most artists strive to continually improve and i am no exception so your comments about my improvement are really welcome . of course, the specific comments are always helpful in achieving such improvement .daneldorado wrote:Phil, you now seem fully confident of your powers at poser art. Not only has your drawing art improved in general, you are also giving us those little details that maybe we wouldn't notice at first glance, but on second look they proclaim your great artistry. For example, you seem very disciplined in your approach of reddening Frances' bottom. At first, there was only a small discoloration. But after her panties came down and the spanking continued relentlessly, her bottom cheeks got redder and redder by tiny degrees, until now that "small discoloration" has morphed into a blazing forest fire.
i have those 3 pics done and will try to post them on Friday. hopefully they will provide a fitting end to our story. thanks, phildaneldorado wrote: You say you have "two or three" more pics to post in this story? Can't wait.