Hi Butch,butch46163@yahoo.com wrote: Love how Betty`s bottom is arch up high of coarse she hates the spanking but after is the good part![]()
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I'm glad you enjoyed the view



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Hi Butch,butch46163@yahoo.com wrote: Love how Betty`s bottom is arch up high of coarse she hates the spanking but after is the good part![]()
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Hi Boom,hugob00m wrote:Hi, Phil.
So, now Betty is in position, about to receive her punishment... And Pete is just sitting there with his hand resting on her butt! I love it!
I certainly can't argue with thathugob00m wrote: There is the reason you give in Pete's thought balloon... AND... I suspect that even after all the years of being married to her, he still likes to "cop a feel" now and then!![]()
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Hi Boom,hugob00m wrote:Hi, Phil. Mmmmm! Nice panel!
You are right. That's exactly what I was attempting to depict in this panel. You are also right about the motion lines and other devices to indicate the action and the dialog is pretty much what I'm left with to show that this is an action scene just what that action is. I have to admit that I'm not always successful doing it this wayhugob00m wrote:Betty's dialog seems to indicate that you're showing us the last bit of her anticipation as well as her reaction to the first swat. Since your art doesn't have motion lines like a cartoon or blurring like a photo, the dialog cues are sometimes needed to convey the action.
And there's the device I used to show the action in this onehugob00m wrote: Yes... as she herself admits, she was disrespectful to her husband.
And she knows she's going to get her bottom blistered for it!
Then... SQUEEEEAL! GAAASP! The spanking is underway!![]()
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That was, ,of course, exactly what this camera angle was supposed to show and I think it got the job donehugob00m wrote:Your "camera angle" shows us a nice view of the "target area" and enough of Betty's face to get her reaction. It looks like she's still apprehensive... and blushing brightly. (Maybe she'd be even more embarrassed to know how many of your fans are staring at her bare bottom!)`![]()
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Hi Butch,butch46163@yahoo.com wrote:Those panty will help prevent Betty from kicking during her spanking![]()
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Hi Willjohn,willjohn wrote:Is there an attractive woman in that neighbourhood who is having no trouble sitting down?
Yes, he does seem very enthusiastic! Betty's bottom is already pink, and Pete is just beginning to punish her! And I see his hand is drawn pretty far back to strike the next blow. I'm thinking, before Pete's finished, her bottom will be a very bright shade of red, and will be feeling red hot!overbarrel49 wrote:After waiting a week, Pete seems to be very enthusiastic about this spanking right from the start.
Uh huh! She looks really apprehensive about what's in store for her! (But then, she should've thought about that when she was being disrespectful to her husband!)overbarrel49 wrote:That is less true for Miss Betty.
At the moment, it looks like Betty's face is redder... but Pete has just gotten started!butch46163@yahoo.com wrote:don`t know what redder Betty`s face or her bottom
Hi Boom,hugob00m wrote:Hi, Phil. I like your latest panel.
And I think Pete has a right to be enthusiastic considering what's happenedhugob00m wrote:Yes, he does seem very enthusiastic! Betty's bottom is already pink, and Pete is just beginning to punish her! And I see his hand is drawn pretty far back to strike the next blow. I'm thinking, before Pete's finished, her bottom will be a very bright shade of red, and will be feeling red hot!![]()
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Indeedhugob00m wrote:Uh huh! She looks really apprehensive about what's in store for her! (But then, she should've thought about that when she was being disrespectful to her husband!)
I'm glad you approve of the "view" I chosehugob00m wrote:Also, on the artistic side, I like your positioning and your "camera" angle. Betty's bare butt is the center of attention, as it ought to be, and her pretty face, with its expression of distress is shown clearly too.
Hi Butch,butch46163@yahoo.com wrote:don`t know what redder Betty`s face or her bottom![]()
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