daneldorado wrote:But Phil's new story, "Another Level," is a different matter altogether.
daneldorado wrote:Well, in the first panel Kevin says to his wife Christine:
"Christine, we decided all this and decided how to proceed. WHY did you change it without telling me?"
Change WHAT? What are they talking about?
"Well, you'll think about it next time because I intend to make really sure of it, young lady."
Remember, we still don't know WHAT the lady did that was so wrong.
And later, he tells her:
"We need to correct your recent behavior! As soon as I get your panties down I'm going to turn you over my lap and apply the needed correction directly to your naughty, bare bottom, young lady!"
Again I ask: WHAT recent behavior? What is so much wronger than stealing from Best Buy, or behaving like a bitch in front of your cast mates, or brazenly showing off your bodies in front of horny old men?
hi Dan,
i guess i have to disagree with you on this point. i thought i had made it perfectly clear what her crime was and that it was one of the most "serious" crimes that can be committed against one's spouse.............dishonesty. in pic #1 Kevin says, "I'm not upset about the changes. I'm upset because you sneaked around behind my back instead of telling me the truth". in pic #2 he says, "honesty between us is too important". in pic #5 he says, "You need to learn that you have to be honest with me". in addition to the honesty problem, Christine indicates in pic #4 that she doesn't really believe that he will spank her so in pic #5 Kevin says, "You need to know that i will spank you when i think it's necessary." that is the second reason for the spanking. it is true that i don't have them discussing "exactly" what she sneaked around and changed behind his back but to be honest, i thought this was really just not important. to me this seemed like the kind of mundane, unimportant details that clutter up the pics with too much dialog. anyway, i hope this will clear up any confusion about the reason for the spanking.
daneldorado wrote:For one thing, we have alreadys seen six (6!) panels so far, and there is NO spanking action in any of them!
ok, this is a different matter and to be honest i was prepared for comments like this
. not only have you seen 6 panels with no spanking but also there is no spanking in the next panel and she doesn't even go otk till the one after that so be warned about this
. we have talked about this before and i think it was in connection with one of O T Katie's adventures. i am aware that many viewers, yourself included, don't like to see too many pics with no spanking in them. However, i have many viewers who really enjoy the build up to the actual spanking. this is particularly true of the female viewers. as a matter of fact i wish i had a nickle for every toon i have posted where i was getting a lot of comments right up until the spanking started and then they dried up. anyway, i like both kinds. the way i have it figured that announcement that she is gonna get a spanking is what really gets the whole process started..........getting those emotions rolling. as the discussion goes on and it becomes clear that there really is gonna be a spanking and that it is imminent, those emotions keep building and getting more intense. personally i think that all this build up of emotion before the spanking is just as exciting as the actual physical spanking. the name of this toon indicates that this spanking will take our married couple to another level in their relationship. it's my opinion that a physical spanking alone won't accomplish this. the emotional mindset has to be there for that level to be achieved. it was always my intention from the conception of this toon that there would be several panels showing her emotional build up before the spanking. in other words, i'm afraid this was all intentional. i guess i should have started with a disclaimer stating that
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ok, i think that addresses your concerns although it seems unlikely that any of it will enhance your enjoyment of the toon...............and probably several other people as well. that's as it should be though. as we have discussed before, every spanko has different tastes and ideas and i learned early on that not everyone will like every toon. as a matter of fact, some of my viewers who send me the most comments were totally silent while i was posting "one good turn". the difference between those folks and you is that their lack of comments was of absolutely no help to me. sure, i know they didn't care for the toon but i have no idea why. i have told almost everyone who has ever commented on my pics that specific comments about what they like and dislike are helpful and encouraged them to make such comments. silence is hardly helpful. what i am using way too many words trying to tell you is that i greatly appreciate your "specific" comments. there is no doubt in my mind what you are saying here and that "is" helpful. they are the kind of comments that will be on my mind as i prepare to do new pics and also plan new toons
. it's really the fastest and best way to learn what folks want so thanks much for taking time to ponder my toons and post these comments. having said this, i "will" understand though if you chose to sleep through the next couple of pics till we get to some actual spanking
sorry this reply is so long but i thought it was a good opportunity to expound on my thought processes. thanks, phil
. the only times i have ever given a spanking over pants is when i was still in school and hadn't gotten to the point with my girl where she would allow me to remove them 
, please remember that I am a fan, and my comments here have less to do with spanking-less panels than the lack of a coherent reason for the spanking. 