Hi Phil O. Thanks for your comment.
overbarrel49 wrote: In panel one, Katie looks suspicious of the whole idea and she certainly has reason to be. First off, it just has to be a bad idea and secondly, look at the source of the idea.
She should know by now that going along with one of Clorene's ideas is going to get her spanked. Thank goodness she hasn't learned that lesson yet!
overbarrel49 wrote:I love it that Katie's already rubbing her bottom in panel 2. She may have no idea why she's going to get a spanking but she already suspects she is going to get one.
And rightly so.
overbarrel49 wrote:omehow Katie looks even more shapely and appealing than she normally does. Perhaps it's the high heels she's wearing with her bikini.
I'm glad you find her shapely and appealing. That's my intent. I'm not sure why it would be more so than usual. I used the same template to draw her that I use moist of the time. As for the heels... maybe she wants to look a little taller...
overbarrel49 wrote:I like Katie's demure blush as her top comes off in panel 3.
Yes. She's not accustomed to having her breasts exposed in public.
overbarrel49 wrote:Also, since Clorene is also wearing heels, I assume that heels with a bikini is the fashion for swimwear this year. Perhaps the heels aid in swimming.
I suspect that Clorene never had any intention of getting into the water. And she's probably wearing heels just to look sexier.
overbarrel49 wrote:As always, I love the bouncing bottoms as our naughty girls are running in panel 4. Of course, this time we have their titties bouncing too.....oops, I meant boobs. No one says titties these days.
Hmmm... I hadn't noticed that the word, "titties" is hardly used nowadays, but I think you're right. Bur whatever you call them, it's fun to see them bounce when the girls run. (Of course, I like watching bouncing bottoms even more!)
overbarrel49 wrote:At the risk of repeating myself, Katie just looks even more appealing in panel 5 than she normally does. I'm not sure how you accomplished this but you've outdone yourself.
I don't think I've done anything different, but thank you.
overbarrel49 wrote:I love the expression on Katie's face in panel 6 as she skids to a stop ......not to mention all the added bouncing that skid has caused.
Heh heh! I think she was hoping NOT to run into a cop!
overbarrel49 wrote:Perhaps you should have given the officer a paddle for his holster. Considering the circumstances, I'm guessing that officer Yank is going to be really upset that he decided to take his vacation at this time.
Maybe he should've had a paddle. He was told ahead of time about Katie...
overbarrel49 wrote:I kind of wish you had backed the camera up just a bit in panel 8.
Yeah. Now that you mention it, I should've.
overbarrel49 wrote:Not only do we get another fantastic view of Katie in panel 9 but I would also consider this to be further evidence that people have no conscious control over what things turn them on.
I think you're right. Katie clearly objects to being spanked on a conscious level, but somewhere deep inside, she's learned to asscociate the spankings she gets from Bullmoose with the pleasure that usually follows. AND... she's feeling some attraction to Officer Johnny... whether she knows ot or not!
overbarrel49 wrote:Judging from the grin on his face and the placement of his hand, I'm guessing that Officer Rodriguez is going to be an enthusiastic spanker.
Like most of us in this forum, Officer Johnny likes putting his hand across a pretty girl's posterior! I think he's feeling an attraction to Katie too, and at the moment, the only chance he has for physical contact is the spanking he's going to give her.
overbarrel49 wrote:Once again, Katie just even hotter than she usually does as she gets turned over. The blush on her face, perhaps from his hand placement, just serves to intensify this effect.
Even though you might think she's be used to it by now, Katie still finds it embarrassing to be spanked in public. This time the embarrassment may be compounded by the fact that she's attracted to the young handsome officer who's got his hand across her nearly-bare backside!
overbarrel49 wrote:Even though there's no mention of it, I can tell from Katie's expression that the butterflies have returned.......probably part of those mixed emotions a spankee gets during a spanking.
And her feelings are even more mixed than usual.
overbarrel49 wrote:Katie looks so cute in panel 11, blushing even harder as he pats her bottom, kicking her legs, with that apprehensive expression. I like the fact that you have her thoughts over what he is saying. That seems so realistic.
I've heard that a lot... that attempted lectures at this point in the process sound like. "Blah blah blah!" Or like the teacher in the old
Peanuts cartoons.
overbarrel49 wrote:In the last panel, we see Clorene giggling at Katie's predicament. Apparently girls just like to see other girls getting spanked..........I wonder if Clorene went to Overbarrel U. I really like the view of Katie's legs kicking as we peek around the tree for a better look.
Oh, that naughty Clorene! She always has a good laugh whenever Katie is getting spanked! But the tables usually turn and, most of the time, Clorene gets spanked too! Will she get a spanking this time? What do you think! Did the girls go to Overbarrel U.? I haven't thought much about Katie's college days, or even if she attended college. That might make a good subject of a future story...